The Fifth Desk · Evaluation

Act I · The Map

Literature · Novel in four parts · 1940 · A southern Mexican state in the 1930s, never named, where the last priest at large is hunted under an anticlerical governor

The Power and the Glory

Graham Greene · a novel in four parts, the fourth a short coda · William Heinemann, London, 1940 · scored on Greene’s English, read from knowledge; no text in hand, quoted only where its words are certain

The Plate · A ground line in four parts, the last much the shortest; a single wandering line, the flight, runs low across the first three and comes up against two close rules, the border, touches them and turns back to a small ring short of them, the trap; a broken line shadows it from the second part on and ends at the same ring; a straight, rigid line runs high above and slopes down to meet it; small open squares, the onlookers, stand apart in each part, joined to nothing; in the coda a window set high, a dotted line falling from it to a black point on the ground, and at the far right a door standing open with a stroke entering it

Mode

A theological novel carried by the manhunt of the thriller: a passion told as a chase, with chapters of onlookers set between the chapters of the hunted man

Mythos

The Passion: a flight, a betrayer known and kept beside, a summons to a dying man answered though it is a trap, an arrest, a night of interrogation by the ruler’s officer, a death, and a stranger at the door who says he is a priest; beside it the false hagiography of a boy martyr

Phase

A persecution in one Mexican state in the 1930s, under a governor who has outlawed the Church, from the port where the priest misses a boat to the night after his execution

Presentation

Fiction in the third person, in four parts; the point of view moves among the dentist Tench, the priest, the lieutenant, the child Coral and a pious mother; the priest seen first from outside, the death kept off the stage

Register

A cool, exact prose dense with images and with similes, set in heat, vultures, sweat, bad teeth and brandy; elevation by pity and by dread, never by a high style

Scale

One hunted man across one state, its port, capital, villages, swamp, river and mountain, with the border beyond, in about two hundred and twenty pages

Governing Proposition

In a southern Mexican state of the 1930s, under a governor who has outlawed the Church, one priest is still at large: a drunkard, frightened, the father of a child, never named. A lieutenant who wants a better life for the children of the state hunts him, shooting hostages from village after village, and a mestizo follows him for the reward. The wager of the novel is that the manhunt of the thriller can carry a theology of grace: that holiness is not a condition of the vessel, that a despicable man can carry a sacrament and a love the clean and the correct do not, and that a world of onlookers can watch a martyrdom and see nothing.

The Vessel and the Grace

8.5 / 10
Tier IV · Canonical

Act II · The Essay

Movement I

The Blazing Mexican Sun

The novel opens at the port, on Mr Tench the dentist, in “the blazing Mexican sun and the bleaching dust”. Tench has a dental chair, an ether cylinder and a talk of home. Through his eyes the reader first sees a shabby little man who misses a boat. The reader is not told at first who this man is.

He is the last priest at large in the state. The governor has outlawed the Church. Padre José has married, and lives mocked by children, too frightened to hear a confession. The priest is never named. He drinks brandy, he is afraid, and he has fathered a child. The reader meets him as the world meets him, as nothing, and comes to him from within only by degrees.

Around him the book sets its onlookers. On a banana station the English Fellows live in a marriage sketched in a few strokes, Mrs Fellows in a state of comic dread, and their daughter Coral hides the priest and asks him the one practical question about faith that he cannot answer. In a pious household a mother reads her children the life of the boy martyr Juan, who dies a martyr before a firing squad. These are the witnesses, and each of them will see the priest wrongly.

Movement II

Village After Village

Against the priest the book sets the lieutenant. His idealism is real: he truly wants the children of the state to have a better life, and he lives for it like a celibate of the other faith. To find the priest he takes hostages, and shoots them, from village after village. The love is genuine, and abstracted it kills.

The priest goes on through the villages, among people who wait for a sacrament, while hostages are shot for him. In one village is Brigitta, his daughter, and her mother. He loves the child and he cannot save her, and his love for her is helpless.

The flight crosses swamp, river, rain and mountain, and it is often flat by design: a hunted man moving through heat, vultures overhead, without the heroism the hagiography of Juan promises. A mestizo with yellow fangs attaches himself to the priest and follows him for the reward. The priest knows what the man is, and keeps him beside him.

Movement III

A Failure of Imagination

The priest buys a bottle of wine for the Mass, at ruinous cost, and has to watch it drunk by the governor’s cousin and the jefe. The scene is comedy and humiliation at once: the wine bought for the Mass poured out for the men who have outlawed it.

Then comes the night in the crowded cell. In the dark a couple make love, and a pious woman is outraged. The priest, who could not feel love for the respectable, feels it for these people, in the dark, and finds that “hate was just a failure of imagination”. Pity begins when one man looks closely at another. It is the book’s summit, and nothing in it is raised above the cell.

The scene is the disclosure in its plainest form. The priest is despicable by his own account; the pious woman is correct; and the grace of the night is in the one who despises himself and not in the one who judges. Holiness, the book shows, is not a condition of the vessel, and the vessel cannot see it in itself.

Movement IV

Across the Border

At a field of crosses an Indian woman lays a lump of sugar by her dead child. The scene is held in silence, and its grandeur is terrible; it is also one of the places where the Indian world is seen only from outside, as the priest sees it.

Across the border the priest reaches safety, in the house of the Lehrs, German Lutherans of a clean and correct propriety. He could stay. A summons comes, and the mestizo is beside him: the American gangster Calver, whose picture hangs beside the priest’s at the police station, is dying and asks for a priest. The priest knows it is a trap, and he goes back.

It is the Passion built into the plot. The betrayer is beside him, known; the return is knowing; the arrest follows. Of all the people in the book, the priest is the only one who goes back, and he goes back as the man he despises.

Movement V

To Be a Saint

On the last night the lieutenant and the priest talk. It is an argument between two faiths, the love of the state and the love of God, made into talk between two tired men. The lieutenant is the priest’s double, and the night is his interrogation by the ruler’s officer.

The priest dreams of a meal at the altar. He wakes certain that only one thing had counted, “to be a saint”, and that he had missed it. The book does not settle whether he is right: whether he is a saint, or a man who only believes at the end that he failed to be one.

The fourth part is short. Tench, pulling at a jefe’s tooth, sees the execution from his window, between two pulls: a noise and a fall, and he sees nothing. The lieutenant is left empty. Luis, a boy who had admired the lieutenant’s gun, spits on it, and opens the door to a stranger who says he is a priest.

Act III · The Twelve

1The Inevitable (Ananke)

The test is subtractive, and the spine resists it. A hunted priest, a lieutenant who hunts him, a betrayer, a border, a return, a death: none of this can go. The chapters of onlookers look removable and are not. Mr Tench the dentist, who opens the book and closes the execution, is the godless world in which the priest dies without witnesses who understand it. The Fellows on their banana station give Coral, the child who hides the priest and asks him the one practical question about faith he cannot answer. The pious mother reading the life of the boy martyr Juan supplies the false hagiography against which the true death is measured. What holds the axis below the top: the Fellows marriage is sketched more than it needs, Mrs Fellows a figure of comic dread repeated rather than deepened, and the stay with the Lehrs runs a little long for what it adds.

Score: 8.4 / 10

2The Unconcealment (Aletheia)

The disclosure can be stated and it holds. Holiness is not a condition of the vessel: a drunken, frightened priest who has fathered a child carries a sacrament and a love that the clean and the correct do not, and he cannot see it in himself. Beside it stands a political disclosure. The lieutenant’s idealism is real; he truly wants the children of the state to have a better life, and it is that love, abstracted, that shoots hostages from village after village. The book refuses both easy sides: the pious are complacent, the revolution is cruel, and the priest, despicable by his own account, is the only one who goes back. The prison night discloses something exact, that pity begins when one looks closely at another: “hate was just a failure of imagination”. What holds the axis there: the theology at moments arrives as the priest’s reflection rather than in the event, and the Indian world is seen only from outside.

Score: 8.8 / 10

3The Sublime (Hypsos)

The register is not the high one: heat, vultures, sweat, bad teeth, brandy. Elevation comes as pity and as dread, and it recurs. The night in the crowded cell, with a couple making love in the dark and a pious woman’s outrage, where the priest feels for these people the love he could not feel for the respectable, is the book’s summit and one of the great scenes of its decade. The Indian woman at the field of crosses, laying a lump of sugar by her dead child, carries a terrible grandeur in silence. The last night, the priest’s dream of a meal at the altar and his waking certainty that only one thing counted, “to be a saint”, and that he had missed it, rises very high. The execution seen from Tench’s window, between two pulls at a jefe’s tooth, is elevation by withholding. What holds the axis there: the flight across swamp and mountain is often flat by design, and the heights are spaced.

Score: 8.4 / 10

4The Archetypal Deep (Mythos)

Myth built, and the plot bears it. The pattern is the Passion: a flight; a betrayal by a man the priest knows will betray him, the mestizo with his yellow fangs who follows him for the reward; a summons across the border to a dying man, which the priest knows to be a trap and answers anyway; an arrest; a night of interrogation by the ruler’s officer; a death; and at the end a stranger at the door who says he is a priest. The priest is unnamed, so that the particular carries the type, and he remains wholly particular: the brandy, the wine bought at ruinous cost and drunk by the governor’s cousin, the child Brigitta whom he loves and cannot save. The lieutenant is no cut-out Pilate but a celibate of the other faith, the priest’s double. The life of Juan read aloud inside the book is the myth told falsely, which the main story tells truly. The structure, not allusion, carries it.

Score: 8.8 / 10

5The Swerve (Parekklisis)

The inheritance is the Catholic novel of France, Bernanos above all, whose Journal d’un curé de campagne appeared in 1936, and Mauriac, and behind them Péguy’s sinner at the heart of Christianity; in English, Greene’s own thrillers and entertainments, with their chases and their seedy settings. The turn is the fusion: the manhunt of the thriller made the vehicle of a theology of grace, and a priest who is a drunkard and a father made the agent of sanctity, by an English convert, in English, where the Catholic novel had been a minor and apologetic mode. The stake was real: the Holy Office later sought changes, and Greene refused. What holds the axis lowest of the twelve is that the sinful priest as a vessel of grace was already Bernanos’s ground, and the thriller form was Greene’s own proven path. The departure is in the joining and the place, not in a new kind of novel.

Score: 8.1 / 10

6The Living Form (Entelecheia)

Change the form and the book loses much of what it knows. The priest is seen first from outside, in Tench’s eyes at the port, a shabby little man missing a boat, and only gradually from within; the reader meets the saint as the world met him, as nothing. The alternation of the priest’s chapters with the chapters of onlookers (Tench, the Fellows, the lieutenant, the mother reading Juan’s life) makes the form itself the claim that grace works unseen and is recorded wrongly. The fourth part keeps the death off the stage: the execution is a noise and a fall glimpsed from a dentist’s window, and a boy who had admired the lieutenant’s gun spits on it and opens the door to the new priest. Even the missing name is formal: there is no name for the hagiographers. What holds the axis there: the chase could carry other matter with less loss than the top requires, and the middle of the flight is episodic.

Score: 8.6 / 10

7The Bottomless Well (Apeiron)

Evidence first: eighty-six years of reading. The book has been read as a Catholic novel of grace and as a scandal to Catholics; as a political novel of revolution and persecution, and from the left as a reactionary one; as a dialogue of two faiths in the priest and the lieutenant, set beside Dostoevsky’s Grand Inquisitor; as an Englishman’s Mexico, seen from outside; as the founding book of “Greeneland”. Its questions stay open. Is the priest a saint, or does he only believe at the end that he failed to be one? What becomes of Coral Fellows, whose fate the book leaves to inference? Is the lieutenant’s emptiness at the end a defeat, or the cost of his love? Is the new priest a succession or a consolation? What holds the axis there is the frame: the theology governs the readings more than in the deepest books, and they converge.

Score: 8.5 / 10

8Pressure on Tradition (Agon)

The field is the English novel around 1940 and, within it, the novel of faith in any language. The intrinsic force: the book made the theological novel a major form in the English fiction of its century, gave it the pace and the world of the thriller, and set a man’s soul against a modern state’s ideology without allegory. The whisky priest entered the language. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: Shusaku Endo’s Silence (1966), whose apostate priest under persecution answers Greene’s; Mauriac’s preface to the French translation, which carried the book into French Catholic letters; the later Catholic and political novels of Brian Moore and others; Greene’s own The Heart of the Matter and The End of the Affair, which extend it; John Ford’s film The Fugitive (1947), much altered. What holds the axis there: the force renews and joins more than it reorganises, and in the wider field the century’s turns were made elsewhere.

Score: 8.4 / 10

9The Imperishable (Aphtharsia)

Eighty-six years are weighed as eighty-six years, and the usual figure for that span is given, not more. The text survives whole, as published, in print throughout in Britain and America, translated widely, and taught in schools and universities as the central novel of Greene’s career and of the Catholic novel in English. Its surface is fixed to one persecution in one Mexican state in the 1930s, and to a Church before the Second Vatican Council: the confession, the Latin, the fear of dying in mortal sin. Both have passed, and the book is read now for what outlives them, which is the evidence the axis asks for. What holds it at the usual figure: its presence is wide but not the widest among the books of its decade, and part of it is concentrated in Catholic readers and the classroom.

Score: 9.0 / 10

10The Made (Techne)

Judged on Greene’s English. The command is of a prose exact, cool and dense with images, which sets its world from the opening, in “the blazing Mexican sun and the bleaching dust”, and of a point of view that moves among Tench, the priest, the lieutenant, Coral and the mother without a seam. The dialogue between the priest and the lieutenant on the last night is a feat: an argument between two faiths made into talk between two tired men. The thriller’s craft bears weight: the mestizo’s shadowing, the pressure of the hostages, the trap across the border. Charged: the simile habit becomes mannered, “like” after “like” binding the physical to the abstract; the authorial voice at moments states a theology the scene had already carried; and the American gangster Calver, whose picture hangs beside the priest’s at the police station, is a device more than a man.

Score: 8.6 / 10

11The Inner Law (Cosmos)

One law governs the whole: the divine is present in what is squalid and absent from what is respectable, and everyone sees it wrongly. Take the two most distant elements: Tench’s dental chair at the port, with its ether cylinder and its talk of home, and the hagiography of the boy Juan, who dies a martyr before a firing squad. They obey the same law. Tench watches a true martyrdom and sees nothing; the pious book records a false one. The law covers the prison, the field of crosses, the Lehrs’ Lutheran propriety across the border, Padre José, the married priest mocked by children and too frightened to hear a confession, the lieutenant’s room, and the boy at the door. The range runs from comedy to agony and is held. What holds the axis there is a little convenience in the machinery of the trap.

Score: 8.7 / 10

12The Encompassed (Megethos)

Many orders, joined through one hunted man. Consciousness, in the priest’s self-contempt and his discovery of love. The family: Brigitta and her mother, the Fellows and their child, the household where Juan’s life is read. The state and the revolution, in the governor, the lieutenant and the hostages. The Church, in two kinds of priest and in the laity who wait for a sacrament. Class and race: the Indians of the villages, the mestizo, the English and German foreigners. Labour, in the banana station, the dentistry and the peasants. The natural order, in swamp, river, rain and mountain; death and the sacred over all. They are integrated, each a place the priest passes through or a witness to his passing. What holds the axis there: the book is short, its social world is drawn at speed, and the life of the Indian villages is largely a backdrop to the one soul.

Score: 8.2 / 10

Act IV · The Reckoning

8.5 / 10 · Final Average

Placement: Tier IV · Canonical

Strongest Dimensions

The Imperishable at 9.0, then The Unconcealment and The Archetypal Deep at 8.8, and The Inner Law at 8.7. A novel in print and taught without a break for eighty-six years, read for what outlives the persecution and the Church it records; a disclosure, argued in event, that holiness is not a condition of the vessel and that abstract love can kill; the Passion built into the plot of a chase, with an unnamed priest who stays wholly particular; and one law, the divine present in the squalid and absent from the respectable and seen wrongly by all, governing the dentist’s chair and the boy martyr’s legend alike.

Limiting Dimension

The Swerve at 8.1, held because the sinful priest as a vessel of grace was already Bernanos’s ground and the thriller was Greene’s own proven path: the departure is in the joining and the place. Next above it, The Encompassed at 8.2: a short book whose social world is drawn at speed, the Indian villages largely a backdrop. Then The Inevitable, The Sublime and Pressure on Tradition at 8.4: a Fellows marriage sketched more than needed and a long stay with the Lehrs; heights that are spaced; a force that renews and joins more than it reorganises.

The Necessity Cap clears at 8.4 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears: The Living Form at 8.6, The Made at 8.6, The Inner Law at 8.7, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is unmet: The Imperishable at 9.0, The Unconcealment at 8.8 and The Archetypal Deep at 8.8 clear the bar of 8.5, but The Swerve at 8.1 falls four tenths short and Pressure on Tradition at 8.4 one. The Universal Minimum is met (no axis it covers falls below The Swerve at 8.1, against 7.5) and The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 8.2. The aggregate stands below 9.0 in any case, and the novel is placed in the Canonical tier on its standing.

Basis · a reading from knowledge of Graham Greene’s The Power and the Glory, published in London by William Heinemann in 1940, and in the United States in the same year as The Labyrinthine Ways. It is scored as the novel as published, in Greene’s English and complete: four parts, the first of four chapters, the second and third of several chapters each, the fourth a single short chapter. No text of it was in hand; nothing was measured on a text, and no quotation was checked against a file. The order of events, the principal persons and the large scenes are known closely, the wording of only a few phrases; three are quoted, and everything else is paraphrased. The novel was written after Greene’s journey through Mexico in 1938, of which The Lawless Roads (1939) is the travel record, and it is set in a southern state it never names, plainly Tabasco under Garrido Canabal. Its title is from the doxology of the Lord’s Prayer. Matters that could not be verified, among them the titles of the first part’s chapters, the word count, the epigraph, the date of the Holy Office’s intervention, the words of the boy martyr’s cry, the hint of Coral’s fate in the last scene of the Fellows, and the novel’s place on published lists, are not given.