The Fifth Desk · Evaluation

Act I · The Map

Literature · Novel in six chapters · 20th c. · San Narciso, a Californian city that is a dead man’s estate, with its motel, its bars, its lake and its defence plant, and a night in San Francisco, in the 1960s

The Crying of Lot 49

Thomas Pynchon · a novel in six chapters · J. B. Lippincott, 1966 · scored on Pynchon’s English, read from knowledge; no text in hand, and English quoted only where its words are certain

The Plate · the six chapters on one line; at the start a small tower with fine threads spilling from its window down to the line; small post horns set along the way, sparse at first and crowded over the fifth chapter; a framed stage over the third; and at the end the line dividing into two parallel strokes with nothing between them, both stopping short of a closed door

Mode

Detective novel turned against its own solution; comic satire, quest and elegy in one short narration

Mythos

The riddle-solver who may be the author of the riddle, inverted; the maiden in the tower who weaves what she takes for the world; the quest through a waste land; Narcissus in the city’s name

Phase

From the news of a will to the instant an auctioneer begins the sale of a lot of stamps, in the 1960s

Presentation

Fiction; six numbered chapters in close third person, never leaving Oedipa’s point of view; an invented Jacobean revenge play summarised and partly given in blank verse, with songs and acronyms embedded; the title as the book’s last words

Register

From slapstick and the comic catalogue of names to a pastiche of Jacobean blank verse and a long lyrical paragraph of pity

Scale

One woman, an estate the size of a city, and the excluded country beneath it

Governing Proposition

Oedipa Maas learns that she has been named executor of the estate of Pierce Inverarity, whose property is the better part of a city, and goes to San Narciso to sort it out; there she finds a post horn drawn on a latrine wall, a Jacobean revenge play with one line about Trystero, forged stamps and a secret postal system, and comes to doubt whether she has found a hidden America, a dead man’s hoax or her own madness. The wager of the novel is that the America of the postwar boom is a closed estate beneath which the excluded keep their own channels, that in a society saturated with information pattern and paranoia cannot be told apart from inside, and that a detective story which stops at the instant before its answer can leave the reader exactly where its heroine stands.

Excluded Middles

8.5 / 10
Tier IV · Canonical

Act II · The Essay

Movement I

Executrix

The book opens on a will. Oedipa Maas learns that she has been “named executor, or she supposed executrix”, of the estate of Pierce Inverarity, a man of vast property, and the first sentence holds a social world and a mind in one breath: the correction she makes to the word is the first sign of a woman who will spend the book revising what she reads. Around her stand the first of the cast, her husband, Mucho Maas, and Dr Hilarius, and a Tupperware party.

Behind her stands a painting. In Mexico City, once, Oedipa wept before a painting by Remedios Varo of girls in a tower, embroidering a tapestry that spills out of the windows and becomes the world. The image governs everything after it: a self shut in a tower, weaving what it takes to be the world outside. The question the book will put to her is whether the world she is about to read is one she has woven.

She goes to San Narciso to sort out the estate. The city is in large part Inverarity’s property, an estate the size of a city, and Narcissus is in its name. The executor of a dead man’s will is set to read a city as a document, and the reading begins.

Movement II

W.A.S.T.E.

At the Echo Courts motel there is Metzger, who was once the child actor Baby Igor, and a game of Strip Botticelli in which Oedipa puts on all her clothes, while a band called the Paranoids, a parody of the British Invasion, wait on the lawn. The comedy runs long, and it is not idle: every exchange in it is a question of what passes between people, signal or noise.

Then the signal appears. On a latrine wall there is a post horn, and at a bar called the Scope there is the system it marks, with the acronym that names it: “W.A.S.T.E.”, which stands for “We Await Silent Tristero’s Empire”. A whole system of communication runs under the official one, and the people who use it are the people the estate does not see.

The city is full of signs that may or may not be connected: Yoyodyne, the defence contractor; Lake Inverarity; the story of the Inamorati Anonymous. The names are cartoons, and they are dense and exact. Each is a clue or a joke, and the book never lets the reader be sure which.

Movement III

Tryst with Trystero

Oedipa sees a play: The Courier’s Tragedy, by Richard Wharfinger, an invented Jacobean revenge play, which the book summarises at length and gives in part in blank verse with a real ear for the period. It is a revenge plot that turns on a changed text, and its one line about the Tristero ends “tryst with Trystero”. It is the only place in the book where the Tristero speaks with a history.

The director, Driblette, takes the play as his own projection, a world that exists because he gives it one. Later he walks into the Pacific. The question he raises is the book’s own: “Shall I project a world?”

John Nefastis has a machine. It holds Maxwell’s Demon, sorting fast molecules from slow, and it needs a sensitive who can feed the Demon information. Entropy in the physics and entropy in the message become one figure, and the book’s law is stated in the device: sorting signal from noise costs something, and the sorter may be the source of the order she finds.

Movement IV

The Night Walk

The history of the Tristero grows behind the play: Thurn and Taxis, the postal monopoly of old Europe, and a rival that opposed it; the Pony Express; forged stamps, and Genghis Cohen among them; the editions of Wharfinger, and Emory Bortz, who knows them. The evidence accumulates and never closes.

Then Oedipa walks all night through San Francisco, and the book rises. Everywhere she goes she finds the post horn: among the old, the addicted, the obsessive and the dispossessed, a whole country that the official country does not see, and that speaks, if at all, by its own channels. No exposition in the book discloses as much as this walk.

In a rooming house an old sailor is shaking with the delirium tremens, and Oedipa holds him. The scene is the book’s purest height, a pity close to the religious, and it is given in a long lyrical paragraph that does not slacken. Whatever the Tristero is, the sailor is real, and the walk has found him.

Movement V

The Crying of Lot 49

Around Oedipa the men of the book are lost to her. Hilarius breaks down and appears at a window with a rifle. Mucho is changed by LSD. Driblette is gone into the sea. The comic turns grow darker as they thin, and she is left alone with the estate and the question.

She sets out the alternatives. Either there is a Tristero, a real America beneath the estate; or Pierce Inverarity laid the whole as a hoax, a last joke from the grave; or she has made it, and is mad. Between them there is nothing to stand on: these are the “excluded middles” she cannot escape, in a world where pattern and paranoia cannot be told apart from inside.

Inverarity’s stamps are to be sold at auction as lot 49, and a bidder has come for them. The room is locked. The auctioneer begins, and the book ends at the instant before the bidder declares himself, on its own title: “the crying of lot 49”. The answer is withheld, and the reader is left where Oedipa stands.

Act III · The Twelve

1The Inevitable (Ananke)

The test is subtractive, and it finds the spine required and the ornament partly permitted. Each clue Oedipa follows is necessary: the post horn on the latrine wall, the play with its one line about Trystero, the stamps, the night walk, the editions of Wharfinger, the auction. The Courier’s Tragedy, long as its summary is, cannot go, since it is the only place the Tristero speaks with a history. What could go with little loss is part of the comic machinery: the full length of Strip Botticelli and of Metzger’s career as the child actor Baby Igor, the Paranoids’ songs, part of the Inamorati Anonymous story, and the more cartoonish turns of Dr Hilarius’s breakdown. Each of these carries the theme of signal and noise, so none is idle, but each runs past the point where it adds a turn. Perhaps a tenth of the whole is permitted rather than compelled.

Score: 8.3 / 10

2The Unconcealment (Aletheia)

The disclosure can be stated. The America of the postwar boom is a closed estate, owned and willed by its Inveraritys, and beneath it lives a whole country of the excluded, the old, the addicted, the obsessive and the dispossessed, who communicate, if at all, by channels the estate does not carry. The night walk through San Francisco brings this into the open as no exposition could: Oedipa finds the post horn everywhere among people the official country does not see. The second disclosure is about knowing: in a society saturated with information, pattern and paranoia cannot be told apart from inside, and Oedipa’s alternatives at the end, a real Tristero, a hoax laid by Pierce or her own madness, are the “excluded middles” she cannot escape. The axis meets the bar and goes no higher, because the second disclosure is partly a mood of dread, and the book withholds by design the ground on which the first could be tested.

Score: 8.5 / 10

3The Sublime (Hypsos)

Elevation comes in a few great moments set in a comic medium. Oedipa weeping in Mexico City before Remedios Varo’s painting of girls in a tower, embroidering a tapestry that spills from the windows and becomes the world, is the first height, and its image of a self that weaves what it takes to be the world governs the rest. The night walk rises continuously, and the old sailor shaking with the delirium tremens, whom Oedipa holds, is the book’s purest transport, a pity close to the religious. The last page, the auction room locked and the bidder about to declare himself, is a suspended sublime. Held in the low eights because much of the book is slapstick and satire, and its heights are few and spaced.

Score: 8.3 / 10

4The Archetypal Deep (Mythos)

Much of the myth is built. Oedipa’s name carries the riddle-solver who finds that the riddle is about himself, and the book inverts the pattern: the quest yields no answer, and the question becomes whether the solver has made the world she reads. The maiden in the tower, from the Varo painting, is built into that question, a woman weaving what she takes for the world. The quest for the Grail runs through the waste land of San Narciso and the system called W.A.S.T.E., and Narcissus is in the city’s name. Held a tenth below the bar because the myths are layered as allusion as often as they are load-bearing, and because Oedipa, by design, is more a reader of patterns than a figure who bears one.

Score: 8.4 / 10

5The Swerve (Parekklisis)

The inheritance is the detective novel of the California private eye, Borges’s fictions of invented worlds and hidden orders, Nabokov’s play, the Jacobean revenge tragedy, and Pynchon’s own V. (1963), which had already built a long novel on the quest for a conspiracy that may be imaginary. The swerve is the detective story that refuses its solution and ends at the instant before revelation, with a woman as the detective and the postal system as the conspiracy, so that the genre of certainty becomes the genre of undecidable knowledge. The stake was smaller than V.’s: a short, accessible book after a large one, in a genre frame. Held two tenths below the bar because the undecidable quest was V.’s and Borges’s before it was this book’s, and the turn here is concentration more than departure.

Score: 8.3 / 10

6The Living Form (Entelecheia)

Change the form and the knowledge goes. The novel is a detective story whose last scene is withheld, and the withholding is the whole of its knowledge: told to a solution, in either direction, it would become a thriller or a case history; ended at the crying, it leaves the reader where Oedipa stands, between a real Tristero and a projected one, with no ground to choose. The reader’s work is the heroine’s, sorting signal from noise in a text dense with names, acronyms and false leads, and the book’s discourse on entropy, Nefastis’s machine and Maxwell’s Demon with the sensitive who must feed it information, is built into what the reader does. The play within the novel, a revenge plot that turns on a changed text, mirrors the novel’s concern with corrupted transmission. Held below the top because some set pieces are containers for comedy rather than instruments, and the short form limits how far the method can be tested.

Score: 8.7 / 10

7The Bottomless Well (Apeiron)

Evidence over sixty years: for its length the book has drawn one of the largest critical literatures of any American novel of its decade, and it has been a standing text in the teaching of postwar fiction. The questions it plants do not close: whether the Tristero exists; whether Pierce Inverarity designed the whole as a last joke; who the bidder for lot 49 is; how the book’s imagery of the Word and the tongues relates to its thermodynamics; whether the excluded America is a fact or Oedipa’s need. Each rereading finds a new connection among the names and the clues. Held in the mid eights because part of what the scholarship does is decoding, which is difficulty before it is depth, and because a reserve about the book’s manner is shared by many who return to it.

Score: 8.5 / 10

8Pressure on Tradition (Agon)

The field is American fiction of the 1960s in English: Heller, Vonnegut, Barth, Barthelme, Bellow and Pynchon’s own V. The intrinsic force is real: the book gave the anti-detective novel its compact American form and made paranoia an epistemology for the novel, a way of asking how a culture of information can be known at all. Held a tenth below the bar because much of the reach belongs to Pynchon’s work as a whole, with V. and Gravity’s Rainbow carrying the larger reorganisation, and because this book concentrates a method rather than founding one. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: it became the most taught of Pynchon’s books and, for many readers and syllabi, the usual entry to American postmodern fiction; its figure of the quest for an undecidable conspiracy passed into later fiction; and the post horn has become a sign beyond the book.

Score: 8.4 / 10

9The Imperishable (Aphtharsia)

Survival is demonstrated over sixty years. The text survives whole, as published, and has been in print continuously. Presence is wide and steady through teaching and translation: it is a set text in many university courses and the usual first Pynchon, though its presence among general readers is narrower than that of the most widely read American novels of its decade. Its surface is fixed hard to its moment: Tupperware, a disc jockey’s station called KCUF, experiments with LSD, a parody of a British Invasion band, a defence contractor named Yoyodyne. That surface is the subject, the culture of signals the book anatomises, and it has dated into period rather than into irrelevance; the book reads more pertinently in an age of networks than in its own. It stands at the foot of the usual figure for its span, and sixty years demonstrate less than centuries.

Score: 8.8 / 10

10The Made (Techne)

Judged on Pynchon’s English, with no translation between. The command is of the long, comic, swerving sentence and of register. The opening, in which Oedipa learns she has been “named executor, or she supposed executrix”, compresses a social world and a mind into one sentence; the pastiche of The Courier’s Tragedy imitates Jacobean blank verse with a real ear and turns on one line ending “tryst with Trystero”; the night walk sustains a long lyrical paragraph without slackening. The invented names, songs and acronyms are dense and exact in their function, and “Shall I project a world?” states the book’s question as a question. Charges hold it below the top: the names and the slapstick sometimes thin the characters to devices; some passages overwrite; and the comedy at moments strains, as with Hilarius at the window with a rifle.

Score: 8.6 / 10

11The Inner Law (Cosmos)

Take the two most distant elements: the game of Strip Botticelli in the Echo Courts motel, Oedipa putting on all her clothes with the Paranoids on the lawn, and the old sailor in a rooming house, shaking with the delirium tremens. They obey one law: every encounter is a problem of transmission, of whether what passes between people is signal or noise, and the book’s entropy, thermodynamic and informational at once, governs the comic and the elegiac alike. Mucho’s LSD, Hilarius’s paranoia, Driblette’s walk into the Pacific and the forged stamps are all instances of it. The range is wide in tone, from slapstick to elegy. Charged: the cartoon physics of some comic turns runs looser than the night walk, and the short span limits the range on which the law is tested.

Score: 8.6 / 10

12The Encompassed (Megethos)

For a short novel it holds many orders, joined by one question, what can be communicated. Consciousness, in Oedipa’s suspicion of her own mind. Marriage, in Mucho, and sex, in Metzger. Property and capital, in Inverarity’s estate, which is a city. The military and industrial order, in Yoyodyne. History, in Thurn and Taxis and the Pony Express. The state, as the postal monopoly. Science, in thermodynamics and information. The sacred, in the Word and the tongues. Class and the dispossessed, in the night walk. They are integrated, not listed. What holds the axis lowest of the twelve is that the form holds these orders as signals rather than as lives: the family across time, labour and the natural order are thin, and the dispossessed are glimpsed in a night rather than held. A low mark on a short form describes the form.

Score: 8.0 / 10

Act IV · The Reckoning

8.5 / 10 · Final Average

Placement: Tier IV · Canonical

Strongest Dimensions

The Imperishable at 8.8, then The Living Form at 8.7, and The Made and The Inner Law at 8.6. Sixty years of continuous presence in print and in teaching, the period surface being the very subject the book anatomises; a detective story whose withheld last scene is the whole of its knowledge, leaving the reader where its heroine stands; a comic, swerving sentence that holds a Jacobean pastiche and a long paragraph of pity; and one law of transmission, signal against noise, governing the slapstick and the elegy alike.

Limiting Dimension

The Encompassed at 8.0: many orders for a short book, property, the state, science, the sacred and the dispossessed among them, held as signals rather than as lives. Next above it, The Inevitable, The Sublime and The Swerve at 8.3: comic machinery that runs past its turn, perhaps a tenth of the whole; heights few and spaced in a comic medium; and a turn that concentrates an undecidable quest already made in V. and by Borges rather than departing from it.

The Necessity Cap clears at 8.3 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears with room: The Living Form at 8.7, The Made at 8.6, The Inner Law at 8.6, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is unmet on three axes: The Imperishable at 8.8 clears the bar of 8.5 and The Unconcealment meets it exactly at 8.5, but The Archetypal Deep and Pressure on Tradition at 8.4 fall a tenth short and The Swerve at 8.3 two tenths short. The Universal Minimum is met (no axis but The Encompassed falls below 8.3, against 7.5) and The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 8.0. Four of the five summit conditions are met; the summit is withheld on the Epochal Gate, and the aggregate, at 8.5, stands below it as well.

Basis · a reading from knowledge of Thomas Pynchon’s The Crying of Lot 49, published by J. B. Lippincott, Philadelphia, in 1966, after V. (1963). It is scored as one novel in six numbered chapters, in the text of the book as published. The book is in copyright and no text of it was in hand; nothing was measured on a text, and no quotation was checked against a file. Every axis is judged on Pynchon’s English, with no translation between. Events are paraphrased, and English is quoted only where its words are certain: the naming of the executrix in the opening, the expansion of the acronym, the line ending of the play, Oedipa’s question, the “excluded middles” and the last words. Facts that could not be verified, among them the page and word counts, the book’s earlier appearances in magazines, the relative length of the chapters, the bibliographical detail of the editions of Wharfinger, the particulars of the bones in the lake, the critics’ reading of the title’s number, the author’s later remarks on the book and the record of its adaptation, are not given. Citations are by episode.