The Fifth Desk · Evaluation

Act I · The Map

Film · Ensemble film in colour, a mosaic of cross-cut strands from the stories of Raymond Carver · 1993 · Los Angeles County, between a spraying from the air and an earthquake, in English

Short Cuts

Robert Altman · a film · 1993 · about 187 minutes · screenplay by Robert Altman and Frank Barhydt · the theatrical cut

The Plate · the film as ten strands laid side by side under a sky of falling spray, a few short strokes crossing between neighbouring strands for a car, a river and a telephone line, one strand stopped short, and at the right a single jagged line cutting through all ten at once, after which every strand runs on as before

Mode

Ensemble film of cross-cut strands, adapted from nine stories and a prose poem by Raymond Carver and joined into one city

Mythos

A city struck from above and below, a plague from the sky and an earthquake from the ground; a drowned girl in a river; a child dead on his birthday

Phase

Some days in Los Angeles County, from the night the helicopters spray malathion against the medfly to the earthquake that reaches every household

Presentation

Feature film in colour, in English, about 187 minutes; some twenty-two principal characters in about ten households, billed without a lead; overlapping recorded dialogue; jazz songs sung on screen by Annie Ross

Register

Level, ironic and observing; farce, domestic comedy, grief, suicide and murder cut side by side

Scale

One county, ten households and the trades that keep them, held for a few days

Governing Proposition

Helicopters spray the sleeping city against a fruit fly, and some twenty-two people in ten households go about their days within a few miles of one another: a television commentator and his wife whose son is struck by a car on his birthday, a waitress who drives the car, three men who fish for a weekend beside a drowned girl, a policeman who lies, a woman who talks to strangers on the phone for money, a cellist and her mother. They touch only by accident, and the cost of each one’s inattention falls on someone else. The wager of the film is that Carver’s short stories of private failure, cut together, can know what none of them knows alone: that a city is the sum of what each of its people does not see, and that an earthquake reaching every house at once changes almost nothing.

The Sum of What Each Does Not See

8.2 / 10
Tier IV · Canonical

Act II · The Essay

Movement I

Malathion

The film opens in the air. Helicopters fly in formation over Los Angeles at night, spraying malathion over the sleeping city against the medfly, and on a television screen the commentator Howard Finnigan, played by Bruce Davison, reports it. Under the noise the strands are introduced one by one, each in its own house. Before anyone has met anyone, the whole city has been struck from above by one order it did not choose.

Robert Altman and Frank Barhydt wrote the screenplay from nine stories and a prose poem, “Lemonade”, by Raymond Carver, and moved them from Carver’s Pacific Northwest to Los Angeles County. They crossed characters between stories that never met, and they invented a mother and daughter, Tess and Zoe Trainer, a jazz singer and a cellist, played by Annie Ross and Lori Singer, to carry the music. Walt Lloyd photographed the film, Geraldine Peroni edited it, and Mark Isham wrote the score; Cary Brokaw produced it for Avenue Pictures, and Fine Line Features released it in 1993.

The cast is billed without a lead. Some twenty-two principal characters live in about ten households or couples: the Finnigans, Howard and Ann, played by Davison and Andie MacDowell; the Wymans, Ralph and Marian, played by Matthew Modine and Julianne Moore; the Kanes, Stuart and Claire, played by Fred Ward and Anne Archer; the Kaisers, Jerry and Lois, played by Chris Penn and Jennifer Jason Leigh; the Shepards, Gene and Sherri, played by Tim Robbins and Madeleine Stowe; the Piggots, Earl and Doreen, played by Tom Waits and Lily Tomlin; the Weatherses, Stormy and Betty, played by Peter Gallagher and Frances McDormand; the Bushes, Bill and Honey, played by Robert Downey Jr. and Lili Taylor; and the Trainers. There are no acts. The film proceeds by cutting from house to house, and the cut is how it thinks.

Movement II

The Weekend on the River

Stuart Kane goes fishing for a weekend with two companions, played by Buck Henry and Huey Lewis. At the river they find the body of a young woman in the water. They do not go back. They make camp beside her, fish, eat and drink for the weekend, and report her when they leave. The drowned girl lies at their feet as an object, and the film holds on the indifference without comment.

At home, Claire Kane learns what her husband did, and her disgust at it is the one moral response in the film. It costs her marriage its ease. The question the fishermen raise, what is owed to a stranger, does not stay with them: it returns in the Wymans’ and the Kaisers’ scenes, carried from strand to strand as the film cuts. Altman’s overlapping sound keeps the same question in the ear. Everyone speaks, and few are heard.

Elsewhere the same law runs in other keys. Lois Kaiser works a phone-sex line from home, talking men to orgasm while she changes her baby, and her husband Jerry listens unaddressed. Gene Shepard, a policeman, lies to his wife and abandons the family dog. Stormy Weathers saws his wife’s furniture in half, played as farce. Each attends to his own grievance and not to the person in front of him, and the cost falls elsewhere.

Movement III

Casey

On his birthday the Finnigans’ son Casey is struck by a car. The driver is Doreen Piggot, a waitress. The boy gets up and walks home, and that is how the harm passes: unseen, between people who do not know each other. The car that strikes Casey connects a waitress’s household to a commentator’s, and the two households never learn what joins them.

Then Casey is in hospital. His birthday cake, ordered from a baker played by Lyle Lovett, is never collected, and the baker, who knows nothing of the boy, keeps telephoning the house about it. His calls fall on parents waiting for their son to wake, and they become torment. Here three households are bound together by an accident, a telephone and a hospital, and none of them by intention.

Paul Finnigan, Howard’s father, played by Jack Lemmon, arrives at the hospital, and in the night he talks at length about a betrayal decades old to a son who cannot hear it for his own dying child. It is the film’s highest dramatic sustain, a man attending to an old grievance while the present one lies in the next room. The boy dies on his birthday, and the film cuts to another house.

Movement IV

The Cello in the Garage

Marian Wyman makes her confession to her husband in one long argument at home, and Julianne Moore plays it through. The scene is at the centre of the argument over the film’s nudity and its women, whether they are seen or exploited, and the film neither settles that argument nor avoids it. At the Wymans’ party the river’s question comes into another house.

Tess Trainer sings in a club, jazz songs that Annie Ross sings on screen, and they give the film a lament it does not otherwise speak. Her daughter Zoe, a cellist, dies in the closed garage, the car engine running and the cello with her. The death is dreadful and cold, and the film gives it no more ceremony than it gives anything else.

Not every strand carries the same weight. The Bushes’ business, makeup and the minding of a neighbour’s house, is thinner than its screen time, and Stormy’s sawing makes a point made elsewhere. The comic strands deliberately flatten what follows them, and sometimes their tone works against the grief they are cut beside. But the mosaic is the argument: the city is the sum of what each strand does not see, and the film needs enough strands to make the sum.

Movement V

The Earthquake

Near the end a killing happens in Griffith Park. Then the earthquake comes, the one event every strand receives at once, from below as the spraying came from above. It reaches every household, and the film shows how little it changes: a random act and an earthquake arrive as the same news. The earthquake resolves nothing and is not meant to. It is half the film’s law and half a joke about Los Angeles.

The film shared the Golden Lion at Venice in 1993 with Kieslowski’s Three Colours: Blue, and the cast received a special award there for the ensemble; Altman was nominated for the Academy Award for Best Director. Many of Carver’s readers charged the film as a betrayal, of condescension, added nudity and a cynicism his stories do not have, and the argument has continued since. Whether the film honours its source or condescends to it is still open, and so is whether its closing equation of a killing with an earthquake is a judgment or a shrug.

In the decade after it the film of many strangers in one city became a mode of its own: Paul Thomas Anderson’s Magnolia, made by a director who has acknowledged Altman as his master, and the network films of the 2000s, Crash and Babel among them. What they took was the instrument rather than the knowledge: the cut between strangers. What Short Cuts used it to know is plainer and harder, that the people of a city live within a few miles of one another and meet only by accident, and that the cost of each one’s inattention falls on someone they will never see.

Act III · The Twelve

1The Inevitable (Ananke)

The subtractive test has to be run strand by strand, and most strands pay their way beyond themselves. Casey struck by Doreen’s car, the baker’s calls, the hospital and Paul Finnigan’s arrival bind three households. The fishermen beside the drowned girl set the film’s question of what is owed to a stranger, and that question returns in the Wymans’ and the Kaisers’ scenes. The length is compelled because accumulation is the argument: the city is the sum of what each strand does not see, and fewer strands would make a smaller claim. What gives: Stormy Weathers sawing the furniture is a comic set piece whose point is made elsewhere, and the Bushes’ business is thinner than its screen time.

Score: 7.7 / 10

2The Unconcealment (Aletheia)

The disclosure can be stated and it holds: in a city of contiguous lives, harm passes between strangers without being known, and those nearest the harm look away from it. The fishermen camp beside the dead girl for the weekend and report her when they leave; Claire Kane’s disgust is the one moral response, and it costs her marriage its ease. Lois Kaiser talks men to orgasm on the phone while she changes her baby, and her husband listens unaddressed. Gene Shepard, a policeman, lies to his wife and abandons the family dog. Image and sound carry it as much as speech. A tenth below the gate: the closing equation of a killing with an earthquake is asserted more than disclosed, and the charge of misogyny is partly fair.

Score: 8.4 / 10

3The Sublime (Hypsos)

Elevation is not the film’s mode, and that holds the axis lowest with The Archetypal Deep. The register is level, ironic and observing. When it rises, the rise is real. The night in the hospital, with Jack Lemmon’s Paul Finnigan talking at length about a betrayal decades old to a son who cannot hear it for his own dying child, is the film’s highest dramatic sustain. Annie Ross’s songs in the club give the film a lament it does not otherwise speak. Zoe Trainer’s death, the cello and the car engine running in the closed garage, is dreadful and cold. Frequency is the charge: three hours hold four or five such moments, and the comic strands deliberately flatten what follows them.

Score: 7.6 / 10

4The Archetypal Deep (Mythos)

The frame is mythic in outline, and that is what holds the axis lowest with The Sublime: outline, not structure. A plague comes from the sky at the start and an earthquake from the ground at the end, a city struck from above and below; between them a drowned girl lies in a river, the Ophelia figure turned into an object at the fishermen’s feet; a child dies on his birthday with his cake uncollected. But the film evokes more than it builds. The medfly and the quake are bookends, not structures that bear the stories’ weight, and the earthquake resolves nothing and is half a joke about Los Angeles. The particular stays wholly particular: pool cleaners, clown parties, limousine drivers. The archetype is glimpsed through it, not made load-bearing.

Score: 7.6 / 10

5The Swerve (Parekklisis)

The inheritance is Altman’s own: Nashville (1975) had made the multi-strand ensemble a form, with a public event at the close that gathers the strands, and A Wedding (1978) and The Player (1992) worked the same instrument. The turn here is to adapt a writer of compressed, single-incident stories into one mosaic, crossing characters between stories that never met, inventing a mother and daughter to carry the music, and moving a working-class Northwest to a mixed-class Los Angeles. The stake on the source was real: Carver’s readers charged it as a betrayal, and the film was made with independent money, at three hours, with no lead. The stake on the form was smaller, since the form was Altman’s proven path: five tenths short of the gate.

Score: 8.0 / 10

6The Living Form (Entelecheia)

Change the form and the film loses what it knows. Told as nine short films, Carver’s stories would remain nine stories of private failure. Cut together, the film knows what none of them knows: that the commentator’s family, the waitress, the cop and the pool cleaner live within a few miles and touch one another only by accident, a car in a road, a body in a river, a phone line. The cross-cutting is the instrument of that knowledge, not its container. The overlapping sound does the same work in the ear: everyone speaks, few are heard. The earthquake completes the form, the one event every strand receives at once, and it shows how little it changes. Held from the top because some crossings are coincidences of convenience.

Score: 8.5 / 10

7The Bottomless Well (Apeiron)

Evidence over thirty-three years. The questions are argued from the release and stay open: whether the film honours Carver or condescends to him; whether its nudity and its women are seen or exploited, Marian Wyman’s argument with her husband above all; whether the killing in Griffith Park, rhymed by the earthquake, is a judgment or a shrug. The film has entered the study of adaptation and of the network narrative, and it yields on return as an ensemble film yields: new crossings, new rhymes between strands, the ear catching what a second voice says under the first. Held at the figure because the writing on it is narrower than on Altman’s largest films, and a second viewing adds more connections than new meanings.

Score: 8.1 / 10

8Pressure on Tradition (Agon)

Released in 1993, so force and reach are scored together. The intrinsic force is real though inherited: the film showed that the literary short story could be the unit of a long film, and that a mosaic of strangers could carry a social diagnosis rather than a public spectacle. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: the multi-strand film of strangers became a distinct mode of the decade after it, in Paul Thomas Anderson’s Magnolia (1999), whose director has acknowledged Altman as his master, and in the network films of the 2000s, Crash (2004), Babel (2006) and others, most of them lesser; the Golden Lion marked it at once. The form was largely made in Nashville, and that holds the axis a tenth below the gate.

Score: 8.4 / 10

9The Imperishable (Aphtharsia)

Survival weighed on form, presence and fabric. The film as released survives whole, and its restorations and home editions are repair. Presence over thirty-three years is continuous but not wide: shown in repertory and retrospectives, kept in a prestige home edition, taught in courses on adaptation and on the ensemble film, and named wherever Altman is; its length and its ensemble without stars keep it out of the broad television rotation. The surface is somewhat fixed to its moment, the early-1990s Los Angeles of medfly spraying, phone-sex lines and the cast’s period styling, though the stories underneath date little. Thirty-three years are credited for what they show, and the bar is met exactly.

Score: 8.5 / 10

10The Made (Techne)

Command of the medium is high and bears weight. Geraldine Peroni’s editing keeps some twenty-two characters legible over three hours, and the cuts between strands are timed on rhyme: a glass of milk, a phone ringing, a body in water. Walt Lloyd’s camera roams and zooms within scenes so that the frame finds the person not speaking. The sound mix layers dialogue so that the ear chooses, as the eye does. The performances are among the best ensemble work of the decade: Julianne Moore’s long confession, Lemmon’s monologue, Lily Tomlin and Tom Waits, Jennifer Jason Leigh’s bored professional voice. The charges: broad comic playing in the Weathers and Bush strands, a few crossings made by contrivance, and an ending whose staging is looser than its idea.

Score: 8.5 / 10

11The Inner Law (Cosmos)

Take the two most distant elements: Stormy Weathers sawing his wife’s furniture in half, played as farce, and the Finnigans at their son’s bedside. One law governs both: people attend to their own grievance and not to the person in front of them, and the cost falls elsewhere. The law holds across the fishermen, the Shepards’ lies, the Wymans’ party and Lois’s calls, and it holds in the sound, where nobody finishes a sentence to someone listening. The range it covers is wide: farce, domestic comedy, grief, suicide and murder. The strain is in the comic strands, whose tone sometimes works against the grief they are cut beside, and in the earthquake, which belongs half to the law and half to a joke about the city.

Score: 8.2 / 10

12The Encompassed (Megethos)

Many orders are held in one structure. The family, in ten households: marriages failing, a child’s death, a parent’s old betrayal. Labour, unusually broad for American film: the waitress, the pool cleaner, the limousine driver, the phone-sex worker, the baker, the doctor, the television commentator, the policeman, the clown. The state, in the police and the spraying ordered from the air. The natural order, in the medfly, the river and the earthquake. The city as a social body. The cross-cutting integrates them more than it lists them: the car that strikes Casey connects a waitress’s household to a commentator’s. What holds it from the top: consciousness is shown from outside, history and the sacred are absent, and some households are present rather than held.

Score: 8.3 / 10

Act IV · The Reckoning

8.2 / 10 · Final Average

Placement: Tier IV · Canonical

Strongest Dimensions

The Living Form at 8.5, The Made at 8.5 and The Imperishable at 8.5, then The Unconcealment and Pressure on Tradition at 8.4. A form in which the cross-cut is the instrument of what the film knows; editing, camera, sound and an ensemble that keep twenty-two lives legible over three hours; a disclosure that harm passes unseen between strangers; and a mode the decade after it took up.

Limiting Dimension

The Sublime and The Archetypal Deep at 7.6: a level, ironic register that rises four or five times in three hours, and a frame of plague and earthquake that is evoked as bookends rather than built to bear the stories’ weight. Above them, The Inevitable at 7.7: the length is compelled by accumulation, but the Weathers and Bush strands could go with little loss.

The Necessity Cap clears at 7.7 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears with room: The Living Form at 8.5, The Made at 8.5, The Inner Law at 8.2, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is unmet on four axes: The Imperishable meets the bar of 8.5 exactly, but The Unconcealment at 8.4 and Pressure on Tradition at 8.4 fall a tenth short, The Swerve at 8.0 five tenths short and The Archetypal Deep at 7.6 nine tenths short. The Universal Minimum is met: of the eleven axes it covers, none falls below 7.6, against 7.5, and The Encompassed, which it exempts, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 8.3. Four of the five summit conditions are met. The work is held below the summit by the Epochal Gate, unmet on four axes, and by its aggregate, 8.2 from a sum of 97.8, against the 9.0 that Tier V requires.

Basis · a reading from knowledge of Short Cuts as released by Fine Line Features in 1993, the theatrical cut of about 187 minutes (some listings give 188), from the spraying over the city to the earthquake: directed by Robert Altman, written by Altman and Frank Barhydt from stories and a prose poem by Raymond Carver, produced by Cary Brokaw for Avenue Pictures, photographed by Walt Lloyd, edited by Geraldine Peroni, with a score by Mark Isham and songs sung on screen by Annie Ross. Later home editions are judged as transfers and repair and bear on The Imperishable only. No print, screenplay or recording was consulted, and Carver’s stories are not part of the work: the film is judged on what it achieves in its own medium. No dialogue is quoted, since no line is certain to the word. Details that could not be verified, among them the aspect ratio, the titles of the individual source stories, the order of scenes in the middle two hours, exactly which strand meets which at every crossing, the scene count, and whether the film keeps the ending of Carver’s story of the baker, are not given.