The Fifth Desk · Evaluation
Act I · The Map
The Velvet Underground · Lou Reed, Doug Yule, Sterling Morrison · Cotillion · about 40 minutes
Mode
The three-minute radio song taken up by a band that had made its name with drone and noise, and turned on ordinary lives
Mythos
A conversion by the radio, the fallen star of the screen, the plain couple as keepers of the world, a beatitude for the poor
Phase
Ten tracks, five a side; a pop song in a second voice first, the first side carrying the record’s heights, the second running through borrowed manners to one long hymn
Presentation
Album; ten songs, about forty minutes, released by Cotillion in November 1970, two of them cut for release
Register
Plain, dry production; two interlocking guitars, organ and piano, drums by several hands; two lead voices
Scale
A suburb, a city and the radio between them; a banker and a clerk, a faded actress, the dispossessed
Governing Proposition
A band known for drone and feedback makes a record of radio songs, and argues through them that the ordinary life the counterculture scorned is where meaning is found and that the song on the radio is what saves it; made as the band came apart, its writer gone before it was released, it holds the argument whole on its first side and in its last song.
Act II · The Essay
Movement I
The record opens on a voice that is not its writer’s. Doug Yule sings Who Loves the Sun, a bright, bitter pop song about a broken heart, and in its first minute it tells the listener what kind of record this is: a radio record, made of songs short enough and plain enough for the radio. The band that made it had been known for viola drone, the city’s underside and seventeen minutes of feedback. On its fourth studio album it sets that wager aside and writes ten songs, most of them three to five minutes long, in the forms of the American pop song: rock, doo-wop, girl-group, country, gospel.
Cotillion, an Atlantic label, released Loaded in November 1970: ten tracks, five on each side, about forty minutes. Lou Reed wrote the songs, sings and plays guitar; Doug Yule plays bass, keyboards and guitars and is the record’s second lead voice; Sterling Morrison plays guitar. The drums are by several hands. Reed had left the band in August 1970, before the record came out. A record about rescue was made by a band coming apart, and the man who wrote its argument was gone before it was released.
The first side runs Who Loves the Sun, Sweet Jane, Rock & Roll, Cool It Down and New Age; the second Head Held High, Lonesome Cowboy Bill, I Found a Reason, Train Round the Bend and Oh! Sweet Nuthin’. The first side has a shape and carries most of the record’s heights; the second is a set of manners until its last song. Two songs were cut for release: Sweet Jane loses its slow bridge, New Age its long final refrain. Longer versions of both were issued in 1995 on Peel Slowly and See and in 1997 on Fully Loaded. The record as first released, edits and all, is the work.
Movement II
Sweet Jane is two chords and a turn into the chorus, and the turn is one of the great lifts of the rock song: plain, open and exact. The song’s people are as plain as its chords. Jack is a banker and Jane is a clerk, and they are at home with the radio. Against them stand the “evil mothers”, who say that everything is dirt. The song does not mock the couple and does not explain them. It takes their side, and the side it takes is the record’s: the ordinary life that the knowing scorn is where meaning is found.
The plainness is the argument. Two chords, a riff anyone could learn and a chorus that opens rather than climbs are an argument for plain lives made in the means of plain lives, and the irony that might have swallowed the song is held off by its tenderness. The making is economical and certain, the riff and the chord turn placed with nothing to spare. On this release the song is also wounded: its slow bridge is gone, and the edit shows at the joint. The song survives the cut with its core whole.
Its afterlife is the largest of any song on the record. Reed played it live again and again, in different forms; Mott the Hoople recorded it in 1972; Cowboy Junkies, in 1988, took it slowly, restored the cut bridge and found a different song inside it. Each version shows how much the plain song holds. The restorations of 1995 and 1997 have kept the record itself in question, since there are now two Sweet Janes in circulation and the released one is the shorter. Beside it on the first side, Cool It Down is a swagger in the same manner that says less.
Movement III
Rock & Roll tells the record’s argument as a parable. Jenny is five years old, in a suburb where nothing happens. She finds a station broadcasting from New York, and “her life was saved”. A voice from far off has reached a child in a dead place, and it is enough. The record is made of the thing the song praises: a radio song about a radio song, and a claim about the medium made in it.
The song builds by stages: verse, chorus, and a long ringing close, the two guitars of Reed and Morrison interlocking cleanly over it, until the rescue is felt rather than reported. That build is the conversion it describes. Lack, a call and salvation give the song its structure and bear its whole weight; the radio is grace; and Jenny stays a particular girl in a particular suburb throughout. Made as a ballad or a drone, the song would know less. Here the form and the claim are one thing, and the record’s argument is made, not only stated.
The song became a standard of the rock repertoire with Sweet Jane, played by bar bands and recorded by many hands. The plain, literate guitar song these two made is commonly placed behind the Modern Lovers, the New York punk of the mid seventies and later guitar pop. That is the record’s reach, and it runs almost wholly through its two great songs. The band’s larger pressure on the tradition belongs to its first record, The Velvet Underground & Nico; what was taken from this one was a way of writing a song, and the album as a whole was less often the model.
Movement IV
New Age closes the first side. Its people are a faded actress and a man who once loved her image, and the song sets the hope of a new beginning over a life that is fading. It evokes the fallen star of the screen, the figure of Sunset Boulevard, and its title a millennial promise; the evocation is tender, and the song stays with its two people. The song turns the record’s claim over: here the hope is sung over a life already fading, and the image that was once loved is part of what has faded.
Its height comes at the end, in a slow swelling refrain over organ, Yule’s organ giving the song its warmth. On this release the refrain is cut short, and the song stops before its swell is spent. It is still a summit, and the cut is the second wound the record carries in its four best songs. The first side ends there, having moved from a broken heart through the plain couple and the saved child to the faded star, a shape held by one subject: ordinary people and the songs they live by.
The second side runs as a set of borrowed manners. Head Held High is a shouted rocker with little in it past the riff; Lonesome Cowboy Bill is a country pastiche whose joke is spent in a verse; Train Round the Bend is a sketch of a band wanting out of the country. These songs obey the radio form without its subject, and all three could go with little loss. I Found a Reason is the exception: a doo-wop devotion, sung low and plain, that rises quietly by tenderness and earns its place as the record’s one song of devotion.
Movement V
The record ends on its longest ascent. Oh! Sweet Nuthin’ is a slow street hymn, gospel in its tone, and it names the dispossessed, those with “nothing at all”, and blesses them without pity. As the refrain returns, the guitars climb, and the climb goes on: the record opens out here as it does nowhere else. A record that began with a broken heart in a second voice ends with a blessing of those who have nothing, and the move between them is the record’s widest reach.
The production is plain, dry and unfashionable, and it has aged well for that: little in the sound is fixed to 1970. The record has been in print since its release. Sweet Jane and Rock & Roll live continuously in broadcast, in film and in bars; the album played whole lives more narrowly, as the band’s accessible record, in the shadow of its first. The edits keep its text in mild dispute, since the record as released and the restored songs now circulate side by side, and the question of which Sweet Jane is the work has not closed.
Its limits are those of an album of songs. It holds an inner life saved by a song, a household, a suburb, the radio, show business and its ruin, the street and its poor, a broken love and a devotion, and the radio joins several of them; but the orders arrive song by song, labour is touched only in a clerk’s job, the state and history are absent, and the sacred is a hymn’s tone. Within those limits the record says one thing plainly and holds to it across its best songs: that the ordinary life is where meaning is found, and that a song on the radio can save it.
Act III · The Twelve
Ten songs in about forty minutes, and the record’s pillars are required. Sweet Jane, Rock & Roll, New Age and Oh! Sweet Nuthin’ each hold a person and a condition no other track holds, and the last is the only place the record opens out. Who Loves the Sun must open: the bright, bitter pop song that tells the listener this is a radio record. I Found a Reason earns its place as the one doo-wop devotion, sung low and plain, and Cool It Down belongs to the sound of a working band. Seven of ten stand under the subtractive test. It bites on three: Head Held High has little in it past the riff, Lonesome Cowboy Bill spends its joke in a verse, and Train Round the Bend is a sketch.
Score: 7.8 / 10
The disclosure can be stated, and it holds: the ordinary life the counterculture scorned is where meaning is actually found, and what saves it is the pop song on the radio. Rock & Roll gives it as a case: a girl in a dull suburb finds a New York station at five, and “her life was saved”. Sweet Jane sets a banker and a clerk against the “evil mothers” who say everything is dirt, and takes the couple’s side. New Age turns the claim over on a faded actress; Oh! Sweet Nuthin’ blesses those with “nothing at all”, without pity. Simplicity is the means of the disclosure, not a lack of it. A meaning, not a mood, held from the top because the second side mostly offers manner where the first offers sight.
Score: 8.4 / 10
The record rises on about five of ten tracks, and its heights are warm. Sweet Jane’s two chords and its turn into the chorus are among the great lifts of the rock song: plain, open and exact. Rock & Roll builds by stages, verse to chorus to the long ringing close, until Jenny’s rescue is felt rather than reported. New Age reaches its height at the end, a slow swelling refrain over organ, cut short on this release and still a summit. I Found a Reason rises quietly, by tenderness, and Oh! Sweet Nuthin’ is the largest: its guitars climb, as the refrain returns, into the record’s longest ascent. The rest drives or amuses without lifting, and the first side carries most of the height.
Score: 8.0 / 10
Myth is built once, and built to bear weight. Rock & Roll is a conversion: a child in a dead place hears a voice from far off, and her life is changed. The radio is grace, the structure of lack, call and salvation carries the whole song, and Jenny stays a particular girl in a particular suburb, which is what the axis asks. Elsewhere myth is summoned with a sure hand: New Age evokes the fallen star of the screen, the Sunset Boulevard figure, under a millennial title; Sweet Jane the plain couple as the keepers of the world; Oh! Sweet Nuthin’ a beatitude for the poor in the voice of a street hymn. Held from the top: one song built, three evoked, and the second side mostly outside the question.
Score: 8.2 / 10
The inheritance is twofold: the band’s own first three records, which placed the great wager on drone, noise and the city’s underside, and the American pop song of radio, doo-wop and girl-group. The record turns from the first toward the second, and inside the band’s history the turn is large: a group known for viola drone and seventeen-minute feedback made a record of three-minute songs meant for the radio, on a new label, by report at the label’s request for hits. The writing makes it more than an accent: an avant-garde band’s eye turned on the radio song from inside. What holds the axis is the direction of the turn, back toward a proven path, with the risk falling on the band’s identity and not on the form.
Score: 7.5 / 10
The form is the radio record, and in the best songs the form is the claim: a record that says the pop song on the radio saves ordinary lives is made of pop songs fit for the radio. Rock & Roll is a song about a song, whose own build is the rescue it describes; as a ballad or a drone it would know less. Sweet Jane’s two chords are its plainness, and its plainness is its argument for plain lives. The first side has a shape, and the close is placed with intent, the long last song opening the record outward. Held from the top: two lead voices that never become a form, and a second side that runs as a set of borrowed manners, a container more often than an instrument.
Score: 8.0 / 10
Evidence rather than promise, over fifty-six years, and deep where it falls. Sweet Jane has been remade more than almost any rock song of its time: by Reed himself, live, again and again in different forms; by Mott the Hoople in 1972; by Cowboy Junkies in 1988, whose slow reading restored the cut bridge and found a different song in it. Each version shows the song giving more on return, and Rock & Roll has had a similar if smaller life. The edits and the restorations of 1995 and 1997 keep the record itself in argument: which Sweet Jane is the work? The plainness repays, its irony and tenderness above all. What holds it: half the record yields little, and attention has gone more to the songs than to the album.
Score: 8.2 / 10
The field is the rock album of 1970 and 1971, and the American song after the counterculture. Intrinsic force: the record showed that an avant-garde sensibility could write the plain three-chord radio song and make it say something about ordinary life without irony swallowing it, with means the form already had. Much of the band’s pressure on the tradition was the work of its first record, and what turned on this one turned on its songs more than on the album. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: Sweet Jane and Rock & Roll became standards of the rock repertoire, played by bar bands and recorded by Mott the Hoople and Cowboy Junkies among others, and the record’s plain, literate guitar song is commonly placed behind the Modern Lovers, the New York punk of the mid seventies and later guitar pop.
Score: 8.1 / 10
Survival is weighed over fifty-six years, on form, then presence, then fabric. The form is whole and has been in print since release, though charged a little: two songs on the record as released were cut for release, and longer versions now circulate beside it, so the text is in mild dispute. Presence is continuous and wide for Sweet Jane and Rock & Roll, which live in broadcast, in film and in bars, and narrower for the album played whole, which lives as the band’s accessible record in the shadow of its first. The fabric is little fixed to 1970: the production is plain, dry and unfashionable, and has aged well for that. The charges on text and presence hold it below the usual figure for its span.
Score: 8.6 / 10
Command of the recorded medium, with the words weighed elsewhere. The songwriting is exact: Sweet Jane’s riff and chord turn, Rock & Roll’s staged build and the doo-wop voicing of I Found a Reason are made with economy and certainty. Reed and Morrison’s guitars interlock cleanly on Rock & Roll; Yule’s organ on New Age, his piano and organ elsewhere and his bass are tasteful and give the record its warmth. The faults are real. The drums are by several hands and often merely adequate; the production is plain to the point of thinness in places; the edits damage two of the four best songs at their joints; the rockers of the second side are generically arranged. Good, sometimes fine: the songs carry the craft more than the record does.
Score: 7.9 / 10
Take the two most distant elements: Who Loves the Sun, a sweet, bitter pop song in Doug Yule’s voice, and Oh! Sweet Nuthin’, a slow street hymn that ends in guitar. They obey one law: every song on the record is about ordinary people in ordinary trouble, set to the forms of the radio, and the record moves from a broken heart to a blessing of those with nothing. The range of idiom is wide (pop, rock, doo-wop, country pastiche, boogie, gospel), and the law reaches across most of it, so that narrowness is not how the record coheres. It loosens on the second side: Lonesome Cowboy Bill obeys only its genre and its joke, Head Held High and Train Round the Bend the radio form without its subject, and two lead voices divide the record’s first person.
Score: 7.8 / 10
Judged on what the record holds, with no discount for the form. Consciousness is held, in an inner life saved by a song; the household in Sweet Jane’s couple and the suburb of Rock & Roll; the medium itself, in the radio that is the record’s subject; show business and its ruin in New Age; poverty and the street in Oh! Sweet Nuthin’; a broken love in Who Loves the Sun and a devotion in I Found a Reason. The radio joins several of them, and in Rock & Roll the suburb, the city and the medium meet in one song. What holds it lowest of the twelve: the orders arrive song by song, labour is touched only in a clerk’s job and the street, the state and history are absent, the sacred is a hymn’s tone, and the second side adds little to the span.
Score: 6.9 / 10
Act IV · The Reckoning
8.0 / 10 · Final Average
Placement: Tier IV · Canonical
Strongest Dimensions
The Imperishable at 8.6 and The Unconcealment at 8.4, then The Archetypal Deep and The Bottomless Well at 8.2. A plain record that has outlived its year and stays in print, a disclosure that can be stated and holds (the ordinary life saved by the radio song), one conversion built to bear weight in Rock & Roll, and two songs remade for fifty years.
Limiting Dimension
The Encompassed at 6.9: a fair span for an album of songs, joined in part by the radio, but arriving song by song, with labour touched only in a clerk’s job, the state and history absent and the sacred a hymn’s tone. Below the rest, The Swerve at 7.5: a large turn within the band’s history, made back toward the proven path of the radio song, at a risk to the band’s identity and not to the form.
The Necessity Cap clears at 7.8 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears: The Living Form at 8.0, The Made at 7.9, The Inner Law at 7.8, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is unmet: The Imperishable at 8.6 clears the bar of 8.5, but The Unconcealment at 8.4, The Archetypal Deep at 8.2, Pressure on Tradition at 8.1 and The Swerve at 7.5 fall short. The Universal Minimum is met: no axis but The Encompassed falls below 7.5, and The Swerve meets the threshold exactly; The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 6.9. The summit is withheld on the Epochal Gate and by the aggregate, which stands below 9.0.
Basis · the LP as first released by Cotillion, an Atlantic label, in November 1970, ten tracks in their original order, five on each side, about forty minutes, with Sweet Jane and New Age as cut for that release; judged from knowledge of the recording, its making in outline and its afterlife in covers and live versions. The longer versions of both songs issued on Peel Slowly and See (1995) and Fully Loaded (1997) are context, not the object; The Velvet Underground & Nico and the band’s other records are context only. Songs are cited by title, and lyrics are quoted only in fragments of four words or fewer. Running times are approximate. Facts that could not be verified, among them the producers, the studio and dates of recording, the drummers by name, which songs each lead voice sings beyond the first, and the reasons for the edits, are not given.