The Fifth Desk · Evaluation
Act I · The Map
William Faulkner · a novel in four sections · Jonathan Cape and Harrison Smith, 1929 · scored on Faulkner’s English in the corrected text, read from knowledge; no text in hand, and English quoted only where its words are certain
Mode
Family tragedy as a novel of four minds; Southern chronicle, interior monologue and Easter narrative in one book
Mythos
The fall from the garden, watched through a window by children beneath a pear tree; an Easter weekend with an empty room where the empty tomb should be; a cursed house ending in its last sons; a tale told by an idiot
Phase
Good Friday, Holy Saturday and Easter Sunday 1928, told in the order Saturday, a June day eighteen years before, Friday, Sunday, with the brothers’ childhood running through the first two
Presentation
Fiction; four sections, each headed by its date, the first three in the first person and the fourth in the third; italic type marking shifts of time in the first two, punctuation and capitals falling away late in the second
Register
From a syntax of bare perception and a mind coming apart to a comic voice of grievance, a set homiletic prose and the speech of the Black household and its church
Scale
One family over three generations, the Black household that serves it, and a pasture sold; a house in Jefferson, a day at Harvard, a church on Easter morning
Governing Proposition
Four tellings of one Southern family’s fall: by the youngest son, a man of thirty-three without speech, on Holy Saturday 1928; by his brother Quentin on his last day, in June 1910; by the brother Jason on Good Friday 1928; and by a narration from outside on Easter Sunday, with the family’s servant Dilsey at its centre. The sister all three brothers circle, Caddy, has no section. The wager of the novel is that a family living by a dead code can be known only from inside the minds it has ruined, and that a woman given no voice can be the whole of a book as the absence its tellers cannot fill.
Act II · The Essay
Movement I
“Through the fence, between the curling flower spaces, I could see them hitting.” The novel opens inside the mind of a man who cannot name what he sees. Benjy Compson is thirty-three on the day of his section, and he has no speech. Beyond the fence men are playing golf; when one of them calls for his caddie, Benjy hears his sister’s name, and the sound sends him back into the past. He cannot tell the reader any of this. The reader has to learn it from the way his sentences move.
The book is in four sections, each headed by a date: “April Seventh, 1928.”, “June Second, 1910.”, “April Sixth, 1928.” and “April Eighth, 1928.” The first three are told in the first person, by Benjy, by his brother Quentin and by his brother Jason; the fourth in the third person, with Dilsey, the Black woman who keeps the house, at its centre. The 1928 dates are Holy Saturday, Good Friday and Easter Sunday, and the order of telling is Saturday, a day eighteen years earlier, Friday, Sunday. The title is from Macbeth (V.v), a life as a tale “Told by an idiot, full of sound and fury, / Signifying nothing.” The first section is that tale. Jonathan Cape and Harrison Smith published the novel in New York in October 1929.
In Benjy’s mind the past is not past. Italic type marks the shifts of time, and each is cued by a sense: the fence, the golfers’ call, a smell. Caddy in the branch with her muddy drawers; the children at the window on the night of their grandmother’s death, and Caddy in the pear tree; Benjy bellowing at her wedding. She is the one who loved him, and she is gone, and he does not know it as a loss that happened. He knows it as an absence that is always now. “Caddy smelled like trees.”
Movement II
The second section is Quentin’s, and it is a day in June 1910, eighteen years before the others, in his year at Harvard. It begins with the shadow of the sash and with the watch his father gave him, “the mausoleum of all hope and desire”, and the father’s voice returns through the day: “clocks slay time”. That morning Quentin twists the hands off the watch. The year at Harvard was paid for, with Caddy’s wedding, by a pasture the family sold.
He goes about the day with care. He buys flatirons; he crosses the bridge; he spends an afternoon with a little Italian girl, and falls into a scene with Bland’s party; at the end, he brushes himself carefully before he goes out. The calm is what makes the dread. Inside it the past breaks in without warning, above all Caddy, and his claim of an incest between them, which the book leaves undecided between confession and fantasy.
Late in the section punctuation and capitals fall away, and the syntax of a mind that has been swallowed by its past runs on without stops. Quentin has understanding without the power to act. He holds to the family’s code, its name and his sister’s virginity, after the sister has left it, and he dies of it. The dread of his section is sustained to its last line.
Movement III
“Once a bitch always a bitch, what I say.” The third section is Jason’s, Good Friday 1928, and it is told in the voice of a man who believes the world owes him money. He has a job he resents. He runs to the telegraph office and checks the cotton market; he remembers the bank job once promised him by Herbert Head; he keeps a hoard of money he has stolen. He chases his niece, Caddy’s daughter Miss Quentin, down the road. The voice is comic, and the comedy is grievance without a rise in it.
His line is straight because he lives only in the present of money. He denies the past the other two brothers cannot escape, and it robs him: on Easter morning Miss Quentin is gone down the pear tree in the night with his hoard. The section repeats its grievances more often than its argument needs, and it is flat by design. Its flatness is part of what it knows.
In Jason the code that consumed his brothers has come down to a ledger, and he is its petty tyrant. Where Benjy had loss without understanding and Quentin understanding without the power to act, Jason has the world without love. None of the three can tell the whole of the story, and the book will not let any of them.
Movement IV
The fourth section, Easter Sunday, leaves the minds of the family. A narration from outside builds Dilsey before she speaks, and sees the house at last as it is: an empty room, Miss Quentin gone with Jason’s money. The room stands where the empty tomb should, on the day of the resurrection, and the book offers no rising in it.
Dilsey goes to the Easter service at the church of the Black household. The Reverend Shegog is a small man, and as he preaches his voice becomes his congregation’s: “de ricklickshun en de blood of de Lamb”. It is the summit of the book’s height. Dilsey weeps openly on the road home, and says what she has seen of the Compsons: “I’ve seed de first en de last”. She lives in a time measured by the liturgy, outside the family’s law, and she alone sees the whole.
The book sees her from outside. Her endurance is made a meaning for the white family more than a life entered, and her speech and the speech of Roskus, Frony and Luster are set down in an eye-dialect that works against the dignity the section gives them. That limit is the book’s own, and it stands beside its achievement: the fourth section releases the reader from the family’s minds into the light of an ordinary morning.
Movement V
The novel ends in the square. Benjy is driven out in the carriage, and in the square he bellows, a sound with no end in it, until the carriage swings right and the world returns to him in its accustomed order, “each in its ordered place.” The close is horror and calm at once, and the book does not say whether the order is restored or imposed.
Caddy has had no section. She exists in the book only as the sum of her brothers’ tellings: a girl in a pear tree with muddy drawers, a smell of trees, a sister’s virginity, a lost bank job. The one Compson who loves is cast out, and the book knows her only as an absence. That absence is what the brothers’ lives are about, and the form is built around it: four minds, each turned toward a woman none can reach.
In 1945, sixteen years on, Faulkner wrote an appendix, “Compson: 1699-1945”, for Malcolm Cowley’s The Portable Faulkner (Viking, 1946), and it has been printed with the novel in some editions since the Modern Library’s of 1946. It carries the family back to 1699 and fixes Caddy’s later life, which the novel leaves open. It is a separate and later piece, and the novel scored here ends in the square, on Easter Sunday, with the sister still unvoiced.
Act III · The Twelve
Four tellings of one family’s fall, and the subtractive test asks whether any could go. None can. Benjy gives loss without understanding; Quentin understanding without the power to act; Jason the world of money without love; the fourth section the house seen at last from outside, with Dilsey. Each withholds what another gives, and Caddy, who has no section, exists only as their sum. Inside the first section the shifts of time are cued by sense, the fence, the golfers’ call of “caddie”, a smell, and none can be cut without the logic going. What holds the axis at 9.0: Quentin’s afternoon with the little Italian girl and the scene with Bland’s party run past their turn, and Jason’s monologue, required for its argument, repeats its grievances, the telegraph office, the cotton market, the money he is owed by the world, more often than the knowledge needs.
Score: 9.0 / 10
The disclosure can be stated, and it holds. A family that lives by a code of the past, its name, a sister’s virginity, a dead grandeur, consumes its children, and the code’s last heirs are its idiot, its suicide and its petty tyrant. The one Compson who loves, Caddy, is cast out. Meanwhile the house is held up by the Black woman who serves it: “I’ve seed de first en de last”. The gentry’s obsession with time is shown as a sickness: Quentin twists the hands off the watch his father gave him. What holds the axis at the foot of the twelve: Dilsey and the Black household are seen from outside, their endurance made a meaning for the white family rather than a life entered; Caddy is never given a voice, by design but at a cost to what the book can know of her; and Benjy is used as an instrument more than known as a man.
Score: 8.9 / 10
Height comes often and in more than one key. The first section rises in flashes: Caddy in the branch with her muddy drawers, the children at the window on the night of their grandmother’s death, Benjy’s bellowing at the wedding. Quentin’s last day is a sustained dread, the more terrible for its calm: the shadow of the sash, the watch, the flatirons, the bridge, the careful brushing before he goes out. The fourth section has the book’s summit, the Easter sermon of the Reverend Shegog, a small man whose voice becomes his congregation’s, “de ricklickshun en de blood of de Lamb”, and Dilsey weeping openly on the road home. The close turns height to horror: Benjy’s bellow in the square until the carriage swings right and the world returns, “each in its ordered place.” Held below the top because Jason’s section, a quarter of the book, is flat by design, a comedy of grievance with no rise in it.
Score: 9.1 / 10
Myth built, and built into the calendar. The book is set across Easter weekend: Jason’s Good Friday, Benjy’s Holy Saturday at thirty-three, and an Easter Sunday whose empty room, Miss Quentin gone down the pear tree in the night with Jason’s hoard, stands where the empty tomb should. The fall from the garden is built from one image: the children watching through the window, Caddy’s muddy drawers in the tree. Over it stands the house of a cursed line ending in its last sons, and the title’s tale told by an idiot, which the first section is. The particular stays particular: a pasture sold to pay for a wedding and a year at Harvard. Held a step below the top because the Christian pattern is inverted and ironic, and Benjy as a Christ is more a marker of the date than a figure the book builds.
Score: 9.1 / 10
The inheritance is the Southern family romance and its plantation legend, Joyce’s interior monologue and Conrad’s several tellers. The turn: the novel opens inside the mind of a man without speech or a sense of time, in a syntax of bare perception, and gives the reader no narrator to reconcile its four tellings until the last. The woman the book is about has no section. Time is marked only by a change of type. The stake was real. Faulkner’s previous novel, Flags in the Dust, had been refused and cut, and appeared as Sartoris in 1929; this one sold little. Held below the top because Joyce had made the interior monologue and Ulysses the novel of several minds. The first section, which has no evident precedent, is the purest swerve of the four.
Score: 9.4 / 10
Change the form and the knowledge goes. Four minds circle a woman who has no voice of her own, so the book knows Caddy only as an absence, and that absence is what the brothers’ lives are about. Each section’s form is its teller’s relation to time. Benjy’s achronology is a loss that never becomes past; Quentin’s dissolving syntax is a mind in which the past has swallowed the present; Jason’s straight line of complaint is a man who lives only in the present of money; the fourth section, told from outside, releases the reader from the family’s minds into the light of an ordinary morning. The reader begins in confusion and is given understanding in the order of the family’s disintegration. Held off the top because the turn to an outside narrator in the fourth section, though necessary, is the one place where the form explains rather than enacts.
Score: 9.4 / 10
Evidence rather than promise, over ninety-seven years. Jean-Paul Sartre’s essay on time in Faulkner (1939) read the novel as a metaphysics of time with no future in it. Cleanth Brooks and the New Critics read its form. Faulkner himself went back to the family in 1945, in the genealogy he wrote for Malcolm Cowley’s anthology, and it differs from the novel in particulars. The questions stay open: what Caddy is to each brother; whether Quentin’s claim of incest is a confession or a fantasy; whether Dilsey’s endurance is the book’s affirmation or its alibi; whether the close is order restored or order imposed. Held below the top because much of a first reading’s labour is the reconstruction of chronology, which is difficulty before it is depth.
Score: 9.2 / 10
The field is the American novel of its decade. The intrinsic force: the book showed that a novel could be told from inside minds that cannot tell it, that time could be broken, and that the decline of a Southern house could carry the full weight of tragedy. What holds it below the top is that the interior method rested on Joyce, and that much of Faulkner’s reach runs through the whole of his Yoknapatawpha, Absalom, Absalom! above all, more than through this book alone. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: this is the book in which the method first appeared whole, the first of Faulkner’s books to be read as a model, and the book Sartre wrote on in 1939; and the Southern and African American novel after it, Toni Morrison’s included, wrote in its light and against it.
Score: 9.3 / 10
Survival is weighed over ninety-seven years. Form: the text survives whole; the corrected text restored readings the first edition had normalised, and nothing that makes the work is lost. Presence is where the axis is charged. The book sold little on publication, and its wide presence came later. Since then it has been continuous and wide: the novel is taught across American and world literature and translated widely. Its rendering of Black speech and Black lives is contested in teaching today, a charge on presence, not on form. The slow start of its first years holds the axis where it stands, and a survival of a century does not stand with a survival of millennia.
Score: 9.0 / 10
Judged on Faulkner’s English, with no translation between. The making is load-bearing. Benjy’s section is an instrument built from nothing: a syntax of perception without causes, in which golf is seen without the word for it, “Through the fence, between the curling flower spaces, I could see them hitting.”, and in which a sister is a sense: “Caddy smelled like trees.” Quentin’s prose holds a mind coming apart, the father’s voice returning in it (“clocks slay time”) until punctuation and capitals go. Jason’s monologue, “Once a bitch always a bitch, what I say.”, is a comic voice of grievance with few equals in the American novel of its time. The fourth section’s set prose builds Dilsey before she speaks. Charged: Quentin’s section is at moments overwrought, the father’s aphorisms mannered; and the eye-dialect given to the Black characters, a convention of its time, works against the dignity the last section gives them.
Score: 9.3 / 10
Take the two most distant elements: Benjy’s world of sensation without time, and Jason’s world of money and the clock, checking the cotton quotations and chasing his niece down the road. They obey one law: each Compson is ruled by his relation to a past that is lost. Benjy lives inside it, Quentin dies of it, Jason denies it and is robbed by it; Dilsey, outside the law of the family, lives in a time measured by the liturgy, and she alone sees the whole. The law holds across a wide range of register: lyric, tragic, comic, homiletic. Charged: the fourth section changes the book’s narrative physics, from inside minds to an outside view that knows more than any law of the first three permits, and the change is felt as a break as well as a release; and the comedy of Jason’s section sits at a distance from the tragedy, a distance the law covers but does not close.
Score: 9.1 / 10
Many orders, held in one family’s fall. Consciousness, in three minds, one of them without language. The family across three generations, to the daughter’s daughter. Race, in the Black household of Dilsey, Roskus, Frony and Luster, and their church. Class and money: the pasture sold for Harvard and a wedding, Jason’s job, the cotton market, the money he steals, the bank job once promised by Herbert Head. Sex and the body, in Caddy’s sexuality and Benjy’s castration. The sacred, in the Easter weekend and the sermon. History, in the dead grandeur of a name and a grandfather’s watch. Time itself, as subject. The natural order, in the branch, the pasture, the trees. They are integrated through the family. What holds the axis, with The Unconcealment, at the foot of the twelve: the state and public life are thin, a sheriff in the fourth section; Jefferson is a backdrop; and the Black lives are held only in part.
Score: 8.9 / 10
Act IV · The Reckoning
9.1 / 10 · Final Average
Placement: Tier V · Epochal
Strongest Dimensions
The Swerve and The Living Form at 9.4, then Pressure on Tradition and The Made at 9.3. A novel that opens inside a mind without speech or time and leaves its heroine without a section; a form in which each teller’s syntax is his relation to time and the absent sister is the subject of all four; a book that showed the novel could be told from inside minds that cannot tell it; and an instrument built for each voice, from Benjy’s bare perception to Jason’s grievance.
Limiting Dimension
The Unconcealment and The Encompassed at 8.9. The first is held by the outside view of the Black household, whose endurance is made a meaning for the white family, by Caddy’s silence and by Benjy used more as an instrument than known as a man; the second by a thin public world, a sheriff and a town as backdrop, and Black lives held only in part. Next above them, The Inevitable and The Imperishable at 9.0: Quentin’s and Jason’s sections running past their turn in places, and a survival slow to begin.
The Necessity Cap clears at 9.0 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears with room: The Living Form at 9.4, The Made at 9.3, The Inner Law at 9.1, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is met on all five: The Swerve at 9.4, Pressure on Tradition at 9.3, The Archetypal Deep at 9.1, The Imperishable at 9.0 and The Unconcealment at 8.9 clear the bar of 8.5, The Unconcealment by four tenths. The Universal Minimum is met (no axis it governs falls below 8.9, against 7.5) and The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 8.9. Every summit condition is met.
Basis · a reading from knowledge of William Faulkner’s The Sound and the Fury, published by Jonathan Cape and Harrison Smith, New York, in October 1929. It is scored as one novel in four sections, each headed by its date, as published in 1929 and as the corrected text standard since the 1980s prints it. The Appendix, “Compson: 1699-1945”, written in 1945 for Malcolm Cowley’s The Portable Faulkner (Viking, 1946) and printed with the novel in some editions since the Modern Library’s of 1946, is a separate and later piece and is not part of the work scored here. No text of the novel was in hand; nothing was measured on a text, and no quotation was checked against a file. Every axis is judged on Faulkner’s English, with no translation between. Events are paraphrased, and English is quoted only where its words are certain; the title’s phrase is quoted from Macbeth, V.v. Sartre’s essay of 1939 is cited as the record of the book’s reception and is not part of the work. Facts that could not be verified, among them the day of publication, the editor and date of the corrected text, the size of the first printing, the word count and the length of each section, Faulkner’s plans for printing the time levels, his later accounts of the book’s origin and writing, its years in and out of print, its translations, the documented record of its influence abroad and its adaptations, are not given. Citations are by section, named by its date.