The Fifth Desk · Evaluation

Act I · The Map

Literature · Prison notes in two parts, with an editor’s introduction · 19th c. · A convict fortress in Siberia on the Irtysh: the stockade, the bath, the hospital, the work sites and the steppe beyond the palisade

The House of the Dead

Fyodor Dostoevsky · Zapiski iz Myortvogo doma · notes in two parts after an editor’s introduction, eleven chapters and ten · Russkii mir, 1860, and Vremya, 1861 to 1862 · first separate edition 1862 · scored on Dostoevsky’s Russian, read from knowledge, with Constance Garnett’s translation (1915) and David McDuff’s (1985) beside it for sense; no text in hand, Russian quoted only where its words are certain, each quotation with a plain English rendering beneath, and no published translation quoted

The Plate · the stockade as a row of stakes above and below, closed at the left and broken at the right for the gate; inside it a heavy line of time, long through the first year, rising twice to the stakes for the feast and the play and dropping once toward the floor for the hospital, then pressed into short tight folds for the three years that follow; a thin line breaking out under the lower stakes and coming back; a fine dotted arc rising over the upper stakes for the eagle; at the gate a broken ring, and the line passing out and rising; at the foot an editor’s bracket, then eleven divisions and ten, broken between the parts

Mode

Prison notes framed as a dead man’s papers; memoir, sketch, ethnography, essay and fiction in one book, under no settled name

Mythos

A house of the dead from which the narrator is raised, its last words of resurrection; the year turned on Christmas and the Lenten fast; a descent to a steaming bath he thinks of as hell, and a return through the smithy’s door; the prison as a figure of Russia

Phase

Four years of penal labour, the first given whole from the first impressions, the last three compressed, ending at the smithy on the day of release

Presentation

An editor’s introduction and the notes in two parts, eleven chapters and ten; first person, the frame’s wife-murderer all but forgotten in the notes

Register

A plain, reportorial voice, calmer than the novels, from portraits and catalogues of types through essayistic generalisation to the bath, the play and a murder told as gossip

Scale

A fortress stockade holding Russians, Ukrainians, Tatars, Dagestanis, Circassians, Poles, a Jew and Old Believers, its officers, its hospital and its work on the river

Governing Proposition

An editor introduces the notes of Aleksandr Petrovich Goryanchikov, a nobleman sentenced to ten years’ penal labour for killing his wife and found dead in a Siberian town after his release; the notes that follow are those of a gentleman convict among peasants, in a fortress where men of every province, nation and faith are shut in one stockade. They are arranged by the shape of memory: the first year whole, its feasts, its theatricals, its bath and its hospital, and the remaining three years compressed into the last chapters, to the day the fetters are struck off. The wager of the book is that testimony from inside a closed world, given a novelist’s frame, can carry the weight of a novel, and that what it shows, that unfreedom and not hardship is the punishment, will hold without the author’s later faith.

A Being Who Gets Used to Anything

8.6 / 10
Tier IV · Canonical

Act II · The Essay

Movement I

A House of the Living Dead

The book opens with an editor. He presents the notes of Aleksandr Petrovich Goryanchikov, a nobleman sentenced to ten years’ penal labour for killing his wife, who served his term and was found dead in a Siberian town after his release. The frame is a dead man’s notes from a dead house, given to the world by a stranger.

The notes begin with the place: the stockade, its palisade of stakes, its gate, and the place named a house of the living dead. Here are men of every province and nation and faith, Russians, Ukrainians, Tatars, Dagestanis, Circassians, Poles, a Jew, Old Believers, under one roof, with shaved half-heads and fetters. The narrator is a gentleman among peasants, and the first year is the one he remembers most sharply. Of what it teaches him he says: “Человек есть существо, ко всему привыкающее”
(man is a being who gets used to anything). In the first chapter he names among the convicts a nobleman held for parricide; a later note reports that the man was found innocent.

The notes draw on Dostoevsky’s own four years in the Omsk fortress, from January 1850 to February 1854, after the Petrashevsky affair and the mock execution of December 1849. He came back from exile still under surveillance, to a subject that was closed. Serial publication began in Russkii mir in 1860 and was completed in his own journal Vremya in 1861 and 1862; the first separate edition is of 1862. The wife-murderer of the introduction is all but forgotten in the notes, where the narrator is plainly a gentleman convict among peasants, as Dostoevsky was. The frame is a shield, and the book wears it without being bound by it.

Movement II

Coined Freedom

The men are fed. Some of them trade, some smuggle, some drink; there is vodka in the stockade and money to buy it. What crushes them is not the hardship but that nothing they do is their own. The work is forced labour: the brickworks, the breaking up of old barges on the Irtysh, the workshops. The narrator reasons that a man made to pour water from one tub into another and back again would hang himself within days.

Money, he says, is “чеканенная свобода”
(coined freedom). That is why the convicts who save it spend it at once: to spend it is to use the freedom it is coined from. The economy of the stockade, its trade and its smuggling, is the economy of that scrap of freedom, and the book returns to it in every part.

The men are given one by one. Akim Akimych keeps his punctilio. Gazin, drunk and murderous, is stopped. Petrov might kill the narrator over nothing, and is fond of him. Baklushin has his love story. They are not a moral lesson or a mass but individuals, with their own humour, honour and economy; and in the catalogue of types the book sometimes repeats what its portraits have already shown.

Movement III

The Bath, the Feast and the Play

At the bath (I.9) a hundred men in fetters crowd into one steaming room, and the narrator thinks of hell. In the same chapter the Jew Isai Fomich is at his prayers. The descent of the book is here, in the steam, the fetters and the crowd.

Christmas comes (I.10). For a day the convicts are, for a while, free men: there is solemnity, the feast is kept, and then the day goes down in drink. The book’s year turns on this feast and on the Lenten fast and communion the convicts keep later, and its argument about freedom needs the day as it is, solemn and then collapsing.

Then the theatricals (I.11). The convicts become actors and an audience, and for an evening the narrator sees in them what they might have been. The play is comic and festive; it is set in the book beside the flogging and the murder, and obeys the same law: it is what men do with whatever scrap of freedom is left them.

Movement IV

Akulka’s Husband

In the hospital (II.1 to II.3) the floggings are seen from the far side, on backs brought in from the line. At night the ward lies with its chains. Two lieutenants who flogged, Zherebyatnikov and Smekalov, are drawn there, and from them the book draws its disclosure: the power to flog corrupts the flogger into a habit and then a need.

Shishkov tells the story of Akulka’s husband (II.4): the murder of a wronged wife in a village, narrated as gossip by a man who does not know what he is telling. It is a tale in a teller’s voice whose horror the teller cannot see, and it is as finished as any story Dostoevsky wrote. The family enters the book here, at its edge.

When the convicts make a protest (II.7), the narrator is told that he cannot join it: he is not one of them. Between the gentleman and the peasant there is a gulf that no shared sentence closes, and here the narrator learns its width.

Movement V

Resurrection from the Dead

There are animals in the stockade (II.6). The goat Vaska is paraded by the convicts. A wounded eagle is at last carried to the palisade and let go toward the steppe. The steppe and the river lie beyond the stakes, seen from the work sites, and the eagle goes out to them as the men cannot.

There is an escape (II.9), the only plot the book allows, and it fails within days. Of the three years that follow the first the notes say less and less: they are compressed into the last chapters, and the narrator says as much, that the first year is what he remembers most sharply. In prison time is eaten, and the one year remembered is the year before habit closed over him.

On the day of his release the fetters are struck off at the smithy (II.10). The narrator goes out through its door, and the book ends on words of freedom and of “воскресенье из мертвых”
(resurrection from the dead). The house of the dead has given up one man, and the frame has said already where he went: to a Siberian town, to his death there, and to these notes.

Act III · The Twelve

1The Inevitable (Ananke)

The test is harder here than in a novel, because the book is built by accumulation: portraits, institutions, feasts, a hospital, animals, an escape. Much is required. The first chapters must establish the place before anything in it can mean. The Christmas feast and the theatricals are the two days on which the convicts are, for a while, free men, and the book’s argument about freedom needs them; the hospital is where the floggings are seen from the far side, on backs brought in from the line. What holds the axis lowest of the twelve is what could go without loss: some of the cataloguing of types in the seventh and eighth chapters of the first part, which repeats a point already made; the goat Vaska, closer to anecdote than the eagle beside him; and stretches of generalisation on punishment and on the Russian people that restate what the scenes have shown. The book is necessary in its spine and loose in its middle.

Score: 8.3 / 10

2The Unconcealment (Aletheia)

The disclosure can be stated, and it holds. Unfreedom, not hardship, is the punishment: the men are fed, some trade and drink, and what crushes them is that nothing they do is their own; a man made to pour water from one tub into another and back again, the narrator says, would hang himself within days. Money is “чеканенная свобода”
(coined freedom), which is why the convicts who save it spend it at once. Man is a being who gets used to anything, and that is both his salvation and his ruin. The power to flog corrupts the flogger into a habit and then a need. Between the gentleman and the peasant stands a gulf no shared sentence closes. It holds without Dostoevsky’s later faith. Held off the top because the claims about the people are sometimes asserted where the scenes have shown only a few men.

Score: 9.2 / 10

3The Sublime (Hypsos)

Height is reached several times, mostly in the dreadful register and in a plain voice. The bath (I.9), where a hundred men in fetters crowd a steaming room and the narrator thinks of hell. The theatricals (I.11), where the convicts become actors and an audience and the narrator sees in them, for an evening, what they might have been. Christmas (I.10), its solemnity and its drunken collapse. Shishkov’s telling of Akulka’s Husband (II.4), the murder of a wronged wife narrated as gossip by a man who does not know what he is telling. The wounded eagle let go at the palisade (II.6). The fetters struck off at the smithy (II.10). Held below the top because the reportorial register keeps most of the book on the level, and the elevations are spaced by long stretches of description.

Score: 8.6 / 10

4The Archetypal Deep (Mythos)

The myth is built, and the title states it: a house of the dead, from which the narrator is at last raised, and whose last words are of “воскресенье из мертвых”
(resurrection from the dead). The book’s year turns on Christmas and on the Lenten fast and communion the convicts keep; the descent is to a bath he thinks of as hell, the return through the smithy’s door. The prison becomes a figure of Russia, every province and nation and faith shut in one stockade, and the convict a figure of the strongest of the people, wasted. These carry weight: the death and resurrection frame is what the book means. Held below the top because the realist and documentary surface keeps the archetype mostly implicit, and the counter-figures, Aley taught to read from the Sermon on the Mount and the eagle, are images more than a built structure.

Score: 8.7 / 10

5The Swerve (Parekklisis)

The inheritance is the physiological sketch of the Russian natural school, Gogol, the prison memoir of Pellico’s Le mie prigioni, Hugo’s Le Dernier Jour d’un condamné, and the Decembrists’ Siberia as legend. The turn: a novelistic frame wrapped round testimony, so that a former political convict could write of penal labour at all; the convicts given as individuals, with their own humour, honour and economy, not as a moral lesson or a mass; and a form between memoir, ethnography, essay and fiction that has no settled name. The stake was real. Dostoevsky was newly returned from exile and still under surveillance, the subject was closed, and the frame was a shield the book had to wear without being bound by it. Held below the top because the sketch form it extended was already established, and the swerve is in matter and stance more than in a new form fully made.

Score: 8.6 / 10

6The Living Form (Entelecheia)

Change the form and some knowledge goes. The arrangement by the shape of memory rather than of time, the first year given whole and the rest compressed, is itself a disclosure: in prison time is eaten, and the one year remembered is the year before habit closed over the narrator. The circling among types, feasts and institutions, with no plot to carry it, is the condition of men for whom nothing will happen; the escape (II.9) is the only plot the book allows, and it fails within days. The frame does real work: a dead man’s notes from a dead house, published by a stranger. Held lower because the frame is not sustained, the wife-murderer vanishing and the narrator Dostoevsky in all but name, and because in the essayistic passages the form becomes a container for argument that would read the same in an article.

Score: 8.4 / 10

7The Bottomless Well (Apeiron)

The evidence is a century and a half of reading by novelists, penologists and historians. Tolstoy praised it in a letter to Strakhov of 1880. Nietzsche, in Twilight of the Idols (1889), took from it his admiration for the Siberian convicts as men of the hardest and most valuable wood. It keeps yielding on freedom and habit, on the gentleman and the people, and on whether the closing hope is earned; and it is read as the seedbed of the great novels, Raskolnikov’s Siberia and the Karamazov parricide among them. Held below the top because much of its return is as source and document for Dostoevsky’s later work, and because its open questions lie nearer the surface than the novels’ do.

Score: 8.5 / 10

8Pressure on Tradition (Agon)

The field is Russian prose of the mid nineteenth century, and beyond it the literature of imprisonment. The force: it made the prison a subject for serious literature as a whole society seen from inside, and showed that testimony could carry the weight of a novel; and in Dostoevsky’s own work it marks the turn from the young writer of Poor Folk to the author of the great novels, where the criminal, the people and resurrection become his matter. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: it stands at the head of a line that runs through Chekhov’s Sakhalin Island (1893 to 1895) and Tolstoy’s Resurrection (1899) to Solzhenitsyn’s One Day in the Life of Ivan Denisovich (1962) and The Gulag Archipelago, and Shalamov’s Kolyma Tales; Russian writers of the camps have named it as their precedent. Held below 9.0 because the line it founded is a line of subject and witness, not a reorganisation of the novel’s form.

Score: 8.8 / 10

9The Imperishable (Aphtharsia)

About one hundred and sixty-five years. The text survives whole, as published, without textual question. Presence is continuous: in print in Russian since 1862, in English since the 1880s and in at least four English translations of standing, read in schools and universities, cited in histories of punishment and of the Gulag. It has outlived its conditions: the penal labour of Nicholas I’s reign, the shaved half-heads and the gauntlet are history, and the book is read for what they show. Charged a little below the widest presence: its reading is narrower than that of Crime and Punishment or The Brothers Karamazov, and much of it is as a document of Dostoevsky’s life or of Russian penal history, which is presence of a narrower kind.

Score: 9.0 / 10

10The Made (Techne)

Judged on the Russian as far as it can be judged without hearing it; what this reading cannot hear in the sentence is not charged. The command is in the portrait and the scene: Akim Akimych’s punctilio; Gazin drunk and murderous and stopped; Petrov, who might kill the narrator over nothing and is fond of him; Isai Fomich at his Sabbath; Baklushin’s love story; the hospital ward at night with its chains; and above all Akulka’s Husband, a tale in a teller’s voice whose horror the teller cannot see, as finished as any story Dostoevsky wrote. Charged: the prose is calmer than in the novels and slack in places, with repetitions and generalising passages that run on; the frame is handled carelessly, the wife-murder vanishing and the nobleman held for parricide in the first chapter corrected in a later note as innocent; and the later chapters are hurried beside the first.

Score: 8.4 / 10

11The Inner Law (Cosmos)

Take the two most distant elements: the theatricals (I.11), comic and festive, and the flogged men in the hospital (II.2 to II.3); or the goat Vaska paraded by the convicts and the murder of Akulka. One law governs them: what men do with whatever scrap of freedom is left them, and what is done to them when even that is taken. The play, the money, the vodka, the animals, the escape, the grievance and the killing all obey it, and the range is wide: comedy, horror, ethnography, essay, confession. Charged: the frame breaks its own law, since the introduction’s narrator is not the narrator of the notes; and the essays on the people at times speak in a register the scenes do not support, the later novelist’s thesis entering the witness’s book.

Score: 8.4 / 10

12The Encompassed (Megethos)

Held, and many orders. The state, as the penal system from the major’s whim to the gauntlet. Labour, as forced labour: the brickworks, the breaking up of old barges on the Irtysh, the workshops, and what labour means to the men. Class, in the gulf between the gentleman and the peasant. Nations and faiths under one roof: Russians, Ukrainians, Tatars, Dagestanis, Poles, a Jew, Old Believers. The sacred: Christmas, the Lenten fast and communion, Aley’s Gospel. The body, in the bath, the hospital and the wounds. Economy, in the convicts’ trade and smuggling. The natural order, in the animals, the steppe beyond the palisade, the river seen from the work site. Consciousness, in the narrator’s slow change. History is a ground and not an agent, and the family stands only at the edge, in Akulka’s village; that holds it a step below the novels.

Score: 8.6 / 10

Act IV · The Reckoning

8.6 / 10 · Final Average

Placement: Tier IV · Canonical

Strongest Dimensions

The Unconcealment at 9.2, then The Imperishable at 9.0 and Pressure on Tradition at 8.8. A disclosure that unfreedom and not hardship is the punishment, that money is coined freedom and that the power to flog corrupts the flogger, held without the author’s later faith; a text whole and continuously read for a century and a half, which has outlived the penal system it shows; and a book at the head of the line of prison and camp witness that runs to Solzhenitsyn and Shalamov.

Limiting Dimension

The Inevitable at 8.3, held by a book built by accumulation and loose in its middle: catalogues of types that repeat a point already made, an animal chapter only partly argued, and generalisations on punishment and the people that restate the scenes. Next above it, The Living Form, The Made and The Inner Law at 8.4: a frame not sustained, its wife-murderer forgotten and its parricide corrected in a note; essayistic passages in which the form becomes a container; prose calmer and slacker than the novels’; and later chapters hurried beside the first.

The Necessity Cap clears at 8.3 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears: The Living Form at 8.4, The Made at 8.4, The Inner Law at 8.4, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is met on all five: The Unconcealment at 9.2, The Imperishable at 9.0, Pressure on Tradition at 8.8, The Archetypal Deep at 8.7 and The Swerve at 8.6 clear the bar of 8.5, the nearest by one tenth. The Universal Minimum is met (no axis falls below 8.3, against 7.5) and The Encompassed clears its own floor of 6.0 at 8.6. Every summit condition is met; the work is held below the summit by its aggregate alone, which The Inevitable, The Living Form, The Made and The Inner Law hold down.

Basis · a reading from knowledge of Fyodor Dostoevsky’s Записки из Мёртвого дома (Zapiski iz Myortvogo doma, Notes from the House of the Dead), scored as one book as Dostoevsky published it: the editor’s introduction, which presents the notes of Aleksandr Petrovich Goryanchikov, and the notes themselves in two parts, the first of eleven chapters and the second of ten. Serial publication began in Russkii mir in 1860 and was completed in Vremya in 1861 and 1862; the first separate edition is of 1862. It is a single work, not a collection, and has no versions that bear on the score. Every score is judged on the book in Dostoevsky’s Russian, which is not in hand. Russian is quoted on this page only where its words are certain, and beneath each quotation stands a plain English rendering in parentheses, made for this page and not taken from any published translation. Translation · Constance Garnett’s (The House of the Dead, 1915) and David McDuff’s (1985) are the versions best known to this reading and were used for sense; Jessie Coulson’s (1956) and Richard Pevear and Larissa Volokhonsky’s (Notes from a Dead House, 2015) are known only by name. None is in hand, none is quoted, and nothing in any of them is charged to the work. The structure, the chapters and the principal figures and scenes are judged closely; the Russian sentence is within this reading’s reach only in part, and is neither credited nor charged beyond what is plain in its construction. Names follow the usual English forms. Citations are by part and chapter, II.4 being Part II, chapter 4. Facts that could not be verified, among them the titles of the chapters, the length of the book, the part in which the note on the parricide falls, the objections of the censorship and any passage added to meet them, and the exact wording of Tolstoy’s praise, are not given.