The Fifth Desk · Evaluation

Act I · The Map

Music · Album · 1972 · songs for one voice and acoustic guitar, with one piano overdub

Pink Moon

Nick Drake · produced and engineered by John Wood · Island · eleven tracks, about 28 minutes

The Plate · eleven pieces on two sides, each as wide as its running time, over a ruled floor; under every piece a small wavering guitar line ending in an upright stroke; above, a heavy voice line, level on most, a low arch over the second, the one high arch over the sixth, a slow sinking over the eighth and a climb at the end of the last; no voice over the fifth; and over the first alone a thin line, the one added sound

Mode

Songs for one voice and one acoustic guitar in open and altered tunings, the guitar a second voice rather than a support

Mythos

The natural order and the year: an omen in the moon, the sun and what lies behind it, a harvest, a morning; evoked by the songs and partly built by the sequence

Phase

Eleven tracks on two sides, five and six; a title song with the record’s one added colour, a wordless guitar piece to close side one, the longest song to open side two, a slow descent late, and a turn to morning last

Presentation

Album; the Island LP of February 1972, produced and engineered by John Wood at Sound Techniques, London; no other musician plays on it

Register

A soft, close voice almost without vibrato; fingerpicked guitar carrying bass and melody at once; piano on the title song alone

Scale

One mind and its withdrawal, inside the natural order and the year; love at the edge, the city glimpsed

Governing Proposition

After two records dressed in strings, horns and a band, a young English songwriter makes his third of one voice and one acoustic guitar, adds a single piano phrase to the first song and nothing else, and stops each of eleven songs as soon as it is said: a man watching himself withdraw from other people, set inside the turning year from an omen to a morning, in a form whose bareness is the condition it describes.

Say It and Stop

8.3 / 10
Tier IV · Canonical

Act II · The Essay

Movement I

Pink Moon

The record opens on a guitar and a voice, and within its first minute a piano enters over them: a short phrase, once, and then gone. It is the only sound on the album that is not Nick Drake’s voice or his acoustic guitar, and it is never heard again. The title song says the pink moon is “on its way”, an omen with no object, and the piano is the record’s first height, a small, cold summit before anything has been explained. Then the album closes to the bare form and stays there for ten more tracks.

Island Records released Pink Moon in February 1972, Drake’s third album. It was produced and engineered by John Wood at Sound Techniques in London, and no other musician plays on it. The LP holds eleven tracks on two sides. Side one: Pink Moon, Place to Be, Road, Which Will, Horn. Side two: Things Behind the Sun, Know, Parasite, Free Ride, Harvest Breed, From the Morning. The whole runs about twenty-eight minutes, side one about eleven and side two about seventeen. Ten tracks have words and one does not. No track fades into the next; each stops.

The one addition passes the test of necessity that the rest of the record sets. It lets the album open on a second colour before closing to one, so that the bareness that follows is heard as a choice and not a lack. Every other song is voice and guitar with no introduction, solo or coda beyond what its figure needs. That economy is the record’s first law, and it is stated in the opening minute by the one exception to it.

Movement II

Place to Be

Place to Be is the plainest statement on the record, and its height is held for the whole song on a voice barely above speech. It measures the present against youth, “When I was younger”, and moves from strength to a darkness it names. The voice is soft, close and almost without vibrato, and it discloses more than the words do: an exhaustion audible in the breath, set down without effort and without complaint. The record’s condition can be stated from this song alone. A man watches himself withdraw from other people, knows the distance, and cannot cross it.

Road and Which Will follow, and both are more oblique. Road ends almost as soon as it is stated, its guitar figure carrying as much as its words; Which Will asks a question of love that it does not answer. Here the disclosure thins. These songs render a condition felt more than one articulated, and on the rubric’s line a mood ranks below a meaning, however truly the mood is rendered. Place to Be, Parasite and Know articulate the condition; Road, Which Will and Free Ride leave it in the sound. The stated songs carry the record’s disclosure; the oblique ones are what hold it short of its form.

The making is exposed throughout, and it survives the exposure. In open and altered tunings Drake plays independent bass and melody at once, with a steadiness that never sounds effortful, and the figures are composition, not accompaniment. John Wood’s recording is plain and true, voice and guitar close and clear, with no gloss to hide behind. The command is of a small instrument, one guitar, one register of voice, one texture, and several songs lie close to one another in manner. It is mastery, and it is narrow.

Movement III

Horn

Side one closes on Horn, the shortest track and the only one without words: a single line of guitar, alone, under a minute and a half. It is the record with even the voice taken away. A listener could remove it with small loss, and it is the clearest place where the subtractive test bites. It also states the record’s premise most purely, that the form is the content: one instrument, one line, nothing to support it, and then it stops.

The form is the instrument of what the record knows. Set these songs in the band and strings of Drake’s earlier records and the isolation would become a picture of isolation; here it is the condition of the making itself, one voice and one guitar in a room. The brevity works the same way. Songs that stop as soon as they are said disclose a speaker who cannot go on talking. Several songs would survive another setting nearly whole, and that holds the form short of the top, but the record as a whole would not.

The turn was from Drake’s own path. Bryter Layter (1970) had strings, horns, a rhythm section and guest players; this record has none of them. Against the field the turn is smaller, since the solo record of voice and guitar was a common form of the folk and singer-songwriter years, and intimacy had already been sold. What departs is the degree of the stripping, the refusal of every frame and comfort a label of 1972 would supply, and the brevity. The cost was real: two records had not sold, the third abandoned the means by which a record might, and its maker would not tour or promote it.

Movement IV

Things Behind the Sun

Side two opens on the longest track, nearly four minutes, and the record’s widest reach. The guitar’s figure drives the voice upward across the song, and the height it reaches is the same quiet, cold beauty the record finds elsewhere, held longer and lifted further. Know follows: four lines and a repeated figure, love stated and withdrawn in the same breath. Then Parasite, the slow descent, places the self beneath the feet of others in the city’s underground. Its height is the dreadful form of the record’s beauty, and it sits late in the sequence by design.

One law governs every track: one voice, one guitar, say it and stop. The two most distant elements, the piano-coloured title song and Parasite’s descent, obey it, as do Horn’s wordless line and the four lines of Know. The record never breaks its own rule. But narrowness is not coherence. The range the law governs is small in instrument, register and tempo, and to hold one law over a short span is less than to hold it over a wide one. The coherence is complete, and the span is short, though it holds more contrast than its means suggest.

The record moved its field late. At release it moved almost no one. From the 1990s it became a model for the quiet, solo, close-recorded record, and later acoustic songwriters are measured against it. Its intrinsic force is real if contained: it did not reorganise what an album could do, but it showed how far a record could be stripped and still hold, and how a guitar could be a second voice. The reach is wide and delayed, and part of it belongs to Drake’s work as a whole and to the story of his life rather than to this record alone; what remains is the record’s own, and it is enough. A decade later Nebraska, which stands at 8.6 on this desk, stripped a songwriter to voice and guitar from the height of his market, and its turn cost more in the field.

Movement V

From the Morning

The record ends on morning. From the Morning is placed last so that an album which opened on an omen closes on rising and renewal, in an elevation that is almost serene. It is the one place the record’s range widens, and its law holds there too. Between the moon of the first song and the morning of the last lie the sun and what is behind it, and the harvest of Harvest Breed: the natural order and the turning year, through which the man at the record’s centre passes. The frame is real, and it is built by the sequence rather than by any song.

No figure bears it. The speaker has no story, the omen has no object, and the moon is a mood the songs gather round more than a structure they carry. The archetype is evoked, and the particular, a road, the city’s underground, stays sharp beside it without joining it. What the record holds is small: one mind and its withdrawal, held fully; the natural order, held more than in most records of its kind; love at the edge, as a question; the city glimpsed. The family, labour, the state, history and the sacred are absent. That compass describes the record, not a limit of the album.

About fifty-four years have tested it unevenly. The form survives whole, and a voice and a guitar recorded plainly carry almost no date. For nearly two decades the record was barely heard; its return runs from the late 1980s, in reissues, a biography, players working out its tunings and listeners who come to it young, and part of that presence is a legend about its maker, who died in 1974. It stands at 8.3, a tenth above Songs of Leonard Cohen and level with After the Gold Rush, in the lower half of Tier IV: held from the summit by songs that leave part of its disclosure felt rather than stated, a myth the sequence builds and no figure carries, and a swerve taken mostly from its maker’s own path.

Act III · The Twelve

1The Inevitable (Ananke)

Eleven tracks in about twenty-eight minutes, and the record is built to resist the subtractive test. Every song is voice and guitar with no introduction, solo or coda beyond what the figure needs. Road and Harvest Breed end almost as soon as they are stated, and the brevity is the argument: a speaker who will not say more than he can. The one addition, the piano phrase in the title song, is required, since it lets the record open on a second colour before closing to the bare form. The test bites twice. Horn, a single guitar line between songs, could go with small loss, and Free Ride and Which Will sit close in manner. Necessity is easier to keep in so small a form, and that holds it below Kind of Blue at 8.6.

Score: 8.5 / 10

2The Unconcealment (Aletheia)

The disclosure can be stated: a man watching himself withdraw from other people, knowing the distance and unable to cross it. Place to Be sets it plainly against youth, “When I was younger”, from strength to a darkness the song names. Parasite places the self beneath the feet of others in the city; Know states love in four lines and withdraws it in the same breath. These songs state the condition, not only its mood, and what they state can be said plainly and holds. Sound discloses as much as the words and is credited fully: the voice, close, unforced and almost without vibrato, discloses exhaustion more truthfully than the words say it, and the absence of every other player is itself what the record says. Held short of the gate: Road, Which Will and Free Ride are oblique, and in them the record renders a condition felt more than one articulated.

Score: 8.3 / 10

3The Sublime (Hypsos)

Height comes often and in one kind: a quiet, cold beauty, never grandeur. The title song’s piano phrase, entering over the guitar, is a small summit in the record’s first minute. Things Behind the Sun rises across nearly four minutes, the guitar’s figure driving the voice to the record’s widest reach. Place to Be holds at height through its whole length on a voice barely above speech, and From the Morning closes in an elevation that is almost serene. Parasite’s slow descent is the dreadful form of the same height. Over twenty-eight minutes the frequency is high, and the axis counts frequency with height. What holds the figure from the top is the narrowness of the kind, and three tracks, Horn, Road and Free Ride, that hold the record’s level without rising from it; neither holds it far.

Score: 8.6 / 10

4The Archetypal Deep (Mythos)

The archetypal is evoked through the natural order and the year: the pink moon as omen, said in the title song to be “on its way”; the sun and what lies behind it; the harvest of Harvest Breed; the morning of the last song. Those images organise the sequence. The record opens on an omen of coming harm and ends on morning and rising, and the man at its centre passes between them. That frame is partly built, by the order of the songs rather than by any one of them, and the building is credited: the year carries the record’s shape and does not only colour it. What holds the axis below the gate is that no figure bears the myth: the speaker has no story, the omen has no object, and the moon is a mood the songs gather round more than a structure they carry. The particular and the archetype touch, and the sequence brings them close to joining.

Score: 8.0 / 10

5The Swerve (Parekklisis)

The turn is from Drake’s own previous record, Bryter Layter (1970), with its strings, horns, rhythm section and guest players, to one man and a guitar with almost nothing added. Against the field the departure is smaller: the solo record of voice and guitar was a common form of the folk and singer-songwriter years, and the records of 1970 and 1971 had already made intimacy a market. The swerve is in the degree of the stripping, the refusal of every frame and comfort a label of 1972 would supply, and in the brevity. The stake was real and was paid: two records had not sold, the third gave up the means by which a record might, and its maker would not tour or promote it. The axis scores the turn and the stake together, and this is a turn with a stake, not a stylistic accent. Held below the gate: the turn is mostly from his own path, onto a form the tradition already held.

Score: 8.2 / 10

6The Living Form (Entelecheia)

Change the form and the record loses what it knows. Put the band and strings of the earlier records behind these songs and the isolation becomes a picture of isolation; here it is the condition of the making itself, one voice and one guitar in a room. The brevity is the same instrument: songs that stop as soon as they are said disclose a speaker who cannot go on talking. The sequence is counted here, once, and it bears load: the title song’s one added colour opens the record and is never repeated, each side closes onto the bare form, Parasite’s descent sits late, and From the Morning is placed last so that the record ends on rising. The guitar figures carry as much as the voice. Several songs would survive another setting nearly whole, and that holds it below Low and Kind of Blue at 9.0.

Score: 8.6 / 10

7The Bottomless Well (Apeiron)

Evidence rather than promise, over about fifty years, and unevenly. For its first two decades the record was barely heard, and the return it can show runs mainly from the late 1980s: reissues, a biography and a documentary literature on Drake, musicians working out the guitar parts, and successive generations of listeners who come to it young. That return has now held for more than three decades without exhausting, each generation finding the record for itself. The tunings and fingerings have been studied in detail by players, and the formal depth, what so few means can do, keeps yielding. The semantic depth is narrower. The record is often reread through its maker’s death in 1974, which yields a story about Drake more than new meaning in the songs, and that rereading is charged rather than credited. The late start and the share of attention given to the life hold the figure below the long-studied works of the music desk.

Score: 8.5 / 10

8Pressure on Tradition (Agon)

The field is the singer-songwriter and folk album of the early 1970s. The intrinsic force is real if contained: the record did not reorganise what an album could do, but it showed how far a record could be stripped and still hold, and how the guitar could be a second voice rather than a support. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: at release it moved almost no one, and the rubric discounts delayed influence as it credits it; from the 1990s it became a model for the quiet, solo, close-recorded record, and later lines of intimate song are measured against it. That reach is wide and late, and the rediscovery that carried it was wide as well. Part of it is shared with Drake’s work as a whole and with the story of his life, and that part is discounted with the delay. What remains is this record’s own, and it brings the figure to the gate and no higher.

Score: 8.5 / 10

9The Imperishable (Aphtharsia)

Survival is weighed over about fifty-four years, on form, then presence, then fabric. The form is whole: the recording survives as issued, eleven tracks in order, reissued and remastered. Presence is charged. For nearly two decades after release the record was out of wide hearing, a long near-silence, and its later presence, now wide and continuous, is in part the presence of a legend about its maker and of the title song’s use in advertising; popularity is not proof. The fabric is the record’s strength: a voice and a guitar recorded plainly carry almost no date, with none of the production of 1972 to fix them to their year. The silence now lies more than thirty years behind it, a gap in presence rather than a loss. Form whole and fabric undated outweigh it, and give a figure level with Songs of Leonard Cohen and above Nebraska, a record ten years younger.

Score: 8.8 / 10

10The Made (Techne)

Command of the recorded medium. The guitar playing is of the first rank in its idiom: in open and altered tunings Drake plays independent bass and melody with a steadiness that never sounds effortful, and the figures of Things Behind the Sun, Road and Parasite are composition, not strumming. The voice is placed exactly, soft, close and unhurried, with a control of breath and intonation that the bare setting exposes and that survives the exposure. John Wood’s recording is plain and true, voice and guitar close and clear, without gloss. The making bears load because nothing covers it. Held by the narrowness of the means, one instrument, one register of voice, one texture, and by songs whose guitar parts lie close in manner: mastery of a small instrument, well below Winterreise at 9.5.

Score: 8.5 / 10

11The Inner Law (Cosmos)

One law governs the record without exception: one voice, one guitar, say it and stop. Take the two most distant elements, the piano-coloured title song at the opening and Parasite’s long descent late on side two, or Horn’s wordless line against the four lines of Know. They obey the same law, and the record never breaks its own rule. From the Morning’s turn toward light is the one place the range widens, and the law holds there too. But narrowness is not coherence. The range the law governs is small in instrument, register and tempo, and to hold one law over a narrow range is less than to hold it over a wide one. Within that range the record covers more than its means suggest: an omen and a morning, a descent and a rising, a song of four lines and one of nearly four minutes, a piece with words and one without. The coherence is complete and the span it covers is short but not slight, and that sets the figure.

Score: 8.4 / 10

12The Encompassed (Megethos)

Judged on what the record holds, with no discount for the album form. Consciousness is held fully: a single mind, its withdrawal and its knowledge of its own state. The natural order is held more than in most records of its kind, moon, sun, harvest and morning, the turning year as the frame in which the mind moves. The two are held together, not listed: the withdrawal is measured against the year, and the turn to morning at the close belongs to both. Love is held at the edge, in Know and Which Will, as a question more than a relation; the city is glimpsed in Parasite. The family, labour, the state, history and the sacred are absent, or present only as the faintest evocation. Two orders held as one and two glimpsed, all in one voice: that small compass is what holds the axis lowest, and the figure describes the record, not a limit of the album.

Score: 6.7 / 10

Act IV · The Reckoning

8.3 / 10 · Final Average

Placement: Tier IV · Canonical

Strongest Dimensions

The Imperishable at 8.8, then The Living Form and The Sublime at 8.6, and The Inevitable, The Bottomless Well, Pressure on Tradition and The Made at 8.5. A record whole after fifty-four years whose voice and guitar carry almost no date; a form whose bareness is the condition it describes, with the sequence opening on one added colour and closing on morning; a quiet, cold height reached often in twenty-eight minutes; a return that has held for three decades and a late, wide reach as a model for intimate song; eleven songs that stop as soon as they are said; and guitar writing in open and altered tunings that bears load because nothing covers it.

Limiting Dimension

The Encompassed at 6.7: one mind held fully and the natural order held with it as its frame, love and the city glimpsed, and the family, labour, the state, history and the sacred absent. Below the rest, The Archetypal Deep at 8.0, The Swerve at 8.2 and The Unconcealment at 8.3: a year from omen to morning built by the sequence and borne by no figure, a turn with a real stake taken mostly from its maker’s own path onto a form the tradition held, and a condition stated in Place to Be, Parasite and Know but left oblique in Road, Which Will and Free Ride.

The Necessity Cap clears at 8.5 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears with room: The Living Form at 8.6, The Made at 8.5, The Inner Law at 8.4, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is unmet: The Imperishable at 8.8 and Pressure on Tradition at 8.5 clear the bar of 8.5, but The Unconcealment at 8.3, The Swerve at 8.2 and The Archetypal Deep at 8.0 fall short. The Universal Minimum is met: no axis but The Encompassed falls below 8.0, against 7.5, and The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 6.7. Four of the five summit conditions are met. The work stands where its aggregate places it: 8.3, in the lower half of Tier IV, short of the 9.0 that the summit requires.

Basis · the Island LP as first released in February 1972, eleven tracks in their original order on two sides, five and six, produced and engineered by John Wood at Sound Techniques, London. Judged from knowledge of the recording and its reception; no recording, lyric sheet or text was in hand. Later reissues and remasters are evidence for survival only; posthumous compilations and outtakes are not the object. Running times are given only roughly. Lyrics are quoted only in fragments of four words or fewer. Guitar tunings are described only in general terms. Facts that could not be verified, among them the day of release, the dates and number of the recording sessions, the circumstances in which the tapes reached the label, whether later editions keep the sequence unchanged, the record’s sales, the advertisement that carried the title song to a wide audience and its year, and the names of later songwriters who drew on the record, are not given.