The Fifth Desk · Evaluation
Act I · The Map
Joni Mitchell · produced by Joni Mitchell · engineered by Henry Lewy · Reprise · about 36 minutes
Mode
The folk-based singer-songwriter album turned to unguarded first-person account; open tunings and unsettled harmony, the piano songs leaning toward jazz
Mythos
The wanderer who leaves home to be free and finds that freedom is homesickness; love as sacrament; the child given away
Phase
Ten songs on two sides: the road out, home, a child, an island and the title song; then Paris, California, the flight home, a Christmas alone, the love song and a cafe at closing time
Presentation
Album; ten songs, about thirty-six minutes, each side ending on the singer alone at the piano
Register
One voice, close to the ear, over dulcimer, piano or guitar, with at most three others; no strings, horns or choir
Scale
One consciousness in one year, its loves, a child, a marriage refused, and a nation glimpsed from abroad
Governing Proposition
A singer at the point of her rising fame sets ten songs for her voice and one instrument at a time, and finds that the wish to be free and the wish to be held live in one person and wreck each other; the record lets her say so against herself, and ends each side alone at the piano.
Act II · The Essay
Movement I
The record opens on the road. A dulcimer strums, and the voice sets out “on a lonely road”, wanting everything at once: to be free and to be held, to give and to have. The list of wishes runs long, and it is meant to. All I Want is the record’s statement of freedom before its cost, sung with leaps and swoops that are sometimes a mannerism and sometimes the wanting itself. Everything after it on the record counts what that freedom costs, and the one who pays is the one who wanted it.
Reprise released the album in June 1971: ten songs on two sides of an LP, about thirty-six minutes, produced by Joni Mitchell and engineered by Henry Lewy. Mitchell’s own instrument changes from song to song among three: Appalachian dulcimer on four songs, piano on four, guitar in her open tunings on two. Four songs are her voice and piano alone, and one is her voice and guitar alone. Where others play, no song has more than four players, and there are no strings, horns or backing choir. Side one runs about sixteen and a half minutes, side two about nineteen.
The order is fixed and it carries meaning. Side one moves from the road through home in My Old Man, the child given up in Little Green and a Greek island in Carey to the title song. Side two goes from Paris toward California, a flight home, a California Christmas in River, the love song A Case of You, and a cafe at closing time in The Last Time I Saw Richard. Each side ends on Mitchell alone at the piano. The road out of the first song is answered by the flight home of the seventh, and the record is counted as a form once, here, with the lighter songs placed rather than required.
Movement II
Little Green is voice and guitar alone, a ballad of verses with nothing beyond the guitar. A child is born and named for the green of spring; the young father has gone; the mother, a “child with a child”, gives the child to others. The song is told obliquely and with great restraint. It does not plead or explain, and its height comes late, held through the last verse. Whatever the listener knows of its source, the family is in the song: a child, an absent father and a mother who lets her go.
What the record knows can be stated, and it holds. The wish to be free and the wish to be held live in one person and wreck each other, and the one who says so is not exempt. The record does not describe a heartbroken woman from outside. It lets her accuse herself: in River she is “selfish and I’m sad”, and runs from the man she could not keep; in A Case of You she owns herself “a lonely painter”. The Last Time I Saw Richard sets the cynic against the romantic and gives the cynic the better lines.
The finding has its edge. The condition is one consciousness in one year, seen from inside, and much of what the record means is carried by the voice as mood rather than said. That holds The Unconcealment at 8.7. Blood on the Tracks, at 8.6 the nearest record in kind on this desk, ten songs of a love’s end for small forces with the words central, discloses a little more at 8.9, through a narrative that shifts in time and person; Blue keeps to one present tense and one voice, and does not move between vantages.
Movement III
Side two opens in a park in Paris, with news from home. In California the nation at war will not give “peace a chance”, and the singer, homesick, asks to be taken “as I am”. This Flight Tonight then flies her back. The pattern the record builds is here at its plainest: the wanderer who leaves home to be free and finds that freedom is homesickness. The road of the first song, Greece and Carey’s island, Paris, the flight and the California Christmas are its stations.
Around that pattern other archetypes are summoned. Love is a sacrament in A Case of You, drunk “like holy wine” and still not used up; the river in River is the old way out; the child in Little Green is given away and named for the spring; the cafe at closing time in Richard is a purgatory where the romantic waits. The particulars are kept with great sharpness: Matala, a park in Paris, a Christmas in California, Richard’s coffee and his wife. The old shapes show through the places without effacing them.
The limit is where the summit is lost. The archetypes are summoned by image and allusion more than built into load-bearing structure, and the wanderer’s journey is a sequence of postcards, not one journey made: The Archetypal Deep stands at 8.1, below its gate. Winterreise, at 9.2 the desk’s song cycle of a wanderer, builds the journey and wins every axis. The Swerve, at 8.3, falls short for a related reason: the candour is real, but the confessional turn had been made in poetry and in Dylan, Cohen and James Taylor, and the record kept to the song form and to a market that welcomed it.
Movement IV
River opens and closes on a Jingle Bells figure on the piano, bent toward the minor. It is Christmas in California and she is alone at the piano, and the song says why: she is “selfish and I’m sad”, and the man is gone because of who she is. The long-held line on “skate away on” lifts the record’s widest wish, to be out of it all. Score the song for a band and the singer is no longer alone; the claim that she is alone by her own doing goes with the solitude.
That is the record’s form at work. Its knowledge is exposure, and the arrangements make it: one voice, one instrument, and where others play, one added colour. The open tunings on guitar and dulcimer make chords that hover between major and minor and sit under the voice without resolving it, which is how the ambivalence sounds. Mitchell’s voice moves over wide intervals, from the chest to a clear head voice, and her phrasing stretches and compresses the bar to follow the sense. The piano songs, the title song and River chief among them, place suspended and unresolved chords with judgment, and Henry Lewy’s close, plain recording keeps the breath and the string noise in the sound.
The costs are charged. Her piano playing is functional more than fluent, the leaps become mannerism in All I Want and This Flight Tonight, and the band songs are plainer than the solo ones. The Made stands at 8.8, below Kind of Blue at 9.3 and Low at 9.0, and well above Blood on the Tracks at 8.3, whose making rests on the voice over plain guitar and harmonica. Against that record Blue wins five axes, loses five and ties The Living Form: its wins are height, making, survival, reach and law; its losses are on meaning, myth, the swerve, necessity and return.
Movement V
A Case of You is the record’s love song and its height. Love is a communion drunk “like holy wine”, a map is drawn of Canada, and the chorus rises as the voice leaps over the dulcimer’s drone. Then The Last Time I Saw Richard closes the record at the piano, alone: a bar-room anecdote of a cynic’s prophecy and a romantic’s answer, brought to the cafe at closing time, the “dark cafe days”, and a piano coda that ends the album. Carey’s island and Richard’s cafe obey one law, an unguarded voice telling the truth against its own interest and the range of tone between them is wide, while the range of form, verse and chorus or verses alone, is narrow.
What the record holds is held through one woman. Consciousness is held fully; love and marriage, from My Old Man’s refusal of the paper and “the bed’s too big” to Richard’s marriage; the family in Little Green; travel and exile across Europe and home; the nation in California; the sacred in “holy wine”. Labour, the state and history are glimpsed, not integrated, and the natural order is image. The Encompassed stands at 7.3, a tenth above Kind of Blue, and the figure describes a form of thirty-six minutes.
It has lasted about fifty-five years whole, in print since 1971, and is heard as an album rather than as two hits. Its standing has grown; A Case of You and River became standards, and River has entered the Christmas repertoire; songwriters across five decades name it as a source. Its surface carries almost no date: a voice and three instruments, recorded close and dry. The record stands at 8.5, Canonical. Four of the five summit conditions hold; the Epochal Gate fails on the myth evoked around a journey of postcards and on a swerve made more in candour than in method.
Act III · The Twelve
Ten songs in about thirty-six minutes, and the subtractive test finds little in the songs to take. Inside each, the arrangement has been cut to what carries the voice: four songs are voice and piano alone, one is voice and guitar alone, and where others play they add one colour, not a band. The title song is three minutes of piano and voice with no chorus; Little Green is a ballad of verses with nothing beyond the guitar. The test bites at the lighter edge. Carey is a holiday song on a Greek island and All I Want an opening whose list of wishes runs long; either could go at less loss than any piano song, and This Flight Tonight is the slightest writing on side two. But the lighter songs are the freedom the heavier ones count the cost of.
Score: 8.6 / 10
The disclosure can be stated and it holds: the wish to be free and the wish to be held live in one person and wreck each other, and the one who says so is not exempt. The record does not describe a heartbroken woman from outside; it lets her accuse herself. In River she is “selfish and I’m sad” and runs from the man she could not keep. In A Case of You love is drunk and still not used up, “like holy wine”, and the singer owns herself “a lonely painter”. Little Green discloses, obliquely and with great restraint, a young mother letting her child go. The Last Time I Saw Richard gives the cynic the better lines. The limit: the condition is one consciousness in one year, and much of the meaning is carried by the voice as mood.
Score: 8.7 / 10
Height comes often and is of one kind, beauty under strain. A Case of You rises in its chorus as the voice leaps and the dulcimer drones beneath. River opens and closes on a Jingle Bells figure on the piano, bent toward the minor, and the long-held line on “skate away on” lifts the record’s widest wish. The title song climbs into its upper register over slow piano chords, “songs are like tattoos”, and drops. Little Green holds its height through the last verse, and The Last Time I Saw Richard ends on a piano coda that turns a bar-room anecdote toward its “dark cafe days”. That is a high frequency for ten songs. Carey, All I Want and This Flight Tonight are vivid rather than elevated, and the height never reaches grandeur or terror.
Score: 8.8 / 10
Myth is evoked often and built in one pattern: the wanderer who leaves home to be free and finds that freedom is homesickness. The sequence lays it out, from the opening road, “on a lonely road”, through Greece and Paris to California, where she asks to be taken “as I am”, and the flight back in This Flight Tonight. Around that pattern archetypes are summoned: love as sacrament in A Case of You, the river as escape, the child given away and named for the green of spring, the bar at closing time as a purgatory. The particulars are kept sharp: Matala, a park in Paris, a California Christmas, Richard’s coffee and his wife. What holds the axis below the gate: the archetypes are summoned by image and allusion more than built into load-bearing structure, and the journey is a sequence of postcards, not one journey made.
Score: 8.1 / 10
The inheritance is the folk-based singer-songwriter album of 1970 and 1971, Mitchell’s own Ladies of the Canyon among it, and the turn goes two ways. In content the song stops being a persona or a parable and becomes an unguarded first-person account, with the singer charged as fully as anyone. In music the open tunings, the dulcimer and irregular phrase lengths draw the songs away from folk chord patterns toward harmonies that do not settle, and the piano songs lean toward jazz. The stake was personal more than commercial: a self exposed at the point of rising fame. What holds it below the gate: the confessional mode had precedents in poetry and in Dylan, Cohen and James Taylor; the musical swerve is moderate beside her later records; and the record kept to the song form and to a market that welcomed it.
Score: 8.3 / 10
Change the form and the record stops knowing what it knows. Its knowledge is exposure, and the arrangements make the exposure: one voice, one instrument, and at most three companions. Score River for a band and the singer is no longer alone at the piano at Christmas; the song’s claim, that she is alone because of who she is, is gone. The open tunings make chords that hover between major and minor and sit under the voice without resolving it, which is how the ambivalence sounds. The sequence is counted here, once. Each side ends at the piano, alone, side one on the title song and side two on the cafe at closing time, and the road out in All I Want is answered by the flight home in This Flight Tonight. The limit: the lighter songs are placed rather than required, and the two-sided shape is clear, not inevitable.
Score: 8.7 / 10
Evidence rather than promise, over about fifty-five years, and of two kinds. Musicians return to the making: the open tunings have been transcribed, catalogued and taught, and singers keep finding new readings of A Case of You and of River. Listeners and critics return to the meaning: the record has been read and reread as the founding case of a whole kind of song, the first-person account in which the singer is charged along with everyone else. On the critical side the depth is more semantic than formal, among players more formal than semantic, and the two together keep the figure high. The limit: much of the return is to four songs rather than to the sequence, and the record as an order of ten is revisited less than its parts.
Score: 8.6 / 10
The field is the singer-songwriter album of the early 1970s, crowded in the year of this record. The intrinsic force is real: the record showed that the popular song could carry a woman’s first-person account of love, failure and choice, unsoftened and including her own faults, and that it could do so with an art of harmony and phrasing her peers did not have. That reorganised what a song could say and who could say it. It is held near the bar because the means were shared, the confessional turn in poetry and the examples of Dylan and Cohen, and another singer-songwriter record of the same months reached many more listeners. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: the record is named as a source by singer-songwriters across five decades, by the women songwriters of the 1990s and the 2010s explicitly, and A Case of You and River became standards; the reach is in songwriting and voice, less in recorded sound.
Score: 8.7 / 10
Survival is weighed over about fifty-five years, on form, presence and fabric. The form survives whole as released, in print since 1971, and it is heard as an album rather than as two hits; it has no hit single of its own to outlive it. Presence is continuous and wide and has grown: the record is ranked higher now than on release, its songs are sung by singers born decades after it, and River has entered the Christmas repertoire. That presence earns one tenth for its width and is not taken as proof. The fabric carries almost no date: voice, piano, dulcimer and guitar, recorded close and dry, and nothing on it depends on the studio sound of its year. It stands a tenth below Kind of Blue at 9.0, older and as present, and far below what has lasted centuries.
Score: 8.9 / 10
Command of the recorded medium, with the words weighed elsewhere, and the making is load-bearing in the voice and the writing. Mitchell’s voice moves over wide intervals, from the chest to a clear head voice, and her phrasing stretches and compresses the bar to follow the sense, so that speech shapes the melodic line. The harmonic writing is her own: open tunings on guitar and dulcimer give voicings no standard tuning offers, and the piano songs place suspended and unresolved chords with judgment. Henry Lewy’s recording is close and plain, so breath and string noise are part of the sound. The costs: her piano playing is functional more than fluent, the leaps and swoops become mannerism in All I Want and This Flight Tonight, and the band songs are plainer than the solo ones. It stands below Kind of Blue at 9.3 and Low at 9.0.
Score: 8.8 / 10
One law governs: an unguarded voice, close to the ear, with the least accompaniment the song will bear, telling the truth against its own interest. Take the two most distant elements. Carey is a happy drinking song on a Greek island, with others playing; Little Green is a ballad of a child given away, for voice and guitar alone. Both obey the law: the voice is the same, and so is the candour. The Last Time I Saw Richard brings in comedy and satire, and the law holds there too. The range of tone is wide, from joy to desolation, and the range of instrument is kept within strict limits. The limit: the range of form is narrower than the range of tone. These are all songs of verse and chorus, or of verses alone, with no extended structure.
Score: 8.7 / 10
Judged on what the record holds, with no discount for the album form. Consciousness is held fully, in the self-accusation of River and A Case of You. Love and marriage are held, from My Old Man, with its refusal of the paper and its loneliness, “the bed’s too big”, to Richard’s marriage. The family is held in Little Green: a child, an absent father, a mother who gives the child to others. Travel and exile are held across Europe and home. The nation appears in California, where they will not give “peace a chance”, and the sacred is evoked in “holy wine”. What holds the axis lowest is the form: labour, the state and history are glimpsed, not integrated, and the natural order is image. It stands a tenth above Kind of Blue at 7.2, because its words reach the family and the nation.
Score: 7.3 / 10
Act IV · The Reckoning
8.5 / 10 · Final Average
Placement: Tier IV · Canonical
Strongest Dimensions
The Imperishable at 8.9, then The Sublime and The Made at 8.8. A record whole and in print for about fifty-five years, its presence grown and its surface carrying almost no date; height on most of its ten songs, of one kind, beauty under strain; and a voice and a harmonic writing of her own, open-tuned and unresolved, recorded close enough that the breath is part of the sound.
Limiting Dimension
The Encompassed at 7.3: consciousness, love and marriage, the family and travel are held, the nation and the sacred are glimpsed, and labour, the state and history are not integrated; the figure describes the form. Below the rest, The Archetypal Deep at 8.1, the wanderer’s pattern laid out as a sequence of postcards with its archetypes summoned more than built, and The Swerve at 8.3, a turn in candour more than in method, made inside a proven form and welcomed by its market.
The Necessity Cap clears at 8.6 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears with room: The Living Form at 8.7, The Made at 8.8, The Inner Law at 8.7, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is unmet: The Imperishable at 8.9, The Unconcealment at 8.7 and Pressure on Tradition at 8.7 clear the bar of 8.5, but The Swerve at 8.3 and The Archetypal Deep at 8.1 fall short. The Universal Minimum is met (no axis but The Encompassed falls below 8.1, against 7.5) and The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 7.3. Four of the five summit conditions are met; the summit is withheld on the Epochal Gate, and the aggregate, at 8.5, stands below it as well.
Basis · the album as first released by Reprise in June 1971, ten songs on two sides of an LP in their original order, about thirty-six minutes, produced by Joni Mitchell and engineered by Henry Lewy; judged from knowledge of the recording, its words and its reception. No recording, lyric sheet or score was in hand, and running times are approximate. Later remasters and reissues change the sound, not the songs or their order, and are not material to any figure; songs from the same sessions left off the album are not part of it. Songs are cited by title, and words are quoted only where certain and never beyond four words. Facts that could not be verified are not given, among them the exact day of release, the studio and dates of the sessions, the catalogue number, the photographer of the sleeve, the names of the musicians who play with Mitchell on each song, the chart positions, the later recordings of particular songs by particular singers, and the personal history behind particular songs.