The Fifth Desk · Evaluation

Act I · The Map

Literature · Novel in three volumes, an autobiography in fiction · 19th c. · Five English households, from a child’s confinement at Gateshead through a charity school, a house with a locked third storey and a house of cousins on the moors to Ferndean, told by the woman herself ten years married

Jane Eyre

Charlotte Brontë · a novel in three volumes · thirty-eight chapters · Smith, Elder and Co., London, 1847, as by “Currer Bell” · scored on Brontë’s English as published in 1847, read from knowledge; no text in hand, and English quoted only where its words are certain

The Plate · a heavy baseline divided into five stretches in the proportions of the five stations, the third far the longest; at the first a small square with a ring inside it; at the second a row of six short uprights; at the third a house drawn as a block, with a small square at its top left the size of the first, a dotted line running beneath the baseline from the first square to the house, three tongues of flame at its roof and, to its right, a single upright forked near the top; at the fourth a small house and a fine line rising from it to the top of the frame, and a dotted arc running back from it over the long stretch; at the fifth two small rings joined

Mode

A novel of education told as an autobiography; realist chronicle, Gothic romance, conversion narrative and marriage plot held in one first person

Mythos

A pilgrim’s progress made by a girl; Cinderella in the poor relation, Bluebeard’s castle with its forbidden room and its first wife, Beauty and the Beast reversed; the shut-up rage and its double; fire and ice as two men

Phase

One life from a child of ten at Gateshead to marriage at Ferndean, told by the woman at about thirty, ten years married

Presentation

Fiction in the first person, retrospective, passing at moments into the present tense; the narrator turns to address “Reader” at the turning points; thirty-eight chapters in three volumes

Register

From the plain realism of the charity school and the satire of the drawing room to Gothic dread, the ecstasy of the orchard, the desolation of the heath and a visionary summons

Scale

One consciousness from ten to thirty; three households of kin and one unlawful marriage; a charity school, a governess’s place, a village school; bigamy and inheritance; three Christianities; a Jamaican fortune, a Madeira trade and an Indian mission

Governing Proposition

A poor, plain orphan grows up in five households, each a different order of dependence: a relative’s charity, a charity school, a governess’s place in a house whose master she comes to love and whose first wife is kept on its third storey, a house of cousins on the moors where a clergyman’s cold vocation asks for her, and at last Ferndean, where she comes back to the maimed master on her own terms. The novel’s wager is that such a woman’s inner life is equal in passion and judgment to any man’s, that her self-respect is a claim prior to love, to religion and to the comforts of a station, and that her own account of her life is the one with authority.

No Net Ensnares Me

8.7 / 10
Tier IV · Canonical

Act II · The Essay

Movement I

No Possibility of Taking a Walk

The book’s first sentence shuts a door: “There was no possibility of taking a walk that day.” A child of ten, an orphan and a poor relation in the house of her kin, the Reeds, at Gateshead, sits behind a curtain with Bewick’s History of British Birds, and the confinement of the weather is the first of many. She lives on their charity, which is a form of dependence the book will measure exactly, and when her rage breaks out she is shut in the red-room, with the dead uncle’s bed, and sees a light on the wall.

Smith, Elder and Co. published the novel in London on 16 October 1847, in three volumes, as Jane Eyre. An Autobiography, under the name “Currer Bell”. It is scored here as the novel as published in 1847. The second edition, issued in January 1848, carried a preface dated December 1847 and dedicated to Thackeray; it is context and not part of what is scored. Chapters are cited in the continuous numbering, 1 to 38, of modern editions.

From Gateshead the child is sent to Lowood, a charity school under the starving piety of its trustee, Brocklehurst: burnt porridge, typhus, endurance. There Helen Burns teaches her a doctrine of endurance, which Jane must outgrow and cannot discard, and Helen dies in her arms (ch. 9). The death is told plainly, and it is among the book’s heights.

Movement II

Some Bluebeard’s Castle

Grown, Jane takes a governess’s place at Thornfield, the third station and far the longest, nearly half the book’s chapters. A governess stands between servant and family, and the novel knows the place exactly. Its third storey is “like a corridor in some Bluebeard’s castle” (ch. 11), and the tale is not ornament: there is a forbidden room, and there is a first wife.

On the leads of the house, before she has heard the laugh from the third storey, Jane says the book’s argument outright: “women feel just as men feel” (ch. 12). The narrator, a woman of about thirty ten years married, tells this as an autobiography, and turns at the turning points to address the reader as an equal. Told in the third person, this would be a romance about a governess; told in the first, it is a mind refusing its station.

Then the dreadful comes in order. Rochester’s curtains are on fire in the night (ch. 15). A house-party brings Blanche Ingram and her mother, charades and drawing-room satire, and Rochester comes among the guests disguised as a gypsy (ch. 18); these chapters run longer than the jealousy they serve needs. Mason is wounded (ch. 20). The laugh on the third storey is heard and not explained.

Movement III

Poor, Obscure, Plain, and Little

In the orchard Jane puts her claim to Rochester: “Do you think, because I am poor, obscure, plain, and little, I am soulless and heartless?” (ch. 23). And: “I am no bird; and no net ensnares me” (ch. 23). He proposes, she accepts, and the same night the chestnut is split by lightning (chs. 23 to 24). The sign is the one place where the book’s mythic machinery shows most plainly.

The night before the wedding the veil is torn, and Jane sees a face in the glass (ch. 25). At the church the wedding is stopped (ch. 26). On the third storey is Rochester’s wife, Bertha, the Creole wife from Jamaica, a creature “whether beast or human being, one could not, at first sight, tell” (ch. 26). The red-room of the first chapters is here again, as the same room in a grown house: rage shut up, now in another woman.

The book does not see Bertha as a person. Within its own law she is what she is made to be, the shut-up rage and Jane’s double, and the structure turns on the doubling. What the book does not see was brought into the open later, against it, by its readers; the page records that as a limit on what it discloses and on what it encompasses, and not as a failure of its coherence.

Movement IV

I Care for Myself

Jane has the night of decision. The man she loves is married, and his wife is the woman on the third storey. She leaves him on principle, and the sentence she holds to is plain: “I care for myself” (ch. 27). She goes from Thornfield with nothing, and crosses the heath starving (chs. 27 to 28). It is the book’s desolate height, and it is the refusal on which the rest turns.

She comes to the one door on the moor that holds her own cousins: Marsh End, or Moor House, the house of the Rivers family and of St John Rivers, a clergyman. She teaches farmers’ daughters at the village school at Morton. A legacy from her uncle in Madeira, of the wine trade, makes her independent. The chain that brings her here is assembled rather than compelled, and the book pays for it; but the station is required.

St John asks her to marry him and go with him to the mission in India, as the instrument of his vocation. Thornfield was passion; Marsh End is its counter, a cold vocation that would absorb her as completely. She refuses again. Without this proposal, her return to Rochester would be a woman going back to the only man who asked; with it, it is a choice made after refusing a second absorption, and the book’s argument needs both refusals.

Movement V

Reader, I Married Him

A voice calls across the moors: “Jane! Jane! Jane!” (ch. 35). The summons comes when conscience and passion at last agree, and the narrator takes it as fact and leaves it as fact. The realist law and the providential law are not one law, and here the book needs both.

She goes back. Thornfield has burned, and the house burns only when Jane is gone. Bertha is dead. At Ferndean Rochester is maimed, in his hand and in his eyes, and Jane comes to him with means of her own: Beauty and the Beast reversed. The ending relies on fortune, the legacy, the fire and the convenient death, to make equality possible; it also makes the cost visible, and does not pretend the equality came free.

“Reader, I married him” (ch. 38) puts the woman as the subject of the verb, which is the whole form in four words. But the book does not close on Ferndean. Its last words are St John’s, in his last letter, “Amen; even so, come, Lord Jesus!” (ch. 38), in Bunyan’s register. Whether they crown the book or undercut it is one of the questions it has kept open for a hundred and seventy-nine years.

Act III · The Twelve

1The Inevitable (Ananke)

The five stations are each required, and the test finds it. Gateshead gives the child’s rage and the red-room; Lowood gives Helen Burns’s doctrine of endurance, which Jane must outgrow and cannot discard; Thornfield gives passion; Marsh End gives its counter, St John’s cold vocation; Ferndean answers both. Remove Marsh End and the return is a surrender; with it, it is a choice made after refusing a second absorption. What holds the axis lowest of the twelve is what the test does cut: the Ingram house-party runs long, with charades and drawing-room satire beyond what the jealousy needs; the gypsy disguise is a device; and the chain that brings a starving Jane to the one door on the moor that holds her own cousins, and then the legacy from Madeira, is assembled rather than compelled.

Score: 8.3 / 10

2The Unconcealment (Aletheia)

The disclosure can be stated, and it holds: a poor, plain, dependent woman has an inner life equal in passion and judgment to any man’s, and her self-respect is a claim prior to love, to religion and to a station’s comforts. It is said outright on the leads of Thornfield, “women feel just as men feel” (ch. 12), and argued in action twice: to Rochester, “Do you think, because I am poor, obscure, plain, and little, I am soulless and heartless?” (ch. 23), and in the flight, “I care for myself” (ch. 27). The book shows dependence exactly, from the Reeds’ charity to the governess between servant and family. Held below the top because the resolution relies on fortune to make equality possible, and because the book does not see what it discloses in Bertha, the Creole wife from Jamaica.

Score: 8.8 / 10

3The Sublime (Hypsos)

Height is reached often and in more than one key. The dreadful: the red-room and the light on the wall (ch. 2); the laugh on the third storey; Rochester’s curtains on fire (ch. 15); Mason’s wound (ch. 20); the torn veil and the face in the glass (ch. 25); the stopped wedding and the creature “whether beast or human being, one could not, at first sight, tell” (ch. 26). The ecstatic: the proposal in the orchard and the chestnut split by lightning the same night (chs. 23 to 24). The desolate: the night of decision and the flight across the heath with nothing. The visionary: “Jane! Jane! Jane!” (ch. 35). And Helen’s death in Jane’s arms (ch. 9), told plainly. Held a step below the top because the register is sometimes pitched past what the scene holds, and Marsh End, apart from St John’s proposal, rises less.

Score: 8.8 / 10

4The Archetypal Deep (Mythos)

Myth built, not evoked. The stations are a pilgrim’s progress made by a girl, and the book knows it: Bunyan is in its texture, and St John’s closing words are in Bunyan’s register. The fairy tales bear load: Cinderella in the poor relation; Bluebeard in the third storey, “like a corridor in some Bluebeard’s castle” (ch. 11), with its forbidden room and its first wife; Beauty and the Beast reversed at Ferndean, where the beast is maimed and the woman comes back with means of her own. Bertha is the double of the rage the red-room first shut up, and the structure turns on the doubling: she tears the veil the night before the wedding, and the house burns only when Jane is gone. Held a step down because the machinery is sometimes too visible, the split chestnut above all.

Score: 8.9 / 10

5The Swerve (Parekklisis)

The inheritance: Richardson’s Pamela, where the servant marries the master; Radcliffe’s Gothic, with its castle and its secret; the evangelical memoir and the conversion narrative; the governess novel; the Byronic hero. The turn: all of these bent through one passionate first person that claims the right to judge the master, the clergyman and the reader, and a heroine who is plain and says so. The book refuses virtue’s reward as Richardson gave it: Jane leaves the man she loves on principle, refuses the good man on principle, and returns only when she can come as an equal. The stake was real: a pseudonym was needed, and the book was attacked as coarse and as anti-Christian. Held at this figure because the Gothic and the marriage plot are kept, not broken: the swerve is of voice and moral claim more than of form.

Score: 8.6 / 10

6The Living Form (Entelecheia)

Change the form and the knowledge goes. The book’s argument is that this woman’s judgment of her own life has authority, and the form is that claim enacted: an autobiography, as the subtitle says, told by the woman herself ten years on, who addresses the reader as an equal and at moments turns to the present tense as if the scene had not ended. Told in the third person, the novel would be a romance about a governess; told in the first, it is a mind refusing its station. The five stations are each a household and each a different order of dependence, and the sequence is the education. “Reader, I married him” (ch. 38) makes the woman the subject of the verb. Held off the top because the narrator rarely weighs her younger self against her later knowledge, and the Marsh End coincidences show the form serving the plot.

Score: 8.8 / 10

7The Bottomless Well (Apeiron)

Evidence rather than promise: a hundred and seventy-nine years of reading that keeps finding new books in it. G. H. Lewes and Thackeray read it in its first months; the Victorians quarrelled over its morality; Virginia Woolf, in A Room of One’s Own (1929), charged that anger deforms it; Sandra Gilbert and Susan Gubar’s The Madwoman in the Attic (1979) took its title from Bertha and made her Jane’s double; Gayatri Spivak’s “Three Women’s Texts and a Critique of Imperialism” (1985) read it from Jamaica; Jean Rhys’s Wide Sargasso Sea (1966) was written out of its silence. Its questions stay open: whether Ferndean is fulfilment or a maiming made safe; whether the last words, given to St John, crown the book or undercut it; whether Jane’s religion is the book’s or a costume. Held where it is because the open questions cluster round one figure and one ending.

Score: 9.0 / 10

8Pressure on Tradition (Agon)

The field is the English novel of the nineteenth century, with Dickens, Thackeray and later Eliot and Hardy in it. The intrinsic force: the book made the inner life of an obscure woman, told by herself with full passion and full moral authority, a ground the novel could stand on; Austen’s heroines are seen and judged, and Jane judges. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: the female novel of education in the first person, the governess novel, the Gothic romance from Rebecca (1938) to the mass paperback, Wide Sargasso Sea, and much of the feminist criticism of the 1970s, which took Jane and Bertha as its ground. Held below the top because the reorganisation is of voice and claim within the realist and Gothic forms, not of the novel’s form itself, which Eliot and Flaubert moved further, and because part of the reach is into genre, where the moral argument thins.

Score: 8.8 / 10

9The Imperishable (Aphtharsia)

Survival is demonstrated over a hundred and seventy-nine years, at the figure the desk gives that span for the widest presence. Form: the text survives whole, as published, with no question of recension. Presence: continuous and as wide as any English novel’s of its century; in print without a break since 1847, set in schools and universities across the English-speaking world and beyond, translated into most written languages, and adapted on the stage, in silent and sound film, in a long run of television serials, in Cary Fukunaga’s film of 2011, and in opera and musical. It has outlived its conditions: the governess, the charity school and the coverture that made Bertha her husband’s property are history, and the book is read for what they pressed on. A survival of under two centuries stands below the texts of millennia.

Score: 9.2 / 10

10The Made (Techne)

Judged on Brontë’s English, with no translation between. The command is of a voice: urgent, exact in physical detail, able to move from the child behind the curtain with Bewick’s History of British Birds (ch. 1) to the orchard proposal and the night on the heath without loss of pressure. The opening, “There was no possibility of taking a walk that day” (ch. 1), is a sentence of confinement, and the book runs on such sentences. The scene-making is strong: the red-room, Helen’s death, the fire, the stopped wedding. Charged: the dialogue of the gentry, Blanche Ingram and her mother above all, is stiff and caricatured; Rochester’s speech is sometimes declamation; the plotting leans on coincidence and on a supernatural voice; and the style in places reaches past the scene. A first novel’s unevenness, in a voice of the first order.

Score: 8.6 / 10

11The Inner Law (Cosmos)

Take the two most distant elements: the red-room at Gateshead (ch. 2) and the voice across the moors (ch. 35); or Lowood’s burnt porridge and the burning of Thornfield. One law governs them: passion and conscience must both be kept, and each household tests which one Jane will give up. The red-room is the child’s rage shut up; the third storey is the same room in a grown house; the summons comes when conscience and passion at last agree. The range is wide, from the charity school’s realism to the Gothic and the visionary, and mostly held. Charged: the realist law and the providential law are not one law, and the book needs both; the voice is taken by the narrator as fact and left as fact; and St John’s closing words open a second law, of vocation, death and heaven, that Ferndean has not met.

Score: 8.5 / 10

12The Encompassed (Megethos)

Many orders, held through one consciousness. The mind: Jane’s from ten to thirty, rage, reason, desire, conscience. The family: three households of kin, the Reeds, the Rivers cousins and the uncle in Madeira, and one unlawful marriage. Institution and class: the charity school, its typhus and its trustee; the governess’s place; the village school at Morton, where Jane teaches farmers’ daughters. The law: bigamy, inheritance, a wife as property. Religion in three forms: Brocklehurst’s, Helen’s and St John’s. Empire: the Jamaican fortune and the Creole wife, the Madeira wine trade, the Indian mission. The natural order: the moors, the weather, the moon. Held where it is because the public world, the state, history and labour beyond the schoolroom, is ground and never agent; empire is present but unexamined; and everything passes through one life.

Score: 8.5 / 10

Act IV · The Reckoning

8.7 / 10 · Final Average

Placement: Tier IV · Canonical

Strongest Dimensions

The Imperishable at 9.2, then The Bottomless Well at 9.0 and The Archetypal Deep at 8.9. A survival as continuous and as wide as any English novel’s of its century; a reading that has kept finding new books in it, from its first reviewers to the criticism that took its title from the woman on the third storey and the novel written out of her silence; and a myth built, not evoked, from Bunyan, Cinderella, Bluebeard and the Beast, with the shut-up rage as Jane’s double.

Limiting Dimension

The Inevitable at 8.3: the five stations are each required, but the house-party runs long, the gypsy is a device, and the chain that brings Jane to her cousins’ door and then the legacy is assembled rather than compelled. Next above it, The Inner Law and The Encompassed at 8.5: a realist law and a providential law that the book needs both of, and a world of many orders in which the state, history and empire are ground and never agent.

The Necessity Cap clears at 8.3 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears with room: The Living Form at 8.8, The Made at 8.6, The Inner Law at 8.5, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is met on all five: The Imperishable at 9.2, The Archetypal Deep at 8.9, The Unconcealment at 8.8, Pressure on Tradition at 8.8 and The Swerve at 8.6 clear the bar of 8.5, the last by a tenth. The Universal Minimum is met (no axis it governs falls below 8.3, against 7.5) and The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 8.5. Every summit condition is met; the work is held below the summit by its aggregate alone.

Basis · a reading from knowledge of Charlotte Brontë’s Jane Eyre. An Autobiography, published under the name “Currer Bell” by Smith, Elder and Co., London, on 16 October 1847, in three volumes. It is scored as the novel as published in 1847; the preface to the second edition, dated December 1847, issued in January 1848 and dedicated to Thackeray, is context and is not scored. No text of the novel was in hand; nothing was measured on a text, and no quotation was checked against a file. Every axis is judged on Brontë’s English, with no translation between. Events are paraphrased, and English is quoted only where its words are certain: the first sentence, the corridor of Bluebeard’s castle, the words on the leads, the two sentences of the orchard, the words of the third storey, the words of the night of decision, the summons, the sentence of the marriage and the book’s last words. Chapters are cited in the continuous numbering, 1 to 38, of modern editions. The share of each station is reckoned by chapters. Richardson’s Pamela, Radcliffe, Bunyan and Bewick are named as the book’s inheritance and its texture; Woolf, Gilbert and Gubar, Spivak, Rebecca and Wide Sargasso Sea as the record of its reading and its reach; Austen, Dickens, Thackeray, Eliot, Hardy and Flaubert as its field; none is part of the work. The attack in the Quarterly Review of 1848 is given only as the charge it made. Facts that could not be verified, among them the division of the chapters among the three volumes, the book’s length in words, the passages in which the narration turns to the present tense, the measures of its dialogue and its sentences, and the dates of particular television serials, are not given.