The Fifth Desk · Evaluation
Act I · The Map
Don DeLillo · a novel in two parts, with an Author’s Note · Viking, 1988 · scored on DeLillo’s English, read from knowledge; no text in hand, and English quoted only where its words are certain
Mode
Historical novel of a public crime as a study of secret power and private dislocation; biography, conspiracy novel, family novel and novel of the media age in one book
Mythos
Libra, the scales: a man balanced so that he can be tipped either way; fate as the convergence of a life and a plot; a third line that cuts across cause and time; the killing of the king and the scapegoat killed in turn
Phase
From 1953, the year of the subway, through Oswald’s twenties, with the plot counted by its calendar from an April day in 1963 to 22 November and the days after; Branch’s room in the present of the book
Presentation
Fiction; two parts; chapters of two kinds alternating, those following Oswald titled by place, “In the Bronx”, “In New Orleans” and so on, those following the plot titled by date; the sections of Nicholas Branch set into the dated chapters; monologues for Marguerite Oswald; an Author’s Note at the end
Register
From the cadence of the opening and Oswald’s free indirect thought to Marguerite’s aggrieved monologue, Ruby’s patter, the misspelled diary, the plotters’ reflective idiom and Ferrie’s mystical talk
Scale
One obscure life and one plot, from a Bronx flat to the Soviet bureaucracy, the CIA and the Cuban exiles, converging on one day in Dallas
Governing Proposition
In 1953 a boy in the Bronx rides the subway to the ends of New York; ten years later, after the Marine Corps, the Soviet Union and a return to Texas, Lee Harvey Oswald is at a window in Dallas, and a plan for a near miss on the President, conceived inside the secret state, has passed down a chain of hands until it meets him. The wager of the novel is that the central American event of its century can be understood as the meeting of two orders that do not know each other, a secret state’s plots that tend toward death and a dislocated young man who wants to enter history, and that a fiction which declares itself imagination can reach a truth the record cannot.
Act II · The Essay
Movement I
“This was the year he rode the subway to the ends of the city, two hundred miles of track.” The first sentence sets a boy of thirteen on the trains of New York in 1953. He is Lee Oswald, and he lives in the Bronx with his mother. The subway carries him out to the ends of the city and back, and the chapter rises through its own rhythm into a vision of the underground as the only freedom the self has: a world beneath the city, and a boy alone in it. The cadence of that first sentence carries his whole boyhood.
His mother speaks for herself. Marguerite Oswald is given monologues in her own voice, set among the chapters, and they are aggrieved, self-pitying and magnificent: a woman justifying herself and her sons against a world that has wronged them. The book makes Oswald out of her. Poverty is the family’s condition from the start, and the boy who rides the trains alone is a son of that household and that voice.
The book is in two parts, and its chapters are of two kinds. Those that follow Oswald are titled by place, “In the Bronx”, “In New Orleans” and so on, and move through a life by its rooms and cities. Those that follow a plot are titled by date, from an April day in 1963 to 22 November, and count it down by its calendar. Set into the dated chapters is a third strand: Nicholas Branch, a retired senior analyst of the CIA, writing the secret history of the assassination in a room filled with documents. One kind of chapter is a biography, the other a clock, and the reader watches the two approach.
Movement II
The life goes by its places. New Orleans; the Marine Corps, and the base at Atsugi in Japan; the Soviet Union, a radio factory in Minsk, and Marina; the return to Fort Worth and Dallas, and a job with a photographic firm; New Orleans again; Mexico City; Dallas, and a job in a warehouse. The chapters move from room to room and city to city, and the rooms are small.
The book makes this life an oscillation between poles: Marxist and Marine, defector and returner, loner and joiner. Oswald is a dislocated young man who wants to enter history and invents himself as he goes, and the book gives him a diary whose written words keep their misspellings, so that the errors are character. He is rendered from within, in free indirect thought, a mind turning over its grievances and its ambitions in a small room.
Around him is a family. Marina and the children, and a marriage under strain, carried on in a language that is strange to one of them; the poverty that follows the Oswalds from city to city. The book sees Marina, and the Soviet years, largely from outside, and its weight is on the man. He is balanced, the book says by its title, so that he can be tipped either way.
Movement III
The dated chapters follow the plot. Win Everett conceives a plan for a near miss on the President, an attempt meant to fail, and with it comes his thought that plots tend toward death. The plan passes from Everett to Laurence Parmenter and to T. J. Mackey, and then down through a widening set of operatives, exiles and hired men. As it passes down the chain it changes, and it escapes the man who made it. The plotters are men of the officer class, and their talk is reflective, theoretical and alike.
David Ferrie tells Oswald of his sign. Libra is the scales: a man balanced, who can be tipped either way. Ferrie tells him too of a third line, which cuts across cause and time and puts a man on the path of his destiny. The book gives its theory of fate to a mystic, and leaves open whether the third line is its belief or only Ferrie’s.
The two strands draw together before the day. For much of the last part Oswald is in contact with the plot’s agents, and the convergence that the alternating chapters promise comes gradually, through meetings. Around it run the mob and Jack Ruby, whose world is laid in early. The plot has passed through so many hands that no one holds it whole, and it carries its own logic toward death, beyond what its makers intended.
Movement IV
The chapter of 22 November is told from inside the depository window, and then in the confusion after. It is a set piece of terror held in exact detail, controlled at the level of the single gesture. The two orders the book has kept apart meet on one day in Dealey Plaza, and neither has caused the other.
The historical record is the book’s matter from here: the shooting of Tippit, the arrest in the Texas Theatre, and two days later Ruby’s shot in the police basement. The book renders Oswald’s death from within, as the pain and the darkness close and as he sees himself on television. The scapegoat is killed in turn, and Ruby’s shot completes the pattern of the killing of the king.
Ruby has his own voice, a patter the book makes exact, and his violence is sentimental. Oswald, in the last hours, becomes a face on a screen, aware of being watched; the man who wanted to enter history enters it as an image. The event becomes what the book has said it would become, a thing that exists in its medium.
Movement V
Branch sits in his room. The paper reaches to the ceiling, and it grows faster than he can read it: documents without end, the data of a single afternoon. He ages there, writing a history he cannot finish, and he is the proof that the event cannot be closed. The novel the reader holds is what his archive cannot become.
Marguerite speaks again after her son’s death. Her grief, in her own words, reaches a grotesque grandeur: the aggrieved mother of the first chapters, now the mother of the assassin, still justifying herself and him. The boy who rode the trains alone was made out of this voice, and the voice outlives him.
The Author’s Note closes the book and states its terms: it is a work of imagination about a real event, and it does not settle the case. That declaration is part of the work. It claims for imagination a truth the official record cannot reach: not who killed the President, but how secret power and private dislocation meet, and how a mediated public lives its history.
Act III · The Twelve
The test is subtractive, and the double structure resists it at its core. Oswald’s life and the plot each need the other, since the book’s claim is that they converge without either causing the other. Branch must stay: he is the reader of the archive, the present from which the whole is seen, and the proof that the event cannot be closed. Marguerite’s monologues stay, since Oswald is made out of her. Where the test bites is the conspiracy’s middle. The plot passes from Win Everett to Laurence Parmenter to T. J. Mackey and down through a widening set of operatives, exiles and hired men, and several of these figures, and the meetings among them, add personnel rather than turns; the mob strand and some of Ruby’s preliminaries say again what has been said. The widening chain is itself the argument, that a plot escapes its makers as it passes down, and it cannot be cut to two men; but perhaps a tenth of the whole could go without the knowledge changing, and that holds the axis lowest of the twelve.
Score: 8.0 / 10
The disclosure can be stated, and it holds. The central American event of its century can be understood as the meeting of two orders that do not know each other: a secret state’s plots, which carry their own logic and tend toward death beyond what their makers intend, and a dislocated young man in a small room who wants to enter history and invents himself as he goes. Neither explains the other; the book names the space where they meet as something deeper than cause. The second disclosure is of the media age: the event becomes endless data, Branch’s room of paper growing faster than he can read it, and the lone man becomes a face on television, aware of being watched. Both are found by the action, and neither turns on who fired; the Note says the book does not settle the case. Held a tenth above the bar, not more, because some of the meaning is spoken as theory by Ferrie and Everett, and Marina and the Soviet years are seen from outside.
Score: 8.6 / 10
The heights are many and mostly dreadful. The opening, the boy riding the subway to the ends of the city, rises through its own rhythm into a vision of the underground as the self’s only freedom. The chapter of 22 November, told from inside the depository window and then in the confusion after, is a set piece of terror held in exact detail. Oswald’s death, rendered from within as the pain and the darkness close and as he sees himself on television, is the book’s coldest height, and Marguerite’s grief, in her own voice, reaches a grotesque grandeur. Branch alone before paper reaching to the ceiling is a quiet sublime of the unknowable. Held below the higher reaches because long stretches are procedural by design, the plotters’ meetings and the operatives’ talk running level, and because the heights gather in the last hundred pages.
Score: 8.3 / 10
The title names the pattern, and much of it is built. Libra is Oswald’s sign, the scales: a man balanced so that he can be tipped either way, and the book makes his life an oscillation between poles, Marxist and Marine, defector and returner, loner and joiner, until a push decides it. The convergence of the man and the plot is built as fate in the old sense, and the book gives it a theory: Ferrie’s account of a third line that cuts across cause and time and puts a man on the path of his destiny. The killing of the king and the scapegoat killed in turn are load-bearing, and Ruby’s shot completes the pattern. The particular stays particular. What holds the axis two tenths short of the bar is that the destiny is often spoken, by Ferrie and in Oswald’s own self-mythologising, rather than left to the structure, and that the book’s irony keeps the archetype at a distance.
Score: 8.3 / 10
The inheritance is the historical novel and its American variants: Doctorow’s Ragtime, Coover’s The Public Burning with its real figures at a national execution, Mailer’s The Executioner’s Song, and the paranoid fiction of Pynchon. The turn is real: a novel that enters the minds of the actual assassin, his mother and his killer, invents a conspiracy around them, declares in its Note that it is imagination, and claims for imagination a truth the official record cannot reach, about an event only twenty-five years old and still contested in public. The stake was considerable: a novelist laying claim to an unhealed national wound. Held three tenths below the bar because the means are inherited: the imagined interior of real figures was Coover’s and Doctorow’s, and the alternating structure is a proven instrument. The swerve lies in subject and stake more than in form.
Score: 8.2 / 10
Change the form and the book loses its knowledge. The chapters titled by place move through a life by its rooms and cities; the chapters titled by date count down a plot by its calendar. One is a biography and the other a clock, and their alternation makes the reader feel two orders approaching without contact until they meet on one day: coincidence and design converging, the book’s claim made by its form. Branch, set inside the countdown, makes the form also a statement about knowing: the novel we read is what his archive cannot become. The Author’s Note completes it, placing the whole as imagination. Held below the top because the strands meet earlier and more often than the design implies, Oswald being in contact with the plot’s agents for much of the last part, so that the convergence is more gradual than the form promises; and because Branch’s sections are few and thin for the weight the form puts on them.
Score: 8.6 / 10
Evidence over thirty-eight years. The book has drawn sustained criticism from the first studies of DeLillo onward, and it is a standard text in the study of postmodern historical fiction and of conspiracy as an American culture. The readings multiply and do not cancel: a novel of history as fiction and of fiction as history; a study of the self formed by the media; a portrait of the secret state in the Cold War; a family novel of a mother and her son; a religious novel, in Ferrie’s mysticism and the language of destiny. The questions stay open: whether the third line is the book’s belief or Ferrie’s; what Oswald wanted; whether Branch’s failure is the reader’s. Each release of the government’s records on the assassination returns readers to it. Held below the top because the span is short and part of the yield is the event’s rather than the book’s.
Score: 8.3 / 10
The field is the American novel of the 1980s. The force is a reorganisation of what the historical novel could do with a recent public event: the book showed that a novelist could take the most documented and contested American crime, admit invention openly, and produce a version with its own authority, in which the inner life of an obscure actor carries the meaning of the public catastrophe. What holds it three tenths below the bar is that the reach is concentrated in one subgenre and in criticism: it did not redirect the American novel at large, and the forms it used were already available. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: a finalist for the National Book Award for 1988; its standing as the defining fictional treatment of the Kennedy assassination; its place among the books by which DeLillo’s standing is reckoned; and its use as a model for the novel of secret history in the decades after, of which James Ellroy’s American Tabloid (1995) is the clearest case.
Score: 8.2 / 10
Survival is demonstrated over thirty-eight years. The text survives whole, as published, with nothing lost and nothing in its fabric to charge. Presence is continuous and fairly wide: the book is taught and reread, and each anniversary of the assassination and each release of its records keep it in view. Its surface is not fixed to 1988: its matter is 1963, and the period’s furniture is its subject, not the accident of its making. What holds the axis at the bar is presence: it is read less widely than the most widely read American novels of its decade, and some of what keeps it in view is the event rather than the book. Four decades demonstrate less than the centuries behind the summit, and the axis credits survival shown, not survival foreseen.
Score: 8.5 / 10
Judged on DeLillo’s English, with no translation between. The command is of voice and sentence across an unusual range. The first sentence, “This was the year he rode the subway to the ends of the city, two hundred miles of track.”, sets a cadence that carries Oswald’s whole boyhood. Marguerite’s monologues are a feat of ventriloquism, aggrieved, self-pitying and magnificent; Ruby’s patter is exact; Oswald’s written words, in the diary the book gives him, carry their misspellings as character. The shooting and the death are controlled at the level of the single gesture. Three charges hold it below the top: the plotters sound alike, Everett, Parmenter and Mackey sharing one reflective idiom that is the author’s own; the operatives’ scenes are less pressed than the rest; and Ferrie’s speeches tip at moments into the author’s theory.
Score: 8.7 / 10
One law governs the whole: plots, a state’s or a man’s, carry their own logic toward death, and the space between design and chance is where history happens. Take the two most distant elements: Branch, aging in a room of documents in the present of the book, and the thirteen-year-old riding the subway in the Bronx in 1953. They obey the same law: both are men in small rooms trying to make a pattern of a world that exceeds them, and both fail. The law also covers Marguerite’s self-justification, Ruby’s sentimental violence, Everett’s plan that escapes him and the death on television, and the range is wide, from the domestic to the state. Charged: the mob strand and some of the operatives follow a thriller’s looser physics of motive, and the book’s theories, stated by characters, sometimes do the work of the law rather than the events.
Score: 8.5 / 10
Many orders, held by one event. Consciousness, Oswald’s above all, from within. The family: Marguerite and her sons, Marina and the children, a marriage under strain in a strange language. Labour: Oswald’s jobs, the radio factory in Minsk, the photographic firm in Dallas, the warehouse. Class: the poverty of the Oswalds against the officer class of the plotters. The state: the CIA, the FBI, the Marine Corps, the Soviet bureaucracy, Cuba. History: the Cold War from the U-2 to the Bay of Pigs. Crime, in the mob and in Ruby’s world. The media, as the medium in which the event exists. The sacred, in Ferrie’s mysticism and the language of destiny. They are integrated, not listed: each is a line converging on Dealey Plaza. Held below the top because the natural order is absent, the women other than Marguerite are thinly held, and the Soviet and Cuban worlds are glimpsed.
Score: 8.5 / 10
Act IV · The Reckoning
8.4 / 10 · Final Average
Placement: Tier IV · Canonical
Strongest Dimensions
The Made at 8.7, then The Unconcealment and The Living Form at 8.6. A command of voice that runs from the cadence of the first sentence through Marguerite’s monologues, Ruby’s patter and a misspelled diary; a disclosure that holds, that the event can be understood as the meeting of a secret state’s plots and a dislocated man who wants to enter history, with the event dissolving into data and the man into an image; and a form that makes the claim itself, a biography and a clock alternating until they meet on one day, with the analyst’s archive set inside the countdown.
Limiting Dimension
The Inevitable at 8.0, held by the conspiracy’s middle: a widening chain of operatives, exiles and hired men, several of whom add personnel rather than turns, and the mob strand and some of Ruby’s preliminaries, perhaps a tenth of the whole. Next above it, The Swerve and Pressure on Tradition at 8.2: a turn in subject and stake made with inherited means, the imagined interior of real figures and the alternating structure; and a reach concentrated in one subgenre and in criticism.
The Necessity Cap clears at 8.0 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears with room: The Made at 8.7, The Living Form at 8.6, The Inner Law at 8.5, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is unmet on three axes: The Unconcealment at 8.6 clears the bar of 8.5 and The Imperishable meets it exactly at 8.5, but The Archetypal Deep at 8.3 falls two tenths short, and The Swerve and Pressure on Tradition at 8.2 fall three tenths short. The Universal Minimum is met (no axis falls below 8.0, against 7.5) and The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 8.5. Four of the five summit conditions are met; the summit is withheld on the Epochal Gate, and the aggregate, at 8.4, stands below it as well.
Basis · a reading from knowledge of Don DeLillo’s Libra, published by Viking, New York, in 1988: his ninth novel, after The Names and White Noise. It is scored as one novel in two parts, in DeLillo’s English as first published, with the short Author’s Note that closes it; the Note states the book’s terms, that it is a work of imagination about a real event, and is scored with the work. Many of the book’s facts are historical, among them Oswald’s movements, the shooting of Tippit, the arrest in the Texas Theatre and Ruby’s shot in the police basement; they are named as the book’s matter, not as evidence of its art. The book is in copyright and no text of it was in hand; nothing was measured on a text, and no quotation was checked against a file. Every axis is judged on DeLillo’s English, with no translation between. Events are paraphrased, and English is quoted only where its words are certain: the first sentence. The lines of the plotters and of David Ferrie that criticism most often cites are paraphrased. Facts that could not be verified, among them the page count, the exact order and dates of the dated chapters, honours beyond the one named, the continuity of the book’s printing and the record of its first reviews and early criticism, are not given. Citations are by part.