The Fifth Desk · Evaluation

Act I · The Map

Literature · Sequence of four poems in five movements each · 20th c. · A manor garden in Gloucestershire, a Somerset village, a ledge of rocks off Cape Ann in Massachusetts, the chapel of a seventeenth-century community in Huntingdonshire, and London at dawn after an air raid

Four Quartets

T. S. Eliot · four poems, each in five movements, scored as one work · Burnt Norton (1936), East Coker (1940), The Dry Salvages (1941) and Little Gidding (1942), published together in New York in 1943 and in London in 1944 · scored on Eliot’s English as the four stand together in his collected poems, read from knowledge; no text in hand, and English quoted only where its words are certain

The Plate · one circle in four arcs, the four poems, each ticked into its five movements; on every arc the same marks, a heavy stroke and a fine one at the second movement for the lyric and the flat passage that answers it, a stroke falling inward at the third for the descent, a short stroke at the fourth; inside each arc a dotted curve bending its end back to its beginning; outside, in turn, wind, a mound of earth, waves and a flame; at the centre a still point in a fine ring; and at the top, where the last arc meets the first, a small rose touched by a flame

Mode

Meditative sequence built on a musical plan; lyric, discourse, descent and prayer in one voice

Mythos

A garden entered by a door never opened; the four elements; the descent into the dark; the dove that is Pentecost and a bomber at once; a compound ghost of the dead masters

Phase

Seven years, from a peacetime garden in 1935 to the dawn after a raid on London; the moment in and out of time, and the return to the first gate

Presentation

Four poems, Burnt Norton, East Coker, The Dry Salvages and Little Gidding, each in five movements on one plan, under two fragments of Heraclitus in Greek

Register

From the plain discursive line and a catalogue of fortune-tellers to octosyllabic couplets, a variant of the sestina, rhymed stanzas, a prayer to the Virgin and an unrhymed terza rima

Scale

One meditating mind, its ancestors and its nation, from the English Civil War to the Blitz, set against time and eternity

Governing Proposition

Four poems on one plan of five movements go from a rose garden in Gloucestershire to the Somerset village an ancestor left for New England, to a river and the sea off the American coast, and to a religious community of the seventeenth century visited in a time of war; each meditates on time, sings, argues against its own song, goes down into the dark and returns to where it began. The wager of the sequence is that time is redeemed only by return, that the moments in which a life is real are few and given and the rest is attention and discipline, and that a long poem built like music, stating, recalling and developing, can make a reader know this by recognising it.

The Still Point

8.9 / 10
Tier IV · Canonical

Act II · The Essay

Movement I

The Door We Never Opened

Burnt Norton begins in a meditation on time and then goes into a garden. Burnt Norton is a manor house in Gloucestershire, and its garden is entered through a door “we never opened”, along a passage not taken: the rose garden of what might have been. In it are a dry pool that seems for a moment to fill with light, and children hidden in the shrubbery, “the leaves were full of children, / Hidden excitedly, containing laughter”. Then the moment passes, because “human kind / Cannot bear very much reality”. The moment is given, not reached, and it does not last.

Over the poem stand two fragments of Heraclitus in Greek, and one of them is the law of the whole sequence:
“ὁδὸς ἄνω κάτω μία καὶ ὡυτή”
“the way up and the way down are one and the same”. The second movement opens in a formal lyric and arrives at the centre the four poems turn on, “At the still point of the turning world”. The third goes down into the London Underground, among the faces in the trains. The fourth is a short lyric of a kingfisher; the fifth is a meditation on words, and it ends in the garden it began from: “Quick now, here, now, always”.

Eliot visited the garden in 1934 and wrote the poem in 1935, in peacetime. It was first printed in his Collected Poems 1909-1935 in 1936, as a poem alone. East Coker followed in 1940, The Dry Salvages in 1941 and Little Gidding in 1942, each written to Burnt Norton’s plan, and the four were published together as Four Quartets in New York in 1943 and in London in 1944. The four poems as they stand in the collected text are the work scored here. Each is in five movements, and the five follow one order in all four: a place and a meditation on time; a formal lyric with a flat passage that comments on it; a descent or a journey; a short lyric; a meditation on words, ending where the poem began.

Movement II

In My Beginning Is My End

East Coker is the Somerset village that Andrew Eliot left for New England in the seventeenth century, and the poem goes back to it. It opens on “In my beginning is my end”, and on the village and its generations. The speaker sees the country people of an older time dancing, “Keeping time, / Keeping the rhythm in their dancing”, the rhythm of the seasons and of the generations. The family runs back through the dead, to “Old stones that cannot be deciphered”.

The second movement opens in octosyllabic rhyming couplets and quatrains. Then the poem stops and judges its own song: “That was a way of putting it”, it says, “A periphrastic study in a worn-out poetical fashion”, and soon after, “The poetry does not matter”. The third movement goes down again into the dark, by the Underground, and says it of everyone: “O dark dark dark. They all go into the dark”. The fourth is five rhymed stanzas, opening on “The wounded surgeon plies the steel”.

The fifth movement is the poet speaking plainly of trying to use words, each attempt “a raid on the inarticulate / With shabby equipment always deteriorating”. What is left is to keep trying. “Old men ought to be explorers”, the movement says, and the poem closes on the inversion of its first words: “In my end is my beginning”. It was written in 1940, the first of the three poems written in the war.

Movement III

Fare Forward, Voyagers

The Dry Salvages is a ledge of rocks off Cape Ann, Massachusetts, and the third poem is set in an American landscape, the waters of the poet’s first country. It begins on a river, “a strong brown god”, and on the sea, which has “many gods and many voices”. Of the four elements that order the sequence, this poem is water.

The second movement is a set of six-line stanzas that keep the same rhyme sounds throughout, a variant of the sestina. The third turns to the Bhagavad Gita, Krishna’s counsel to Arjuna on the field of battle, and turns it on passengers in a train and on voyagers: “I sometimes wonder if that is what Krishna meant”, and then, “Not fare well, / But fare forward, voyagers”. The fourth movement is a prayer to the Virgin, with the fishermen in it.

The fifth begins in a catalogue of fortune-tellers and the readers of entrails, and turns from them to what is given instead: “the moment in and out of time”, rare and not held, and for the rest attention, discipline and return. Written in 1941, the poem wavers between the grand and the slack as none of the others does, and in it the plan of the sequence is filled more than it needs to be.

Movement IV

History Is Now and England

Little Gidding, in Huntingdonshire, is where Nicholas Ferrar founded a religious community in 1626, and a king came there in the Civil War. The poem comes to the chapel there: “You are here to kneel / Where prayer has been valid”. It was written in 1942. Of the four elements, this poem is fire.

The second movement opens in a formal lyric and then sets a scene in an unrhymed imitation of Dante’s terza rima, its lines alternating masculine and feminine endings. It is dawn in London after an air raid, “After the dark dove with the flickering tongue / Had passed below the horizon of his homing”. In the street the speaker meets a “familiar compound ghost”, a dead master in whom Dante’s meeting with Brunetto Latini and the dead poets of English are one figure. The diction is plain and modern, down to “the ash on an old man’s sleeve”.

The ghost tells the gifts reserved for age, and the last of them is knowledge of failure, “the rending pain of re-enactment / Of all that you have done, and been”. The third movement weighs three conditions of the soul, and draws the Civil War into the present war on the same ground: “History is now and England”.

Movement V

The Fire and the Rose

The fourth movement of Little Gidding is two rhymed stanzas on the dove: “The dove descending breaks the air / With flame of incandescent terror”. It is the bomber of the second movement and the Spirit of Pentecost, one bird, and no life escapes its fire: “We only live, only suspire / Consumed by either fire or fire”.

The fifth movement gathers the four poems. “What we call the beginning is often the end / And to make an end is to make a beginning”. It turns to the explorer of East Coker: “We shall not cease from exploration”, and the exploring ends at the gate of the garden in Burnt Norton, where the sequence began, to “know the place for the first time”. The words of Julian of Norwich, “all shall be well”, close it, and the last line joins the sequence’s two images: “And the fire and the rose are one”.

The plan of the whole is the plan of each part: statement, lyric, descent, lyric, return, four times, so that what is learned is recognition, the second and third coming of a phrase or an image. The flat passages belong to it, the “intolerable wrestle / With words and meanings” given in the verse that describes it. After The Waste Land had made the modern long poem a heap of fragments, Eliot made a continuous, abstract and devotional one, and was charged with retreat; the readings since, among them Helen Gardner’s The Composition of Four Quartets, have found in it a philosophy of time, a mystic’s way, a musical form and a wartime history of two countries.

Act III · The Twelve

1The Inevitable (Ananke)

The plan of five movements in four poems makes the subtractive test unusually sharp, since every movement answers to its counterparts in three other poems. Remove the rose garden of Burnt Norton I and the close of Little Gidding, which returns to it, has no source; remove the turn of East Coker II, “That was a way of putting it”, and the poem loses its argument that every form is provisional. Most of the work resists. What holds the axis is real and locatable: The Dry Salvages repeats in its long lyric and its meditations what Burnt Norton said more tightly, its fifth movement opens on a catalogue, and “O dark dark dark” in East Coker III runs on past its effect. A tenth of the whole could go with loss of pattern but little loss of matter.

Score: 8.5 / 10

2The Unconcealment (Aletheia)

The disclosure can be stated: that the moments in which a life is real are few and given, not achieved, “the moment in and out of time” (The Dry Salvages V); that the rest is attention, discipline and return; that “human kind / Cannot bear very much reality” (Burnt Norton I); that every attempt to say what matters is “a raid on the inarticulate” (East Coker V); and that an old man’s knowledge is of failure, “the rending pain of re-enactment / Of all that you have done, and been” (Little Gidding II). These hold without the faith, and the ghost’s account of the gifts reserved for age is an exact disclosure of late life. Held below the top because the last turn, to the Incarnation and to Julian of Norwich’s “all shall be well”, is given as doctrine more than shown.

Score: 8.8 / 10

3The Sublime (Hypsos)

Height is reached often and in more than one register. The warm: the rose garden, where “the leaves were full of children, / Hidden excitedly, containing laughter” (Burnt Norton I). The still: “At the still point of the turning world”. The dreadful: the dawn street of Little Gidding II, “After the dark dove with the flickering tongue / Had passed below the horizon of his homing”, where the bomber and the Holy Spirit share a line, and the dove of IV, descending in “incandescent terror”. The cold grandeur of the river as “a strong brown god” and the sea’s “many gods and many voices”. The close, “And the fire and the rose are one”. Held off the very top because the flat passages, which the design requires, lower the frequency: elevation is the rule in two poems and the exception in The Dry Salvages.

Score: 9.2 / 10

4The Archetypal Deep (Mythos)

Myth built, and built out of places a reader can visit. The rose garden is an Eden entered by a door “we never opened” (Burnt Norton I); the four elements, air, earth, water and fire, order the four poems; the descent into darkness is made on the London Underground; the river god and the sea run under The Dry Salvages, where Krishna’s counsel to Arjuna on the field of battle is turned on passengers in a train. The load-bearing construction is Little Gidding: the dove is Pentecost and a bomber at once; the “familiar compound ghost” is Dante’s Brunetto Latini and the dead masters of English poetry in one figure; and the king who came to the community in the Civil War joins the Blitz in one history. Held below 9.0 because the archetype sometimes arrives as reference, Heraclitus, St John of the Cross, the Gita, Julian, laid beside the poem more than grown from it.

Score: 8.9 / 10

5The Swerve (Parekklisis)

The inheritance is large and the poem names it: Dante, the English devotional poets of the seventeenth century, Wordsworth’s meditative blank verse, the mystics. The turn is in two places. First, a musical form borrowed for verse, five movements recurring with variation across four poems, so that statement, recapitulation and development carry the thought where narrative or argument carries it in a long poem. Second, failure let in on purpose: discursive passages that criticise the lyric just sung, and the open admission that “The poetry does not matter” (East Coker II). The stake was real: after The Waste Land had made fragmentation the modern long poem, Eliot staked his standing on a continuous, abstract, devotional one, and some contemporaries charged him with retreat. Held at the bar because the turn runs from his own earlier manner back toward the meditative tradition, and lies in the structure more than in a language the tradition already had.

Score: 8.5 / 10

6The Living Form (Entelecheia)

Here the form is the knowledge. The poem’s claim is that time is redeemed only by return, “What we call the beginning is often the end / And to make an end is to make a beginning” (Little Gidding V), and the form performs it: East Coker opens with “In my beginning is my end” and closes on the inversion, each poem comes back to its opening, and the whole ends at the gate of the rose garden where it began, to “know the place for the first time”. Recast as an essay, the argument survives and the knowledge does not: what the reader learns is the recognition of a phrase, an image, a movement on its second and third coming. The flat passages are formal too, enacting the “intolerable wrestle / With words and meanings” they describe. Held below the top because one plan four times sets a template that The Dry Salvages fills more than it needs.

Score: 9.2 / 10

7The Bottomless Well (Apeiron)

Eighty years of reading have not exhausted it, and the evidence is the range of what is still found in it: the philosophical reading of time; the mystical reading through St John of the Cross; the musical reading of the form; the historical reading of a wartime poem written by an American who had become an Englishman, about both his ancestral villages; and the textual history set out in Helen Gardner’s The Composition of Four Quartets. Lines change on return: “Old men ought to be explorers” (East Coker V) reads differently to a reader at twenty and at sixty, which is part of what the poem says about time. Held at 9.0 because a portion of the doctrine, once grasped, does not deepen, and readers commonly find the poem yielding most in two of its four parts.

Score: 9.0 / 10

8Pressure on Tradition (Agon)

The field is poetry in English in the twentieth century. The intrinsic force is plain: the poem showed that a modernist could write a long philosophical and religious poem without narrative and without fragment, that abstraction and plain statement could stand in verse beside the most intense lyric, and it made the meditative sequence in movements available to English poetry again. The reach is narrower than the force: the main line of poetry after 1945, in Britain and still more in America, moved away from Eliot’s late manner rather than through it, and much of the influence is on readers rather than on the form of later poems. The Waste Land moved the field more; this poem consolidated, and was resisted. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: it is among the most quoted poems of the century in English, its closing lines have passed into public and liturgical use, and later meditative and religious poets wrote under it.

Score: 8.6 / 10

9The Imperishable (Aphtharsia)

Weighed on form, then presence, then fabric, over eighty-three years from the collected publication of 1943 and ninety from Burnt Norton. Form: the text is whole and stable, with nothing lost and no contested version. Presence: continuous since publication, taught, anthologised and recited, read at funerals and in churches, translated into the main European languages, and quoted in public life more than almost any poem of its decades. Its surface is tied to a moment only in the war of Little Gidding, a setting the poem turns into history rather than a dependence. It stops short of the widest presence its span could show: its audience, large as it is, is a literary and devotional one, and its standing among poets and critics fell for a time after the 1960s.

Score: 9.1 / 10

10The Made (Techne)

Judged on Eliot’s English, with no translation between. Command of the medium is load-bearing, and the measure is the range of verse forms inside one voice: the accentual meditative line, slowed to the pace of thought; the octosyllabic couplets of East Coker II; the five rhymed stanzas of the wounded surgeon, “The wounded surgeon plies the steel”; the six-line stanzas of The Dry Salvages II, keeping their rhyme sounds throughout; and above all the unrhymed terza rima of Little Gidding II, with its alternating masculine and feminine endings, carrying a whole Dantean encounter in plain modern diction, “the ash on an old man’s sleeve”. The sound is exact: “Quick now, here, now, always” (Burnt Norton V). Held off the top because some flatness exceeds its formal use, in the abstract chains of The Dry Salvages and the phrasing of “the moment” repeated across poems, and a few lines are prose the design permits but does not require.

Score: 9.2 / 10

11The Inner Law (Cosmos)

Take the two most distant elements: the catalogue of fortune-tellers in The Dry Salvages V and the dark dove of the Blitz; or the country dancers of East Coker, “Keeping time, / Keeping the rhythm in their dancing”, and the given moment of illumination. One law holds them: everything in time is either the movement that turns or the still point it turns on, and the poem places each thing by that. The range is wide, country dance and theology, the London Tube and the North Atlantic, a ghost of Dante and a household’s dead, and it is held. The cost is in tone, not law: The Dry Salvages, in an American landscape, wavers between the grand and the slack as the other three do not, and the move from a peacetime first poem to three wartime poems shows a little at the joint.

Score: 9.0 / 10

12The Encompassed (Megethos)

Judged at its scale, a sequence of four poems. The orders held: consciousness, as the attention that makes the poem; time and eternity; the sacred, Christian above all, with the Hindu and the Greek beside it; history, from the English Civil War and the seventeenth-century emigrant to the Blitz; the nation; the family across generations, the ancestors of East Coker and “Old stones that cannot be deciphered”; the natural order of seasons, river and sea; the craft of language; age and death. They are integrated by one law, not listed. What holds the axis lowest of the twelve is that there are almost no persons: love between people, labour, the social life of the city and the state appear as glimpses, the dancers, the fishermen, the faces on the Tube, seen from a distance. The poem encompasses history from inside one meditating mind, and the human order thinly.

Score: 8.2 / 10

Act IV · The Reckoning

8.9 / 10 · Final Average

Placement: Tier IV · Canonical

Strongest Dimensions

The Sublime, The Living Form and The Made at 9.2, then The Imperishable at 9.1. Height in every register, the children in the leaves, the still point, the dawn street after the raid and the dove of flame; a form that performs its claim, each poem returning to its opening and the whole to the garden it began from; a range of verse forms inside one voice, up to an unrhymed terza rima that carries a Dantean encounter in plain modern diction; and a text whole and stable, continuously read, taught and recited since 1943.

Limiting Dimension

The Encompassed at 8.2: consciousness, time, the sacred, history, the nation, ancestry, nature and the craft of words are held by one law, but there are almost no persons, and love, labour and the social life of the city appear only as glimpses. Next above it, The Inevitable and The Swerve at 8.5: the slack of The Dry Salvages, whose lyric and meditations repeat what Burnt Norton said more tightly; and a turn that runs from the poet’s own earlier manner back toward the meditative tradition, lying in the structure more than the language.

The Necessity Cap clears at 8.5 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears with room: The Living Form at 9.2, The Made at 9.2, The Inner Law at 9.0, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is met on all five: The Imperishable at 9.1, The Archetypal Deep at 8.9, The Unconcealment at 8.8, Pressure on Tradition at 8.6 and The Swerve at 8.5 reach the bar of 8.5, Pressure on Tradition by a tenth and The Swerve exactly. The Universal Minimum is met (no axis but The Encompassed falls below 8.5, against 7.5) and The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 8.2. Every summit condition is met; the work is held below the summit by its aggregate alone, at 8.9.

Basis · a reading from knowledge of T. S. Eliot’s Four Quartets, scored as one work of four poems: Burnt Norton, first printed in Collected Poems 1909-1935 (1936), East Coker (1940), The Dry Salvages (1941) and Little Gidding (1942), published together as Four Quartets in New York in 1943 and in London in 1944, in the text that has stood in Eliot’s collected poems since. The first poem was written before the sequence was; the last three were written to its plan and return to its garden at the close, and the four are one work. Every axis is judged on Eliot’s English. No text was in hand; nothing was measured on a text, and no quotation was checked against a file. English is quoted only where its words are certain, and briefly; the Greek of the Heraclitus epigraph is given with the desk’s English beneath it; other lines and events are paraphrased. Facts that could not be verified, among them the length of each poem in lines, the length of the terza rima passage, when the sequence was first conceived as four, the philosophical sources of its phrasing, the date of Helen Gardner’s study, the poets who wrote under it, the musical works its title points to and the words of the memorial to Eliot at East Coker, are not given. Citations are by poem and movement.