The Fifth Desk · Evaluation

Act I · The Map

Film · Feature film in colour, the founding of a company told through the two lawsuits that followed it · 2010 · Harvard, the Thames at Henley and Palo Alto, from 2003 to 2005, and two conference rooms afterwards

The Social Network

David Fincher · a film · 2010 · about 120 minutes · written by Aaron Sorkin, from Ben Mezrich’s book The Accidental Billionaires

The Plate · the film as one line from a small table, where two voices cross, to an empty room: a ranked grid at its start, a second line beside it cut short and fallen to a dot, a regatta set apart below, and above, two long rules, the depositions, dropping into the line again and again and turning down at last into the room, where a small screen stands beside a loop, with three short lines beneath it

Mode

Drama of a founding told through two depositions; campus comedy, courtroom picture and tragedy of friendship in one film

Mythos

The founder who gains a kingdom and loses his one friend; the outsider who builds a larger club and is alone in it; the tempter, and the twin oarsmen

Phase

From a break-up at a bar in autumn 2003 to the Palo Alto company of 2005, intercut with two later depositions and closed by title cards

Presentation

Feature film in colour, about 120 minutes, in English; shot digitally in a wide frame; one version

Register

From rapid talk in a bar and a dormitory to a regatta in toy-like focus and a refresh in an empty room; warm light at Harvard, cold light in the conference rooms

Scale

One friendship, two lawsuits, a college, a company and the network it makes

Governing Proposition

A Harvard undergraduate, refused by a girl and shut out of the clubs, builds the network that will rank everyone, and loses his one friend in the building of it; the story is told from the conference rooms where the two suits that followed are deposed. The wager of the film is that the architecture of modern social life was built out of exclusion, that friendship converted into equity is settled by lawyers, and that a film made almost entirely of talk can carry the present tense of technology and law as tragedy.

The Larger Club

8.2 / 10
Tier IV · Canonical

Act II · The Essay

Movement I

Hand Covers Bruise

A bar, autumn 2003. Mark Zuckerberg and Erica Albright are talking, both at once and past each other, he always answering a question one ahead of the one she asked. She ends it. She tells him, in substance, that girls will not dislike him for being a nerd; they will dislike him “because you’re an asshole”. The film begins with its wound, and everything after it is an answer to her.

He walks, and then runs, back across Harvard at night, through quads and streets, under a piano figure and an electronic hum: Trent Reznor and Atticus Ross’s “Hand Covers Bruise”. In his dormitory that night he builds Facemash, a site that ranks the women of the college, with the algorithm written on the window. The site that ranks women is the seed of the one that will rank everyone. An Ad Board hearing follows, and the film plays it as comedy.

David Fincher made the film from a screenplay by Aaron Sorkin, drawn from Ben Mezrich’s book The Accidental Billionaires (2009). It opened the New York Film Festival in September 2010, and Columbia Pictures released it the next month. Jeff Cronenweth photographed it digitally, on RED cameras, in a wide frame; Kirk Baxter and Angus Wall edited it; Reznor and Ross wrote the music. Jesse Eisenberg plays Mark, Andrew Garfield Eduardo Saverin, Justin Timberlake Sean Parker, Rooney Mara Erica. Armie Hammer plays both Winklevoss twins: Josh Pence was the body double for one, with Hammer’s face placed on him digitally. The film runs about 120 minutes, and there is one version. It won three Academy Awards, for its adapted screenplay, its editing and its score, from eight nominations.

Movement II

The Phoenix

Harvard is a world of final clubs, the Phoenix and the Porcellian, which take some men in and keep the rest out. Cameron and Tyler Winklevoss, oarsmen and gentlemen, and their partner Divya Narendra, played by Max Minghella, will say that Mark took their idea. Mark builds a site of his own, and his friend Eduardo holds a share in it. The clubs are the model he copies and abolishes at once: exclusivity, put online, becomes the product.

The story is not told straight. It is told from two conference rooms, later, where two suits are being deposed: the twins and Narendra charging Mark with theft, and Eduardo, his one friend, charging him with betrayal. The film cuts between the conference rooms and the dormitory at the speed of talk, warm light at Harvard and cold light at the long tables, and every promise made at Harvard is heard as evidence in a suit. The viewer sees the betrayal before the friends do.

Eduardo is open where Mark is opaque, and his hurt is the film’s warmth. The college around them is a comedy of rank: the chicken of the Phoenix hazing, the Ad Board, the groupies. Christy Lee’s jealousy, ending in a burnt scarf, is the one stretch of the film that does little it needs. Everything else is already the case being built against Mark, and the case is that he has made a larger club.

Movement III

In the Hall of the Mountain King

The twins go to the president of the university, Larry Summers, to complain of Mark, and he declines to help them. The scene is comedy, and it is a verdict: the old order, asked to defend its own, will not. The gentlemen who were born into the club learn that the club will not protect them.

Then the film goes to England, to the Henley Royal Regatta, where the twins row and lose by a few feet. Fincher shoots the Thames with a shallow focus that makes the Edwardian world look like a toy, and Reznor and Ross press Grieg’s “In the Hall of the Mountain King” into a pounding electronic march. It is the film’s bravura, and a style it never uses again.

Back at Harvard, in a Kirkland dormitory, interns for the new company are chosen by a drinking-game coding contest, a shot at each step, the fastest let in. The regatta and the contest are the film’s two most distant places, and one rule runs through both: every relation is membership and rank, and the excluded build the next club. The twins row for an order that will not keep them; the coders compete to be let into Mark’s.

Movement IV

Palo Alto

Mark meets Erica again in a restaurant, and she rebuffs him. The network goes out to other schools. The plot runs on the lost girl, a device of the screenplay that the film half admits; it is enough to move a story, and it does not explain the man.

Sean Parker takes the two founders to dinner. He tells them to drop “The” from the name, and his claim, in substance, is that a billion dollars is what is cool. Timberlake plays charm as a weapon. Parker is the tempter, and what he offers is the larger sum in place of the friend.

The company of 2005 is in Palo Alto, in Parker’s world of investors and nightclubs, and the action ends there. The friend who held a share at Harvard is being written out of what he helped to found. In the conference rooms the same years are told again as testimony, and each act of friendship is entered as a liability.

Movement V

The Refresh

Eduardo’s share has been cut to a fraction of a per cent, by papers he signed in good faith. He comes into the Palo Alto office soaked and quiet, and breaks the laptop on the desk. It is the one scene in the film that burns: trust converted into equity, and the equity taken away. Parker is arrested, a turn that arrives when the plot needs it.

In the empty conference room at the end, Marylin Delpy, played by Rashida Jones, stays behind with Mark. She tells him, in substance, that he is not an asshole but is trying very hard to be one, and that every creation myth needs a devil. The film is a creation myth, and it leaves its devil unsettled.

Alone, Mark opens Erica’s page, sends her a friend request, and refreshes it, and refreshes it again. A billionaire sits in a conference room waiting for one woman to accept him. Title cards report the settlements, and the millions who joined the network appear among them as a figure. The ending is Citizen Kane’s, a ruler alone with what he could not have, and Gatsby’s green light has become a page refreshed.

Act III · The Twelve

1The Inevitable (Ananke)

Judged on structure, and the subtractive test meets resistance almost everywhere. The prologue is required: Erica’s verdict on Mark is the wound the rest of the film answers, and the refresh at the end closes it. The two depositions are required, one for each betrayal, the twins’ charge of theft and Eduardo’s of friendship; neither could carry the other. Facemash is required, since the site that ranks women is the seed of the one that ranks everyone. The Summers scene shows the old order refusing to defend its own; the restaurant where Erica rebuffs Mark sends the network to other schools. What gives: Christy Lee’s jealousy and the burnt scarf are stock, and Henley, though it earns its place, is a set piece a sterner film would have halved.

Score: 8.6 / 10

2The Unconcealment (Aletheia)

The disclosure can be stated, and it holds: the architecture of modern social life was built out of exclusion, by a man for whom friendship was already a matter of position, and the founding of the new economy is a story of trust converted into equity and settled by lawyers. The final clubs, the Phoenix and the Porcellian, are the model Mark copies and abolishes at once: exclusivity, put online, becomes the product. Eduardo’s dilution, his share cut to a fraction of a per cent while he signs in good faith, makes it concrete. Sixteen years have made the account look less like satire than diagnosis. It stands at the gate and not above it, because the motive that carries the plot, the lost girl, is a screenwriter’s device the film half admits, and because what the network does to everyone else is implied rather than entered.

Score: 8.5 / 10

3The Sublime (Hypsos)

The register is velocity and wit, and elevation is not its usual mode; when it rises, it is cold. Mark’s run back across Harvard at night after the break-up, through quads and streets under a piano figure and an electronic hum, raises a solitary humiliation to something like dread. Henley is a bravura of another kind: the twins losing a race by a few feet, the Edwardian world made a toy by a shallow focus, Grieg pressed into a pounding electronic march. Eduardo’s entrance into the Palo Alto office, soaked and quiet, is the film’s one hot summit, and the last refresh a small, exact desolation. Held below the other governed axes by frequency: between these moments the film moves on talk, brilliantly and on the level, and two hours carry four or five summits.

Score: 7.9 / 10

4The Archetypal Deep (Mythos)

The archetype is built into the plot rather than cited: the founder who gains a kingdom and loses his one friend, the outsider shut out of the clubs who builds a larger club and is alone in it. Citizen Kane is the template, and the film knows it: a lost woman in place of the sled, a lonely ruler at the close, a story told through those who sued him. The Great Gatsby lies beneath it too, the green light become a browser refreshed. Parker is the tempter, offering the larger sum in place of the friend; the twins are the Dioscuri as Harvard oarsmen. Delpy names the frame, saying in substance that every creation myth needs a devil. Held below the gate because the pattern is inherited whole from Kane and Gatsby, and the particular, which stays vivid, carries it more than it deepens it.

Score: 8.2 / 10

5The Swerve (Parekklisis)

The inheritance was the biopic, the courtroom picture, Citizen Kane’s frame of hostile witnesses and Sorkin’s own television drama of fast, intelligent talk. The turns are real. The subject was the near present, a company six years old and a founder of twenty-six, still living, made as tragedy rather than topical comedy, at the risk of being mocked as “the Facebook movie” and of dating within a year. The score turned the prestige drama, which had been scored for orchestra, toward an industrial and ambient record placed as the film’s nervous system. Dense, rapid dialogue was set in a dark, still, cool frame, where it had usually been staged bright and moving. The stake was moderate: a studio picture with a proven director and a proven writer, in a form classical by intention. Each turn bends a known path rather than leaving it.

Score: 8.0 / 10

6The Living Form (Entelecheia)

Change the form and the film loses part of what it knows. Told straight, it is the rise of a start-up. Told through two depositions, the founding exists only as contested testimony, each scene of friendship already evidence in a suit, and the viewer sees the betrayal before the friends do. The cutting between conference room and dormitory makes every promise made at Harvard a liability years later. The prologue’s speed, two people talking past each other at once, is the form of the whole: Mark always answering a question one ahead. Held below the top because the depositions are a frame more than a demonstration: the flashbacks are given objectively, not bound to a witness as Kane’s are, and the two suits rarely make the past uncertain. The form organises the knowledge; it does not quite become it.

Score: 8.4 / 10

7The Bottomless Well (Apeiron)

Sixteen years of evidence, which is short. The questions have stayed open and argued: whether Mark is a villain or a man trying hard to be one; how much the invented Erica explains; the film’s accuracy, disputed by the people it portrays; whether it is about friendship, class or property. Readings have gathered as the company’s history went on: the film reread, after the scandals over data and elections, as a founding document of the platform age; as a study of male entitlement and the ranking of women, from Facemash to the groupies; as one panel of Fincher’s films about obsession and procedure, beside Zodiac (2007). Formally it repays return, in the rhythm of the talk and the rhymes between the two conference rooms. Held at its figure by span, and by a lucid surface that yields much at once and renews slowly.

Score: 8.2 / 10

8Pressure on Tradition (Agon)

Released in 2010, so force and reach are scored together, against the cinema of its decade. Intrinsic force: the film showed that the present tense of technology and law could carry tragedy, fused a writer’s cinema of talk with a director’s cinema of control, and put an electronic score at the centre of a prestige drama. It perfected and joined existing manners more than it reorganised what film could do. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: the cycle of founder dramas that followed in film and television, Sorkin’s own Steve Jobs (2015) among them, and the later series and films on start-ups, their founders and their frauds; and Reznor and Ross’s scoring, which became a model for dark, synthetic drama scores and made their own career in film. The reach is real and fairly wide, and it lies largely within a genre and a sound.

Score: 8.2 / 10

9The Imperishable (Aphtharsia)

Sixteen years old, and survival is weighed on form, presence and fabric across that span. The form survives whole: one version, no loss. Presence has been continuous and wide, in repertory and festival screenings, home video and streaming, the teaching of screenwriting, and a few lines in common reference. The surface is charged: the film is fixed to a technology, a company and a living man, the very surface the axis penalises. Against the charge, it is set in 2003 to 2005 and was made as period, and the company’s later history has kept it current rather than dated it; but currency of that kind depends on the company and would pass with it. The figure stands at the foot of what sixteen years can show, because part of the film’s present is borrowed from the news.

Score: 8.0 / 10

10The Made (Techne)

Read to the anchors of the elder arts; the making bears weight in every department. Sorkin’s screenplay is overlapping, rapid and exact, its scenes built as arguments, its lines carrying character and plot at once. Fincher holds a film made almost entirely of talk in tension by framing and cutting alone. Cronenweth’s low, warm light in the dormitories and cold light in the conference rooms divides the two times without a caption. Baxter and Wall intercut three times at conversational speed and never lose the viewer. The score is an event, not commentary. Eisenberg’s flat, fast, unblinking Mark; Garfield’s open Eduardo, whose hurt is the film’s warmth; Timberlake’s Parker, charm as a weapon; Hammer’s twins, one performance in two bodies. The costs: Sorkin’s voice makes almost everyone equally quick, the women other than Erica and Delpy are written thin, and some lines show the writer.

Score: 8.8 / 10

11The Inner Law (Cosmos)

Take the two most distant elements: the Henley regatta, Edwardian sport on the Thames in a miniaturising focus, and the drinking-game coding contest in a Kirkland dormitory, where interns are chosen by speed with a shot at each step. One law governs both: every relation is membership and rank, and the excluded build the next club. The twins row for an order that will not protect them; the coders compete to be let into Mark’s. The Ad Board, the Summers scene, the chicken of the Phoenix hazing, Parker’s nightclub and the dilution obey the same law, and the ending applies it to Mark himself, a friend request to the woman who left him. The range, from campus comedy to betrayal, is held. The strain: Henley’s style is a showpiece the rest of the film never uses, and Parker’s arrest arrives as a plot convenience.

Score: 8.5 / 10

12The Encompassed (Megethos)

Judged on what a film of two hours holds. Consciousness, in Mark, kept opaque by design, and in Eduardo, open; friendship, the order the film turns on; the university and its class system, in final clubs, an Ad Board and a president; capital, in investors, share structures and dilution; the law, as the medium in which the story is told; technology, as the new order; the sexual economy, in Facemash, the groupies and the women ranked. They are held in one plot: the site, the suits and the friendship are one story. What holds the axis lowest is what lies outside it: the family is absent, the state appears only as civil law, the sacred is absent, labour is coding at night, and the millions who join the network are a figure on a title card.

Score: 7.4 / 10

Act IV · The Reckoning

8.2 / 10 · Final Average

Placement: Tier IV · Canonical

Strongest Dimensions

The Made at 8.8, then The Inevitable at 8.6, then The Unconcealment and The Inner Law at 8.5. A making in which screenplay, direction, light, cutting, score and four principal performances hold a film of talk in tension for two hours; a structure in which the prologue, the two depositions and Facemash are each required; a disclosure that the architecture of modern social life was built out of exclusion, with trust converted into equity; and one law, membership and rank, from a regatta on the Thames to a coding contest in a dormitory.

Limiting Dimension

The Encompassed at 7.4: friendship, the university, capital, the law, technology and the sexual economy are held in one plot, but the family and the sacred are absent, the state is only civil law, and the world outside a few campuses and offices is a figure on a title card. Above it, The Sublime at 7.9, four or five cold summits in two hours of level talk, and The Swerve and The Imperishable at 8.0, turns that bend a known path and a survival of sixteen years whose present is partly borrowed from the news.

The Necessity Cap clears at 8.6 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears with room: The Living Form at 8.4, The Made at 8.8, The Inner Law at 8.5, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is unmet: The Unconcealment meets the bar of 8.5 exactly, but The Archetypal Deep at 8.2, Pressure on Tradition at 8.2, The Swerve at 8.0 and The Imperishable at 8.0 fall short of it. The Universal Minimum is met: of the eleven axes it covers, none falls below 7.9, against 7.5, the lowest being The Sublime. The Encompassed, which it exempts, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 7.4. Four of the five summit conditions are met. The summit is closed by the Epochal Gate on four of its axes and by the aggregate, 8.2 against the 9.0 that Tier V requires.

Basis · a reading from knowledge of The Social Network in its theatrical release, about 120 minutes, in colour and a wide frame, shot digitally, as released by Columbia Pictures in October 2010 after opening the New York Film Festival in September 2010, from the bar in the opening scene to the refresh and the closing title cards: directed by David Fincher from a screenplay by Aaron Sorkin, after Ben Mezrich’s book The Accidental Billionaires (2009), photographed by Jeff Cronenweth, edited by Kirk Baxter and Angus Wall, with music by Trent Reznor and Atticus Ross. One version exists and circulates, so nothing turns on cuts. The unit is the film; the book is its source, and the film is judged on what it achieves in its own medium. The page describes the film’s characters, not the living people they are drawn from, who have disputed its accuracy. No print, screenplay or subtitle file was consulted. Dialogue is described rather than quoted, except for one short phrase whose words are certain and the single word Parker asks the founders to drop. Figures and details that could not be verified, among them the number of takes for the opening scene, the budget, the box-office returns, the locations standing in for Harvard, poll placings, the screenplay’s page count, the sums of money named on screen and the order of scenes within the Palo Alto stretch, are not given.