The Fifth Desk · Evaluation

Act I · The Map

Literature · Novel · 20th c. · A New England college town in the hills, New York and the Jersey shore in the 1990s, with the street theatre of the 1950s, a youth at sea and the Second World War returning through memory

Sabbath’s Theater

Philip Roth · a novel · Houghton Mifflin, Boston, 1995 · scored on Roth’s English, read from knowledge; no text in hand, and English quoted only where its words are certain

The Plate · the proscenium of a small theatre, its curtain drawn back at the left; across the stage one heavy line, Sabbath’s, that drops at the start where Drenka dies and runs on in a broken rise and fall of short strokes, the riffs; three fine dashed loops fold back from it to the past, to the street act, the sea and the war; a small closed square on the line at the shore, the box, with a flag stroke above it; at the right a grave cut below the stage floor, and the heavy line coming down to its lip and turning back up and away, unable to go in

Mode

Comic novel of appetite as elegy; carnival, confession and an old man’s tragedy in one narration

Mythos

Prospero without his art, his every third thought his grave; Lear abdicating every decency on the way to a death he cannot take; the satyr or Pan in the New England hills; the descent to the dead, and the return still living

Phase

The last stretch of a sixty-four-year-old man’s life, from his mistress’s death to his return to her grave, with the 1950s, his youth at sea and the war folding back into it without warning

Presentation

Fiction; a long novel under an epigraph from The Tempest, told in a third person owned by the hero’s voice, which moves without warning into his direct speech, his imagined speech and the speech of the dead

Register

From obscene comedy and the tirade to elegy and self-prosecution, often inside one paragraph; the comic-grotesque and the elegiac in the same scene

Scale

One man, his dead and his women, a college town, a city and a shore

Governing Proposition

Mickey Sabbath, sixty-four, a disgraced puppeteer whose fingers arthritis has ended, loses his mistress Drenka, goes to New York for the funeral of a friend from his theatre days, abuses the hospitality of the friend who takes him in, opens at the Jersey shore the box of his dead brother’s things, and comes back to Drenka’s grave unable to die. The wager of the novel is that the outrage of a man who will not behave is grief, that the decorum he offends is a way of not looking at death, and that a comedy of appetite pushed past every limit can carry an elegy.

Every Third Thought

8.4 / 10
Tier IV · Canonical

Act II · The Essay

Movement I

Either Forswear

Over the whole book stands a line of Prospero’s from The Tempest: “Every third thought shall be my grave.” Then the first sentence: “Either forswear fucking others or the affair is over.” It begins in the middle of a negotiation between lovers, and in nine words it sets the terms of everything that follows: appetite, and the price put on it, and a man who will not pay. The epigraph and the opening sentence face each other across the threshold of the book, the grave and the bed, and the book will spend its length proving that they are one subject.

The man is Mickey Sabbath, sixty-four, a puppeteer whose fingers arthritis has ended and whose career has ended in disgrace. He lives in a New England college town in the hills. His first wife vanished; his second, Roseanna, drinks. His mistress is Drenka, who came to America from Europe. He is foul-mouthed, learned and unrepentant, and he offends the town as an old god of appetite might, by existing in it.

The narration is in the third person, and it is his. It takes on his idiom so thoroughly that it moves without warning into his direct speech, into the speech he imagines for others, into his self-prosecution and his self-defence, and into the speech of the dead. Time folds back in the same way, to the 1950s, to his youth at sea and to the war, so that the past arrives as it arrives to him, unannounced. The book is his last performance, and the reader sits in its audience, made complicit by laughter in what it is asked to judge.

Movement II

Drenka

Drenka dies. She dies in hospital, and her dying is one of the book’s heights, given in the same voice that has given their affair in all its detail. What remains to him is her grave, and he goes to it at night. The scenes there are obscene and devout at once: the grief takes the form of the appetite, because he has no other form for it.

The affair has been told at length, in sexual transcripts and recollections. They make the argument, that Sabbath answers death with appetite, and a lean book about him would contradict him. They also run past the point where they add knowledge, and the book half knows it. The question the criticism has kept asking is already here: whether Drenka is a person or Sabbath’s invention of her. She is seen wholly through him, and so is every woman in the book; Roseanna is drawn as a function of his need.

That vantage is the book’s limit and its method together. The disclosure it reaches holds for one man’s condition more than for a shared one, and the women’s lives are held from outside. But the voice that limits the book is also what lets it be inside him and see round him at once: told from a detached third person, Sabbath would be a case study of a degenerate; told in the first person, a confession with a confessor’s bias. As it stands, the reader is never let off deciding.

Movement III

Linc

His friend Linc has died, and the funeral takes Sabbath back to New York, the city where his theatre began. The book’s past opens here. In the 1950s the young Sabbath worked a street puppet act and was arrested for it: his finger reached from behind the screen to a girl’s breast. It was transgression as art, and art as transgression, and the old man is the same artist without the hands. The law that runs from that street act to everything after is the book’s one physics: every human act is a response to death, and the only choice is between lying about it and not.

In New York he stays with Norman and Michelle Cowan, and abuses their hospitality. The provocations at the Cowans’ are farce, and some of them restate one another; the tirades rise at their best to a comic sublime with a Rabelaisian height of its own, and at their worst are performance for its own sake. The book knows the difference, since its hero is a performer, and it lets both stand.

The inheritance is on show in these chapters: the Jewish American comic novel of Bellow, Roth’s own confessional monologue in Portnoy’s Complaint (1969), and behind them the carnival line of Rabelais, Céline and Henry Miller. The turn is in age and in refusal. An old man’s carnality and rage are given at full length, with no apology, no redemption and no frame of irony to excuse them, in a decade whose literary culture had grown wary of exactly this, and Roth received the charge that the book was repellent and that he shared its hero’s contempt.

Movement IV

Morty

At the Jersey shore Sabbath visits an ancient cousin, and there he comes on a box of his dead brother’s things. Morty, his older brother, was killed in the Second World War. The box holds the flag, the letters and a yarmulke. Sabbath wraps himself in the flag and puts on the cap, and the grief comes out of him so unguarded, after so much aggression, that the scene is the height of the book.

The box is the disclosure. Sabbath’s obscenity, his thefts and his cruelties rest on one fact, found late and fully: Morty’s death broke their mother and made the boy a man who would never again consent to the ordinary. The outrage of a man who will not behave is grief, and the decorum he offends is a way of not looking at death. The book does not settle whether the box explains him or only adds one more act, and a reader who returns to the early chapters knowing the box reads them differently.

The mother is here too. Her ghost attends her son, and the narration gives the dead a voice as plainly as the living. This is where the myth is built rather than quoted: the funeral, the cemetery, the mother’s ghost and the brother’s box make a descent to the dead, and the man who comes back from it comes back alive. Behind him lie the Jersey shore of a Jewish American childhood and the sea he went to as a youth, a merchant seaman; ahead of him is the grave he has been thinking of every third thought.

Movement V

Everything He Hated

Sabbath returns to Drenka’s grave. His last movement is Lear’s, raging, abdicating every decency, toward a death he cannot bring himself to take; it is also Prospero’s, a magician whose art is gone and whose every third thought is his grave. Beneath both runs the satyr, the god of appetite in the hills. The Shakespeare is carried partly by Sabbath’s own learning, quoted as much as built; the descent and the return are built.

The book ends on three sentences: “How could he leave? How could he go? Everything he hated was here.” Two questions and an answer reverse a whole life. The man who has spent the book refusing the world cannot leave it, because the refusal was itself a bond. Whether the ending is defeat or vitality, whether the book condemns him, celebrates him or does neither, it leaves open, and the argument has not closed in thirty-one years.

The book won the National Book Award for Fiction in 1995 and stands among critics, and among the novelists who name it, as one of Roth’s greatest books. It opened the late run that followed, American Pastoral, I Married a Communist and The Human Stain. It is also the book most often named in the case against Roth’s treatment of women, and it is little taught because of its content. Both facts belong to its survival. A comedy of appetite pushed past every limit turns out to have been an elegy all along, and the elegy is what a reader finds again on return.

Act III · The Twelve

1The Inevitable (Ananke)

The test is subtractive, and the book half invites it. The excess is the argument: Sabbath answers death with appetite, and a lean book about him would contradict him. The spine is required: Drenka’s death; the funeral of his friend Linc, which takes him back to the city of his theatre; his stay with Norman and Michelle Cowan and his abuse of their hospitality; the visit to his ancient cousin at the Jersey shore and the box of his dead brother’s things; the return to Drenka’s grave. Inside that spine the riffs repeat. The sexual transcripts and recollections run past the point where they add knowledge; the provocations at the Cowans’ restate one another; some tirades are performance for its own sake, which the book knows, since its hero is a performer. Perhaps a seventh of the whole is permitted rather than compelled, and that holds the axis lowest of the twelve.

Score: 7.9 / 10

2The Unconcealment (Aletheia)

The disclosure can be stated, and it holds: the outrage of a man who will not behave is grief, and the decorum he offends is a way of not looking at death. Sabbath’s obscenity, his thefts and his cruelties are found, late and fully, to rest on one fact, the death of his older brother Morty in the war, which broke their mother and made the boy a man who would never again consent to the ordinary. The second disclosure is the self as performance: a puppeteer who has lost the use of his hands performs himself instead, and the book will not let the reader decide whether anyone stands behind the act. Held at the bar and not above it because much of the force is a mood, a rage sustained for hundreds of pages, and because the women are seen almost wholly through Sabbath, so that the disclosure covers one man’s condition more than a shared one.

Score: 8.5 / 10

3The Sublime (Hypsos)

Elevation is frequent, and it comes in two registers, the comic-grotesque and the elegiac, often in the same scene. The box of Morty’s things, opened at the shore: the flag, the letters, the yarmulke, and Sabbath wrapping himself in the flag and wearing the cap, a grief so unguarded after so much aggression that it is the book’s height. The nights at Drenka’s grave, obscene and devout at once. Drenka dying in hospital. The mother’s ghost attending her son, the dead given a voice in the narration as plainly as the living. And the comic sublime of the tirades, which at their best reach a Rabelaisian height of their own. Held below the top because the obscene register, sustained, flattens by repetition, and because the elegiac heights gather in the later stretches of the book; the earlier ones rise less often.

Score: 8.6 / 10

4The Archetypal Deep (Mythos)

Myth built in part. Shakespeare is the frame: the epigraph is Prospero’s, and Sabbath is the magician of a small theatre who has lost his art and has only his grave to think of; his last movement, raging, abdicating every decency, toward a death he cannot bring himself to take, is Lear’s. Beneath it runs an older figure, the satyr or Pan, a god of appetite in the New England hills, offending the town. The descent to the dead is built: the funeral, the cemetery, the mother’s ghost, the brother’s box, and the hero’s return from the underworld still alive and unable to leave. These bear weight. Held below the gate because much of the Shakespeare is quotation and allusion carried by Sabbath’s own learning, evoked as much as built, and because the satyr is a manner more than a structure: Sabbath stays a particular man, an archetype only in flashes.

Score: 8.4 / 10

5The Swerve (Parekklisis)

The inheritance is the Jewish American comic novel of Bellow and of Roth himself, the confessional monologue of Portnoy’s Complaint (1969), and behind them the carnival line of Rabelais, Céline and Henry Miller. The turn is in age and in refusal: an old man’s carnality and rage given at full length, with no apology, no redemption and no frame of irony to excuse it, in a decade whose literary culture had grown wary of exactly this. The stake was real. Roth risked, and received, the charge that the book was repellent and that its author shared its hero’s contempt, and the book is still argued on those terms; it also opened the most productive decade of his career. Held below the gate because the instrument, the voice that runs on and spares nothing, had been Roth’s own since 1969, and the swerve is one of degree and of age more than of means.

Score: 8.3 / 10

6The Living Form (Entelecheia)

Change the form and much of the knowledge goes. The narration is in the third person but owned by Sabbath’s voice, slipping into his speech, his imagined interlocutors, his self-prosecution and his self-defence; the dead speak in it as easily as the living. The form is theatre: the novel is Sabbath’s last performance, and the reader is its audience, made complicit by laughter in what it is asked to judge. Told in a detached third person, the book would be a case study of a degenerate; told in the first person, a confession with a confessor’s bias. As it stands it can be inside him and see round him at once. Time folds back without warning to the 1950s, to his youth at sea and to the war, so that the past arrives as it arrives to him. Held off the top because the form’s moves recur, and stretches of riff are containers for performance rather than instruments of knowledge.

Score: 8.4 / 10

7The Bottomless Well (Apeiron)

Evidence over thirty-one years, real and contested. The book is central to the criticism of late Roth and to the long argument about his treatment of women; it is read beside Shakespeare and the carnival tradition, as an elegy for the Jewish American century, as a novel of old age, and as a test case in the ethics of reading a repellent hero. Its questions stay open: whether the book condemns Sabbath, celebrates him or does neither; whether the brother’s box explains him or only adds one more act; whether the ending, the hero unable to die, is defeat or vitality; whether Drenka is a person or Sabbath’s invention of her. On return the early chapters read differently once the box is known. Held below the higher figures because part of the argument the book has sustained is about its author, and because the obscene surface, once absorbed, yields less on the fifth reading than the elegy beneath it.

Score: 8.3 / 10

8Pressure on Tradition (Agon)

The field is the American novel of the 1990s. The intrinsic force: the book showed that the comic monologue of an appetitive man could carry elegy, and that the old man’s novel of rage and decline could be written at full pitch rather than in the mode of resignation. But the late run it opened redirected Roth more than it redirected others; no line of later novels can be shown to have turned on this one, and its manner was inimitable by design. Reach that belongs to the author’s career is not credited to the book. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: the National Book Award for Fiction in 1995; a standing among critics, and among novelists who name it, as one of Roth’s greatest books; and its place at the head of the late run that followed, American Pastoral (1997), I Married a Communist (1998) and The Human Stain (2000).

Score: 8.2 / 10

9The Imperishable (Aphtharsia)

Survival is weighed over thirty-one years, on form, then presence, then fabric. Form: the text survives whole, as published, and has stayed in print. Fabric: its surface is little fixed to its moment, since its periods, the street theatre of the 1950s, the war, a New England college town in the 1990s, are history by design. Presence is continuous among readers of serious fiction and in the criticism of Roth, and it is charged. The book is the one most often named in the case against Roth’s treatment of women; it is little taught because of its content; and since Roth’s death in 2018 his standing has been contested more openly than before. With presence charged on this book in particular, and narrower than a widely taught novel’s, the figure stands below the bar. Three decades demonstrate less than the centuries behind the summit.

Score: 8.4 / 10

10The Made (Techne)

Judged on Roth’s English, with no translation between. The command is of the long, propulsive sentence and of voice, and it is load-bearing: the prose moves from obscene comedy to elegy to self-prosecution inside a paragraph, and the turns are exactly timed. The opening sentence begins in the middle of a negotiation and sets the book’s terms in nine words; the last three sentences close on the reversal of a whole life in two questions and an answer. The set pieces are built at length without slack: the brother’s box, the funeral, the scenes at the Cowans’. The comic timing is as precise as any in American prose of the decade. Held below the top on three charges: the riffs repeat their mechanism and run past their work; the women other than Drenka, Roseanna above all, are drawn as functions of Sabbath’s need; and the obscene register, sustained, narrows the instrument it is meant to widen.

Score: 8.8 / 10

11The Inner Law (Cosmos)

One law governs: every human act is a response to death, and the only choice is between lying about it and not. Take the two most distant elements: the street puppet act of the 1950s for which the young Sabbath was arrested, his finger reaching from behind the screen to a girl’s breast, and the old man wrapped in his brother’s flag. They obey the same law: transgression as the refusal of a world that permits death, and comedy and grief as one appetite. The law holds across a wide range, from farce at the Cowans’ to the cemetery at night, from a merchant seaman’s youth to a dying woman’s bed. Charged: the swings of tone are mostly held, but at moments the comedy is performance with no law under it, and the book’s refusal to judge its hero leaves some of its moral physics asserted rather than tested.

Score: 8.5 / 10

12The Encompassed (Megethos)

Many orders, held by one life. Consciousness, at its most exposed. The body, in sex, illness, arthritis, cancer and age. The family: a dead brother, a broken mother, two wives, one vanished and one drinking. History: the Second World War, a Jewish American childhood on the Jersey shore, the theatre of the 1950s, a college town in the 1990s, and in Drenka an immigrant’s Europe. Art, in the puppet theatre and its loss. Religion, in Jewishness and the yarmulke from the box. Death and mourning, everywhere. The natural order, in the New England hills and the sea he went to as a youth. They are integrated, not listed: each is a field of the same refusal. What holds the axis is the vantage and what is thin: the state and labour barely appear, the women’s lives are held from outside, and every order passes through one consciousness that admits no other at its own weight.

Score: 8.3 / 10

Act IV · The Reckoning

8.4 / 10 · Final Average

Placement: Tier IV · Canonical

Strongest Dimensions

The Made at 8.8, then The Sublime at 8.6, then The Unconcealment and The Inner Law at 8.5. A long, propulsive sentence that moves from obscene comedy to elegy inside a paragraph, with an opening of nine words and a close of three sentences that reverse a life; heights in two registers, above all the box of Morty’s things at the shore; a disclosure that holds, that the outrage of a man who will not behave is grief; and one law, every act a response to death, governing the street act of the 1950s and the old man wrapped in his brother’s flag.

Limiting Dimension

The Inevitable at 7.9, held by the riffs inside a required spine: sexual transcripts that run past the point where they add knowledge, provocations at the Cowans’ that restate one another, tirades that are performance for their own sake, perhaps a seventh of the whole. Next above it, Pressure on Tradition at 8.2: a book that redirected its author’s career more than its field, its manner inimitable by design.

The Necessity Cap clears at 7.9 against a threshold of 7.5, by four tenths. The Coherence Floor clears with room: The Made at 8.8, The Inner Law at 8.5, The Living Form at 8.4, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is unmet on four axes: The Unconcealment meets the bar of 8.5 exactly, but The Archetypal Deep at 8.4 and The Imperishable at 8.4 fall a tenth short, The Swerve at 8.3 two tenths short and Pressure on Tradition at 8.2 three tenths short. The Universal Minimum is met (no axis falls below 7.9, against 7.5) and The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 8.3. Four of the five summit conditions are met; the summit is withheld on the Epochal Gate, and the aggregate, at 8.4, stands below it as well.

Basis · a reading from knowledge of Philip Roth’s Sabbath’s Theater, published by Houghton Mifflin, Boston, in 1995, and awarded the National Book Award for Fiction that year. It is scored as one novel as published, with its epigraph from The Tempest, which is part of the work, in Roth’s English, with no translation between. The book is in copyright and no text of it was in hand; nothing was measured on a text, and no quotation was checked against a file. The book is known in its people, its situation, its principal episodes and its opening and closing lines, less well in the order of episodes in its long later stretches, and not at the level of its divisions, which are not stated. Events are paraphrased, and English is quoted only where its words are certain: the epigraph, the opening sentence and the three closing sentences. Roth’s later novels, American Pastoral, I Married a Communist and The Human Stain, are named as the record of what followed and are neither scored nor credited here. Facts that could not be verified, among them the page and word counts, the titles of the book’s parts, its later collected editions and its record in other prizes, are not given. Citations are by episode.