The Fifth Desk · Evaluation

Act I · The Map

Music · Album · 1983 · American guitar rock, chiming and submerged

Murmur

R.E.M. · produced by Mitch Easter and Don Dixon · I.R.S. Records · about 44 minutes

The Plate · twelve tracks on two sides of six over a ruled floor: the band drawn as two close rules, a voice line weaving inside them and never rising above, a jagged opening, a few lifts and one high swell closing the first side, and at the end of the second the two rules opening apart

Mode

Guitar rock in chiming arpeggios over a melodic bass, the voice set inside the band

Mythos

A half-remembered South: a pilgrimage, a passion, a country overgrown and a way across it

Phase

Twelve songs on two sides of six; the first side runs from drive to stillness, the second from tension to an open close

Presentation

Debut album; twelve tracks standing apart, about forty-four minutes; kudzu over a landscape on the front of the sleeve, a railway trestle on the back

Register

Arpeggiated guitar, bass as countermelody, plain drums, piano, a string line, stacked harmonies, a lead voice set low and left indistinct

Scale

A region and a memory, held as sound

Governing Proposition

A young band from the American South sets its singer inside the sound instead of in front of it, keeps the guitar to chiming figures and the words to fragments, and makes twelve short songs that hold a region the way memory holds it: half heard, overgrown, known by its murmur. The record discloses a way of hearing more than a meaning, and it keeps one law across a narrow span so completely that the narrowness becomes its method.

A Country Heard Through a Wall

8.5 / 10
Tier IV · Canonical

Act II · The Essay

Movement I

Radio Free Europe

The record opens at speed. Radio Free Europe is the one song on it with a single’s drive, guitar and bass running close and the drums plain and forward, and its title names a broadcast sent across a wall to people on the other side. The words are mostly unheard. The voice is in the song, not on top of it, and what reaches the listener is its tone and a few fragments. So the first song states the record’s method before any other has begun: a broadcast is sent, and the listener, too, stands on the far side of a wall, catching the signal and not the message.

I.R.S. Records released the album in April 1983, the band’s first full-length record: twelve tracks on two sides of six, about forty-four minutes, produced by Mitch Easter and Don Dixon. The band was Michael Stipe on voice, Peter Buck on guitar, Mike Mills on bass, keyboards and voice, and Bill Berry on drums and voice. Radio Free Europe had appeared two years before as a single on the small Hib-Tone label; that single is evidence, and the album’s version is the one heard here. The sleeve shows a landscape grown over with kudzu on the front and a railway trestle on the back.

The architecture is narrow on purpose. The songs run from about three minutes to about four and a half, and the two longest, Pilgrimage and Shaking Through, are each about a tenth of the record. None is an instrumental. There are no segues of the kind that join a suite: the songs stand apart, with gaps between them, and the first side, at about twenty-three minutes, runs a little longer than the second. A record built of twelve songs this close in length and manner is built on one idea, and its risk is the risk of any record of one idea, that the idea will be kept by staying small.

Movement II

Pilgrimage

The second song opens on stacked voices that sound like a chant heard through a wall, and its title names a journey to a holy place. Here the record’s country comes into view, or into earshot. It is the American South, but not the South of its own popular music: no Southern rock, no country, no blues. It is a South half remembered, heard as a texture of chiming guitar and close voices, and the sleeve gives it the same way by eye: a land overgrown by kudzu on the front, and on the back a trestle, a way across it.

The record summons that country densely and keeps summoning it. Pilgrimage names the journey; Talk About the Passion carries in its title the old sacred sense of suffering; the fields of the last song are a direction rather than a place. But no figure makes the journey, no story crosses the sequence, and nothing on the record would fall if the pilgrimage were taken away. The patterns are atmosphere and allusion. The particular is kept particular only as texture, a porch and a field glimpsed, and the archetypes are felt rather than built.

The inheritance is plain to hear. The chime is the Byrds’, twenty years old by 1983, and beside it stand the Velvet Underground, Television and Patti Smith. What the record turns from is the rock around it in its own year: synthesiser new wave, the arena guitar solo, and a production hard, bright and loud. It refuses all of it at once. The guitar plays arpeggios, not display; the voice goes into the band; the sound is dense and dark. For a first record on an independent label the stake was small, and the sources were proven, but four refusals made together were a real turn away from the sound of the moment.

Movement III

Talk About the Passion

One song comes closer than the others to saying something. Talk About the Passion lifts at each return of its title, and a string line enters beneath it and darkens it, so that the song seems for a moment about to become a statement. It stops short. The title carries the meaning, and the song carries the title as a sound, rising each time it returns. It is the record’s most open approach to sense and its plainest refusal of it, and the refusal sounds deliberate: the song is built to rise toward a meaning and to leave it unsaid.

What the record discloses is a way of hearing. A voice set into the band rather than over it, words that arrive as tone and fragment, a region held as sound: this is how memory holds a place, and the record makes it audible. The titles point outward now and then. Radio Free Europe names a broadcast across a wall; Moral Kiosk names judgment sold at a stall. But the statements are withheld, and what is uncovered is a condition of hearing more than a condition of life. The record is true to how a place is remembered, and says little about the place.

The indistinctness is a decision, not a failure, and the record keeps it across twelve songs. Stipe’s voice is used as an instrument, mixed low and close, and the production makes room for it inside the band rather than above it. Where it costs, it costs plainly: in 9-9, whose voice is garbled on purpose and whose tension does not repay the garbling, and in parts of Moral Kiosk, the murk muddies more than it veils. Those are the record’s weakest stretches, and they are weak by the same method that makes its strongest songs work.

Movement IV

Perfect Circle

The first side ends in stillness. Perfect Circle is slow, a figure on piano and guitar under a voice that seems to be remembering rather than singing, and beneath it the harmonies of Mills and Berry rise. It is the record’s height and its centre, and it is reached by subtraction: the side that began with Radio Free Europe’s drive has passed through Pilgrimage, Laughing, Talk About the Passion and Moral Kiosk, and arrives at the quietest song on the record. Nothing on Murmur is higher, and nothing is less insistent about it.

The making holds the whole close. Buck’s arpeggiated figures interlock with Mills’s bass, which moves as a second melody; Berry’s drumming is plain, propulsive and well judged; the backing voices give the songs their depth. Easter and Dixon pack guitar, bass, piano, strings and layered voices into a dense sound and keep it legible, so that nothing is fully foregrounded and nothing is lost. The palette is narrow, one guitar manner and one band of tempo, and that narrowness is both the record’s limit and the condition of its sound.

Change the form and the record would lose what it knows. Put Stipe in front of the mix with every word clear, and these would be twelve oblique songs; set into the texture, the words become part of the sound of a place. One law governs everything: the voice inside the band, the region remembered as sound. Radio Free Europe and Perfect Circle, the fastest song and the stillest, both obey it and both hold the same chime. But the law is kept across a short distance. A record of one manner keeps its law more easily than a record that ranges, and this one does not range.

Movement V

West of the Fields

The second side moves from tension to openness. Catapult and Sitting Still keep the first side’s manner; 9-9 is the tensest and most garbled track; Shaking Through, the longest, rises in its chorus; We Walk is slight and nursery-like, its charm local. Then West of the Fields closes the record, rising in its chorus, and its title names a place by direction rather than by name. The record ends pointing west, past the fields, toward somewhere it does not say, which is the right last word for a record that has kept every place at the edge of hearing.

The field it entered was American rock of the early 1980s and the independent and college-radio rock then forming. The record did not change what a rock song could be. It set a template against the dominant sound of its year, the chiming arpeggio, the melodic bass, the submerged voice and the regional mystery, and showed that a guitar band could be both obscure and widely loved. It is widely credited as a founding document of American alternative rock, and its reach runs through the 1990s, where later bands named it among their sources. Much of the band’s later reach is the career’s, not the debut’s, and it is not counted here.

Forty-three years on, the recording survives whole, remastered and reissued. Its fabric has aged better than most of its year’s: it refused the gated drums and synthesiser tones that date the records of 1983. Its presence is narrower than the band’s later singles, none of which is on it, and lives much among critics and musicians. What it holds is a memory, a region and its natural order, fields, kudzu, rivers and weather, and the sacred evoked in a pilgrimage and a passion; labour, the family, the couple and the body are absent or cannot be made out. It holds them as one sensibility holds things, by mood, and at the edge of hearing.

Act III · The Twelve

1The Inevitable (Ananke)

Twelve songs of three to four and a half minutes, and inside the songs almost nothing can go. Peter Buck’s figures are short and repeated, Mike Mills’s bass carries a second melody, and each song ends when its figure is spent; nothing is there for display. Radio Free Europe must open, the one song with a single’s drive. Perfect Circle must close the first side, its slow piano and guitar the still centre the side has been moving toward, and West of the Fields is a fit last word, an open close. Held off the top across the middle: 9-9, its voice garbled on purpose, could go with little lost, We Walk’s charm is local, and the songs share one mode closely enough that the order could shift without loss.

Score: 8.6 / 10

2The Unconcealment (Aletheia)

What the record brings into the open is a way of hearing a place. The voice is set into the band rather than over it, so that meaning arrives as tone and fragment, and that discloses something true about how memory and region are held: as a texture, not a statement, a world known by its murmur. Disclosure through sound is credited in full, and here the sound is the disclosure, kept across twelve songs without a lapse. A few titles state more: Radio Free Europe names a broadcast across a wall, Moral Kiosk names judgment sold at a stall, and Talk About the Passion lifts toward a meaning and stops short. Held well below the bar because the statements are withheld, and the condition disclosed lies nearer a mood than a meaning that can be stated and held.

Score: 8.1 / 10

3The Sublime (Hypsos)

Elevation is frequent and of one kind: beauty, wistful and close, rarely grandeur and never terror. Perfect Circle is the summit, a slow figure on piano and guitar under a voice that seems to be remembering rather than singing, with the harmonies of Mills and Bill Berry rising beneath it. Talk About the Passion lifts at each return of its title, and a string line darkens it. Pilgrimage opens on stacked voices like a chant heard through a wall, and Shaking Through and West of the Fields rise in their choruses. Radio Free Europe has drive, not height; Moral Kiosk and 9-9 are tense, We Walk and Sitting Still level. Height on five or six of twelve, and the top is not among the medium’s highest.

Score: 8.4 / 10

4The Archetypal Deep (Mythos)

Myth is evoked throughout, densely and consistently, and the evocation is of one country. The record summons the American South as a half-remembered land: the kudzu on the front of the sleeve and the railway trestle on the back stand for a country overgrown and a way across it, and the music gives the same thing by ear. Pilgrimage names the journey to a holy place, and Talk About the Passion carries, by its title, the sacred sense of suffering. A summoning this dense and this single in direction is the evoked kind at its strongest. Held well below the bar because none of it is load-bearing: no figure, no journey across the sequence, no structure that would fall if the archetype were taken away. The particular stays particular only as texture, a porch and a field glimpsed.

Score: 8.1 / 10

5The Swerve (Parekklisis)

The inheritance is the guitar band of the 1960s, the chime of the Byrds above all, beside the Velvet Underground, Television and Patti Smith; around it stood the American rock of 1983, synthesiser new wave, the arena guitar solo and the hard, bright production of the year. The turn is from all of that at once: the guitar played as arpeggio rather than display, a voice mixed into the band with its words left indistinct, a production dense and dark rather than loud and clean, and a South that was neither Southern rock nor country. Four refusals made together are more than a turn of degree. Held below the top because the sources were proven and admired, the chime was twenty years old, the stake of a debut on an independent label was small, and the record refused a moment more than it invented a language.

Score: 8.8 / 10

6The Living Form (Entelecheia)

Change the form and the record loses much of what it knows, because its knowledge is the murmur: a voice heard within the band, words half caught, songs that keep the listener at the edge of understanding. Put Michael Stipe in front of the mix with his words clear, and these would become a set of oblique songs; set into the texture, the words become part of the sound of a place. The production enacts it: Mitch Easter and Don Dixon pack guitar, bass, piano and layered voices close together, so that nothing is fully foregrounded. The sequence is counted here, once: the first side moves from drive to stillness, the second from tension to an open close. Held from the top because the form is one container repeated in nearly every song, and the order could be changed with little loss.

Score: 8.7 / 10

7The Bottomless Well (Apeiron)

Evidence rather than promise, over forty-three years, of two kinds. The words have drawn decades of attempts to hear and transcribe them, and the record keeps the question open rather than answering it. Musicians have taken apart the interplay of Buck’s arpeggios and Mills’s melodic bass, and the record is a standing reference in histories of American independent rock. The yield is in the recording too: harmonies and countermelodies surface on return, and the dense mix separates under close listening, so that a record heard many times still gives up parts not heard before. Held from the top because part of what is found in the words is projection invited by indistinctness, as with every record that withholds statement, and once the texture is known the songs yield less than the sound around them.

Score: 8.8 / 10

8Pressure on Tradition (Agon)

The field is American rock of the early 1980s, and the independent and college-radio rock then forming. The intrinsic force is a template set against the dominant sound of its year: the chiming arpeggio, the melodic bass, the submerged voice and the regional mystery, joined so as to show that a guitar band could be both obscure and widely loved. The force was a refusal as much as a reorganisation: it changed what a guitar band could sound like and still be heard, not what a rock song could be, and the band’s later career is not credited to it. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: the record is widely credited as a founding document of American alternative rock, its reach runs through the 1990s, where later bands named it among their sources, and it stands as a reference in that music’s histories.

Score: 9.0 / 10

9The Imperishable (Aphtharsia)

Survival is weighed over forty-three years. The form is whole: the recording survives as issued, remastered and reissued, with live material added as evidence. Presence is continuous but narrower than that of the band’s later records: the album is placed high whenever the decade or American rock is counted, but its public presence is smaller than that of the band’s later singles, none of which is on it, and much of it lies among critics and musicians. That charge stands. The fabric is the record’s strength: it refused the gated drums and synthesiser tones that date most records of 1983, and its guitars, bass, piano and voices carry little of the year. The fabric lifts the case against the charge, but not past it.

Score: 8.5 / 10

10The Made (Techne)

Command of the recorded medium, with the words weighed elsewhere. The making is load-bearing on most tracks: Buck’s arpeggiated figures interlock with Mills’s bass lines, which move as melodies in their own right; Berry’s drumming is plain, propulsive and well judged; and the harmonies of Mills and Berry under Stipe give the record its depth. Easter and Dixon keep a close, dense sound legible, placing piano, strings on Talk About the Passion and treated voices without clutter. Stipe’s voice is used as an instrument, and its indistinctness is a decision. The faults fall across a share of the record: a narrow palette, one guitar manner and one band of tempo; 9-9 and Moral Kiosk less achieved than the rest; and tracks where the murk muddies more than it veils.

Score: 8.3 / 10

11The Inner Law (Cosmos)

One law governs the record: everything half heard, a voice inside the band, a region remembered as sound. The two most distant elements obey it. Radio Free Europe, the fastest and most single-like song, and Perfect Circle, the slowest and stillest, both set the voice inside the texture and both hold the same chime. The tense, garbled 9-9 and the slight We Walk keep the law in different keys, the one by distortion, the other by a childlike lightness, and nothing on the record breaks it; the sleeve, a landscape overgrown, keeps it too. Held from the top because narrowness is not coherence: one band of tempo, one palette and one manner of voice make the law easier to keep, and a wider record governed as well would stand higher.

Score: 8.8 / 10

12The Encompassed (Megethos)

Judged on what the record holds, with no discount for the album form. Consciousness is held, as memory and half-attention. The natural order is held more than on most rock records of its year: fields, kudzu, rivers and weather enter as images and as the texture of the sound. The sacred is evoked, in a pilgrimage and a passion, and the region, the American South, is held as atmosphere throughout. One sensibility joins them. What holds the figure lowest on the page is the kind of join and what it leaves out: the orders are joined by mood rather than by structure, the state and history enter by title only, in Radio Free Europe and Moral Kiosk, and labour, the family, the couple and the body are absent or cannot be made out.

Score: 7.3 / 10

Act IV · The Reckoning

8.5 / 10 · Final Average

Placement: Tier IV · Canonical

Strongest Dimensions

Pressure on Tradition at 9.0, then The Swerve, The Bottomless Well and The Inner Law at 8.8, and The Living Form at 8.7. A template set against the sound of its year and taken up as a founding document of American alternative rock; a debut that refused its moment’s guitar, voice and production at once; words and a dense mix that keep yielding on return; one law kept across every song; and a form whose knowledge is the murmur itself.

Limiting Dimension

The Encompassed at 7.3: memory, the natural order and a region held as atmosphere, the sacred evoked, the state and history entering by title only, and labour, the family, the couple and the body absent, all joined by mood rather than by structure. Below the rest, The Unconcealment and The Archetypal Deep at 8.1: a way of hearing disclosed more than a meaning, and a South densely evoked and built nowhere.

The Necessity Cap clears at 8.6 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears with room: The Living Form at 8.7, The Made at 8.3, The Inner Law at 8.8, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is unmet: Pressure on Tradition at 9.0 and The Swerve at 8.8 clear the bar of 8.5, and The Imperishable meets it exactly at 8.5, but The Unconcealment and The Archetypal Deep at 8.1 fall short. The Universal Minimum is met: no axis but The Encompassed falls below 8.1, against 7.5, and The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 7.3. The summit is withheld by the Epochal Gate, and by the aggregate, which stands below 9.0.

Basis · the LP as released by I.R.S. Records in April 1983, the band’s first full-length album, twelve tracks in their original order on two sides of six, about forty-four minutes; produced by Mitch Easter and Don Dixon; judged from knowledge of the recording, its words as far as they can be made out, and its reception. No recording or lyric sheet was in hand, and running times are approximate. The album is the unit: where an album version differs from a single, the album version is judged, and the Hib-Tone single of Radio Free Europe (1981), later reissues and added live material are evidence, not the object. Songs are cited by title, and no lyric is quoted. Facts that could not be verified, among them the studio and dates of recording, the instrument that carries the string line of Talk About the Passion, the classical figure some hear in Laughing, any meaning of Talk About the Passion beyond its title, the history of the choice of producers, the singer’s stance on printing the words, the record’s chart position and prizes, and the particular bands it shaped, are not given.