The Fifth Desk · Evaluation

Act I · The Map

Literature · Novel in three parts · 19th c. · A Russian provincial capital: Varvara Petrovna’s drawing room, the governor’s house, the fête, a fire across the river, a park with a pond, and the high road

Demons

Fyodor Dostoevsky · Besy · a novel in three parts · serialised in The Russian Messenger, 1871 to 1872 · book edition 1873 · scored as Dostoevsky published it, without the chapter “At Tikhon’s”, on his Russian, read from knowledge; no text in hand, Russian quoted only where its words are certain, each quotation with a plain English rendering beneath, and no published translation quoted

The Plate · the three parts on one line, the second broken where a chapter was withdrawn and an empty bracket stands over the gap; at the head a small spiral, the travellers circled in the snow; a long fine line from the left, the twenty years before the action, wandering in to three orbits that circle an empty ring, with five dots carried round them; from the orbits four lines plunge to the right and down into a lake of short waves; one finer line leaves level to a small hut at the right edge, and from the hut a dotted arc rises over the whole drawing and comes down at the spiral

Mode

Political novel turned metaphysical tragedy; chronicle of provincial life, satire and novel of ideas in one action

Mythos

Pushkin’s travellers circled by a demon in a blizzard; the Gadarene demons that leave a man and enter the swine; the Pretender, the hidden true ruler of the folk; the man-god; the holy fool and earth-mother

Phase

A retrospective of some twenty years in Stepan Trofimovich’s life with Varvara Petrovna, then the young at work in the town, a scandal in a drawing room, a fête, a fire, a night of birth, a murder in a park, and a last wandering on the high road

Presentation

Fiction told as a chronicle by a townsman, Anton Lavrentyevich G-v, half-implicated, who reports rumour and guesses beside what he saw; three parts under two epigraphs, from Pushkin and from Luke

Register

From the comedy of Stepan Trofimovich’s French, Lebyadkin’s verses and Karmazinov’s preciosity to scandal, horror and a death in a peasant hut

Scale

A provincial capital: two generations of the intelligentsia, a governor and his wife, a revolutionary cell of five, the factory workers, a drawing room where the town gathers

Governing Proposition

In a provincial capital, a townsman sets down the chronicle of how his friend Stepan Trofimovich, a liberal idealist of the 1840s with twenty years of life beside Varvara Petrovna behind him, lived to see his son Pyotr at the head of a revolutionary cell, with Varvara Petrovna’s son Nikolai Stavrogin at the empty centre of everyone’s devotion; how the town’s authorities, flirting with the young, let a fête turn into disorder and fire; and how Pyotr had one of his own, Shatov, murdered in a park so that the five who killed him would be bound by blood. The wager of the book is that a political conspiracy can be told as a metaphysical tragedy, of persons entered and driven by ideas they did not make, and that the Gospel story of the demons and the swine can be its plan.

The Idea That Possesses Its Holder

8.9 / 10
Tier IV · Canonical

Act II · The Essay

Movement I

A Demon Leads Us

Two epigraphs stand over the book. The first is from Pushkin’s poem of 1830 that bears the novel’s own title, Бесы: “Хоть убей, следа не видно; / Сбились мы. Что делать нам? / В поле бес нас водит, видно, / Да кружит по сторонам.”
(Strike me dead, the track’s not visible; / We’ve lost our way. What should we do? / A demon leads us through the field, it seems, / And circles us about.) The second is from Luke, chapter 8, verses 32 to 36: the demons go out of a man and into a herd of swine, the swine rush down into the lake and are drowned, and the man sits at Jesus’ feet, clothed and in his right mind.

Dostoevsky wrote the book between 1869 and 1872, mostly in Dresden, after reading of the Nechaev affair: in Moscow in November 1869 the student Ivan Ivanov was murdered by Sergei Nechaev’s circle. It ran in Katkov’s Russian Messenger in 1871 and 1872 and came out as a book in 1873. One chapter did not reach either. “At Tikhon’s”, in which Stavrogin visits the elder and brings a written confession, was refused by Katkov for the serial, and Dostoevsky did not restore it in the book or in his lifetime. It was published from the manuscripts and proofs in the 1920s and survives in more than one state. The unit here is the novel as he published it.

The teller is a man of the town, Anton Lavrentyevich G-v, friend and confidant of Stepan Trofimovich, who calls his account a chronicle. He begins far back, with some twenty years of Stepan Trofimovich’s life with Varvara Petrovna: an idealist of the 1840s, given to French and to his vanities. The first part is long and comic, and it carries the book’s thesis. The young of the town’s circle, Stepan Trofimovich’s son Pyotr at their head, are the generation of the 1860s, and they are his by descent: Pyotr by blood, the rest by inheritance.

Movement II

Ivan the Tsarevich

Varvara Petrovna’s son is Nikolai Stavrogin, and the book is built around him. He can do anything and believes nothing; he wants nothing. Around that emptiness the others organise their ideas and their devotion: Shatov’s faith, Kirillov’s logic and Pyotr’s scheme each turn on him. Whether he is a demon, a sick man or a saint who failed, the book leaves open.

The first great scene is in Varvara Petrovna’s drawing room. Marya Timofeevna is there, on her knees; then the arrivals come in sequence, Lebyadkin, Stavrogin, Shatov and Dasha, until Shatov strikes Stavrogin, and Stavrogin restrains himself. The scandal scene, the whole cast gathered until the room explodes, is the book’s way of showing a society losing its law, and it is timed so that the blow lands last.

Pyotr’s plan has a place for Stavrogin. He is to be set up as “Иван-Царевич”
(Ivan the Tsarevich), the Pretender, the hidden true ruler of the folk. Through the second part the book prepares a visit to the elder Tikhon and a reckoning; with the chapter withdrawn, the published text points at a centre it does not hold, and Stavrogin remains opaque.

Movement III

Unlimited Despotism

At the meeting “with our people”, Shigalyov states the conclusion of his thinking plainly: “Выходя из безграничной свободы, я заключаю безграничным деспотизмом”
(Starting from unlimited freedom, I conclude with unlimited despotism). The conspirators, Liputin, Lyamshin and Virginsky among them, are comic, vain and small; Pyotr needs the five of his cell bound, and belief will not bind them.

The town gives the conspirators their stage. The governor, von Lembke, is paralysed; his wife, Yulia Mikhailovna, patronises the young to seem modern, and the progressive salon flirts with them too. The unrest among the Shpigulin factory workers is in the air. In the third part she holds a fête, and the fête comes apart: Karmazinov, in whom Turgenev is parodied, reads at length in his preciosity, and the town’s collapse has its stage.

Across the river there is a fire. The Lebyadkins are found dead. Liza, at the fire, is killed by the crowd. The disorder has not been made by the strength of the five; it has been made by the vanity and fashion of the authorities and the educated, who opened the door. The comedy of the first part and the horror of the third are one action, as the epigraph of the circling demon said they would be.

Movement IV

The Park by the Pond

Shatov’s wife, Marie, comes back to him, and in the night she gives birth. Shatov, who has believed in Russia’s God and the people’s, sits with her through the night and the child comes. Here the narrator’s gossip falls silent and the book is warm, for a night.

The next evening Shatov is murdered in the park by the pond. Pyotr has arranged it so that the five who kill him will be tied by blood, not belief, and each of them acts there by his nature, Erkel with calm. The child born in the night is orphaned. The crime that was to bind the cell is the beginning of its undoing.

Kirillov has resolved to kill himself as a logical proof, the act of his man-god. On his last night Pyotr waits in the dark room. There is the candle, the figure standing motionless in the corner, and the shot. The idea is carried through as a scene of horror, and the book leaves open whether the death refutes the idea or completes it.

Movement V

Into the Lake

Stepan Trofimovich’s last wandering takes him out on the high road. He falls in with a woman who sells the Gospels, and asks her to read him the passage of the demons and the swine. Hearing it, he reads the novel through it: Russia is the sick man, and he and his son are the swine. He dies in a peasant hut. Whether his turn at the last is grace or one more pose, the book does not say.

Stavrogin writes a last letter, and the cord ends him. The possessed have run to their deaths, Kirillov and Stavrogin and, in their undoing, Shatov’s killers; the town survives them. The epigraph from Luke, set at the head of the book, has become its last reading of itself.

The book cost Dostoevsky with the progressive press for decades and fixed his name as a reactionary’s. It has been reread at every political crisis since: by the émigré thinkers as a prophecy of the revolution, by Camus on the stage, by Bakhtin as the chief exhibit of the polyphonic novel. The student circles of 1869 are period. The idea that enters a person and drives him is not.

Act III · The Twelve

1The Inevitable (Ananke)

Subtract and see. Take out Stepan Trofimovich’s long introduction and the book loses its thesis, that the liberal idealists of the 1840s fathered the nihilists of the 1860s: Pyotr is his son by blood, and the whole circle is his by descent. Take out the fête of Part Three and the town’s collapse has no stage; take out Marie’s return and the birth, and Shatov’s murder loses its weight. The spine passes. What holds the axis lowest of the twelve is that the plan changed in the writing, from a pamphlet against Nechaevism to a tragedy centred on Stavrogin, and it shows. Much of Part One’s comedy runs longer than the argument needs; Karmazinov’s reading at the fête is a settling of scores with Turgenev, carried at length; the meeting “with our people” and Lebyadkin’s verses repeat their points; and with “At Tikhon’s” withdrawn, parts of Part Two point at a centre the published book does not hold.

Score: 8.3 / 10

2The Unconcealment (Aletheia)

The disclosure can be stated, and it holds. A revolutionary cell needs a crime to bind it: Pyotr has Shatov killed so that the five are tied by blood, not belief. A doctrine of total freedom arrives by its own logic at total despotism, and Shigalyov says so in one sentence: “Выходя из безграничной свободы, я заключаю безграничным деспотизмом”
(Starting from unlimited freedom, I conclude with unlimited despotism). The disorder of a town is made not by the conspirators’ strength but by the vanity and fashion of the authorities and the educated, who flirt with the young to seem modern. And in Stavrogin the book discloses a will with nothing it wants, able to do anything and to believe nothing, around which everyone else’s ideas are organised. It holds without Dostoevsky’s faith. Held off the top because the satire caricatures as often as it discloses: Liputin, Lyamshin and Virginsky are at times the puppets of a pamphlet.

Score: 9.2 / 10

3The Sublime (Hypsos)

Height is reached often, and in Part Three almost continuously, in the dreadful register more than the warm. The dreadful: Kirillov’s last night with Pyotr waiting, the candle, the figure standing motionless in the corner, and the shot; the fire across the river and the bodies of the Lebyadkins; Liza killed by the crowd at the fire; Shatov’s murder in the park by the pond, with Erkel’s calm. The warm: Shatov and Marie through the night of the birth, where the narrator’s gossip falls silent; and Stepan Trofimovich’s last wandering on the high road with the Gospel-seller, his asking her to read the Gadarene passage, and his death in a peasant hut. Held a step below the top because Part One rises only in flashes, Shatov’s blow and Marya Timofeevna in Varvara Petrovna’s drawing room, while its comic register holds long.

Score: 9.1 / 10

4The Archetypal Deep (Mythos)

Myth built, not evoked. The two epigraphs are the plan: Pushkin’s travellers circled by a demon in a blizzard, and the demons of Luke that leave a man and enter the swine, which rush into the lake and are drowned while the man sits clothed and in his right mind at Jesus’ feet. The book enacts both: ideas enter persons and drive them in circles, and the possessed run to their deaths while the town survives. At the end Stepan Trofimovich hears the passage read and himself names Russia as the sick man, and himself and his son as the swine. Around it the archetypes bear load: the Pretender, in Pyotr’s plan to set Stavrogin up as “Иван-Царевич”
(Ivan the Tsarevich), the hidden true ruler of the folk; Kirillov’s man-god; the holy fool and earth-mother in Marya Timofeevna. Held off the very top because the pamphlet’s figures do not share in it.

Score: 9.2 / 10

5The Swerve (Parekklisis)

The inheritance is the anti-nihilist novel of the 1860s, a tendentious genre (Pisemsky, Leskov’s No Way Out), and the chronicle of provincial life. The swerve is to turn the political novel into metaphysical tragedy: a conspiracy plot whose real subject is what happens to persons when an idea possesses them, told by a gossiping narrator who cannot keep up with his own material, around a hero who is a void at the centre of every other character’s devotion. Kirillov’s suicide as a logical proof, carried through as a scene of horror, has no clear precedent. The stake was real: the book cost Dostoevsky with the progressive press for decades and fixed his name as a reactionary’s, and the confession chapter he thought central was refused and lost to the published book. Held below the top because the form of the anti-nihilist novel still governs much of the satire.

Score: 8.9 / 10

6The Living Form (Entelecheia)

Change the form and much of the knowledge goes. The chronicler is the instrument: a man of the town, half-implicated, who sets rumour and his own guesses beside what he saw, so that the reader knows the town as it knew itself, a place where everyone talks and no one knows. Possession by ideas is shown as contagion, and the narrator’s talk is a vector of it. The scandal scene, the whole cast brought into one room until the room explodes, in Varvara Petrovna’s drawing room in Part One and at the fête in Part Three, is the form by which a society is shown losing its law. Charged: the narrator’s knowledge is inconsistent, since he reports private scenes, Kirillov’s death and Stavrogin’s nights, that he could not have seen, and the book shifts to an omniscient register when it needs one; and the withdrawal of “At Tikhon’s” leaves the centre the form is built to circle emptier than the design intended.

Score: 8.7 / 10

7The Bottomless Well (Apeiron)

Evidence rather than promise. A century and a half of reading has not exhausted it, and each political age has reread it: as a prophecy of Bolshevism by the émigré thinkers; as an anatomy of terror in Camus’s stage adaptation, Les Possédés (1959); as the chief exhibit of Bakhtin’s polyphonic novel (1929 and 1963); as a study of mimetic desire around Stavrogin in Girard. The text holds its questions open. Is Stavrogin a demon, a sick man, or a saint who failed? Does Kirillov’s suicide refute his idea or complete it? Is Shatov’s Russian God faith, or nationalism wearing faith? Is Stepan Trofimovich’s turn at the last grace, or one more pose? The form yields too: the narrator’s reliability is a field of study in itself.

Score: 9.2 / 10

8Pressure on Tradition (Agon)

The field is the Russian novel of the 1870s and, as Russian fiction entered it, the European. The force: the book made the political novel a vehicle of metaphysics, showed that terrorism and conspiracy could be the matter of tragedy rather than of melodrama or tract, and gave the novel of ideas the figure of the idea that possesses its holder. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: it stands at the head of the twentieth century’s novel of revolution and terror, which answered it in agreement or against it, in Conrad’s Under Western Eyes and The Secret Agent, Bely’s Petersburg, Camus’s The Just Assassins and his adaptation, and the political fiction after the Russian Revolution that read it as the book which had seen it coming. Held below the top because the larger reorganisation of Dostoevsky’s novel was made in Crime and Punishment and The Idiot before it and The Brothers Karamazov after; this book applies that form to politics.

Score: 9.0 / 10

9The Imperishable (Aphtharsia)

Survival over about a hundred and fifty years, weighed on form, then presence, then fabric. Form: the text survives whole as published in 1873. The confession chapter survives too, printed in most modern editions as an appendix; its withdrawal belongs to the history of the work, not to its loss. Presence is wide and continuous in the West: translated into the major languages, taught, staged by Camus in 1959, filmed by Wajda as Les Possédés in 1988, and reread at every political crisis. What holds it off the widest figure is its presence in its own language, which is reported, though not verified here, to have been interrupted for much of the Soviet century. Fabric: the surfaces, Turgenev parodied and the student circles of 1869, are period, but the book is read for what they pressed upon.

Score: 9.1 / 10

10The Made (Techne)

Judged on the Russian as far as a close translation carries it. The command of the scene is the highest of its kind: the drawing-room scandal of Part One, timed so that Marya Timofeevna, Lebyadkin, Stavrogin, Shatov and Dasha arrive in sequence and the blow lands last; Kirillov and Pyotr in the dark room; the night of the birth; the murder in the park, each of the five acting by his nature. The voices are distinct and comic: Lebyadkin’s verses, Stepan Trofimovich’s French, Karmazinov’s preciosity. Charged: the prose is hurried, as Dostoevsky’s often is under serial deadlines, with repetition and loose syntax; the narrator’s frame is managed carelessly; the minor conspirators are thinly drawn; and some chapters of Part Two carry exposition the book could have dramatised. A making that bears the load in its scenes and is loose between them.

Score: 8.6 / 10

11The Inner Law (Cosmos)

Take the two most distant elements: Stepan Trofimovich’s vanity over a lost manuscript and a teacup in Part One, and Kirillov’s suicide in Part Three. One law governs them: persons possessed by ideas they did not make, circling, the father’s harmless aestheticism and the man-god’s logic two ends of the same descent. The comic and the tragic obey it, as the epigraphs say they must, and the last chapter brings Stepan Trofimovich back to read the law aloud. Charged: the change of plan leaves a seam between pamphlet and tragedy, so that some conspirators are satirised under one law and Stavrogin and Kirillov tragedised under another; Karmazinov is a caricature drawn from outside the book’s world; and the narrator’s knowledge breaks its own rule. The range held is very wide; the hold is not seamless.

Score: 8.6 / 10

12The Encompassed (Megethos)

Held, not listed. Consciousness: Stavrogin’s emptiness, Kirillov’s logic, Shatov’s faith, Stepan Trofimovich’s lifelong pose and its breaking. The family: a mother and her son, Varvara Petrovna and Nikolai; a father and his son, Stepan and Pyotr; the Shatov marriage, with a child born and orphaned in a night. The state: the governor and his wife, the administration, the police, the province. History: two generations of the Russian intelligentsia, the 1840s and the 1860s, made agents of the plot. The sacred: Tikhon, withdrawn but present in Part Two’s references, the Gospel-seller, Kirillov’s man-god, Shatov’s people-God, the holy fool. Labour enters thinly, through the unrest of the Shpigulin factory workers, and the natural order more thinly still: those two counts hold it below the top.

Score: 9.1 / 10

Act IV · The Reckoning

8.9 / 10 · Final Average

Placement: Tier IV · Canonical

Strongest Dimensions

The Unconcealment, The Archetypal Deep and The Bottomless Well at 9.2, then The Sublime, The Imperishable and The Encompassed at 9.1. A disclosure that a cell is bound by a crime and that unlimited freedom concludes in unlimited despotism; a myth built from two epigraphs and enacted, the demons entering persons and the swine running to the lake; questions about Stavrogin, Kirillov, Shatov and Stepan Trofimovich still open after a century and a half; heights reached almost continuously in the third part, from the fire to the night of the birth and the road; a text whole since 1873; and two generations of the intelligentsia, the state, the family and the sacred held in one action.

Limiting Dimension

The Inevitable at 8.3, held by a plan changed in the writing: Part One’s comedy longer than the argument needs, Karmazinov’s reading carried at length, the meeting and Lebyadkin’s verses repeating their points, and a withdrawn chapter that leaves Part Two pointing at a centre the book does not hold. Next above it, The Made and The Inner Law at 8.6, then The Living Form at 8.7: scenes of the highest command with hurried prose between them, a seam between pamphlet and tragedy, and a narrator who reports what he could not have seen. The sound of the Russian sentence is beyond this reading, and is neither credited nor charged.

The Necessity Cap clears at 8.3 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears: The Living Form at 8.7, The Made at 8.6, The Inner Law at 8.6, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is met on all five: The Unconcealment at 9.2, The Archetypal Deep at 9.2, The Imperishable at 9.1, Pressure on Tradition at 9.0 and The Swerve at 8.9 clear the bar of 8.5, the last by four tenths. The Universal Minimum is met (no axis falls below 8.3, against 7.5) and The Encompassed clears its own floor of 6.0 at 9.1. Every summit condition is met; the work is held below the summit by its aggregate alone, which The Inevitable, The Made, The Inner Law and The Living Form hold down.

Basis · a reading from knowledge of Fyodor Dostoevsky’s Бесы (Besy), scored as one novel in three parts as Dostoevsky published it in 1873, after its serial in The Russian Messenger (Русский вестник) in 1871 and 1872. The chapter “At Tikhon’s” (У Тихона), refused for the serial and not restored by the author in the book or in his lifetime, published from the manuscripts and proofs in the 1920s and surviving in more than one state, is weighed as the version history of the work and not scored as part of the text; where its absence bears on an axis, that is said. Every score is judged on the novel in Dostoevsky’s Russian, which is not in hand. Russian is quoted on this page only where its words are certain, and beneath each quotation stands a plain English rendering in parentheses, made for this page and not taken from any published translation. Translation · Richard Pevear and Larissa Volokhonsky’s Demons (1994) is the version best known to this reading and was used for sense: it is close, and keeps the narrator’s clumsiness and the characters’ tics. Constance Garnett’s The Possessed (1913) was used for comparison; David Magarshack’s The Devils (1953) is the third English title. None is in hand, none is quoted, and nothing in any of them is charged to the novel. The texture of the narrator’s provincial, self-interrupting voice and of Lebyadkin’s doggerel is judged as far as a close translation carries it. Names follow the usual English forms. Citations are by part. Facts that could not be verified, among them the number of chapters in each part, the length of the novel, the span of the action, the dates of some of the readings named, the scene-by-scene place of the great scenes and the history of the book’s publication in the Soviet Union, are not given.