The Fifth Desk · Evaluation
Act I · The Map
Virginia Woolf · a novel of one day, without chapters · Hogarth Press, 1925 · scored on Woolf’s English as published in 1925, read from knowledge; no text in hand, and English quoted only where its words are certain
Mode
Novel of one day as a novel of consciousness; comedy of manners, war novel and study of a marriage in one book
Mythos
The scapegoat whose death the party absorbs, the double who never meets his other, the mad prophet with a message for the Prime Minister; a descent into a little room and a return, on the shape of Cymbeline
Phase
One Wednesday in the middle of June, five years after the war, from a morning walk to Bond Street to the end of a party at night, the hours struck by Big Ben
Presentation
Fiction; no chapters and no numbered parts, the text broken only by white spaces; free indirect style passing among a dozen minds, with no narrator who speaks as a person
Register
From the social comedy of a luncheon and a party to the visions of a shell-shocked man in Regent’s Park, and from the long gathering sentence to the short declarative of the opening
Scale
Two centres who never meet, a hostess and a clerk, with their households, their friends and their doctors; London from Bond Street and the parks to the palace gates
Governing Proposition
A hostess of fifty-one walks out on a June morning in London to buy the flowers for her party; across the city a clerk who served in the war, and is now mad, sits with his Italian wife in Regent’s Park, and by evening he has killed himself rather than be taken by his doctors. The two never meet. The wager of the novel is that lives which never touch are bound, that a society’s ordinary day is built over its war dead, and that a form which crosses from mind to mind on the sound of a clock can make the reader know both in one day.
Act II · The Essay
Movement I
“Mrs Dalloway said she would buy the flowers herself.” The novel opens on a short sentence of reported decision, and within a breath it has turned from a London morning in June to a morning at Bourton thirty years before, remembered as a plunge: “What a lark! What a plunge!” Clarissa Dalloway is fifty-one, the wife of Richard Dalloway, a Conservative member of Parliament, and she is giving a party tonight. The book is that day.
It is one Wednesday in the middle of June, five years after the war. There are no chapters and no numbered parts; the text runs on, broken only by white spaces. The hours are struck through the day by Big Ben and answered by St Margaret’s. The book has two centres, and they never meet. One is Clarissa. The other is Septimus Warren Smith, a clerk who served in the war and is now mad, with his Italian wife, Lucrezia, whom he calls Rezia. Around them stand Peter Walsh, back from India, who loved Clarissa once; the Dalloways’ daughter Elizabeth and her tutor, Doris Kilman; Sally Seton, of the Bourton summers; Hugh Whitbread; Lady Bruton; and two doctors, Holmes and Sir William Bradshaw.
No narrator speaks as a person. The narration passes among a dozen minds, and among strangers in the street, often within a page, so that the self the book describes lives in other people as much as in itself. Clarissa and Richard Dalloway had first appeared in Woolf’s The Voyage Out (1915). The novel was published in May 1925 by the Hogarth Press in London, Woolf’s own press, and by Harcourt, Brace in New York.
Movement II
The clock is the book’s first instrument. “First a warning, musical; then the hour, irrevocable. The leaden circles dissolved in the air.” The sentence returns through the day, varied, and on its sound the narrative crosses London from one mind to another. The hours are “irrevocable”: the past is present only as memory, dug out behind each person, and the day goes forward to the party, its one act of making.
Then the shared occasions. In Bond Street a motor car stops, and the people on the pavement wonder whose it is; the narration passes along the street from mind to mind, and Septimus, in the crowd, wonders at it too. Over the park an aeroplane writes letters in the sky, and a dozen people read them, each differently. The occasion is common and the minds are not. These are the joints of the book: the plot never brings Clarissa and Septimus into one room, and the bond between them is made by the clock, the car and the aeroplane.
Peter Walsh calls in the morning, unannounced, and finds Clarissa mending her green dress. He plays with his pocket-knife. He leaves, walks, sleeps in the park and dreams of a solitary traveller, and remembers Bourton: the summer he lost her, and Sally Seton, whose kiss had been for Clarissa “the most exquisite moment of her whole life”. The retrospect is the loosest stretch of the book, returning to the same refusals more often than it needs, and it brings the form near the conventional flashback.
Movement III
In Regent’s Park Septimus sits with Rezia. To him the trees are alive, and the dead Evans walks behind the railings. He has a message to give the Prime Minister: “men must not cut down trees”. Rezia cannot reach him. By Regent’s Park station an old woman sings of love through millions of years, “ee um fah um so”. The visions are dreadful and they are a report: the madness of the clerk tells the truth about the war that the composure of the city will not.
The book gives his history and the visit to Sir William Bradshaw, who prescribes rest and separation. The narration names the two goddesses Bradshaw serves, Proportion and Conversion, and here it steps outside the free indirect law it otherwise keeps and speaks in the author’s own anger. The portrait of the doctor slides into caricature, and the charge is taken.
The same coercion is seen at a comic distance across the city. Hugh Whitbread chooses a necklace. At Lady Bruton’s luncheon a letter to the Times on emigration to Canada is composed for her: Proportion as policy. Richard cannot say to Clarissa that he loves her, and brings her roses instead. Miss Kilman, poor, resentful and religious, takes Elizabeth to the Army and Navy Stores, and Elizabeth leaves her to ride an omnibus up the Strand, the one free afternoon the book gives the next generation.
Movement IV
Late in the afternoon, in the Smiths’ lodging, Rezia trims a hat for Mrs Peters. Septimus helps her. He laughs; for an hour he is sane, and the two of them are happy over a hat. It is the height of the book, and it is a domestic scene in a rented room.
Holmes comes up the stairs to take him. Septimus goes to the window, says “I’ll give it you!” and throws himself down onto Mrs Filmer’s railings. Earlier in the day the dirge from Cymbeline, “Fear no more the heat o’ the sun”, had come to Clarissa; in the afternoon it came to him. It is the one line the two strands share, and it is Shakespeare’s.
In the evening an ambulance passes Peter Walsh in the street. It carries Septimus’s body. The city closes over the death in the course of its ordinary day, and that is what the book has to say about the war dead and the day built over them.
Movement V
The party fills the house. The Prime Minister comes. Late, the Bradshaws arrive, and with them the news that a young man, one of Sir William’s patients, has killed himself. Death has come into the middle of her party. Clarissa thinks of Bradshaw as a man “forcing your soul”.
She goes alone into a little room. She does not know Septimus and never will, yet she “felt somehow very like him”, and she understands the act: “Death was defiance. Death was an attempt to communicate.” Then: “She felt glad that he had done it; thrown it away.” Through the window she watches the old lady in the house opposite going to bed while the clock strikes, and the dirge comes back to her. Then she returns to her guests. Cymbeline is a play of a death feigned and a return; the hostess has gone down and come back, and through the clerk’s death she has felt the life she would not throw away.
Peter waits for her, and feels terror and ecstasy, and does not know what they are. The book ends on him: “It is Clarissa, he said. For there she was.” The two centres have never met. The form has joined them, by clocks, a car, an aeroplane, a line of Shakespeare and the news of a death, and the reader is left holding both in one day.
Act III · The Twelve
The test is subtractive, and it finds very little to take. The two strands are the argument: without Septimus the party is a comedy of manners, and without Clarissa his death is a case history. What looks detachable is mostly load-bearing. Lady Bruton’s luncheon, where she has a letter to the Times on emigration to Canada composed for her, is Bradshaw’s Proportion practised as policy. Miss Kilman’s afternoon with Elizabeth gives Clarissa her hated double and the next generation its one free ride, Elizabeth on an omnibus up the Strand. Even the ambulance that passes Peter carries Septimus’s body. What holds the axis below 9.0: Peter’s memory of Bourton returns to the same refusals more often than it needs; his dream of the solitary traveller, fine in itself, could go without the book losing a joint; and the satire of Hugh Whitbread runs longer than its point.
Score: 8.8 / 10
The disclosure can be stated, and it holds. A society’s ordinary day is built over its war dead, and the institutions that keep it sane enforce their sanity by force. Sir William Bradshaw prescribes rest and separation, and to Clarissa he is a man “forcing your soul”. The novel names the two goddesses he serves, Proportion and Conversion, and shows the shell-shocked clerk’s madness as a truer report of the war than the city’s composure. A second truth lies beside it: the self is spread among other people and places, and the price of a married public life is invisibility, “not even Clarissa any more; this being Mrs Richard Dalloway”. A third comes at the close: “Death was defiance. Death was an attempt to communicate”. These are meanings, not moods. Held off the top because Bradshaw and Kilman are drawn with animus, so the disclosure about institutions is partly caricature, and the class of the party is inhabited more than examined.
Score: 9.0 / 10
Height comes often, and in a quiet register. The first page rises at once, a June morning at Bourton remembered as a plunge: “What a lark! What a plunge!” Big Ben gives the book its recurring height, the hour struck and its sound spreading over the city. Septimus in Regent’s Park, where the trees are alive and the dead Evans walks behind the railings, is visionary and dreadful at once. The summit is the late afternoon in the Smiths’ room: Rezia trimming a hat, Septimus helping and laughing, sane for an hour, then Holmes on the stairs and the leap. At night Clarissa in the little room watches the old lady opposite going to bed while the clock strikes, and the close lands on Peter’s terror and ecstasy. Held below 9.0 because the middle of the book, from Peter’s walk to the luncheon, runs level.
Score: 8.8 / 10
The central structure is built, not evoked. Septimus is the scapegoat whose death the party absorbs: Clarissa, who “felt somehow very like him”, feels through his death the life she would not throw away, and says so: “She felt glad that he had done it; thrown it away.” The two never meet. The doubling is carried by the book’s architecture and by one line of Shakespeare, the dirge from Cymbeline, which passes from her in the morning to him in the afternoon. Cymbeline is a play of a death feigned and a return, and the novel uses its shape: the hostess goes down into a little room and comes back to her guests. Septimus is also the mad prophet, who must tell the Prime Minister that “men must not cut down trees”. Around this core the archetypes are evoked rather than built: the old woman singing by Regent’s Park station, Peter’s solitary traveller. Of the five summit gates it stands nearest the bar.
Score: 8.7 / 10
The inheritance is the Edwardian novel of Bennett, Wells and Galsworthy, the novel of houses, incomes and careers that Woolf attacked in “Mr Bennett and Mrs Brown” (1924), with James, Conrad and Proust behind it. The turn is a novel of one day without chapters, passing from mind to mind on the occasion of a motor car, an aeroplane writing letters in the sky or a clock, with a past dug out behind each person to meet in the present, and two protagonists joined by nothing in the plot. The stake was real but limited: Woolf owned her press, so no editor could refuse her, and Jacob’s Room (1922) had already broken with the realist form. Above all, Ulysses (1922) had made the single day and the city’s crossing minds a form, and Woolf read it while she wrote. The swerve is her own, the tunnelled past, the double who never meets, the sentence that crosses minds without a seam, but it is not the first break.
Score: 8.8 / 10
Change the form and the knowledge goes. The novel knows that lives which never touch are bound, and only the form can say it: the plot never brings Clarissa and Septimus into one room, so the bond is made by the clocks, by the motor car both wonder at, by the aeroplane the whole park reads, by the line of Shakespeare that passes between them, and by the news that comes to the party with Bradshaw. Told in chapters, by one narrator or over a longer span, the book would be two stories and a coincidence. The single day is the argument about time: the hours are “irrevocable”, the past is present only as memory behind each person, and the party is the day’s one act of making. The free indirect style, crossing within a page from Clarissa to Peter to Rezia to a stranger in the street, is the instrument of the claim that the self lives in others. Held just off the top because the long Bourton retrospect in Peter’s strand loosens the form toward the conventional flashback.
Score: 9.3 / 10
Evidence rather than promise: a century of reading has not exhausted the book, and each generation has found a different one in it. Michael Cunningham’s The Hours (1998) is a reading of it at the length of a novel. The text holds its questions open: whether the party is Clarissa’s triumph or her evasion; whether her kinship with Septimus is understanding or appropriation; whether Sally Seton’s kiss, “the most exquisite moment of her whole life”, is the book’s suppressed centre; whether Richard, who cannot say that he loves her and brings roses instead, is its failure or its quiet good; what Peter’s terror at the end is terror of. The form yields as the questions do: the clock times, the echoes and the transitions repay counting. Held below the top because the book is short, and some of its lines are well worn.
Score: 9.1 / 10
The field is the English novel of the early twentieth century, and with it the European modernist novel. The intrinsic force: the book made the free indirect style a means of moving across a city’s minds with no narrator’s frame, made a single day carry a whole life by the past dug out behind each person, and set the private mind and the public wound, the war, the doctors and the state, in one structure without a plot to join them. What holds it below the top: Ulysses made the novel of the day first and at larger scale, and Woolf’s own To the Lighthouse and The Waves carry the method further. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: it became, beside Ulysses, the type of the modernist novel of one day; Cunningham’s The Hours (1998, filmed in 2002) and Ian McEwan’s Saturday (2005) take it as their model; its multiple focalisation is now a plain technique of the novel; and some of that reach is Woolf’s, credited across her books more than to this one.
Score: 8.9 / 10
Survival is weighed over a hundred and one years. Form: the text survives whole, as published in 1925, and nothing that makes the work is lost. Presence: continuous for a century. The book has been in print throughout, is taught in schools and universities across the English-speaking world and beyond, is translated into most written languages, and has been filmed, by Marleen Gorris in 1997 with Vanessa Redgrave, and rewritten, as The Hours. Its standing rose after Woolf’s death and again from the 1970s. Its surface is fixed to one class, one year and one city, the party and the Prime Minister’s car, but the war’s aftermath and the coercions of psychiatry it describes have outlived those conditions and are read for themselves. Held below the widest presence, which belongs to the few books of its century read without exception, and a survival of a century does not stand with a survival of millennia.
Score: 9.1 / 10
Judged on Woolf’s English, with no translation between. Command of the medium is near complete, and the making bears weight. The sentence is long and semicoloned, gathering clauses as the mind gathers them, turning in a breath from a flower shop to Bourton thirty years before; and short when it must be: “Mrs Dalloway said she would buy the flowers herself.” The transitions carry the book: the motor car in Bond Street passes from mind to mind along the street; the aeroplane’s letters are read by a dozen people, each differently; the clock strikes and the narrative crosses London on the sound, and Big Ben’s sentence returns, varied, so that the reader hears the day pass. Detail carries meaning: Rezia’s hat, Peter’s pocket-knife, Richard’s roses, Clarissa mending her green dress. Charged: the portraits of Kilman and Bradshaw slip into the narrator’s own contempt, and the prose there loses its tact; and some phrases, the plunge among them, are repeated until they wear.
Score: 9.3 / 10
Take the two most distant elements: Hugh Whitbread choosing a necklace and helping Lady Bruton with her letter, and Septimus watching the dead Evans among the trees. One law governs both: the soul’s privacy against the forces that would convert it, and the moment against the irrevocable hour. The comedy of the luncheon and the madness in the park are the same coercion seen at two distances; the party and the suicide are the same act, an offering, read from two sides. The range is wide and held: social comedy, a marriage, a lost love, a war neurosis, a death, a daughter’s freedom, an old woman’s song. Charged: the narrator’s essay on Proportion and Conversion steps outside the free indirect law the book otherwise keeps and speaks in the author’s own anger, and Kilman is seen from outside with a cruelty the book does not elsewhere allow.
Score: 9.0 / 10
Many orders, held in one day rather than listed. Consciousness, in a dozen minds and two at depth. The family: the Dalloways’ marriage and their daughter, Septimus and Rezia. The state: Richard in Parliament, the Prime Minister at the party, Lady Bruton’s scheme of emigration. Empire, in Peter’s India. War, in Septimus and the dead Evans, five years on. Medicine and the institutions of sanity, in Holmes and Bradshaw. Class, in Kilman’s poverty and resentment, Rezia’s lodging and the crowd at the palace gates. Religion, in Kilman’s conversion and Clarissa’s atheism. Sexuality, in Sally, Peter and the unspoken. The city, the park and the June weather; time and death over all. What holds the axis at the foot of the twelve is the book’s size and vantage: labour is barely present, the state is glimpsed through a car window and at a party, and history is a ground rather than an agent.
Score: 8.6 / 10
Act IV · The Reckoning
9.0 / 10 · Final Average
Placement: Tier V · Epochal
Strongest Dimensions
The Living Form and The Made at 9.3, then The Bottomless Well and The Imperishable at 9.1. A form in which two lives that never touch are bound by clocks, a motor car, an aeroplane and a line of Shakespeare; a sentence that crosses from mind to mind and from London to Bourton without a seam; and a century of return that has found a different book in each generation, with the text whole and continuously read.
Limiting Dimension
The Encompassed at 8.6, held by the book’s size and vantage: labour barely present, the state glimpsed through a car window and at a party, history a ground rather than an agent. Next above it, The Archetypal Deep at 8.7: a scapegoat and a double built into the architecture, with the archetypes around them evoked rather than built.
The Necessity Cap clears at 8.8 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears with room: The Living Form at 9.3, The Made at 9.3, The Inner Law at 9.0, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is met on all five: The Imperishable at 9.1, The Unconcealment at 9.0, Pressure on Tradition at 8.9, The Swerve at 8.8 and The Archetypal Deep at 8.7 clear the bar of 8.5, The Archetypal Deep by two tenths. The Universal Minimum is met (no axis it governs falls below 8.7, against 7.5) and The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 8.6. Every summit condition is met.
Basis · a reading from knowledge of Virginia Woolf’s Mrs Dalloway, published by the Hogarth Press, London, and by Harcourt, Brace, New York, in May 1925. It is scored as one novel, as published in 1925 and read in the Hogarth text: one day, with no chapters or numbered parts, the text broken only by white spaces. No text of it was in hand; nothing was measured on a text, and no quotation was checked against a file. Every axis is judged on Woolf’s English, with no translation between. Events are paraphrased, and English is quoted only where its words are certain; the dirge is Shakespeare’s, from Cymbeline, as it comes to Clarissa and to Septimus. Michael Cunningham’s The Hours (1998) and its film (2002), Marleen Gorris’s film (1997) and Ian McEwan’s Saturday (2005) are cited as the record of the book’s reception and are not part of the work. Facts that could not be verified, among them the day of publication, the word count, the number of breaks in the text, the year in which the day falls, the differences between the British and American first editions, the book’s earlier history and working title, Woolf’s statements on it in her diary and in a later preface, and the names in its critical record, are not given. Citations are by episode.