The Fifth Desk · Evaluation
Act I · The Map
Salman Rushdie · Midnight’s Children · a novel in three books, written in English, first published by Jonathan Cape, London, in April 1981, and by Knopf, New York, the same year · scored as the novel as published in 1981, on Rushdie’s English, read from knowledge; no text in hand, and only a few words quoted, where they are certain
Mode
National epic told as comic autobiography: the history of a subcontinent carried in one man’s body and told against time to a listener, with the marvellous admitted where it carries the nation’s story
Mythos
Two children switched at birth, preserver and destroyer; Ganesh the scribe of the epic dictating to the lotus goddess; the thousand and one of the Nights and Scheherazade’s condition, a teller narrating against death; the Widow, demon-goddess and prime minister
Phase
From the grandfather’s nose striking the frozen earth of Kashmir in 1915, through the birth at midnight on 15 August 1947 in Bombay, the Pakistan years and the war of 1965, to the war of 1971 in East Pakistan, the Emergency of 1975 to 1977 and the pickle factory of the narrator’s present
Presentation
Prose narrative in the first person, in three books, written at night by the narrator in his thirty-first year, his listener’s interruptions reported and answered; anticipations, apostrophes, and an error of date left standing
Register
An English remade from inside Hindi and Urdu syntax, film song, street speech and the oral teller’s rhythm; long running sentences breaking into lists; comic, epic and marvellous at once
Scale
Three generations of one family; three nations and two partitions; the wars of 1947, 1965 and 1971 and an Emergency; three faiths; Bombay from Methwold’s estate to the magicians’ ghetto; the body from the nose to sterilisation
Governing Proposition
Saleem Sinai, born in Bombay at the stroke of midnight on 15 August 1947, the minute of India’s independence, writes his life at night in a pickle factory in his thirty-first year, to a listener, Padma, who interrupts and is answered; he tells it from his grandfather’s nose striking the frozen earth of Kashmir in 1915 to the Emergency of 1975 to 1977. The wager of the book is that a nation founded at a stroke of the clock is a collective fiction which every citizen must carry as private biography; that the state which inherited the promise of 1947 made war on the plurality the nation was founded to hold; and that an English remade from inside the subcontinent’s languages and its oral tellers can carry that history as comedy, epic and the marvellous at once.
Act II · The Essay
Movement I
The book begins toward “once upon a time” and refuses it. The teller wants the date and the clock instead: he was born in Bombay at midnight on 15 August 1947, at the minute India became independent, and so he came into the world “handcuffed to history”. The refusal is the book’s first argument. A fairy tale happens in no time; this life happened at a stated minute, and the nation founded at that minute will be carried, for the rest of the book, as one man’s private biography.
The teller is Saleem Sinai, writing at night in a pickle factory in Bombay in his thirty-first year. He has a listener, Padma, who wants to know what happened next, and whose interruptions are reported and answered. He is cracking apart, and he is telling his life against time. The novel’s content, history as something a person makes and gets wrong, is enacted by its telling: substitute a third person chronicle, and the knowledge goes.
Rushdie wrote it in English, and Jonathan Cape published it in London in April 1981, with Knopf in New York the same year. It is a novel in three books. Book One runs from Kashmir in 1915 to the birth at midnight; Book Two from the Bombay childhood to the Pakistan years and the war of 1965; Book Three from the war of 1971 in East Pakistan to the Emergency of 1975 to 1977 and the narrator’s present. The unit here is the novel as published in 1981. Later editions carry an introduction by the author; it is context, not the work.
Movement II
The life begins before the man. On a spring morning in 1915 the grandfather, Aadam Aziz, a doctor, strikes his nose on the frozen earth of Kashmir, and the story of a family begins with comedy and a nose. He is called to a patient he may see only through a hole in a sheet, a woman known in pieces. The perforated sheet returns as the narrator’s whole method: the self and the nation known only in holes, one piece at a time.
Saleem cannot tell one life without swallowing the world around it: the grandfather’s nose, the sheet, the silver spittoon, Methwold’s hairpiece, the Methwold estate sold with its contents. The digressions are the argument, because the claim is that a life is made of them. They are the book’s comic set pieces, built with stage precision, and they plant the leitmotifs, the sheet, the spittoon, the nose, the knees, snakes and ladders, which return with exact timing.
At Narlikar’s home, as the clock strikes and the nation’s fireworks go up, two boys are born, and Mary Pereira, a Catholic nursemaid, changes them: the rich man’s son is raised poor and the poor man’s raised rich. The two are Saleem and Shiva, preserver and destroyer, and the switch is load-bearing. It carries the book’s question of who inherits, it drives the plot, and its consequence will close it. Book One ends here, with the child born.
Movement III
In a washing chest the boy first hears the voices. They are the Midnight’s Children, the one thousand and one born in the first hour of independence, each with a gift, and they gather in Saleem’s head as a conference, a parliament of gifts and quarrels. The number is the Nights’ number, and the condition Scheherazade’s, a teller who narrates against death. The marvellous is admitted exactly here, where it carries the nation’s story: telepathy at midnight, and a nose that smells.
Saleem is Ganesh, the elephant-nosed scribe of the epic, dictating to Padma, whose name is the lotus goddess’s; the frame of teller and listener is the frame of the Mahabharata’s making. The narrator often signals the myths himself rather than leaving the reader to find them, and the book pays for that in places. But the frame is structure, not ornament: the conference is the plural nation as one boy holds it, and its quarrels are the nation’s.
Book Two runs long. The Bombay middle repeats its comic routines; then come the Pakistan years, and the Brass Monkey turns into Jamila Singer. In the war of 1965 the family is bombed, and the silver spittoon falls on Saleem’s head. The comic and the atrocious obey one voice throughout: the slapstick of a spittoon-hitting game in Agra and the bombing are told by the same narrator, under the same law of history entering the body.
Movement IV
Book Three begins in the war of 1971 in East Pakistan. Saleem, his memory gone, is the buddha, and the amnesia is a convenience of the frame as much as an event in it. In the Sundarbans the boy soldiers are lost in a jungle that answers their crimes with visions. The massacres in Dacca in 1971 are held in the same voice as the comedy of the first books.
Later come the witch’s basket of invisibility and the magicians’ ghetto, and then the Widow: in the dream her hand, green and black, plucks children, and in the Emergency of 1975 to 1977 her sterilisations destroy the Midnight’s Children. The Widow is a demon-goddess of Indian myth and a prime minister at once. The book’s plainest disclosure stands here: the regime made war on the plurality the nation was founded to hold.
The switch at birth closes what it opened. Shiva, the destroyer, fathers the child Saleem raises. The allegory strains in these chapters; the sterilisation of the children works as plot rather than world, and the prose, after the Sundarbans, loosens into summary where Book One was close-worked scene. The cracking of the narrator’s body is meant to excuse the strain, and partly does.
Movement V
Saleem pickles his chapters into jars at the factory. The pickling is the form named: preservation that alters what it preserves. Memory and history are made, not recovered, “the chutnification of history”, and a condition every postcolonial reader recognised was given its name. He notices that he has placed Gandhi’s assassination on the wrong date and lets it stand, because in his India it happened then: the error is part of the form.
The close is the crowd. Saleem sees himself taken into the multitudes, a whirlpool that annihilates the one in the many, the nation founded at a stroke of the clock reclaiming the man who carried it as his biography. It is among the book’s darker heights. The heights come often in this book, and its register is so continuously heightened that they flatten into a plateau of brilliance; the close is one of the few that rises above it.
The book won the Booker Prize in 1981 and was named the best of the Booker winners in 1993 and again in 2008. The Royal Shakespeare Company staged it in 2003, and Deepa Mehta filmed it in 2012. The generation that followed, Ghosh, Seth, Roy, Desai, Mistry, and beyond India Zadie Smith, wrote in the room it opened, and the postcolonial novel was largely defined around it. It stands three tenths below One Hundred Years of Solitude, at 8.9, the model above the book that followed it.
Act III · The Twelve
The book is built to digress, and most of its digressions are its argument: Saleem cannot tell one life without swallowing his grandfather’s nose, the perforated sheet, the silver spittoon and Methwold’s hairpiece, because his claim is that the life is made of them. Much passes the subtractive test. The perforated sheet, a woman known only in pieces, returns as the narrator’s whole method; the babies switched at Narlikar’s home carry the book’s question of who inherits. What holds the figure here, the lowest of the twelve, is that a hostile cut finds slack. Book Two’s long Bombay middle repeats its comic routines; the Pakistan years and the Brass Monkey’s turn into Jamila Singer run longer than they earn; the Sundarbans, though strong, is a stretch the argument permits rather than compels; and the teller’s anticipations are repeated past need. The cap is cleared with little to spare.
Score: 7.9 / 10
What the book brings into the open can be stated, and it holds: a nation founded at a stroke of the clock is a collective fiction which every citizen must carry as private biography, and the promise of 1947 was broken by the state that inherited it. The Midnight’s Children Conference, the one thousand and one children born in the first hour of independence, gathers in Saleem’s head as a parliament of gifts and quarrels, and is destroyed by the Widow’s sterilisations in the Emergency: the regime made war on the plurality the nation was founded to hold. As durable is the second finding, that memory and history are made, not recovered: “the chutnification of history”. Held where it is because the national allegory is at times schematic, Saleem’s body doing what a diagram would do, and the inner lives of Amina, Padma and Parvati are disclosed less fully than the condition they illustrate.
Score: 8.7 / 10
Elevation comes chiefly as comic transport, and it comes often: the grandfather’s nose striking the frozen earth of Kashmir on a spring morning in 1915; the opening, which starts toward “once upon a time” and swerves to the date and the clock; the midnight birth under the nation’s fireworks; the Widow’s hand in the dream, green and black, plucking children. The darker heights are real: the soldiers lost in the Sundarbans, in a jungle that answers their crimes with visions; the bombing of the family in 1965 and the silver spittoon falling on Saleem’s head; the closing vision of the crowd, a whirlpool of multitudes that annihilates. Held here because the register is so continuously heightened that the heights flatten into a plateau of brilliance, and the book rarely reaches the stillness or the terror of Blood Meridian or of the deaths in Anna Karenina.
Score: 8.3 / 10
Myth here is built, not hung. Two children are switched at birth, the rich man’s son raised poor and the poor man’s raised rich: Saleem and Shiva, preserver and destroyer, a pairing the names make load-bearing, which drives the plot and closes it when Shiva fathers the child Saleem raises. Saleem is Ganesh, the elephant-nosed scribe of the epic, dictating to Padma, the lotus goddess; the frame of teller and listener is the frame of the Mahabharata’s making. The thousand and one children carry the number of the Nights and Scheherazade’s condition, a teller narrating against death. The Widow is a demon-goddess and a prime minister at once. Held below the top because the myths are often signalled by the narrator rather than found by the reader, and the national allegory, the book’s own myth, at times hardens into equation.
Score: 8.8 / 10
The inheritance was the novel of India in English: Forster’s India seen from outside, Narayan’s and Anand’s realist provinces seen from within. The swerve is to take English and Bombay it: Hindi and Urdu syntax, film song, street speech and the oral teller’s rhythm made the medium of a national epic. The stake was real, a young author’s second novel wagered on a manner its first critics could have called pastiche. Charged against it, the book stands on proven paths: The Tin Drum, a narrator of abnormal body bound to his nation’s history and telling from confinement; Tristram Shandy, the birth deferred and the digressive teller; One Hundred Years of Solitude, the marvellous as the record of a nation. The turn is in the combination and in the transfer of the method to the subcontinent, not in the method, and the gate is cleared by a tenth.
Score: 8.6 / 10
Substitute a third person chronicle and the book loses its knowledge. The form is a man cracking apart who tells his life against time to a listener who wants to know what happened next, so that the novel’s content, history as something a person makes and gets wrong, is enacted by its telling. Saleem’s errors belong to the form: he notices that he has placed Gandhi’s assassination on the wrong date, and lets it stand, because in his India it happened then. The pickling of the chapters into jars is the form named: preservation that alters what it preserves. Padma’s interruptions make the reader a listener and the book a performance. Held off the top because the frame is sometimes worked harder than it needs, and in the later chapters the allegory, rather than the form, carries some of the knowledge.
Score: 8.8 / 10
Evidence, not promise: forty five years of return, in reviews, schools, universities and the whole field of postcolonial study, have not exhausted it. It has been read as national allegory, as postmodern historiography, as a comedy of the body, as a book of the Emergency, of Partition and of Bombay as a city, and as a study of a narrator’s reliability; it has been set beside Grass, García Márquez, Sterne and the Mahabharata, and each comparison finds more. Formally, the jars, the perforated sheet and the numbers repay rereading. Held here because much of the return circles the same few questions, nation, hybridity and history as fiction, and because the allegory, once seen, tends to tell a returning reader what each episode is for. The well is deep, and its walls show.
Score: 8.6 / 10
The field is the novel in English of the late twentieth century. The intrinsic force is large: the book moved the Indian novel in English from a minor province of English letters to one of its centres, by showing that English could be written from inside the subcontinent’s languages and that the novel of a nation could be comic, epic and marvellous at once. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: the generation that followed wrote in the room it opened, Amitav Ghosh, Vikram Seth, who wrote against its manner, Arundhati Roy’s The God of Small Things, Kiran Desai and Rohinton Mistry in their different ways, and beyond India Zadie Smith’s White Teeth and the British fiction of migration; the academy of the 1980s and 1990s defined the postcolonial novel largely around it. Discounted: its reach was partly a reach of manner, often imitated thinly, and its methods came from Grass and García Márquez.
Score: 8.8 / 10
Forty five years since publication, on the step for thirty five to forty seven years, and a tenth above that step for the widest presence. The presence is as wide as that of any novel of its decade in English: in print without a break, taught across the English-speaking world and in India, translated widely, given the Booker Prize in 1981 and named the best of the Booker winners twice, in 1993 and 2008, adapted for the stage by the Royal Shakespeare Company in 2003 and for the screen by Deepa Mehta in 2012. Presence earns the tenth and no more. The surface fixed to its moment is a real charge, the Emergency as a near-present grievance and references that need notes for a reader born after 1980; but the book has already outlived the regime it attacked and the readers who lived under it.
Score: 8.7 / 10
The prose is a commanded instrument: long sentences that run on a Hindi and English rhythm and break into lists; chapter openings that strike like a teller’s hook; leitmotifs, the perforated sheet, the spittoon, the nose, the knees, snakes and ladders, placed and returned with exact timing; comic set pieces built with stage precision, the Methwold estate sold with its contents, the washing chest in which the boy first hears the voices. The making is load-bearing: the voice is the argument. Charged on the same anchors as any medium: the manner is mannered, and its devices, the anticipations, the apostrophes to Padma, the hyphenated compounds, are used past freshness; and Book Three, after the Sundarbans, loosens into summary and allegory where Book One was close-worked scene.
Score: 8.7 / 10
One physics governs: the marvellous is admitted exactly where it carries the nation’s story, telepathy at midnight, the nose that smells, the witch’s basket of invisibility, and the comic and the atrocious obey one voice. Take the two most distant elements, the slapstick of the spittoon-hitting game in Agra and the massacres in Dacca in 1971: one narrator and one law, history entering the body, hold both. Narrowness is not the risk; the range is enormous. The strain comes late, when the allegory of Book Three overrides the law the first books set: the Widow’s sterilisation of the children works as plot rather than world, and Saleem’s amnesia as the buddha is a convenience of the frame as much as an event in it. The cracking of the narrator’s body is meant to excuse such strain, and partly does.
Score: 8.6 / 10
The orders held in one structure: three generations of a family; three nations, India, Pakistan and Bangladesh, and two partitions; the state, its wars of 1947, 1965 and 1971, and its Emergency; Islam, Hinduism and Christianity, the last in Mary Pereira, the Catholic nursemaid who changes the babies; labour and class, from Methwold’s estate to the magicians’ ghetto and the pickle factory; the body, its nose, its sterilisation, its cracking; language and memory; the city of Bombay; the natural order as jungle and flood. They are integrated, not listed: each is pressed into one man’s body and one telling. Held below Anna Karenina’s 9.5 because the inner lives of others are held less fully than the public world; a tenth above Infinite Jest’s 9.1, because it holds a subcontinent’s history whole.
Score: 9.2 / 10
Act IV · The Reckoning
8.6 / 10 · Final Average
Placement: Tier IV · Canonical
Strongest Dimensions
The Encompassed at 9.2: three generations, three nations, three wars and an Emergency, three faiths, Bombay’s classes from Methwold’s estate to the magicians’ ghetto, and the body, all pressed into one man’s body and one telling. Then The Archetypal Deep, The Living Form and Pressure on Tradition at 8.8: a switch at birth that drives the plot and closes it, a form in which the telling enacts history as something a person makes and gets wrong, and a reach that moved the Indian novel in English to the centre of the field.
Limiting Dimension
The Inevitable at 7.9: the digressions are mostly the argument, but Book Two’s Bombay middle repeats its routines, the Pakistan years run longer than they earn, and the teller’s anticipations recur past need. Next above it, The Sublime at 8.3: the heights come often, but a register heightened without pause flattens them into a plateau, and few reach the stillness or the terror of the highest.
The Necessity Cap clears at 7.9 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears with room: The Living Form at 8.8, The Made at 8.7, The Inner Law at 8.6, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is met on all five: Pressure on Tradition at 8.8, The Archetypal Deep at 8.8, The Unconcealment at 8.7, The Imperishable at 8.7 and The Swerve at 8.6 clear the bar of 8.5, the last by a tenth. The Universal Minimum is met (the lowest of the eleven axes it covers is The Inevitable at 7.9, against 7.5), and The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 9.2. Every summit condition is met; the work is held below the summit by its aggregate alone.
Basis · a reading from knowledge of Salman Rushdie’s Midnight’s Children, a novel in three books, first published by Jonathan Cape, London, in April 1981, and by Knopf, New York, the same year. The unit is the novel as published in 1981; the author’s introduction to later editions is context, not the work. The book was written in English and every axis is judged on Rushdie’s English; there is no translation. No text was in hand; nothing was measured on a text, and no quotation was checked against a file. Words are quoted only where they are certain, “once upon a time”, “handcuffed to history” and “the chutnification of history”; everything else is paraphrased. The plot, the persons, the three books and the principal set pieces are known closely; the sentences are not known word for word and are not quoted. The prizes are weighed as presence only. Facts that could not be verified are not given, among them the number of chapters and of the jars, whether a last jar is left empty, the length in words or pages, the number of languages the book is translated into, a change to the text said to have followed a libel action, and the exact words of the close.