The Fifth Desk · Evaluation
Act I · The Map
David Fincher · a film · 2023 · about 118 minutes · written by Andrew Kevin Walker, from the graphic novels of Matz and Luc Jacamon
Mode
Hired-killer procedural played as dry comedy; thriller, satire of a platform economy and self-portrait of a method under one narrating voice
Mythos
The lone professional, the samurai of the hired gun; the climb up a hierarchy to the hidden master, built rung by rung and then emptied
Phase
Six chapters, each titled with a place: a long wait in Paris, then a chain of targets climbed one rung at a time, and an epilogue back in the Dominican Republic
Presentation
Feature film, about 118 minutes; a Netflix production, shown at Venice and in a short theatrical run before streaming; voice-over through most of its length, and a soundtrack split between the room and the killer’s earphones
Register
Cold, level and comic; from days of yoga and waiting to two men breaking furniture and each other in a dark house; The Smiths full in his ears, and the room when the film steps out
Scale
One man, his list and the machinery of consumption he moves through; a woman kept off screen in hospital; a billionaire at the top of the chain
Governing Proposition
A hired killer waits for days in an empty office in Paris, reciting a creed of control, and when the shot comes he misses: a woman steps into the line and dies in place of the target. The rest of the film is the procedure by which he covers the miss, a climb from the people who hurt the woman he lives with to the man who paid. The wager of the film is that the professional’s creed is a story he tells himself, and that a voice set against the image, and a sound split between his ears and the room, can show the gap between what he says and what he does.
Act II · The Essay
Movement I
A man waits in an empty office in Paris, opposite a hotel. He does yoga, reads the heart rate on his wrist, and eats a fast-food breakfast for the protein. His voice runs over nearly everything: the method, the patience, the creed. “Stick to your plan.” “Anticipate. Don’t improvise.” Days pass in this chapter, the longest in the film, and almost nothing happens in it but waiting.
When he listens, the film listens with him. The Smiths come up full in his earphones and the street goes quiet; when the film leaves his point of view the songs cut out and the room returns. Then the long tightening ends and he fires. A woman steps into the line and dies in place of the man he was paid to kill. Everything after is the work of covering the miss.
David Fincher made the film from a screenplay by Andrew Kevin Walker, after the French graphic novel series Le Tueur by Alexis Nolent, who signs as Matz, and Luc Jacamon. Michael Fassbender plays the killer, who has no name; Tilda Swinton, Arliss Howard, Charles Parnell, Kerry O’Malley, Sala Baker and Sophie Charlotte play the people on his list and the woman he lives with. Erik Messerschmidt photographed it, Kirk Baxter edited it, and Trent Reznor and Atticus Ross wrote the score. Netflix produced it. It was shown in competition at Venice in September 2023, opened in a short theatrical run in late October and began streaming on 10 November. It runs about 118 minutes.
Movement II
He goes home, to the Dominican Republic, and finds that the woman he lives with has been hurt. She is in hospital. The film keeps her there and off screen for most of its length, and she is the reason for everything that follows.
He sets out to climb a chain, from the people who hurt her to the man who paid. Each chapter from here is a place and a target, and each is a rung. He moves unseen through the ordinary machinery of consumption: a parcel locker, a rental car, a storage unit, a coworking office, the bucket hat of a German tourist. It lets anyone pass without being seen, and it lets him.
In New Orleans the victims talk and he mostly does not. A lawyer’s assistant pleads for a clean death. His voice goes on narrating the method, and sometimes it explains what we have just watched him do, as if the explanation were the thing that held him together.
Movement III
In Florida the target is a man in a dark house. The fight runs through the house, two men breaking furniture and each other with whatever is to hand. It is shot dark and cut fast, in fragments.
It is the one place in the film where the body overrules the plan. Here, and only here, the film lets in a physical dread that it keeps out everywhere else, and the man who spoke of control is reduced to what he can reach and lift.
Each chapter shows the creed fraying a little further. The man who said anticipate keeps adjusting to what he did not anticipate, and the voice keeps saying that he did. The film has set its grid in Paris, and in each place it lays the same grid down again.
Movement IV
In New York he meets the expert, played by Tilda Swinton, at dinner. She talks, and he mostly does not.
She tells a joke about a bear and a hunter. She knows what sits across the table from her and what is coming, and she tells the joke anyway. The terror of the scene is quiet, and it belongs to her.
It is the second of the two chapters in which the victims do the talking, after New Orleans. After New York one name is left: the man who paid.
Movement V
At the top of the chain is a billionaire in Chicago, a man in leisure clothes. He hired a lawyer, wrote a cheque, and never asked what followed. The hidden master the climb has been leading to is no one in particular.
The killer, who swore to fight only the battle he was paid for, has reached the one man who caused it all. He spares him with a warning and walks away. The reckoning the climb promised does not come, and the film means it not to.
The epilogue returns to the Dominican Republic. By a pool, calm is restored, with a flicker of nerves. His voice claims, at the last, that he is one of the many.
Act III · The Twelve
The line is lean: six chapters, each a place, and after the first each a rung toward the man who paid, with nothing on the way that the climb does not use. The long Paris chapter survives the subtractive test, because the waiting is the matter: the yoga, the heart rate read on his wrist, the fast-food breakfast taken for protein, and the creed, “Stick to your plan”, laid down so that every later chapter can show it fraying. The miss is the hinge the whole film turns on. What gives: the voice-over often states what the image has already shown, a procedure explained while we watch it done; the Florida fight runs past what the argument needs into genre display; and the New Orleans chapter, an assistant pleading for a clean death, could be shorter without loss of a fact.
Score: 7.9 / 10
The disclosure can be stated and holds: the professional’s creed of control is a story he tells himself, and the act keeps refusing it. He says “Anticipate. Don’t improvise”, and from the first shot of the film proper he improvises, misses, and spends the rest killing to cover the miss. A second disclosure is social. He moves unseen through the infrastructure of ordinary consumption, the parcel locker, the rental car, the storage unit, the coworking office, a German tourist’s bucket hat, and the film shows that it makes anyone anonymous; the billionaire at the top is a man in leisure clothes who hired a lawyer and never asked. It is given in image and sound as fully as in words. What holds it here: it is irony more than revelation, a known truth about a hollow ethic wittily shown, not a condition brought into the open for the first time.
Score: 7.6 / 10
The register is cold, level and comic by design, and the axis counts height and frequency both. There are rises. The Paris shot, after days of tightening, is suspense of a high order, and the shock of the wrong body is real. The Florida fight in a dark house, two men breaking furniture and each other with whatever is to hand, reaches a physical dread the rest of the film withholds. The New York dinner has a quiet terror: Tilda Swinton’s expert tells a joke about a bear and a hunter, knowing what sits across the table from her. Elsewhere the film refuses elevation on purpose: the voice-over deflates, the songs in his ears undercut, and the last confrontation is made small. Three peaks in two hours, each brief, in a film whose idea is that nothing should soar.
Score: 7.2 / 10
The archetype is the lone professional, the samurai of the hired gun, and the pattern is the climb up a hierarchy to the hidden master. Both are partly built: the chapters are rungs, and the last rung is the throne room. But the construction is of myth undone. The master at the top is no one; the killer spares him with a warning, and the revenge pattern, which should end in a reckoning, ends in a man by a pool. The deflation bears weight, and a myth must be built before it can be emptied, which lifts the figure above evocation. It is held here because the emptied myth has been a convention of the genre since the 1970s, and because the figure never gains depth beyond his genre: he is not Ahab, nor even Jef Costello, whose solitude reaches a death.
Score: 7.4 / 10
The departures are real: a hired-killer film narrated from inside a mind whose talk of precision is shown to be false, played as dry comedy, with its climax withheld and a device of sound that puts the audience in the killer’s earphones. But the path was proven. Le Samouraï set the procedural silence; the 1990s and 2000s gave the ironic killer many forms; Anton Corbijn’s The American (2010) and the narrated professional of many films had cut the ground. Fincher’s own manner, the procedural, the obsessive, the clean frame, is carried on rather than turned. The stake was small: a well-funded streaming production by an established director, with a star, in a familiar genre, and the anticlimax risked only part of its audience. An accent intelligently placed on a proven path, at small cost.
Score: 7.2 / 10
The form carries the knowledge more than the story does. The chapter titles, each a place and a target, give the procedure its grid, and the meaning sits in the gap between the grid and what happens in it. The voice against the image is the instrument: the man says one thing, the camera shows another, and the film knows what he does not. The split sound does the same work from the other side: in his ears The Smiths fill the frame and the world goes quiet, and when the film steps out we hear the room he is ignoring. Substitute a third-person thriller and the irony goes, and most of the meaning with it. What holds it at its figure: the form, once set in Paris, is repeated rather than developed, and the later chapters apply it without deepening it.
Score: 8.0 / 10
Three years cannot demonstrate return, so this is a forecast. The film sustains several readings: a genre exercise taken straight, a satire of a platform economy, a comedy of male self-regard, and a portrait of its director, the perfectionist who controls every variable and calls it a method. They coexist without exhausting each other on a second viewing, and the sound and the frame repay attention. But they converge quickly once the gap between voice and act is seen. A second viewing yields texture more than meaning, and the figures other than the killer and the expert are deliberately flat, which leaves the interpreter little to turn over. The film’s explicitness about its theme, the creed repeated as a refrain, closes questions it might have kept open.
Score: 7.3 / 10
Released in 2023, so force and reach are scored together, against the cinema of the 2020s, and reach can only be what three years show. Intrinsic force is modest: the film refines the professional-killer film and its director’s procedural manner with authority, and its devices, an inner voice set against action, point-of-view sound, a chaptered procedure, were all available and are used with intelligence rather than discovered. Set beside The Zone of Interest (8.4), of the same year, it reorganises nothing in how its subject can be shown. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: the film was widely seen on its platform, discussed as a late self-portrait of its director and admired by critics, but no redirection of the field can be shown, and it has not become a model others follow. Promise is discounted, and both components point the same way.
Score: 6.8 / 10
Three years old, so survival is predicted, not shown. The form survives whole: the film is held by its producer, and nothing is lost. Presence is three years of availability on a streaming platform after a brief theatrical run, continuous but dependent on one company’s catalogue, with no demonstrated circulation beyond it in schools, repertory or quotation. A span under ten years holds the axis below 8.0. Within that range the surface counts against it. The film is fixed to its moment by design, its texture made of the services and devices of 2023, the coworking office, the delivery locker, the smartwatch, and a surface tied to a production era and a technology is charged even where, as here, that surface is the subject. That it is the subject keeps the charge small.
Score: 7.5 / 10
Read to the anchors of the elder arts. Command of the medium is high and bears weight, since precision is the film’s subject. Erik Messerschmidt’s frame is exact and cold, with the steadiness the killer claims and does not have. Kirk Baxter’s cutting holds the long Paris wait in tension and breaks into fragments in the Florida dark. Trent Reznor and Atticus Ross keep a low electronic pulse under everything, and the split between the room and the earphones is the most expressive single device in the film. Michael Fassbender gives a performance of stillness that leaves the talking to the voice-over, and Swinton’s scene is the best acting in it. The costs are in the script: Walker’s dialogue serves the victims well and the killer barely, the supporting figures are functions, the narration is sometimes overwritten, and the Florida fight, shot dark and cut fast, is lucid but conventional.
Score: 8.5 / 10
Take the two most distant elements: the dry jokes of the voice-over and the bloody fight in Florida. One law governs both, the plan announced and the plan broken, the procedure meeting the world. It holds from Paris, where the creed is laid down and the shot goes wide, to Chicago, where the man who swore to fight only the battle he was paid for spares the one man who caused it all, and on to the epilogue, where calm is restored with a flicker of nerves. Tonal control is complete. What holds the figure is range: one consciousness, one register and the limits of a genre, chosen and kept. Narrowness is not coherence, and the law here governs a small country.
Score: 8.1 / 10
The orders held are few. Consciousness, one, rendered from inside through voice and sound; labour, as a job with methods, costs and the logistics of a gig economy; capital, in the platforms he moves through and the billionaire who paid; and a love glimpsed in the woman he returns to, kept in hospital and off screen for most of the film. What holds the axis lowest is what is absent or nearly so: the state, with no police presence of weight; the family; history; the sacred; the natural order. Those present are integrated, since the logistics and the consciousness are one subject, but the design, one man and his list, keeps them few, and the axis credits what is held, not what a theme gestures at.
Score: 6.6 / 10
Act IV · The Reckoning
7.5 / 10 · Final Average
Placement: Tier III · Major
Strongest Dimensions
The Made at 8.5, then The Inner Law at 8.1 and The Living Form at 8.0. A making in which frame, cutting, score and above all the split between the room and the earphones bear the weight of a film whose subject is precision; one law, the plan announced and the plan broken, governing the jokes and the blood alike; and a form in which a voice set against the image is the instrument, and the film knows what the man does not.
Limiting Dimension
The Encompassed at 6.6: consciousness, labour and capital held and integrated, a love glimpsed, and the state, the family, history, the sacred and the natural order absent. Above it, Pressure on Tradition at 6.8, a refinement of a genre and a manner with no redirection of its field yet shown; then The Sublime and The Swerve at 7.2, three brief rises in a film built not to soar, and an accent on a proven path at small cost.
The Necessity Cap clears at 7.9 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears: The Living Form at 8.0, The Made at 8.5, The Inner Law at 8.1, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is unmet on all five: The Unconcealment at 7.6, The Imperishable at 7.5, The Archetypal Deep at 7.4, The Swerve at 7.2 and Pressure on Tradition at 6.8 each fall short of the bar of 8.5. The Universal Minimum is unmet at Pressure on Tradition, 6.8, The Sublime, 7.2, The Swerve, 7.2, The Bottomless Well, 7.3, and The Archetypal Deep, 7.4, all below 7.5; The Encompassed, which it exempts, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 6.6. Three of the five summit conditions are met. The work stands where its aggregate places it: 7.5, in the band of Tier III, short of the 8.0 at which Tier IV begins and of the 9.0 that the summit requires.
Basis · a reading from knowledge of The Killer as released, about 118 minutes, from the wait in Paris to the epilogue by the pool: a Netflix production directed by David Fincher from a screenplay by Andrew Kevin Walker, after the French graphic novel series Le Tueur by Alexis Nolent (Matz) and Luc Jacamon; photographed by Erik Messerschmidt, edited by Kirk Baxter, with a score by Trent Reznor and Atticus Ross and songs by The Smiths; shown in competition at Venice in September 2023, released in a limited theatrical run in late October and to streaming on 10 November 2023. The film is the object: the graphic novels are not part of the work scored, and nothing is imported from them. No print, screenplay or recording was consulted. The structure, the set pieces, the sound and the voice-over are known well; the minor business, among it the names on the false papers and the exact staging of each killing, less well, and it is not described. Two lines of the killer’s creed are quoted, from memory, where their words are certain; the expert’s joke and the narration’s last claim are described rather than quoted. Figures and details that could not be verified, among them the scene count, the voice-over’s share of the running time, the length of each chapter, the budget and the gadgets of the killer’s kit beyond those named, are not given.