The Fifth Desk · Evaluation

Act I · The Map

Literature · Tragedy · 5th c. BC · Before the house of Agamemnon, on one day

Electra

Sophocles · a tragedy for performance · 1,510 lines · Athens, date unknown, placed by its style late in Sophocles’ career, about 420 to 410 BC · scored on Sophocles’ Greek, read from knowledge; no text in hand, Greek quoted only where its words are certain, with Lloyd-Jones’s Loeb for sense

The Plate · the play laid out by its lines, with the sung parts standing on the line as low arcs, the long lyric entry of the chorus the widest; above, a thin line from the prologue for what the audience knows, that the brother lives; below it a heavy line for Electra from her first song, level until the false report, then fallen and held low, with a dotted stroke reaching up and stopping short where the true sign is disbelieved and an empty vessel standing on the low line; late, her line climbs to meet the line of knowledge, and the two run together to the two heavy strokes of the blows and on to a small veil and a dot

Mode

Tragedy of revenge, held on the one who waits; recognition withheld to the last fifth

Mythos

The house of Atreus: the daughter who will not stop mourning, the brother mourned while he lives, the empty urn, the mother’s dream of the sceptre at the hearth

Phase

One day: the brother’s return in secret, the false report, the true sign refused, the urn, the recognition, the two killings

Presentation

Drama for the Athenian festival; a prologue, Electra’s monody, a lyric entry of the chorus, episodes divided by three choral odes, a kommos and a sung recognition; 1,510 lines in the standard numbering, about a quarter of them lyric

Register

From lament, the nightingale and Niobe, through the paired speeches of mother and daughter and the narrative of a chariot race, to the cold irony of the shroud lifted

Scale

One house and one day, a mother, two sisters, an absent brother and a dead father, with the oracle of Apollo and the dead below

Governing Proposition

Orestes comes home in secret to kill his father’s murderers, and sends ahead a false report of his own death. His sister Electra, who has mourned their father for years in the house of the killers, hears it and believes it, and the audience, who know he lives, watch her live through a death that never happened. The wager of the play is that a wrong left unpunished does not only injure but forms the one who resists it, so that the avenger is made by the crime and in its likeness; and that a form which gives the truth to the audience and withholds it from its heroine can show what grief, hope and hatred do to a mind working on a lie.

What Is Said and What Is So

8.7 / 10
Tier IV · Canonical

Act II · The Essay

Movement I

Dead in Word

The play opens on the men, not on Electra. Orestes has come home in secret with his old tutor and his silent friend Pylades, sent by Apollo’s oracle. The tutor is to go into the house with a false report that Orestes has died in a chariot race at Delphi, and Orestes and Pylades will follow with an urn said to hold his ashes. Orestes states the plan in four words: “logōi thanōn ergoisi sōthō”
“dead in word, saved in deed” (59 to 60). Everything after is set going by that line.

Then a cry from within, and the men leave before she comes. From this moment the audience knows what Electra does not, that her brother is alive and at the door, and every scene that follows is watched across that gap. The play’s form is the knowledge it holds back from its heroine. In Aeschylus’ Libation Bearers the same story turns on the avenger and the recognition comes early; here the avenger goes off, and the recognition will not come until about line 1221, some four fifths of the way through.

Electra comes out alone and sings. Her monody is a lament for her father, killed by her mother and Aegisthus. The women of the chorus come to comfort her, and their entry is a long lyric exchange in which she refuses comfort. She names herself in her songs as the nightingale mourning Itys and as Niobe weeping in stone (145 to 152). The daughter who will not stop mourning is set in figures before she is set in argument, and from here she is kept before the audience for nearly the whole play: her endurance is the play’s length.

Movement II

The Sceptre at the Hearth

In the first episode Electra argues with the chorus, and the argument is slow beside the rest of the play. But it carries the play’s disclosure in her own mouth. She lives as a servant in the house of her father’s killers and watches them sit on his throne, and she knows what that has made of her: among such evils, she tells the chorus, there is great necessity to practise evil (308 to 309). The play does not ask whether she is right to hate. It shows how she has been formed by what she hates.

Her sister Chrysothemis comes out carrying offerings for their father’s tomb, sent by their mother. Chrysothemis is the sister who submits: she will not resist the wrong. She tells why the offerings are sent. Clytemnestra has dreamed that Agamemnon came back and planted his sceptre at the hearth, and that it sprouted and grew to shade the land (417 to 423). The dream is the house’s future seen in a figure, and the mother sends gifts to the grave to turn it aside.

Electra will not let the mother’s gifts stand for the daughters’ mourning, and the chorus sing their first ode. The episode has set the two sisters side by side, the one who resists and the one who yields, and it has put the mother’s fear into the play before the mother herself comes out.

Movement III

The Race at Delphi

Clytemnestra comes out, and mother and daughter meet in paired speeches. The mother’s defence is Iphigenia: Agamemnon sacrificed their daughter, and she killed him for it. The play gives the case its weight and does not refute it; Electra counters it, and in countering it says the thing the play knows about her: that shameful deeds are taught by shameful ones (621). Then Clytemnestra prays to Apollo, in veiled words, for what she cannot say aloud before her daughter.

The answer to the prayer seems to walk in at once. The old tutor arrives as a stranger with the news that Orestes is dead, and he tells how: a chariot race in the Pythian games at Delphi, and a crash, told to the last detail of a death that never happened. It is a long speech, about 680 to 763, a set piece of narrative energy, and it is the one stretch where a reader asks whether so much is needed. It is, because its length and vividness are what make a lie into a death that the audience watches Electra live through.

Clytemnestra is relieved: the son who threatened her is gone. That relief is the most terrible thing she says, and the play has placed the report after the agon so that it can be seen. She takes the stranger inside. Electra is left with the chorus, and they sing a lament together, the kommos, in which she refuses even the comfort of hope. The false report has done what Orestes meant it to do in the house, and what he did not mean it to do to his sister.

Movement IV

O Memorial of the Dearest

Chrysothemis runs in with joy. At the tomb she has found a lock of hair, and she knows it can be no one’s but Orestes’: he is home. The true sign comes, and Electra, already holding the false news, will not believe it. She tells her sister that Orestes is dead, and asks her to join in killing Aegisthus themselves. Chrysothemis refuses, and Electra resolves to do it alone (from 938). The late recognition sets this resolve before she knows she has a brother: the will to kill is shown as hers, not his.

Orestes comes with the urn, and Electra asks to hold it. “ō philtatou mnēmeion anthrōpōn emoi”
“O memorial of the dearest of men to me” (1126). She speaks to the ashes she believes are her brother’s. It is among the summits of lament in Greek, and its grief is for a man standing beside her. The urn that should hold the brother holds nothing, and the play’s question of what is said and what is so is held in her hands.

Orestes cannot keep the secret before her grief. The recognition is drawn out in single lines, and then given in a lyric duet. Electra has been working on a false report for some five hundred lines, and the gap between her and the audience closes here, at about line 1221.

Movement V

Strike a Second Time

Orestes and Pylades go in. Electra stays at the door and keeps watch, and the chorus sing a short ode. The killing of the mother is heard, not seen. Clytemnestra cries out within: “ōmoi peplēgmai”
“Ah, I am struck” (1415). Electra answers her through the door: “paison, ei stheneis, diplēn”
“Strike, if you have the strength, a second time” (1415 to 1416). The lines are split between voices at the blows, and the daughter’s answer is the play’s dreadful height.

Aegisthus comes back, glad of the news, and asks to see the body. A shrouded corpse is carried out. He is invited to lift the veil, and lifts it, and finds not Orestes but his wife. The device he rejoiced in is the one that kills him. The shroud over the dead Orestes covers the queen, as the urn of the dead held nothing.

Orestes drives Aegisthus into the house to die. The mother has been killed first, so the play ends not on the matricide but on the tyrant driven in to die. There are no Furies, no pursuit and no trial, and the play does not say what the deed will cost the brother and the sister afterwards. Whether that silence is triumph or judgment it leaves open, and the question has not been settled.

Act III · The Twelve

1The Inevitable (Ananke)

The subtractive test finds very little. The prologue must stand: Orestes’ plan of a false report of his own death is the engine of everything after. Chrysothemis comes twice and both visits are required: first as the sister who submits, carrying Clytemnestra’s offerings after the dream of the sceptre; then with the true news of the lock on the tomb, which Electra, already holding the false news, refuses, and which drives her to resolve on the killing alone. The agon with Clytemnestra must come before the false report so that the mother’s relief can be seen. The long speech of the chariot race at Delphi is the one place a reader asks whether so much is needed, and it is: its length makes a lie into a death. Held below 9 by that speech’s ornament and the second Chrysothemis scene’s length.

Score: 8.8 / 10

2The Unconcealment (Aletheia)

The disclosure can be stated, and it holds: a wrong left unpunished does not only injure, it forms the one who resists it, so that the avenger is made by the crime and in its likeness. Electra knows it herself. She tells the chorus that among such evils there is great necessity to practise evil (308 to 309), and tells her mother that shameful deeds are taught by shameful ones (621). Clytemnestra’s defence, Iphigenia, is given its weight and is not refuted, only countered. The play shows grief as a way of keeping faith that turns, under the false news, into the will to kill, and it shows a mother’s relief at her son’s death as the most terrible thing she says. Held off the top because the play declines to state what the deed costs afterwards: it discloses the formation, not the aftermath.

Score: 8.8 / 10

3The Sublime (Hypsos)

Height is reached often, and highest in three places. The urn speech: “ō philtatou mnēmeion anthrōpōn emoi”
“O memorial of the dearest of men to me” (1126), Electra holding what she believes are her brother’s ashes, a lament among the summits of Greek grief, for a man standing beside her; and the recognition duet rises from it. The dreadful height is the exodos: Clytemnestra’s cry within, “ōmoi peplēgmai”
“Ah, I am struck” (1415), Electra’s answer, and then Aegisthus lifting the shroud to find not Orestes but his wife. The opening monody and the lyric entry of the chorus, with Electra as the nightingale mourning Itys and as Niobe weeping in stone, make a third. Held a step from the top by the stretches of argument in the first episode.

Score: 8.9 / 10

4The Archetypal Deep (Mythos)

Myth built, not evoked. The play’s central device is an archetype made into plot: the living are mourned as dead, the dead father is the only certain ally, and the urn that should hold the brother holds nothing. Clytemnestra’s dream of Agamemnon’s sceptre planted at the hearth and growing to shade the land is the house’s future seen in a figure. Electra herself, the daughter who will not stop mourning, the nightingale and Niobe of her own songs, became the type of the unappeasable mourner; this is the Electra Hofmannsthal took, and the name passed into psychology. She stays particular: the sister who mocks Chrysothemis’s comfort, kept like a servant, unmarried. Held below 9 because the myth is inherited from Aeschylus and the epic, and the curse on the house is evoked more than built.

Score: 8.7 / 10

5The Swerve (Parekklisis)

The inheritance is Aeschylus’ Libation Bearers, which sets the same events, and Sophocles turns them. The centre moves from the avenger to the sister who waits. The recognition, which Aeschylus places early, is withheld until four fifths of the play are spent. A false report, a stratagem in Aeschylus, becomes the play’s heart. The mother is killed before Aegisthus, so the play ends not on the matricide but on the tyrant driven in to die; and there are no Furies, no pursuit, no trial. The stake is real: to stage the matricide without the moral reckoning the Oresteia had made the form’s own, and leave the audience to supply or refuse it. Held below the gate because it is a revision within a set story and a proven path, and because Euripides’ Electra swerved further from the same model.

Score: 8.4 / 10

6The Living Form (Entelecheia)

Change the form and the knowledge goes. The play is built so that the audience knows from the prologue what Electra does not: that Orestes lives. Every scene after is watched across that gap, and the form is the knowledge, since only a form that holds the truth back from its heroine and gives it to its audience can show what grief, hope and hatred do to a mind working on a false report. Electra is kept before the audience for nearly the whole play, so that her endurance is the play’s duration. The late recognition sets her resolve to kill alone before she knows she has a brother, so that her will is shown as hers, not Orestes’. Held a little off the top by the messenger speech, the form’s most container-like stretch.

Score: 8.9 / 10

7The Bottomless Well (Apeiron)

Evidence rather than promise. The ending has been argued for a century without settlement: whether it is a plain triumph of justice, or deeply ironic, the absence of the Furies a silence that condemns, as Winnington-Ingram and others read it. Electra herself is read as heroic and as deformed by her suffering, and both readings find their lines. The commentaries continue, from Jebb’s to Kells’s and after. The play’s question of word and deed, logos and ergon, set in the prologue and returned in the false death, the true lock and the empty urn, keeps yielding formal readings. Held below the top because its open questions are fewer than those of the tragedies most often reread, and they gather at the end.

Score: 8.6 / 10

8Pressure on Tradition (Agon)

The field is Athenian tragedy of the later fifth century, the form at its height and the story already told by Aeschylus. The play made the long endurance of a single suffering figure, held in view, the substance of a tragedy, and made the false report and the delayed recognition a full dramatic structure; Aristotle’s interest in recognition belongs to the same field. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: the play is the source most later Electras worked from, through Crébillon (1708) and Voltaire’s Oreste (1750) to Hofmannsthal’s Elektra (1903) and Strauss’s opera on it (1909), Giraudoux’s Électre (1937) and Yourcenar’s (1954), with O’Neill’s Mourning Becomes Electra (1931) drawing on the whole story; and Aulus Gellius records the actor Polus carrying his own son’s ashes in the urn scene. Held at the gate because its force refines the form more than it reorganises it.

Score: 8.5 / 10

9The Imperishable (Aphtharsia)

Survival over some twenty-four centuries, and the text survives whole. The play is complete, with no loss of parts, and its corruptions are those any Greek tragedy carries. Its presence is demonstrated: chosen for the Byzantine triad with Ajax and Oedipus Tyrannus, it was among the three plays of Sophocles most copied and taught, and so was read without break from late antiquity through the Byzantine schools into the Renaissance. It has been translated into the European languages again and again since, is staged in the modern repertory, and has passed into opera and into the vocabulary of psychology. Set at the foot of the band for a text whole and read without break over millennia, because its presence, though continuous, is narrower than that of the most read Greek tragedies, and its modern fame runs partly through Strauss.

Score: 9.5 / 10

10The Made (Techne)

Judged on the Greek; its metre and sound are beyond this reading and are neither credited nor charged. The construction is exact: the false report placed to fall after the agon, so that Clytemnestra’s relief is exposed; the news of the lock set against it; the recognition delayed and then given in a lyric duet; the killings timed so that the mother dies within while Electra keeps watch at the door, and Aegisthus dies by the device he rejoiced in. The messenger speech is a set piece of narrative energy, the crash at Delphi told to the last detail of a death that never happened. The single-line exchange of the recognition, the paired speeches of the agon and the lines split between speakers at the blows show command of every instrument the form had. Charged a little: the first episode’s argument is slower than the rest.

Score: 9.2 / 10

11The Inner Law (Cosmos)

Take the two most distant elements: the lyric lament of the chorus’s entry, Electra as nightingale and Niobe, and the cold irony of the exodos, where Aegisthus is invited to lift the veil and finds his wife. One law governs both: word and deed part, and the play turns on what is said and what is so. The false word kills Orestes for Electra and for Clytemnestra; the true sign, the lock, is disbelieved; the urn of the dead holds nothing; the shroud over the dead Orestes covers the queen; and Electra’s mourning, a word kept against the deed, ends in the deed. The range is wide for a single play, from lament to argument to the race to the killing, and it holds. Charged only for the ending’s tone, which some read as a fracture rather than a design.

Score: 8.9 / 10

12The Encompassed (Megethos)

Judged at a single play’s scale. Consciousness is held fully, in Electra’s long endurance. The family: a mother, two sisters, a dead father, an absent brother, and a murdered daughter, Iphigenia, argued over in the agon. The state: Aegisthus’ rule as usurpation, the house as the city. The sacred: Apollo’s oracle, which sends Orestes and is prayed to by mother and daughter both; the dead below; the rites at the tomb. The body and labour, in Electra’s servitude; games and spectacle, in the Pythian race. All of it is held, not listed, through one house and one day. What holds the axis lowest of the twelve is that form: history and the natural order are absent, and the city as an agent barely appears.

Score: 7.5 / 10

Act IV · The Reckoning

8.7 / 10 · Final Average

Placement: Tier IV · Canonical

Strongest Dimensions

The Imperishable at 9.5, then The Made at 9.2, then The Sublime, The Living Form and The Inner Law at 8.9. A text whole and read without break for some twenty-four centuries, carried by the Byzantine schools; a construction in which every scene is placed to work, the false report after the agon, the true sign against it, the recognition held to the last fifth; height in the urn speech and in the cry through the door; and a form that gives the truth to the audience and withholds it from its heroine, so that the gap between them is what the play shows.

Limiting Dimension

The Encompassed at 7.5, held by the form: one house and one day, with history and the natural order absent and the city barely an agent. Among the gated axes, The Swerve at 8.4: a revision within a set story and a proven path, which Euripides took further from the same model. Next, Pressure on Tradition at 8.5, a force that refines the form more than it reorganises it, and The Bottomless Well at 8.6, whose open questions are real but few and gather at the end.

The Necessity Cap clears at 8.8 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears with room: The Living Form at 8.9, The Made at 9.2, The Inner Law at 8.9, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is unmet: The Imperishable at 9.5, The Unconcealment at 8.8 and The Archetypal Deep at 8.7 clear the bar of 8.5, and Pressure on Tradition meets it exactly at 8.5, but The Swerve at 8.4 falls short by a tenth. The Universal Minimum is met (no axis but The Encompassed falls below 8.4, against 7.5), and The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 7.5. The aggregate, at 8.7, also stands below the summit’s 9.0.

Basis · a reading from knowledge of Sophocles’ Electra (Ēlektra), scored as the surviving Greek text for performance: the play as transmitted, 1,510 lines in the standard numbering of the Oxford text of Lloyd-Jones and Wilson, with no lost portion and no substantial dispute over its extent beyond the usual suspected lines. Its date is unknown; it is placed by most scholars on grounds of style late in Sophocles’ career, about 420 to 410 BC, and whether it came before or after Euripides’ Electra is disputed. It belongs to the Byzantine triad with Ajax and Oedipus Tyrannus, the three plays of Sophocles most copied and read in the Byzantine schools, which is the main reason its text is well attested. No text was in hand, and no quotation was checked against a file. Every axis is judged on Sophocles’ Greek. Greek is quoted only where its words are certain, in transliteration, with an English rendering beneath that keeps close to the Greek; line references are to the standard numbering and are approximate where marked. The section spans used to describe the play’s proportions are approximate to within a few lines. Translations · Hugh Lloyd-Jones’s Loeb (1994), a close prose version, for sense; Anne Carson’s version (2001) and R. C. Jebb’s prose translation and commentary, known less closely. None is quoted, and no translation’s shortfall is charged to the play. The lyric metres and the sound of the Greek are beyond this reading and are neither credited nor charged. Matters that could not be verified, among them the exact lines Electra may leave the stage, the curse on the house at the close, some of the names in the critical tradition and particular modern productions, are not given.