The Fifth Desk · Evaluation
Act I · The Map
Leonard Cohen · produced by John Simon · Columbia · ten songs, five to a side
Mode
Strophic song for one voice and fingerpicked acoustic guitar, in a liturgical and erotic diction, with voices and strings added around the core
Mythos
The guest received and departing; the Madonna and the madwoman in one figure, Christ as a drowned sailor, the gambler who is also Joseph; built in the first song, evoked across the rest
Phase
Ten songs, five to a side: an invocation, portraits of rivalry and shelter on side one, two leave-takings at the head of side two, and a bitter end that breaks into wordless noise
Presentation
Album; the first by its maker, issued by Columbia in December 1967; every song written and sung by him; no instrumental track
Register
A narrow baritone placed close and dry; a rolling guitar figure from flamenco and folk; female backing voices, strings and other colour, unevenly applied
Scale
One man’s dealings with women and with the sacred; a harbour city, a street, the gambler’s trade; little beyond
Governing Proposition
In 1967, the year of electric rock at its height, a thirty-three-year-old Montreal poet makes a record of ten slow, strophic, unamplified songs over a fingerpicked guitar, and finds the sacred inside the erotic: love as hospitality between strangers, given for a night and owed nothing, with Christ, Joseph and the sisters of mercy met inside it rather than above it.
Act II · The Essay
Movement I
The record opens on a guitar figure, fingerpicked and circling, and a voice that does not rise. Suzanne is a song about a woman by the river in a harbour city who serves “tea and oranges”, and about a Christ who “was a sailor”, drowned and keeping watch; both are reached by touch “with your mind”. Nothing in the singing marks the turn from one to the other. The beloved and the divine are met in one harbour and in one tone of voice, and in its first song the record states its whole method.
Leonard Cohen was thirty-three, a Montreal poet and novelist before he was a recording artist: Let Us Compare Mythologies (1956), The Spice-Box of Earth (1961), Flowers for Hitler (1964), Beautiful Losers (1966). Columbia issued this record in December 1967, produced by John Simon and recorded in New York that year: ten songs, five to a side, every one written and sung by Cohen, with a sepia self-portrait on the front. Judy Collins had recorded Suzanne in 1966, so the first song was known to a public before its author sang it.
The height of Suzanne arrives without volume. The image of Christ on the water lifts the song while the voice stays level, and the added voices and strings come in like light on the river. Here the myth is built, not summoned: the Madonna and the madwoman are one figure, the river is the passage between them, and the singer must follow both, while the particular holds in a harbour, a woman’s rags and feathers, a cup of tea. It is the one song on the record in which the archetype bears load from first verse to last, and the other nine are measured against it.
Movement II
The Stranger Song turns the thought round. Its man is a gambler who is also Joseph, “looking for a manger”, wanting shelter and unable to stay, and its woman has housed many such men before him. If Suzanne finds the sacred in the one who gives, this song finds the cost in the one who receives. Hospitality is the record’s ethic, and departure is its fate. Master Song, the other long portrait on side one, is darker: a song of rivalry in which the master who takes the woman away remains a shadow, and the song absorbs more than it lifts.
The form is incantation. The verses are long and strophic, the refrains short or absent, and under every one the guitar repeats its figure, so that each song is a meditation rather than a drama and the listener is held inside a slow repetition as the singer is held inside his obsessions. In The Stranger Song the figure does not change from beginning to end, and its sameness enacts the gambler’s patience. That is where form carries knowledge on this record, and where the grave, hypnotic height of the song comes from.
The centre of the making is commanded. Cohen’s guitar, fingerpicked in rolling patterns drawn from flamenco and folk, is exact and his own; his voice, narrow in range and failing at the top of it, is placed close and dry, so that its grain and timing carry the meaning. Yet the songs are not bound to this form. They pass whole into other singers’ arrangements, and the versions of Suzanne by Collins and by Nina Simone keep most of what it knows. The form is a fit vessel for the knowledge more than its instrument, and the record’s Living Form stands lowest of its axes but one.
Movement III
Sisters of Mercy closes side one in shelter. Two strangers take the singer in for a night, give him what he needs and ask for nothing, and the song names them “not departed or gone”. It is a waltz, and its height is fragile and lilting. The added voices and strings are discreet here and right, as they are on Suzanne, and grace arrives as a night’s lodging. Two travellers become a sacred order without ceasing to be two women met on the road.
The disclosure of the record can now be stated: love is hospitality between strangers, given for a night and owed nothing, and the sacred is met inside it rather than above it. Hey, That’s No Way to Say Goodbye will ask for an ending without blame, which is the same ethic at the door. The voice discloses as much as the words, flat, close and unsentimental. What holds the disclosure short of the gate is that it is mostly the singer’s own condition, rendered as a stance, and that the record’s meaning slides at times into its mood of grave tenderness.
The turn was real. In 1967, with electric rock at its height, a poet with a narrow baritone made a record of slow, unamplified songs in a liturgical and erotic diction, over a flamenco-derived figure, with no concession to rock rhythm, and staked a published name on a voice many heard as unmusical. The words made the turn more than the music did: devotional imagery made intimate, without irony and without protest. But Dylan had already made the long literary song a popular form, and Collins had already carried Suzanne to a public. The swerve is in register, not in kind.
Movement IV
Side two opens in leave-taking. So Long, Marianne rises by its chorus, the one place on the record where the voice sings out, and its “laugh and cry” is the most open feeling the record allows. Hey, That’s No Way to Say Goodbye follows and answers it, a quieter parting that asks for an ending without blame. Two leave-takings stand back to back at the head of the side, one sung out and one held in, and the sequence turns from the shelter of side one toward departure.
Here the making is least sure. The female voices on So Long, Marianne are pleasant and generic, and some of the colour on side two is decoration that sits on the songs rather than in them. The subtractive test bites on this side. Stories of the Street is the most diffuse of the ten, its images arriving without the pull of the others; Teachers is slighter, a riddle-song that restates the seeker’s stance without adding to it. Both summon figures that carry no weight, and neither would be missed as Suzanne or The Stranger Song would be.
The reach of these songs is long. Several became standards within a few years, and Robert Altman built McCabe & Mrs. Miller (1971) on three of them; the film, which made the songs the voice of a whole world, stands on this desk at 8.5, above the record, and rightly above it on The Living Form. The grave literary singer who came after measures himself against Cohen, and this record is where the measure begins. Much of that reach runs through the whole career rather than the first album, and the larger reorganisation of what a popular song could carry had been Dylan’s.
Movement V
The record ends in spite. One of Us Cannot Be Wrong is devotion turned bitter: the singer lights “a thin green candle” to make a lover jealous, and at the end the song breaks into wordless howling. It is the one place where the record’s restraint gives way, and the record’s law survives it, because devotion turned sour is still devotion and the breakdown is the restraint failing, not a second physics. But the coda is added more than required, and it reads as indulgence more than design. The record’s range is otherwise narrow, from waltz to dirge, and it holds its law partly because it rarely tests it.
What the record holds is narrow and closely joined. Consciousness is held fully, in the singer’s watchful, guilty, devoted self; the couple in many forms, the muse, the rival’s lover, the woman who houses strangers, the parting; and the sacred as no other order is, Christ, Joseph, the sisters and the master folded into the erotic rather than set beside it. The city enters as Montreal’s harbour and as the street of Stories of the Street, money as the gambler’s trade. Labour, the family beyond lovers, the state, history and the natural order beyond river and winter are absent or glimpsed.
The record has lasted whole. It has stayed in print, remastered without change of sequence, and its voice and acoustic guitar carry almost no date; the female backing parts, some string and jaw-harp colour and the last song’s coda are of 1967. Four of its songs are still sung and broadcast, more than the album is heard whole, and the late revival of Cohen’s standing brought listeners back to it. It stands at 8.2, a tenth below After the Gold Rush and four tenths below Blood on the Tracks, the nearest page in form: ten strophic songs of love and leaving, held from the summit by a form its songs can leave and a world that one voice holds closely and narrowly.
Act III · The Twelve
Ten songs on two sides of five, and most resist the subtractive test, because each is a different station of one man’s dealings with women and with the sacred. Suzanne must open: it states the method, the beloved and the divine met in one harbour city. The Stranger Song and Master Song are the long portraits of rivalry and departure; Sisters of Mercy closes side one in shelter; So Long, Marianne opens side two in leave-taking, and Hey, That’s No Way to Say Goodbye answers it more briefly. The test bites on side two. Stories of the Street is the most diffuse of the ten; Teachers, a riddle-song, restates the seeker’s stance without adding to it; and the wordless coda of One of Us Cannot Be Wrong is added more than required.
Score: 8.2 / 10
The disclosure can be stated: love here is hospitality between strangers, given for a night and owed nothing, and the sacred is met inside it rather than above it. Suzanne gives the whole thought in the first song: a woman by the river who serves “tea and oranges”, a Christ who “was a sailor”, both reached by touch “with your mind”. Sisters of Mercy finds grace in two strangers who give shelter and ask nothing; The Stranger Song turns the claim on the man who receives it, “looking for a manger”. The voice, flat, close and unsentimental, discloses as much as the words. Held below the gate: the condition is mostly the singer’s own, rendered as a stance, and the meaning slides at times into a mood of grave tenderness.
Score: 8.4 / 10
Elevation is quiet and frequent, and about five of the ten songs rise. Suzanne is the summit: the fingerpicked figure circling, the voice level, and the image of Christ on the water lifting the song without any rise in volume, the added voices and strings arriving like light on the river. Sisters of Mercy has a fragile height in its waltz. So Long, Marianne rises by its chorus, the one place the record sings out, and its “laugh and cry” is the most open feeling on it. The Stranger Song reaches a grave, hypnotic height by repetition. Master Song absorbs more than it lifts; Winter Lady and Teachers are slight, and Stories of the Street stalls. The height is real and never overwhelming, a little below Low at 8.8.
Score: 8.4 / 10
Myth is built in Suzanne and evoked across the rest. In Suzanne the archetype is load-bearing: the Madonna and the madwoman in one figure, the drowned Christ as a sailor keeping watch, the river as the passage between them, and the singer who must follow both, while the particular holds in a harbour, a woman’s rags and feathers, a cup of tea. The Stranger Song builds a second figure, the gambler who is also Joseph, wanting shelter and unable to stay, and the woman who has housed many such men. Sisters of Mercy makes two travellers into a sacred order. Held below the gate: the frame is assembled from songs rather than built as a whole, Master Song’s master is a shadow, and Teachers and Stories of the Street summon figures that carry no weight.
Score: 8.3 / 10
The inheritance is the folk revival as Dylan had turned it toward literary language, Judy Collins’s art-song folk, and the poet’s own lyric. The turn is real: in 1967, with electric rock at its height, a thirty-three-year-old poet with a narrow baritone made a record of slow, strophic, unamplified songs in a liturgical and erotic diction, over a flamenco-derived guitar figure, with no concession to rock rhythm. The words are the turn more than the music: devotional imagery made intimate, without irony or protest. The stake was real, a published writer staking his name on a voice many heard as unmusical. Held below the gate: Dylan had already made the long literary song popular, and Collins had already carried Suzanne to a public. The swerve is in register, not in kind.
Score: 8.2 / 10
Change the form and part of what the record knows goes with it, but not all. The form carries incantation: long strophic verses over a repeating guitar figure, so that each song is a meditation rather than a drama, and the listener is held inside a slow repetition as the singer is held inside his obsessions. The Stranger Song’s unchanging figure enacts the gambler’s patience. The sequence is counted here, once: an invocation, portraits of rivalry and shelter on side one, leave-takings opening side two, and a bitter end whose collapse into wordless noise turns the record’s restraint inside out. Against it stands the substitution test: these songs pass whole into other arrangements, and the versions of Suzanne by Collins and by Nina Simone keep most of what it knows. The form is a fit vessel more than the instrument of the knowledge, and that holds it under 8.0.
Score: 7.9 / 10
Fifty-nine years supply evidence, and most of it is semantic. The words have drawn continuous return: Cohen’s lyrics are studied as poetry in Canada and beyond, and the songs are taught and annotated. They keep yielding to singers who read them differently, Collins with grace, Simone with gravity, later interpreters more darkly, and Suzanne alone has sustained readings as erotic, religious and civic. The formal yield is smaller: the guitar figures and strophic forms are taken in on first hearing, and return finds little new in the music. Some songs are thin on return, and part of the depth found here is cast back on the first record from Cohen’s later work. The well is deep in the words and shallow in the sound.
Score: 8.4 / 10
The field is the folk and singer-songwriter record of 1967 and the years after. The intrinsic force is real and bounded: the record showed that popular song could carry the grave, devotional and erotic lyric of a serious poet, sung plainly by an untrained voice, and that a whole album could be built in that register. It did not reorganise the music; it reorganised what the words of a popular song could be allowed to weigh, and Dylan had made the larger part of that change first. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: several songs became standards within a few years; Robert Altman built McCabe & Mrs. Miller (1971) on three of them; and the grave literary singer who came after measures himself against Cohen. Much of that reach runs through the whole career, and that discount holds the figure.
Score: 8.2 / 10
Survival is weighed over fifty-nine years, on form, then presence, then fabric. The form is whole: the recording survives as issued and has stayed in print, remastered without change of sequence. Presence is continuous and has widened: Suzanne, So Long, Marianne, Hey, That’s No Way to Say Goodbye and Sisters of Mercy are still sung and broadcast, and the late revival of Cohen’s standing brought listeners back to the first record. Charged: the songs are more present than the album heard whole, and popularity is presence, not proof. The fabric is light, since voice and acoustic guitar carry almost no date, though the female backing parts, some string and jaw-harp colour and the last song’s coda are of 1967. It stands below Kind of Blue at 9.0, which has the widest presence.
Score: 8.8 / 10
Command of the recorded medium. The centre of the making is load-bearing: Cohen’s guitar, fingerpicked in rolling patterns drawn from flamenco and folk, is exact and distinctive, and his voice, narrow in range, is placed close and dry so that its grain and timing carry the meaning; the phrasing of Suzanne and The Stranger Song is a real command. John Simon’s arrangements are uneven. On Suzanne and Sisters of Mercy the added voices and strings are discreet and right; elsewhere they sit on the songs rather than in them, the female voices on So Long, Marianne pleasant and generic, some colour on side two decoration, and the last song ending in a noise that reads as indulgence more than design. The voice’s limits show at the top of its range. It stands below Remain in Light at 8.7 and above It’s My Life at 7.8.
Score: 8.1 / 10
One law governs the record: a low voice addressing women, and through them the sacred, over a repeating acoustic figure, in grave tenderness without irony. Take the two most distant elements: the hushed devotion of Suzanne, and the end of One of Us Cannot Be Wrong, where the singer lights “a thin green candle” to make a lover jealous and the song breaks into wordless howling. They obey the same law: devotion turned sour is still devotion, and the breakdown is the restraint giving way, not a second physics. Otherwise the range is narrow, from waltz to dirge, and narrowness is not coherence: the record holds its law partly because it rarely tests it. The added colour sometimes pulls against the law, and that holds the figure.
Score: 8.3 / 10
Judged on what the record holds, with no discount for the album form. Consciousness is held fully, in the singer’s watchful, guilty, devoted self. The couple is held in many forms: the muse, the rival’s lover in Master Song, the woman who houses strangers, the parting in So Long, Marianne. The sacred is held as no other order is, Christ, Joseph, the sisters and the master folded into the erotic rather than set beside it. The city enters as Montreal’s harbour and the street of Stories of the Street; money as the gambler’s trade. Labour, the family beyond lovers, the state, history and the natural order beyond river and winter are absent or glimpsed. Few orders, lying close together and integrated by one voice: that holds the figure lowest on the record, below Remain in Light at 7.6.
Score: 7.3 / 10
Act IV · The Reckoning
8.2 / 10 · Final Average
Placement: Tier IV · Canonical
Strongest Dimensions
The Imperishable at 8.8; then The Unconcealment, The Sublime and The Bottomless Well at 8.4. A record whole and in print after fifty-nine years, its voice and guitar carrying almost no date and four of its songs still sung; a disclosure of love as hospitality between strangers, with the sacred met inside it; quiet height on about half its songs, Suzanne the summit; and words that keep yielding to readers and singers.
Limiting Dimension
The Encompassed at 7.3: consciousness, the couple and the sacred held and integrated by one voice, the city and money glimpsed, and labour, the family, the state, history and most of the natural order absent. Below the rest, The Living Form at 7.9: an incantatory form that carries the knowledge in Suzanne and The Stranger Song, but a vessel the songs can leave, as their other singers have shown.
The Necessity Cap clears at 8.2 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears: The Living Form at 7.9, The Made at 8.1, The Inner Law at 8.3, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is unmet: The Imperishable at 8.8 clears the bar of 8.5, but The Unconcealment at 8.4, The Archetypal Deep at 8.3, The Swerve at 8.2 and Pressure on Tradition at 8.2 fall short. The Universal Minimum is met: no axis but The Encompassed falls below 7.9, against 7.5, and The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 7.3. Four of the five summit conditions are met. The work stands where its aggregate places it: 8.2, in the lower part of Tier IV, short of the 9.0 that the summit requires.
Basis · the LP as first issued by Columbia in December 1967, ten songs in their original order, five to a side, produced by John Simon and recorded in New York in 1967. Judged from knowledge of the recording and its reception; no recording or lyric sheet was in hand. Later editions carry the same ten songs in the same order; any tracks added to them are not the object. Covers of the songs, among them Judy Collins’s Suzanne of 1966 and Nina Simone’s, are evidence for reach and survival only. Lyrics are quoted only in fragments of four words or fewer. Facts that could not be verified, among them the day of release, the part John Hammond took in the sessions, the recording dates and studios, the singers and players beyond Cohen and the credit for each added instrument, the track lengths and running time, the image on the back of the sleeve, the chart positions, the singer’s own view of the arrangements, the models he named, and which songs Altman’s film uses, are not given.