The Fifth Desk · Evaluation

Act I · The Map

Music · Album · 2005 · orchestral folk and chamber pop on the history of one state

Illinois

Sufjan Stevens · written, arranged and produced by Sufjan Stevens · Asthmatic Kitty · about 74 minutes

The Plate · twenty-two tracks, each as long as it runs, along a ruled floor: the civic songs drawn as arches above the floor, the confessions as hollows below it, the interludes as short upright strokes, and from the top rule a hairline hanging over each track as long as its title, the second the longest

Mode

Banjo folk made orchestral and choral, with the interlocking piano and mallets of minimalism, the marching band, the church choir and the show tune

Mythos

A promised land under judgment: a white city of progress, a killer who is the mirror of the sinner, a tower that is Babel and watchtower at once, and an exodus at the close

Phase

Twenty-two tracks in one sequence: wonder at the open, the state’s founding crime, the exposition and the confession, a long middle of fancies, then the tower, a long ascent and the exit

Presentation

Album; released in July 2005 on Asthmatic Kitty, packaged as Sufjan Stevens Invites You To: Come On Feel the Illinoise, one compact disc or two vinyl records

Register

Banjo, piano, strings, brass, mallets and small choirs, multitracked largely by one player; a soft, narrow voice close to the microphone

Scale

One state and one conscience: its history, labour, crimes, sacred places and natural order, held by a frame and a voice

Governing Proposition

A songwriter makes a state’s history into a pageant of fanfares, choirs and chapter-heading titles, and breaks the pageant again and again with songs sung close to the microphone about a killer, a dying friend and his own mistakes, so that the citizen who admires his state finds himself in what it did: a private conscience and a public history shown to share one structure of guilt and grace, in a record whose length the conceit permits more than the argument compels.

Beneath the Floorboards

8.1 / 10
Tier IV · Canonical

Act II · The Essay

Movement I

Concerning the UFO Sighting

The record opens in wonder. Concerning the UFO Sighting Near Highland, Illinois is a hushed piece of piano and voice about a sighting in the sky, grave rather than comic, and it sets the terms for everything after: whatever the state contains will be received as a marvel and as a matter of conscience. Then comes a fanfare under the longest title on the record, fifty-three words, beginning The Black Hawk War and continuing How to Demolish an Entire Civilization. The music celebrates; the title tells what was celebrated. The state’s founding crime is the second thing the listener meets.

Asthmatic Kitty released the album in July 2005, packaged as Sufjan Stevens Invites You To: Come On Feel the Illinoise: twenty-two tracks, about seventy-four minutes, near the limit of a compact disc, and two records on vinyl in the same sequence. Stevens wrote, arranged and produced it, and plays much of it himself, multitracked against strings, brass and small choirs. It was the second of his records named for a state, after Michigan in 2003, the second of a plan of fifty.

The titles are a measurable part of the form. Of the twenty-two, twelve run past ten words, in the manner of a nineteenth-century chapter heading or a broadside, and two are a single word: Jacksonville and Chicago. They carry an irony the music never does. A reprise is named for Mary Todd, Who Went Insane, but for Very Good Reasons; a passage of drones is named for the way in which Sufjan Stevens has an existential crisis in the Great Godfrey Maze; a string piece is named as a cue for listeners out in Bushnell. The music under these titles is sincere throughout, and the distance between the print and the sound is one of the record’s instruments.

Movement II

John Wayne Gacy, Jr.

Come On! Feel the Illinoise! is in two parts by its title, the World’s Columbian Exposition and Carl Sandburg Visits Me in a Dream. It lifts in an odd metre under a choir, a white city of progress and a poet arriving as a visiting spirit, and it is the pageant at its most confident. The next track is John Wayne Gacy, Jr. The turn is immediate: from the exposition of the state’s achievement to a serial killer in a house in the suburbs, sung close to the microphone.

The song tells the man’s life plainly, almost tenderly, a clown suit, a house in the suburbs, and then turns the confession on the singer, who asks the listener to “look beneath the floorboards” of his own. That is the record’s disclosure, and it can be stated as true: a private conscience and a public history share one structure of guilt and grace, and a citizen cannot admire his state without finding himself in what it did. The monster becomes the mirror of the sinner, and a particular man carries the oldest doctrine of shared fallenness. This is myth built, not evoked.

The form carries it. The civic songs, with their fanfares, chapter titles and choirs, are broken again and again by intimate ones, sung close to the microphone over banjo or piano, and the knowledge lives in the alternation. Played as a sequence of pageants, the record would lose its conscience; played as a sequence of confessions, it would lose its state. The disclosure is held below the highest mark because it is concentrated: the whimsy of the middle often surveys Illinois without disclosing it, and the state’s history beyond the Black Hawk title is more pageant than finding.

Movement III

Casimir Pulaski Day

Chicago is the record’s best-known height. A road trip, a string ostinato and a piano pulse rise into a choir over “All things go”, and the euphoria is real. The singer’s confession inside it, “a lot of mistakes”, is the self’s version of the state’s ledger. Then, at once, Casimir Pulaski Day: banjo and voice, a friend dying of cancer, a hospital, a prayer, and a title taken from a holiday in a school calendar. The sorrow is sharper for the euphoria before it, and the order is the form doing its work.

The song refuses to resolve. A teenager asks Job’s question of God’s taking, and the record will not resolve it into comfort. A trumpet line enters near the end and does not console; the voice stays close, unadorned, and the grief is sung with the same plainness as everything else on the record. This is the quiet sublime, and with Chicago it makes the hinge of the first half. The love between the two friends has been heard differently as the record aged, and listeners have kept the words open for two decades.

The making serves both songs exactly. Chicago’s strings and choir are placed so that a dense texture stays legible; Casimir Pulaski Day is left nearly bare. Stevens’s voice is soft and narrow, and in the intimate songs it is used with precision. Elsewhere its limits show: the record was made at home, the drums are thin and sometimes boxy, the low end is light, and the choirs sound small when the arrangement asks for mass. The arrangements carry the climaxes the voice cannot. The command is in the arranging, and the faults are in the room.

Movement IV

The Predatory Wasp of the Palisades

The middle of the record is a run of fancies: The Man of Metropolis Steals Our Hearts, on Superman claimed by a small town; Prairie Fire That Wanders About; The Predatory Wasp of the Palisades Is Out to Get Us!; They Are Night Zombies!! They Are Neighbors!!, between short interludes of drones and strings. The Wasp is the strongest of them: a song of love between friends, built over several minutes to a brass and vocal climax. Around it the fancies have energy more than height, and their order is permitted rather than compelled. One or two could go without the argument losing a fact.

Here the subtractive test bites hardest. Most of the short interludes are jokes of titling, a cheer of seconds for the Pullman, a string piece named as a stage cue, and only the Mary Todd reprise and the Lincoln temple, In This Temple as in the Hearts of Man for Whom He Saved the Earth, do work the sequence needs. The length is permitted by the conceit of a state album, which invites inventory, more than compelled by an argument. That is the record’s plainest limit, and it is the reason the necessity of the whole clears its cap only narrowly.

The inheritance is visible in the same stretch. Michigan had set the method two years before, a state’s places and people in banjo folk, brass and long titles, and Seven Swans stood between; beside them the chamber pop of the decade, the minimalism of Reich and Glass in the interlocking piano and mallets, the marching band, the church choir and the show tune. The turn is real in degree: the indie folk record made maximal, with a children’s-choir brightness carried into songs about a killer and a dying friend. The stake was small, because the template was proven and the plan of fifty states made the risk a game. Within indie music the reach was large, and the orchestral turn in indie folk later in the decade is commonly traced in part to it; outside that field it reorganised less.

Movement V

Out of Egypt

The close is compelled. The Seer’s Tower is a slow piano descent into an apocalypse, the Sears Tower renamed and so made Babel and watchtower at once, the dreadful kind of height. The Tallest Man, the Broadest Shoulders follows, in two parts by its title, The Great Frontier and Come to Me Only with Playthings Now, a long ascent of minimalist pulse and massed voices. After a last short interlude comes Out of Egypt, into the Great Laugh of Mankind, and I Shake the Dirt from My Sandals as I Run: the Exodus and the disciples’ departure in one title. The record that opened with a sighting in the sky leaves the state as a promised land under judgment.

That frame is laid by the first and last titles and not borne through the middle, and the state is furnished with myths rather than built into one. One law governs most of what lies between: a sighting, a massacre, a killer, a stepmother and a wasp are all received with the same wonder and the same accounting. The range is wide, from fanfare and minimalism to banjo ballad, show tune, choral hymn and drone. What strains the law is tone, the whimsy of the fancies and the titles playing against the confessions rather than within them. The seam does not break, and the record half intends it.

Twenty-one years have tested it. The recording survives whole, the album is heard whole, Chicago and Casimir Pulaski Day are in common use, and a stage work made from the record has renewed it for a new public; its acoustic instruments, brass and voices date slowly. What it holds is wide for an album: the state and its history, labour, crime and conscience, the sacred, a family, friendship and desire, a prairie and its creatures, and the mass culture of a comic-book hero, all under one frame and one voice. Several arrive in a title alone, and labour is named more than sung. The orders are joined by the frame and the sequence, and by the voice that confesses inside the pageant.

Act III · The Twelve

1The Inevitable (Ananke)

Twenty-two tracks in about seventy-four minutes, and the subtractive test bites often. The load-bearing pieces resist it: the UFO prelude must open, in hushed piano and wonder; John Wayne Gacy, Jr. is the moral centre; Chicago and Casimir Pulaski Day are the hinge of the first half; The Seer’s Tower is the descent the close needs, and Out of Egypt the compelled exit. The test finds give in three places. Most short interludes are jokes of titling, a cheer of seconds or a reprise named as a stage cue, and only the Mary Todd reprise and the Lincoln temple do work the sequence needs. The middle fancies could lose one or two without the argument losing a fact. And the length is permitted by the state-album conceit, which invites inventory. That holds the axis lowest; the cap is met, narrowly.

Score: 7.6 / 10

2The Unconcealment (Aletheia)

The disclosure can be stated and holds: a private conscience and a public history share one structure of guilt and grace, and a citizen cannot admire his state without finding himself in what it did. John Wayne Gacy, Jr. tells the killer’s life plainly, almost tenderly, then turns the confession on the singer, who asks the listener to “look beneath the floorboards”. Casimir Pulaski Day sets a friend’s death from cancer beside a prayer that is not answered, and refuses comfort. The Black Hawk War discloses by title, a fanfare under the words How to Demolish an Entire Civilization. Chicago’s “a lot of mistakes” is the self’s ledger beside the state’s. Held below the bar: the whimsy of the middle surveys Illinois without disclosing it, and the state’s history beyond the Black Hawk title is more pageant than finding.

Score: 8.3 / 10

3The Sublime (Hypsos)

Elevation is frequent and of several kinds. Chicago rises from its strings and piano pulse into a choir over “All things go”, the record’s best-known height. Casimir Pulaski Day reaches the quiet sublime of grief, banjo and voice with a trumpet that enters near the end and does not console. Come On! Feel the Illinoise! lifts in its odd metre and its choir; The Predatory Wasp builds over minutes to a brass and vocal climax; The Seer’s Tower is the dreadful kind, a slow piano descent into an apocalypse; The Tallest Man, the Broadest Shoulders is a long ascent of minimalist pulse and massed voices. The UFO prelude is a small, grave wonder. Against this the middle fancies have energy more than height and several interludes stay level. Height on seven or eight of twenty-two tracks, most of the long ones, carries the figure.

Score: 8.6 / 10

4The Archetypal Deep (Mythos)

Myth is evoked abundantly and built in two places. Evoked: the Columbian Exposition as a white city of progress, Carl Sandburg as a visiting spirit, Superman claimed by a small town, Lincoln’s temple, the Sears Tower made a seer’s tower and so Babel and watchtower at once, and the last title’s exit out of Egypt with the dust shaken from the sandals, the Exodus and the disciples’ departure in one line. Built: in John Wayne Gacy, Jr., where the monster becomes the mirror of the sinner and a particular man, a clown suit, a house in the suburbs, carries the oldest doctrine of shared fallenness; and in Casimir Pulaski Day, where a school holiday becomes Job’s question asked by a teenager. Held below the bar: the state is furnished with myths, not built into one, and the frame of a promised land under judgment is laid by the first and last titles and not borne through the middle.

Score: 8.1 / 10

5The Swerve (Parekklisis)

The inheritance is Stevens’s own Michigan (2003), which had set the method, a state’s places and people in banjo folk, brass and long titles, and Seven Swans (2004); beside them the chamber pop of the decade, the minimalism of Reich and Glass in the interlocking piano and mallets, the marching band, the church choir and the show tune. The turn is real in scale: the indie folk record made maximal, orchestrated, choral and seventy-four minutes long, its confessional songs set inside a civic pageant, a children’s-choir brightness carried into songs about a killer and a dying friend. The stake was small. His previous state record had proved the template, the plan of fifty states protected the risk as a game, and each means was inherited. A large turn in degree on a path already laid: level with Zooropa at 7.8, well under Low at 8.9.

Score: 7.8 / 10

6The Living Form (Entelecheia)

Change the form and part of what the record knows goes. The form is a pageant interrupted by confession: the civic songs, with their fanfares, chapter titles and choirs, are broken by intimate ones sung close to the microphone over banjo or piano, and the knowledge, that the citizen and the sinner are one person, lives in that alternation. Gacy follows the Exposition’s white city at once; Casimir Pulaski Day follows Chicago, and the sorrow is sharper for the euphoria. The titles are part of the form, putting the irony into print beside music that is never ironic. The sequence is counted here, once: wonder at the open, the founding crime, the exposition, the confession, the long middle of fancies, then the tower and the exit. Held below the top: the middle third’s order is permitted rather than compelled, and several interludes are containers for a joke.

Score: 8.0 / 10

7The Bottomless Well (Apeiron)

Twenty-one years supply evidence, some of it strong. The record has been reworked across media, as a stage work that reads it as a narrative it only implies, the kind of yield this axis prefers. Listeners have kept the words open for two decades, above all in Casimir Pulaski Day and The Predatory Wasp, whose love between friends was heard differently as the record aged. Return repays formally too: the counter-lines in the arrangements separate on close listening, in Chicago’s strings and the layered metre of Come On! Feel the Illinoise!. What holds the figure is the rest. The middle fancies are exhausted early, and the long titles, once read, give the same joke each time. The well is deep in five or six songs and shallow in a dozen.

Score: 8.1 / 10

8Pressure on Tradition (Agon)

The field is the indie and alternative music of the 2000s. The intrinsic force is real: the record showed that the small-label folk record could be orchestral, choral, historical and devotional at once, and that a confessional singer could carry a concept album about a place without either swallowing the other. That widened the idiom more than it reorganised it; chamber pop and the concept album were established, and the means were inherited. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: within its field the reach was large, Chicago and Casimir Pulaski Day passed into common use, and the orchestral turn in indie folk later in the decade is commonly traced in part to it. Outside that field it was narrower, and no practice can be shown to turn on it alone. It stands below Remain in Light at 8.5.

Score: 8.0 / 10

9The Imperishable (Aphtharsia)

Survival is weighed over twenty-one years, on form, then presence, then fabric. The form is whole: the recording survives as issued and has been reissued on vinyl. Presence is continuous and wide for its kind: the album is heard whole, Chicago and Casimir Pulaski Day are in common use, the songs are covered and sung, and a stage work made from the record has renewed it for a new public, though popularity is presence and not proof. The fabric holds little fixed to 2005: acoustic instruments, brass and voices date slowly, and the home-made sound has kept rather than aged. The figure sits at the top of what the span allows, a tenth over Boxer at nineteen years and level with Elephant at twenty-three.

Score: 8.4 / 10

10The Made (Techne)

Command of the recorded medium, with the words weighed elsewhere. The arranging is the strength and in places load-bearing: Chicago’s string ostinato and choir, the layered metre of Come On! Feel the Illinoise!, the minimalist piano and mallets of The Tallest Man, the Broadest Shoulders, the brass voicings of The Predatory Wasp, each placed so that a dense texture stays legible. Stevens plays much of it himself and multitracks it, and the voice, soft and narrow, is used exactly in the intimate songs, close and unadorned in Casimir Pulaski Day. The faults weigh on a share of the record: it was recorded at home, the drums are thin and sometimes boxy, the low end is light, the choirs sound small when the arrangement asks for mass, and the voice cannot carry the climaxes it writes. Below Low at 9.0 and Remain in Light at 8.7; a tenth under m b v at 8.5.

Score: 8.4 / 10

11The Inner Law (Cosmos)

One law governs most of the record: everything in the state is seen with the same wonder and the same accounting, so that a sighting in the sky, a massacre, a killer, a stepmother and a wasp are received as marvels and as matters of conscience. Take the two most distant elements: One Last “Whoo-Hoo!” for the Pullman, seconds of a cheer for a company town, and Casimir Pulaski Day, a death and an unanswered prayer. They obey the same law at the level of the voice, the grief sung with the same plainness as the cheer. The range is wide: fanfare, minimalism, banjo ballad, show tune, choral hymn, drone. What strains the law is tone: the whimsy of the middle fancies and of the titles sometimes plays against the gravity of the confessions rather than within it. No break; a seam the record half intends.

Score: 8.1 / 10

12The Encompassed (Megethos)

Judged on what the record holds, with no discount for the album form. The orders are many, held by one frame, the state, and one voice: history and the state in the Black Hawk War, the Exposition, Lincoln and Mary Todd and the Sears Tower; labour in the Pullman and the workers of the Rock River Valley; crime and conscience in Gacy; the sacred in Casimir Pulaski Day, The Seer’s Tower and the exodus of the close; the family in a stepmother; friendship and desire in the Wasp and Casimir; the natural order in a prairie fire, a wasp and a sighting in the sky; the mass culture of Superman. What holds the figure: several orders arrive in a title or a single interlude rather than being held, labour is named more than sung, and the integration is by frame and sequence more than by any one song that holds several orders at once.

Score: 7.9 / 10

Act IV · The Reckoning

8.1 / 10 · Final Average

Placement: Tier IV · Canonical

Strongest Dimensions

The Sublime at 8.6, then The Imperishable and The Made at 8.4, and The Unconcealment at 8.3. Height on seven or eight of twenty-two tracks and most of the long ones, a whole survival of twenty-one years in a fabric that dates slowly, arranging that keeps a dense texture legible, and a disclosure that the citizen and the sinner are one person.

Limiting Dimension

The Inevitable at 7.6: a length the state-album conceit permits more than the argument compels, interludes that are jokes of titling, and a middle of fancies that could lose one or two. Below the rest also The Swerve at 7.8, a large turn in degree on a path the singer’s own previous state record had laid, and The Encompassed at 7.9, many orders named under one frame, several of them in a title alone.

The Necessity Cap clears at 7.6 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears: The Living Form at 8.0, The Made at 8.4, The Inner Law at 8.1, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is unmet on all five: The Imperishable at 8.4, The Unconcealment at 8.3, The Archetypal Deep at 8.1, Pressure on Tradition at 8.0 and The Swerve at 7.8 fall short of the bar of 8.5. The Universal Minimum is met: no axis but The Encompassed falls below 7.6, against 7.5, and The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 7.9. The summit is withheld by the Epochal Gate, and by the aggregate, which stands below 9.0.

Basis · the album as first released by Asthmatic Kitty in July 2005, packaged as Sufjan Stevens Invites You To: Come On Feel the Illinoise, twenty-two tracks in their original sequence on one compact disc, about seventy-four minutes, the sequence kept on two vinyl records; written, arranged and produced by Sufjan Stevens; judged from knowledge of the recording, the words of its principal songs and its reception. No recording or lyric sheet was in hand, and running times are approximate. The outtakes issued as The Avalanche (2006) and the stage work made from the record are not the object and are used only as evidence. Songs are cited by title, and three phrases of four words or fewer are quoted. Facts that could not be verified, among them changes to the cover of later pressings, the players beyond Stevens and the name of the choir, the exact counts and lengths of the shortest and longest pieces, the suburb in which Gacy lived, the historical strike behind the Pullman title, the family in The Seer’s Tower, the record’s place on critics’ lists, its use in film, and the makers, venues, dates and awards of the stage work, are not given.