The Fifth Desk · Evaluation
Act I · The Map
Flannery O'Connor · a book of ten stories in the order O’Connor set · Harcourt, Brace, New York, 1955 · scored as one body, the book as it is read, on O’Connor’s English, read from knowledge; no text in hand, and English quoted only where its words are certain
Mode
Book of stories: the comic and grotesque story of the closed single turn, a slow exposure of a self-satisfied mind ending in one sudden blow, told in free indirect narration and ten times repeated under one theology
Mythos
The Christian pattern built into the stories: baptism and drowning, the body as temple and the elevated Host, the descent into the city and the return, Peter’s denial, the peacock as Christ’s eye, and the Misfit as a dark prophet who has refused the faith he understands
Phase
Ten separate actions, most of them a day or a few days long, each long in complacency and short in catastrophe; one, the last, in two parts
Presentation
Ten stories, published together in 1955, most of them first printed in magazines or anthologies between 1953 and 1955; the title story first, and the longest, “The Displaced Person”, expanded for the book and set last
Register
Comic and grotesque throughout, the comedy and the terror one register and never alternating; the speech of Georgia country people caught exactly, a narration that mocks its characters in their own words, and last lines placed with a poet’s control
Scale
Families, farms and the hired hands on them, a city once, a refugee from Europe, the Confederacy as a relic, and the sacred everywhere, all inside a narrow band of the white rural South
Governing Proposition
A grandmother on a family drive hides her cat in a basket and lies about a secret panel, and the crash she sets going brings her son’s family to the Misfit, who shoots her when she reaches toward him and then passes judgment on her; around her stand a child who walks into a river to find the Kingdom of Christ, a tramp who preaches on the human heart and steals a car, a hermaphrodite at a fair who says that God made him so, an old man and a boy humbled in the city and shown mercy before a plaster figure, a doctor of philosophy robbed of her wooden leg by a Bible salesman, and a widow whose farm kills a Polish refugee by agreement. The wager of the book is that the respectable self is a defence against reality, broken only by violence or humiliation, and that the breaking may be the occasion of grace.
Act II · The Essay
Movement I
A Good Man Is Hard to Find was published by Harcourt, Brace in New York in 1955. It was Flannery O’Connor’s first book of stories, three years after her novel Wise Blood (1952). Most of the ten had been printed first in magazines or anthologies between 1953 and 1955: the title story in an Avon anthology of 1953, and “The Displaced Person”, in a shorter form, in the Sewanee Review in 1954, expanded for the book. The unit scored here is the book of ten stories in the order O’Connor set.
Every story is set in the rural or small-town South, in Georgia and Tennessee chiefly, in the late 1940s and early 1950s. The title story stands first. A family sets out on a drive in a Hudson: a grandmother, her son and his children. The grandmother has hidden her cat in a basket, and she tells a lie about a secret panel. The narration rides inside her mind and mocks it in its own words, and every comic detail is a fuse.
The cat and the lie are the mechanism of the crash, and the crash brings the family to the Misfit. What follows is the shape the whole book repeats: a long, comic exposure of a self-satisfied mind, and then a single sudden blow. The ratio is the knowledge. Grace in these stories is not earned by development; it arrives as an interruption, and the story has to be long in complacency and short in catastrophe.
Movement II
The Misfit is courteous, and his talk is terrible. In the woods, after the shots, he talks with the grandmother, and his theology is exact: he understands the faith he has refused. She has been a liar and a snob all day. With the gun at her she reaches toward him and says, “Why you’re one of my babies. You’re one of my own children!” He shoots her.
The book’s height is that gesture, transport and terror at once, and it comes in a register that has been comic until then. The voice that laughed at the grandmother’s hat lays her dead in a ditch with her legs crossed under her like a child’s. The comic and the terrible are not alternated in this book; they are one register, and the elevation strikes because it comes against the comedy.
The Misfit’s verdict on her states the book’s terms better than commentary can: “She would of been a good woman,” he says, “if it had been somebody there to shoot her every minute of her life.” The story closes on his line, “It’s no real pleasure in life”, placed with a poet’s control. Seventy years of readers have not settled whether her gesture is grace or the last move of a manipulator, or whether the Misfit is damned or nearer God than anyone in the car.
Movement III
“The River” stands second. A child takes a preacher’s name and takes the preacher’s words literally, and walks alone into the river to find the Kingdom of Christ and be counted. Baptism and drowning are one act. Whether the drowning is salvation or the book’s cruellest joke is a question the story leaves open, and readers still argue it.
“A Temple of the Holy Ghost” makes the body a temple. At the fair a hermaphrodite says that God made him so; the monstrance at the convent follows, and the story ends on the sun likened to the elevated Host. “The Life You Save May Be Your Own” turns the pattern to farce: Mr. Shiftlet, a one-armed tramp, preaches on the human heart, then steals the car and abandons his wife at a diner.
The Christian pattern bears the load in nearly every story, and the particulars stay particular: a Georgia family in a Hudson, a tramp’s car, a wooden leg. The charge against it is that the archetype is the same Pauline one throughout and is sometimes signposted, in tree lines, suns and names, so that the reader is told where to look. “A Stroke of Good Fortune”, a woman climbing the stairs in denial of her pregnancy, is the slightest application of it, a single joke.
Movement IV
“The Artificial Nigger” takes an old man, Mr. Head, and a boy, Nelson, down into the city of Atlanta and back: a descent into an underworld with a guide who fails, and a denial like Peter’s. The Black people of the city are seen from outside, through the boy’s fright, and the racial condition is shown as the whites’ blindness rather than opened from within. The story closes on the two of them before a plaster figure on a lawn, humiliated, and O’Connor makes the moment into mercy descending on them; the old man feels himself ready for Paradise.
The title is an offence to many readers now, and the story is disputed: a parable of mercy, or a story that uses a racist object to resolve white guilt. The figure is a projection of white suffering, and whether the story sees through the projection is not settled. The dispute is part of the book’s depth, and part of what it fails to see, and it bears on both.
“Good Country People” spends its first third on Mrs. Hopewell’s platitudes and Mrs. Freeman’s appetites. Hulga, a doctor of philosophy who believes in nothing, goes up into a hayloft with a Bible salesman, Manley Pointer. He leaves with her wooden leg in his valise, boasting that he has believed in nothing since he was born. Every piety set up in the opening is reversed in the hayloft, and the intellectual is outdone in nihilism by a salesman.
Movement V
“A Circle in the Fire” and “The Displaced Person” are stories of farms as economies, of hired hands and tenants and the white widows who own the land. “A Late Encounter with the Enemy”, among the shortest, is a single irony on a Confederate relic at a reunion. “The Displaced Person” is the longest story by a wide margin, and the only one in two parts. A Polish refugee, Mr. Guizac, comes to Mrs. McIntyre’s farm, and three women’s views of him are built, slowly, before anything happens.
Then the tractor rolls. Three watchers see it and say nothing, and the farm kills a stranger by agreement without anyone deciding to. Mrs. McIntyre’s farm empties around her. The story rises at its close to the peacock’s tail, the peacock that is Christ’s eye in the story, and to the words of an old priest over a dying farm: the near liturgy that ends the book.
The book’s order is an argument: the Misfit’s violence first, the drowned child second, the long recognition of the displaced last. Violent or sudden death ends or turns four of the ten, the first, the second, the eighth and the last, and a burning, a theft or a revelation turns most of the others. The book has been in print without a break since 1955, and its stories were gathered into The Complete Stories, which won the National Book Award in 1972. What the ten keep is one law: a self refusing what is coming, and what comes.
Act III · The Twelve
The test is subtractive, and in the strong stories it finds nothing. The title story’s first pages, the cat hidden in the basket and the grandmother’s lie about a secret panel, are the mechanism of the crash: every comic detail is a fuse. “Good Country People” spends its first third on Mrs. Hopewell’s platitudes and Mrs. Freeman’s appetites, and the whole of it is needed, because the seduction in the hayloft reverses exactly the pieties set up there. “The Displaced Person” is long, and its length is compelled: three women’s views of one man must be built before the tractor can roll. What holds the axis are the two slight stories. “A Stroke of Good Fortune” is a single joke on the denial of a pregnancy, and “A Late Encounter with the Enemy” a single irony on a Confederate relic; either could go, and the book would know what it knows.
Score: 8.6 / 10
The disclosure can be stated, and it holds: the respectable self, with its manners, its charity, its intellect and its property, is a defence against reality, and the defence is broken only by violence or humiliation, which may be the occasion of grace. The grandmother is a liar and a snob until the gun is at her; then she reaches toward the Misfit, “Why you’re one of my babies”, and is shot for it. Hulga, the doctor of philosophy who believes in nothing, is outdone in nihilism by a Bible salesman. Mrs. McIntyre’s farm shows how a community kills a stranger by agreement without anyone deciding to. Held below the top for two reasons. It is one disclosure in ten settings; and the book sees its Black characters, Astor and Sulk and the figures of the boy’s frightened view in the city, from outside, so that the racial condition is shown as the whites’ blindness rather than opened from within.
Score: 8.8 / 10
The register is comic and grotesque, and the elevation comes against it, which is why it strikes. The grandmother’s gesture in the woods, after the shots, is the book’s height, transport and terror at once. “The Artificial Nigger” closes on Mr. Head and Nelson before the plaster figure on a lawn, a moment O’Connor makes into mercy descending on two humiliated people, and the old man feels himself ready for Paradise. The boy walking alone into the river in “The River” to find the Kingdom of Christ is a dreadful height. “A Temple of the Holy Ghost” ends on the sun likened to the elevated Host, and “The Displaced Person” rises at its close to the peacock’s tail and the priest’s words over a dying farm. Perhaps six of the ten reach a real summit. Held below the higher reaches because three stories rise little, and because the heights are of one kind, the violent irruption, rather than many.
Score: 8.7 / 10
Built, not evoked. The Christian pattern bears the load in nearly every story. In “The River” the child takes the preacher’s name and takes the preacher’s words literally, and enters the water to be counted: baptism and drowning are one act. In “A Temple of the Holy Ghost” the hermaphrodite at the fair says what God made him, and the monstrance at the convent follows. “The Artificial Nigger” makes the descent into the city an underworld, with Mr. Head a guide who fails and a Peter who denies. The peacock in “The Displaced Person” is Christ’s eye, and the Misfit is a dark prophet whose theology is exact and who has refused the faith he understands. The particulars stay particular: a Georgia family in a Hudson, a tramp’s car, a wooden leg. Held below the top because the archetype is the same Pauline one throughout, and is sometimes signposted, in tree lines, suns and names, so that the reader is told where to look.
Score: 8.8 / 10
The inheritance is plain: the Southern grotesque of Faulkner and Erskine Caldwell, the tall tale and Southwestern humour, the well-made magazine story of the 1940s, and Joyce’s story of epiphany. The turn is the joining of these to a strict Catholic theology, told in the Protestant South through characters who would despise it, so that the comic grotesque becomes the vehicle of grace rather than of social satire or of decadence. Violence is not the region’s curse, as in Faulkner, but God’s instrument. The stake was real: a Catholic writer making slapstick and murder carry the sacramental, at a moment when the serious short story was psychological and secular, and before readers who took her, and still take her, for a cruel satirist; she answered that reception herself in her lectures. Held here because much of the form is inherited intact: the closed story of a single turn is the magazine story perfected, not broken.
Score: 8.6 / 10
Change the form and the book loses what it knows. Each story is built as a slow comic exposure of a self-satisfied mind followed by a single sudden blow, and the knowledge is in the ratio: grace is not earned by development but arrives as an interruption, so the story must be long in complacency and short in catastrophe. A novel would have to supply the aftermath and the change, which this grace refuses to guarantee. The free indirect style that rides inside the grandmother or Mrs. Hopewell, mocking their clichés in their own words, is the second instrument: the reader shares the complacency the ending breaks. The book’s order adds a third, ten repetitions of the pattern in ten guises, so that the pattern reads as law. Held below the top because the collection is an arrangement rather than a composed sequence: the stories share no character or place, and the order, though meaningful, could change in its middle without loss.
Score: 8.8 / 10
The evidence is seventy years of return, in a large and continuing criticism and in the classroom, where the title story is among the most taught of American stories. The questions stay open. Is the grandmother’s gesture grace, or the last move of a manipulator? Is the Misfit damned, or nearer God than anyone in the car? Is the boy’s drowning in “The River” salvation or the book’s cruellest joke, and does the book know the difference? Is “The Artificial Nigger” a parable of mercy, or a story that uses a racist object to resolve white guilt? O’Connor’s own account of her intentions, in the essays collected after her death, has not closed these readings and has opened new quarrels. The sentences repay return: on a second reading the jokes become prophecy. Held below the top because the theological frame, once seen, organises the yield; returns deepen the frame more than they overturn it.
Score: 8.8 / 10
The field is American short fiction of the mid twentieth century. The intrinsic force is high. The book showed that the grotesque comic story could carry metaphysical and religious weight without irony at its expense, and that a writer could make violence sacramental in a secular literary culture; that changed what the Southern story, and the American story, could be about. Where Hemingway’s In Our Time (8.6 on this desk) had remade the prose of the American story, this book remade its matter. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: the reach is wide and lasting, the title story and “Good Country People” fixtures of anthologies and of teaching, and O’Connor’s example running on through later Southern writing. What holds the axis is that the reach is strongest in American letters and in English; outside them her standing is real, but narrower.
Score: 8.6 / 10
Survival is demonstrated over seventy-one years, and weighed on form, presence and fabric. Form: the text survives whole as published, undamaged, and nothing is charged to it. Presence: continuous since 1955, in print without a break, taught in schools and universities across the English-speaking world, and gathered into The Complete Stories, which won the National Book Award in 1972, and into the Library of America in 1988. Fabric: the surface is fixed to its moment, the rural South after the war, the displaced persons of Europe, the Confederate reunion, but the stories do not depend on it. Its racial vocabulary troubles readers now and has prompted reconsiderations of the author; it has not removed the book from teaching. The book stands at the usual figure for its span of seventy years to two centuries; the widest presence is not quite reached.
Score: 9.0 / 10
Judged on O’Connor’s English, with no translation between. The command is of three things. Dialogue: the speech of Georgia country people caught without condescension of ear, every cliché exact, and the Misfit’s courteous, terrible talk. Comic timing: the cat in the basket, the wooden leg in the hayloft, Mr. Shiftlet’s sermon on the human heart before he steals the car and abandons his wife at a diner. And the last line, placed with a poet’s control: the Misfit’s “It’s no real pleasure in life” closes the title story. The free indirect narration mocks and inhabits at once. Held below the top on two charges: a repertoire of symbolic machinery, the tree line, the sun, the sky, that recurs from story to story and can feel applied; and the two slighter stories, which are cleanly made but under less pressure.
Score: 8.9 / 10
One law governs the whole: the proud self is broken by an outside force, violent or humiliating, and the breaking is the only opening for grace, which may or may not be taken. Take the most distant elements: the farce of “A Stroke of Good Fortune”, a woman climbing the stairs in denial of her pregnancy, and the near liturgy at the close of “The Displaced Person”, a dying farm and an old priest. They obey the same law: a self refusing what is coming, and what comes. The comic and the terrible are one register throughout, never alternating; the voice that laughs at the grandmother’s hat lays her dead in a ditch with her legs crossed under her like a child’s. The range is wider than one milieu suggests: children, intellectuals, widowed landowners, tramps, a Polish refugee. Held here because the law is a single one, and is sometimes enforced on the material rather than found in it.
Score: 8.8 / 10
Judged on what the book holds, as a book of stories, and not marked down for being short beyond what it holds. Consciousness: the self-deceiving mind, rendered from inside. The family: a grandmother, her son and his children, mothers and daughters, and fathers absent. Labour and land: the farm as an economy in “The Displaced Person” and “A Circle in the Fire”, its hired hands and tenants, the white widow who owns it and those who depend on her. Race and class, as the order of the South, seen from the white side. History: the war in Europe and its refugees, and the Confederacy as a museum piece. The sacred, everywhere and load-bearing; the natural order, in woods, rivers, fire and sun. One law integrates them. What holds the axis lowest of the twelve is what is missing: the state is absent, the city appears once, and the world beyond the rural South enters only as Mr. Guizac.
Score: 7.7 / 10
Act IV · The Reckoning
8.7 / 10 · Final Average
Placement: Tier IV · Canonical
Strongest Dimensions
The Imperishable at 9.0, then The Made at 8.9. A text that survives whole, in print without a break for seventy-one years and taught across the English-speaking world; and a command of Georgia speech, of comic timing and of the last line, the Misfit’s “It’s no real pleasure in life” closing the title story.
Limiting Dimension
The Encompassed at 7.7: consciousness, the family, labour and land, race and class seen from the white side, the war in Europe and the Confederacy, and the sacred, held by one law; the state absent, the city once, and the world beyond the rural South only as Mr. Guizac. Next above it, at 8.6, The Inevitable, The Swerve and Pressure on Tradition: two slight stories that could go without loss, a form inherited intact, and a reach strongest in American letters.
The Necessity Cap clears at 8.6 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears with room: The Made at 8.9, The Living Form at 8.8, The Inner Law at 8.8, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is met on all five: The Imperishable at 9.0, The Unconcealment at 8.8, The Archetypal Deep at 8.8, The Swerve at 8.6 and Pressure on Tradition at 8.6 clear the bar of 8.5, the last two by a tenth. The Universal Minimum is met (no axis but The Encompassed falls below 8.6, against 7.5) and The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 7.7. Every summit condition is met; the work is held below the summit by its aggregate alone.
Basis · a reading from knowledge of Flannery O’Connor’s A Good Man Is Hard to Find, her first book of stories, published by Harcourt, Brace, New York, in 1955, and scored as one body: the ten stories in the order she set, as the book is read. They are “A Good Man Is Hard to Find”, “The River”, “The Life You Save May Be Your Own”, “A Stroke of Good Fortune”, “A Temple of the Holy Ghost”, “The Artificial Nigger”, “A Circle in the Fire”, “A Late Encounter with the Enemy”, “Good Country People” and “The Displaced Person”. Weighed most are the title story, “The Artificial Nigger”, “Good Country People”, “The Displaced Person”, “The River” and “A Temple of the Holy Ghost”; weighed least, as the slighter pieces, “A Stroke of Good Fortune” and “A Late Encounter with the Enemy”. The later stories, in Everything That Rises Must Converge (1965) and The Complete Stories (1971), are context and are not weighed. Every axis is judged on O’Connor’s English, with no translation between. The book is in copyright and no text of it was in hand; nothing was measured on a text, and no quotation was checked against a file. English is quoted only where its words are certain, briefly, and cited by story; other words are paraphrased. Facts that could not be verified are not given, among them the length of the first edition in pages, the first appearances of the stories other than the two named, the later writers and other artists said to owe a debt to the book, and the languages into which it has been translated.