The Fifth Desk · Evaluation

Act I · The Map

Literature · Book of poems · 20th c. · a museum and a painting, a dead poet’s winter and a dead doctor’s climate, a bar on Fifty-second Street, a Spanish war, a refugee’s city, and a bed

Another Time

W. H. Auden · a book of poems in three parts · Random House, New York, February 1940, and Faber and Faber, London, later in 1940 · dedicated to Chester Kallman · scored as one book, the 1940 texts and not the revised texts of the later collected poems, on Auden’s English, read from knowledge; no text in hand, and English quoted only where its words are certain

The Plate · a ground line cut into three parts; in the first a pillar of three bands in three patterns, a tilted frame crossed by a calm diagonal with two strokes going down into ripples at its corner, and six small panels; in the second low repeating loops and short uprights; in the third a long rule broken by a heavy dot, a column of short rungs, and a block of long fine lines

Mode

Lyric book: public elegy, civic poem and ode set beside the lullaby, the blues, the cabaret song, the comic ballad and the portrait sonnet

Mythos

Icarus reread from the margin; a poet’s death as a season and a burial; Time as a speaking power against the lover’s vow; the artist as type, from exile to novelist

Phase

From the late thirties to the outbreak of war: Spain, Munich and the first of September, read by a poet who had left England for America in January 1939

Presentation

Poems in three parts, People and Places, Lighter Poems, Occasional Poems; the texts of 1940, including passages and poems Auden later cut, altered or disowned

Register

From the clinical to the colloquial without a seam: the ballad, the blues refrain, the sonnet, the short-lined argued stanza, the trochaic quatrain and the long unrhymed elegiac line

Scale

A gathering of short poems; one sensibility reading the bed, the bar, the state and the war

Governing Proposition

A poet who had been made the voice of a generation’s politics gathers, in one book, a reading of a Brueghel in which catastrophe passes unseen, an elegy for Yeats that says poetry makes nothing happen and then teaches the free man how to praise, an elegy for Freud, a lullaby that knows its lover is mortal and its speaker faithless, a poem on the night a war began, a public ode he would later disown, and beside them blues, cabaret songs, comic ballads and portrait sonnets. The wager is that private feeling and public history can be read by one diagnostic intelligence, in every form from the ballad to the ode; the cost is that the book records a mind in transit and does not govern what it records.

In the Valley of Its Making

8.4 / 10
Tier IV · Canonical

Act II · The Essay

Movement I

About Suffering They Were Never Wrong

The poem stands in a museum before the Old Masters and grants them one knowledge: “About suffering they were never wrong, / The Old Masters”. What they knew was where suffering happens: inside the ordinary, which does not turn to look. The poem’s eye moves across a Brueghel as the eye moves across a canvas, from the busy foreground toward the corner where a pair of legs is vanishing into the sea.

The myth that put Icarus at the centre of the story is reread from its margin. The fall becomes a splash nobody hears, and the ship “had somewhere to get to and sailed calmly on”. The casual syntax is the indifference it describes: the poem does not raise its voice, because nothing in the picture raises its voice, and the catastrophe is the more exact for being reported in passing.

“Musée des Beaux Arts” is one poem in a book of many, but it gives the book its way of seeing. Here, and in poem after poem, private feeling and public history are read by one diagnostic intelligence, which looks at a lover, a dying spinster, a dictator or a nation with the same clinical, unhurried attention. The book is Another Time, published in New York by Random House in February 1940 and in London by Faber and Faber later that year, and dedicated to Chester Kallman.

Movement II

The Valley of Its Making

The elegy for Yeats opens on a death reported in loose long lines, a body entering the earth in winter and a work passing to “the guts of the living”. Its second part argues, in paragraphs close to blank verse, with the dead man and with the trade they shared: “For poetry makes nothing happen: it survives / In the valley of its making”. The line is the book’s best-known limit on itself, and it is made inside a poem that does a great deal.

In the 1940 text, the text scored here, the elegy carries three stanzas on Kipling and Claudel, which Auden later cut. They belong to the poem as it stood. Whether they are slack or argument, the book holds them, and the poem that later readers met is not quite the poem this book printed.

Then the third part changes measure. “Earth, receive an honoured guest” begins a run of trochaic quatrains, a charm in the metre Blake used, whose ritual return is itself the healing it asks for: “In the deserts of the heart / Let the healing fountain start”. The task left to the poet, having made nothing happen, is to teach “the free man how to praise”. Three parts, three metres, three kinds of knowledge: report, argument and incantation, each said in the form that can say it.

Movement III

Human on My Faithless Arm

Beside the elegies stand the poems of love, and they know the same things. The lullaby begins “Lay your sleeping head, my love, / Human on my faithless arm”, and its tenderness is lifted by what it knows: that the beloved is mortal and the lover unfaithful. The tetrameter rocks; the knowledge does not sleep.

In “As I walked out one evening” a lover sings his ballad vow, and the clocks answer him. Time speaks as a power, the domestic turns to dread, “The glacier knocks in the cupboard”, and the poem ends on a “crooked neighbour / With your crooked heart”. The ballad, the form of the vow, is made to hold its undoing.

Then the songs. “Funeral Blues” and “O Tell Me the Truth About Love”, written as cabaret songs for Hedli Anderson, stand in the same book as the elegy for Freud, who became “a whole climate of opinion”. “Refugee Blues” uses the blues refrain to make statelessness sound like a lover’s complaint the world will not hear. “Miss Gee” uses the jaunty popular ballad as cruelty’s instrument, and the cruelty is part of what the poem knows about how a society looks at a dying spinster; “Victor” keeps the ballad’s narrative economy. The cabaret song and the comic ballad sit beside the ode, and lose no seriousness by it.

Movement IV

The Necessary Murder

The public ode of the book is “Spain 1937”, in long-lined quatrains. In the 1940 text it accepts, for the struggle’s sake, “the necessary murder”. It ends on a history that will not intervene for the losers: “History to the defeated / May say Alas but cannot help nor pardon”. Auden later disowned the poem and kept it out of his collected editions; the book scored here prints it.

Around it stand the poems of the state. “Epitaph on a Tyrant” lays bare the tyrant’s aesthetic. “The Unknown Citizen” lays bare the statistical citizen, and dismisses the only questions that matter: “Was he free? Was he happy? The question is absurd”. Then the portraits: Housman, Lear, Rimbaud, Arnold, the novelist “Encased in talent like a uniform”, writers turned into types by wit, in sonnets whose turns are exact.

The book is a gathering, sorted into three parts by kind: people and places, lighter poems, occasional poems. The arrangement files what it holds. It does not set “Spain” against the poems that answer it, and the contradiction between them stands in its pages as the record of a mind that had changed, and was changing.

Movement V

We Must Love One Another or Die

“September 1, 1939” begins in a bar: “I sit in one of the dives / On Fifty-second Street / Uncertain and afraid”. Auden had left England for America in January of that year, and the book was read in England as the work of a man who had gone. The poem looks back at “the clever hopes” that “expire / Of a low dishonest decade”, and forward at the war, and its short-lined stanzas carry argument at the speed of talk.

It names the psychology of what is coming: “Those to whom evil is done / Do evil in return”. It holds a bar, Europe’s history, the psychology of nations and a personal faith in one argument, and it arrives at a line of faith: “We must love one another or die”. Auden later altered the line to “and die”, and then disowned the poem. The 1940 text has “or die”, and the difference between the two has been argued ever since; after September 2001 the poem returned to wide reading.

Against “Spain”, which accepted the necessary murder, this poem and the elegy for Freud turn to love and to a forgiving reason. The book does not frame the turn; it records it. That is its limit and its interest: a gathering of the poems of a mind in transit, between the political poet the decade had made of Auden and the poet who would doubt what poetry could do, holding both in one volume, in the valley of its making.

Act III · The Twelve

1The Inevitable (Ananke)

The test is subtractive, and the book answers it in two voices. The great poems resist it: nothing can come out of “Musée des Beaux Arts” without loss, and the Yeats elegy requires every stage of its turn, from the report of a death through the argument of its second part to the incantation of its third. But the book is a gathering, not a composed sequence, and several of the place poems and lighter pieces are occasions taken because they were there. It also carries what its maker later cut or disowned: the stanzas on Kipling and Claudel, “the necessary murder” of “Spain 1937”. Being questioned is not proof of idleness, but the slack is there. High necessity in the best third, a miscellany’s looseness around it.

Score: 7.9 / 10

2The Unconcealment (Aletheia)

The disclosures can be stated, and they hold. “About suffering they were never wrong, / The Old Masters”: catastrophe occurs inside the ordinary, and the ordinary does not turn to look; the ship “had somewhere to get to and sailed calmly on”. The Yeats elegy states the limit of art against history, “poetry makes nothing happen”, and the duty left to it, to teach “the free man how to praise”. “September 1, 1939” names the psychology of the coming war: “Those to whom evil is done / Do evil in return”. “The Unknown Citizen” lays bare the statistical man, and “Refugee Blues” discloses statelessness through a form built for private sorrow. These are meanings, not moods. Held below the top because several are stated as maxims more than discovered by the poems.

Score: 8.8 / 10

3The Sublime (Hypsos)

Height and frequency together. The heights are real and several: the lullaby, “Lay your sleeping head, my love, / Human on my faithless arm”, where tenderness is lifted by its own knowledge of transience; the close of the Yeats elegy, “In the deserts of the heart / Let the healing fountain start”; the lovers’ clocks in “As I walked out one evening” turning to dread, “The glacier knocks in the cupboard”, and the ending’s “crooked neighbour / With your crooked heart”; “Funeral Blues”, whose hyperbole is grief’s own. But the register is chiefly diagnostic and urbane, and the elevation intermittent: the portrait sonnets, the ballads and the light verse are clever before they are transporting, and “Miss Gee” works by a deliberate coldness. A book that rises repeatedly, not steadily.

Score: 8.5 / 10

4The Archetypal Deep (Mythos)

The myth is more evoked than built. “Musée” builds the most: Icarus is reread from the margin, and the fall that myth placed at the centre becomes a splash nobody hears; the pattern carries the poem. The Yeats elegy makes a poet’s death a seasonal myth of a body entering earth and a work passing to “the guts of the living”, and its last part takes on something of a ritual charm. “As I walked out one evening” sets the ballad lover’s vow against Time as a speaking power. Much of the rest is figure and allusion: the Freud elegy names Eros rather than constructing him, and the portrait sonnets make writers into types, the novelist “Encased in talent like a uniform”, by wit more than by archetype. That holds the axis below the gate.

Score: 8.0 / 10

5The Swerve (Parekklisis)

The inheritance was Auden’s own as much as Yeats’s and Eliot’s: the political, clinical, allusive poetry of the early thirties that had made him the leader of a generation. The turn here is away from that role while still writing public verse: toward the civic elegy, the portrait of the artist, and the ballad, blues and cabaret song set in the same book as the elegies, and toward a voice that doubts its own power. The stake was real. The book appeared after Auden had left England for America in January 1939, it was read in England as the work of a man who had gone, and it undoes the posture of “Spain” in its own pages. What holds it below the gate: the means were largely inherited forms, used with mastery, and the larger formal swerves of the following years lie outside this book.

Score: 8.4 / 10

6The Living Form (Entelecheia)

In the best poems form is the knowledge. The Yeats elegy says three things in three metres: the report of a death in loose long lines, the argument about poetry in paragraphs close to blank verse, and the charm of its third part in trochaic quatrains whose ritual return is the healing fountain it asks for. “Musée” is shaped like the painting it reads, the eye moving from the foreground to the corner where the legs vanish. “Refugee Blues” makes statelessness sound like a lover’s complaint the world will not hear. “Miss Gee” uses the jaunty ballad as cruelty’s instrument, and the cruelty is part of what the poem knows about how a society looks at a dying spinster. But the book’s own form, three parts sorted by kind, is a filing arrangement, and many lesser poems would say the same in another stanza.

Score: 8.4 / 10

7The Bottomless Well (Apeiron)

Evidence, not promise: eighty-six years of return. The central poems have been argued over without exhaustion. “Poetry makes nothing happen” is still quoted in debates on art and politics, in both directions. “September 1, 1939”, disowned by its author, returned to wide reading after September 2001, and its “or die”, with Auden’s change to “and die”, remains a crux. “Musée” is one of the most discussed ekphrastic poems in English. The Yeats elegy keeps opening on its contradiction, a poem that says art is powerless and practises a power. The book as a book has had less return than its poems: the lesser poems of the first part are rarely read, and the yield is concentrated in perhaps a dozen poems, though those have been mined for generations.

Score: 8.7 / 10

8Pressure on Tradition (Agon)

The field is poetry in English in the twentieth century. The intrinsic force: the book established a modern idiom for the public elegy and the civic poem, conversational and unconsoling, and showed that a major poet could set the cabaret song and the comic ballad beside the ode without loss of seriousness, a reorganisation of what a serious book of poems could hold. Held below the top because that reorganisation is of tone and stance more than of form, and Eliot and Yeats remain the field’s larger movers. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: Brodsky’s “Verses on the Death of T. S. Eliot” takes its form and stance from the Yeats elegy, which Brodsky named as decisive for him; William Carlos Williams’s “Landscape with the Fall of Icarus” answers the Brueghel that “Musée” made a subject; and the ekphrastic poem of the later century runs through “Musée”.

Score: 8.6 / 10

9The Imperishable (Aphtharsia)

Survival of eighty-six years. The poems’ presence is among the widest of any English poetry of the century: anthologised, taught, recited at funerals and in public crisis; “Funeral Blues” reached general use through its recital in the film Four Weddings and a Funeral (1994). The text itself survives whole; nothing is lost. Two charges hold the figure where it is. The book as a book is less present than its poems: it is read almost entirely through Auden’s later collected and selected editions, in which several of its poems are revised, cut or absent, so the 1940 text survives in print but is not the text most readers meet. And some of its surface is fixed to its year: the occasional poems are bound to Spain, Munich and the outbreak of war.

Score: 9.0 / 10

10The Made (Techne)

Judged on Auden’s English. The command of verse is at the top of the century’s range and is shown in more forms than almost any one book of the period holds: the ballad’s narrative economy in “Miss Gee” and “Victor”, the blues refrain, the sonnet’s turn in “The Novelist” and “A. E. Housman”, the short-lined stanza of “September 1, 1939” carrying argument at speed (“I sit in one of the dives / On Fifty-second Street / Uncertain and afraid”), the tetrameter of the lullaby, the trochaic quatrain of “Earth, receive an honoured guest”. The diction moves from the clinical to the colloquial without a seam, and in “Musée” the casual syntax enacts the indifference it describes. Charged with facility: the light verse sometimes runs on its own ease, and abstractions like “the clever hopes expire / Of a low dishonest decade” can tip into formula.

Score: 9.0 / 10

11The Inner Law (Cosmos)

Take the two most distant elements: “Calypso” or “O Tell Me the Truth About Love”, and “In Memory of Sigmund Freud”. One law can be named: private feeling and public history are read by the same diagnostic intelligence, which finds love, neurosis and politics continuous, and the lullaby and “September 1, 1939” obey it. But the book gathers poems from a period in which Auden’s beliefs were changing, and it contradicts itself in ways it does not govern: “Spain 1937” accepts “the necessary murder” and ends on a history that “cannot help nor pardon”, while “September 1, 1939” and the Freud elegy turn to love and to a forgiving reason. The tension is fertile, but it is a record of transit, not a law the book holds. The range is wide, and that counts for it.

Score: 7.9 / 10

12The Encompassed (Megethos)

Judged as a book of lyric and occasional poems. It holds much: consciousness and the unconscious, in the Freud elegy; love and its faithlessness, in the lullaby and the cabaret songs; the state and the citizen, in “The Unknown Citizen” and “Epitaph on a Tyrant”; history and war, in “Spain 1937” and “September 1, 1939”; the refugee; the city, Brussels, New York and Oxford; art and the artist, from Brueghel and Yeats to Housman, Lear, Rimbaud and Arnold; law, in “Law Like Love”; and the sacred at the edges. The best poems hold several orders at once: “September 1, 1939” holds a bar, Europe’s history, the psychology of nations and a personal faith in one argument. What holds the axis lowest of the twelve: a gathering of short poems lists more than it integrates, and the family, labour and the natural order are thin.

Score: 7.8 / 10

Act IV · The Reckoning

8.4 / 10 · Final Average

Placement: Tier IV · Canonical

Strongest Dimensions

The Imperishable and The Made at 9.0, The Unconcealment at 8.8. Poems whose presence is among the widest of any English poetry of the century; a command of verse shown in more forms than almost any one book of the period holds, from the ballad and the blues to the trochaic charm; and disclosures that can be stated and hold, from the suffering the Old Masters placed in the margin to the psychology of a coming war.

Limiting Dimension

The Encompassed at 7.8: much is held, from the unconscious to the state, the war and the refugee, but a gathering of short poems lists more than it integrates, and the family, labour and the natural order are thin. Next above it, The Inevitable and The Inner Law at 7.9: the great poems resist the subtractive test and the book around them does not, and its contradictions are recorded, not governed.

The Necessity Cap clears at 7.9 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears: The Made at 9.0, The Living Form at 8.4, The Inner Law at 7.9, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is unmet: The Imperishable at 9.0, The Unconcealment at 8.8 and Pressure on Tradition at 8.6 clear the bar of 8.5, but The Archetypal Deep at 8.0 and The Swerve at 8.4 fall short. The Universal Minimum is met (no axis but The Encompassed falls below 7.9, against 7.5) and The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 7.8. The aggregate, 8.4, stands in Tier IV in any case.

Basis · a reading from knowledge of W. H. Auden’s Another Time, scored as one book: the volume as Random House published it in New York in February 1940 and Faber and Faber in London later in 1940, dedicated to Chester Kallman, in three parts, “People and Places”, “Lighter Poems” and “Occasional Poems”. The 1940 texts are the unit, not the revised texts of the later collected poems: the Yeats elegy with its stanzas on Kipling and Claudel, “September 1, 1939” with “We must love one another or die”, and “Spain 1937”. Auden’s later revisions are context, weighed only for the book’s survival. Weighed most: “In Memory of W. B. Yeats”, “September 1, 1939”, “Musée des Beaux Arts”, “In Memory of Sigmund Freud”, the lullaby, “Spain 1937”, “Epitaph on a Tyrant”, “The Unknown Citizen”, “As I walked out one evening”, “Refugee Blues”, “Law Like Love”, the cabaret songs, the ballads “Miss Gee” and “Victor”, and the portrait sonnets; the place poems of the first part are known less well and weighed with a wider margin. Every axis is judged on Auden’s English. No text was in hand; nothing was measured, and no quotation was checked against a file. English is quoted only where its words are certain, briefly, and cited by poem; other lines are paraphrased. Facts that could not be verified are not given, among them the dates of composition, the exact number and order of the poems, the stanza count of “September 1, 1939” and the metrical model of the Freud elegy.