The Fifth Desk · Evaluation

Act I · The Map

Literature · Prose drama in seven parts · 19th c. · A hermit’s hut on a mountain in the Thebaid above the Nile, one night of late antiquity, with visions of Alexandria, the gods, the heavens and the first cells

The Temptation of Saint Anthony

Gustave Flaubert · a prose drama in seven parts · one night and the dawn after, on a mountain in the Thebaid · Charpentier, April 1874, the third version of a book begun in 1848 · scored on Flaubert’s French, read from knowledge; no text in hand, French quoted only where its words are certain, with the desk’s plain English beneath, and Kitty Mrosovsky’s translation (Penguin Classics, 1980) for sense

The Plate · the seven parts ticked along a horizon, a sun setting at the left beside the hermit’s cross; from the second part the ladder of temptation climbs in four steps, from the body’s appetites to the mind’s, with the processions of the fourth and fifth parts standing on their steps as rows of identical uprights, any one of which could go; beneath the steps a thin wedge opening, the disciple who grows as certainty shrinks; from the top step the flight through space flung up among stars with no centre and falling into the seventh part, where the heavy Sphinx lies under the winged Chimera; the first cells drifting down to the horizon; and at the right a sun rising with a cross inside its disc

Mode

Drama for reading, without a stage; a saint’s night of trial made a procession of the history of belief; erudition rendered as hallucination

Mythos

The temptation of the saint in the desert, the oldest Christian scene of the soul’s trial, carrying the modern mind’s trial by knowledge; the Sphinx and the Chimera; the wish to dissolve into matter

Phase

From sunset at the hut, through the appetites, the heresies and the gods, the flight through space and the descent to the cell, to sunrise and the prayer resumed

Presentation

Prose set out as drama: speeches under named speakers, long stage directions in the present tense, seven numbered parts, one protagonist on stage throughout, one night ending at dawn

Register

The impersonal present of the stage directions, exact in light, distance, colour and texture; the archaic, doctrinal and oracular voices of heresiarchs and gods; the Queen of Sheba’s coquetry and the Devil’s cold metaphysics

Scale

One man on one mountain for one night, and in his visions the religions of late antiquity, Alexandria, the persecutions and councils, the stars and the origin of life

Governing Proposition

A hermit on a mountain above the Nile is offered, through one night, the banquet, gold and the Queen of Sheba, then every doctrine, heresy and god the ancient world held, then a universe without a centre and life without form; at sunrise he sees the face of Christ in the sun and returns to his prayers. The wager of the book is that a mind which knows the history of belief can no longer simply believe, that learning is itself the temptation, and that a drama with no narrator, its visions set down as fact in an impersonal present, can tempt the reader as it tempts the saint and leave the dawn unjudged.

To Be Matter

8.4 / 10
Tier IV · Canonical

Act II · The Essay

Movement I

A Mountain in the Thebaid

The book opens on a mountain in the Thebaid at sunset: a hut, a cross, the Nile below, and a hermit, Anthony, already weary before anything has appeared to him. The whole of the book is one night and the dawn after, and he is on stage from the first line to the last. Everything else that comes, the queen, the heresiarchs, the gods, the Devil, the monsters, comes to him here, out of his memory, his reading and his desire, and goes when the next thing comes.

The form is a drama with no theatre. Speeches stand under the names of their speakers, and between them run long stage directions in the present tense, setting down light, distance, colour and texture as a stage designer might if any stage could hold them. The book is in seven numbered parts. No narrator stands anywhere in it. What Anthony sees is not reported as dream or delusion; it is given in the same impersonal present as the hut and the river, and the reader has no voice to tell the visions from the world.

The page scores the text of 1874, published by Charpentier in April of that year. It is the third version of a book Flaubert began in 1848. The first was finished in 1849 and read aloud to Louis Bouilhet and Maxime Du Camp, who advised him to put it aside; the second, of 1856, gave extracts to L’Artiste; he recast it between 1869 and 1872. About a quarter century passed between the first draft and print. The impulse is commonly traced to a painting of the subject that he saw in Genoa in 1845, attributed in his time to Brueghel. The earlier versions are context, not the work.

Movement II

The Queen of Sheba

The temptations begin where the body begins. A banquet is set before a man who fasts, and gold before a hermit. The order of the night is a ladder, and its lowest rungs are the stomach and the hand: what is offered first is what any hermit would expect to be offered, the appetites his discipline was made to refuse. The book will climb from here, and each rung will be a deeper temptation than the one below it.

Then the Queen of Sheba arrives. She is the first great temptation and a set piece of seduction and jewelled excess, sensual and comic at once: she makes her offers, and her coquetry is given full voice. The scene rises to a grandeur of the senses, and it is also funny. That doubleness is the book’s, and the tone that holds her will have to hold, later, the Devil’s cold metaphysics and the first cells of life.

Hilarion comes as well: Anthony’s disciple, who grows in stature as his master’s faith fails. He is the plain figure of what the book discloses. The tempters of this night are mostly not lusts. They are learning, and the disciple who is knowledge grows larger with every doubt he raises. Whether he is the Devil or the truth the book does not settle, and that question is one of those it leaves open to the end.

Movement III

The Heresiarchs

From the body the ladder climbs to the mind. In the fourth part the heresiarchs pass before Anthony; among the visions of the night are also the martyrs, and Apollonius of Tyana. Each heresiarch speaks in a register of his own, archaic, doctrinal, oracular, and each is sincere. Each cancels the last. A man who knows the history of belief, the book proposes, can no longer simply believe, because every faith arrives with its rivals and its genealogy.

In the fifth part come the gods: every god and idol of the ancient world, in procession. Here the book’s method is plainest and costs it most. The principle is enumeration. One figure could be removed, or three added, without loss, and the speeches run to recitation; the height of the night is flattened for long stretches, by a design of exhaustion, so that Anthony is worn down as the reader is. The procession holds the history of religions as Flaubert’s notebooks held it, and in these parts the form contains the matter more than it changes it.

Among the visions is the massacre in Alexandria, in which Anthony, in his reverie, takes part. It is among the book’s dreadful heights, with the martyrs. History enters the night here, with the persecutions, the councils and the empire’s cults, but it enters as vision. Nothing of the family, of labour or of the city as lived appears; the human world below the doctrinal barely exists in this book.

Movement IV

The Sphinx and the Chimera

In the sixth part the Devil takes Anthony up and carries him through space. They go past the stars into a universe without a centre, and the elevation of the flight is terror. After the gods comes the cosmos without gods, and the Devil’s metaphysics is cold. This is the book’s cosmic height, in the line of Byron’s Cain and its flight, and it is the last rung but one of the ladder.

Near the end Lust and Death come to him, and then the Sphinx and the Chimera. The Sphinx is heavy and the Chimera winged, and they speak to each other: two principles of the imagination in dialogue. They are built rather than cited, and Anthony’s last wish follows them. The monsters of the seventh part come, a catalogue as spectacle, comic and grotesque by turns, and in this list the book is again what it is in the processions, an enumeration that could be longer or shorter.

Then the ladder reaches its foot, which is also its summit. Anthony looks down into life without form, to the first cells, and cries out:
“j’ai vu naître la vie”
“I have seen life being born.” The temptation that began with a banquet has become the wish to be all things. The appetite that rose from the stomach to the mind has gone past the mind, into matter itself.

Movement V

Dans le disque même du soleil

The last wish is spoken plainly. Anthony wants to give up the self, to enter plants and water, to be everything that lives:
“être la matière”
“to be matter.” This is the second thing the book discloses, beneath the first. The ascetic’s deepest desire is not to be saved but to be dissolved, and renunciation and pantheist ecstasy prove to be one movement. The man who fasted against the body ends wishing to dissolve into matter.

Then the night ends. Day breaks; the clouds turn to gold; and in the sun the face of Christ appears:
“dans le disque même du soleil”
“in the very disc of the sun.” Anthony makes the sign of the cross and returns to his prayers. The book’s last word is a stage direction, in the same impersonal present as everything before it, and it neither rejoices nor doubts. The sentence descends from the golden clouds to the face in the disc to the prayer, a close in Flaubert’s manner.

Whether that dawn is grace or exhaustion, whether the last wish was the summit of the temptation or its cure, the book does not say, and it was made so that it cannot. A drama with no narrator has no one to judge. The book was received coolly in 1874, and its life since has run through painters, a few novelists and critics: Redon’s lithographs, the Symbolists and decadents of the 1880s and 1890s, the “Circe” episode of Ulysses, where the debt is commonly traced, and Foucault’s essay on the library as the source of the fantastic. It stands to one side of Flaubert’s novels, a side road he walked for a quarter century.

Act III · The Twelve

1The Inevitable (Ananke)

The large order is compelled; inside it the subtractive test goes against the book, and that holds the axis lowest of the twelve. The ladder runs from the body’s appetites, food, gold and the Queen of Sheba, to the mind’s, doctrine and heresy, then to all gods, to the cosmos without gods and to life without form. Each rung is a deeper temptation than the last, and the book could not be reordered. But the heresiarchs of the fourth part and the gods of the fifth come as processions in which one figure could be removed, or three added, without loss; the monsters of the seventh are the same kind of list. The scale is permitted by Flaubert’s reading rather than compelled by Anthony’s need. The cap is met, narrowly.

Score: 7.6 / 10

2The Unconcealment (Aletheia)

The disclosure can be stated, and it holds: a mind that knows the history of belief can no longer believe, because every faith arrives with its rivals and its genealogy, and the scholar’s knowledge is itself the temptation. The tempters are mostly not lusts but learning, parades of doctrine, each sincere, each cancelling the last; Hilarion, the disciple who grows as Anthony’s certainty shrinks, is the plain figure of the claim. Beneath it, in the last part, lies a second disclosure: the wish to give up the self, “être la matière”, shown as the ascetic’s deepest desire, so that renunciation and pantheist ecstasy are one movement. Held below the gate because what is disclosed is more an intellectual predicament than a lived human one: the book shows a mind more than a person.

Score: 8.3 / 10

3The Sublime (Hypsos)

It rises often, and in several registers. The grand and sensuous: the Queen of Sheba’s arrival and her offers, a set piece of seduction and jewelled excess. The dreadful: the massacre in Alexandria in which Anthony takes part in his reverie, and the martyrs. The cosmic: the Devil’s flight, which carries him past the stars into a universe without a centre, where elevation is terror. Then the close, which turns from the Sphinx and the Chimera to the first cells and Anthony’s cry that he has seen life born, and ends with the face of Christ in the disc of the sun. Frequency is high. The charge is that the height is often the height of spectacle, and that the processions of the fourth and fifth parts flatten it, by a design of exhaustion, for long stretches.

Score: 8.4 / 10

4The Archetypal Deep (Mythos)

Myth here is both evoked by the hundred and built once. Evoked: every god, idol, heresy and fabulous beast of late antiquity is summoned, and most come as allusion and pageant, which the gate is meant to discount. Built: the temptation of the saint in the desert, the oldest Christian scene of the soul’s trial, is made to carry the modern mind’s trial by knowledge, so that the hermit’s night becomes the myth of the nineteenth century’s loss of faith and of its pantheist desire. The Sphinx and the Chimera, the heavy and the winged, are built rather than cited: two principles of the imagination in dialogue, whom Anthony’s last wish follows. Held below the gate because so much of the myth is catalogue, and because Anthony as a particular man is thin.

Score: 8.4 / 10

5The Swerve (Parekklisis)

The inheritance: the saint’s life as Athanasius wrote it, the mystery play, Goethe’s Faust and its Walpurgis night, Byron’s Cain and its flight through space, and the French philosophical prose poem of the 1830s, of which Quinet’s Ahasvérus is the nearest. The turn is large. The master of the realist novel spent a quarter century on a prose drama for no stage, without plot, whose matter is the erudition of the history of religions, documented to the footnote and presented as vision. The stake was paid: his two closest readers told him in 1849 to put it aside, the book of 1874 was received coolly, and his whole method, documentation and impersonality, was spent on a form no one asked for. Held off the top because the dramatic poem of ideas was an inherited genre.

Score: 8.7 / 10

6The Living Form (Entelecheia)

Put this matter in a novel and it loses its knowledge. The drama without a narrator means no one judges the visions: there is no voice between Anthony and the procession, so the reader is tempted as he is, and the book’s scepticism is enacted, not stated. The stage directions, in an impersonal present, give hallucination the standing of fact; the speeches give each heresy its own sincere voice. The single night ending at dawn makes the history of belief one ordeal of one man. The ending works by the form: the last word is a stage direction, Anthony resumes his prayers, and nothing says whether that is victory or habit. Charged: the processional form is also a container, into which the matter of Flaubert’s notebooks is poured, and in the fourth and fifth parts it stops changing what the book knows.

Score: 8.4 / 10

7The Bottomless Well (Apeiron)

Evidence over promise: a century and a half of return, of a particular kind. It has been reread with yield by artists and thinkers more than by common readers. Odilon Redon drew from it in his lithographs; Michel Foucault’s essay on it in the 1960s, “La Bibliothèque fantastique”, read it as the first work whose imagination is the library itself, and that reading opened it again. The text holds its questions open: whether the dawn is grace or exhaustion; whether Anthony’s last wish is the summit of the temptation or its cure; whether Hilarion is the Devil or the truth. Its formal depth lies in the relation of erudition and vision. Held a step down because much of its surface is reference, which exhausts rather than deepens on return.

Score: 8.2 / 10

8Pressure on Tradition (Agon)

The field is French literature of the nineteenth century and, through it, the European. The force: the book made the archive a source of the fantastic and the history of ideas a hallucinated drama, and it set out, before the Symbolists, the decadent repertory of idols, queens, chimeras and monsters. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: Redon’s lithographs; the Symbolist and decadent imagination of the 1880s and 1890s; the hallucinatory drama of the “Circe” episode of Ulysses, where the debt is commonly traced; Foucault’s essay, which made it a founding text for theory’s reading of the library and the imaginary. The reach is real but oblique: it ran through painters, a few novelists and critics, not through the form of the novel, where Madame Bovary and L’Éducation sentimentale did the redirecting.

Score: 8.2 / 10

9The Imperishable (Aphtharsia)

One hundred and fifty-two years since 1874. The text survives whole, in Flaubert’s final revision, with nothing lost, and the two earlier versions survive besides, adding to what is known rather than taking from it. Its surface is not fixed to its moment: its matter is late antiquity, and the learning of the nineteenth century behind it dates only in detail. Presence is continuous but narrow: in print in French throughout, translated into English more than once and into the main languages, taught in French studies and studied by specialists, kept in view by Redon and Foucault, and little read beyond them beside the novels. A text read mainly in the academy is charged for it, here by a tenth below what its span would otherwise bring.

Score: 8.9 / 10

10The Made (Techne)

Judged on the French as far as it can be heard here, which is in part; the cadence of the prose is credited from what is known of it, not from close study. The stage directions are Flaubert at his most exact: light, distance, colour and texture set down in the impersonal present, the noun weighed and the clause measured. The last sentence, from the golden clouds to the face in the sun’s disc to the prayer, is a model of his descending close. The speeches give each heresiarch and god a distinct register, archaic, doctrinal, oracular. A quarter century of revision shows in the compression of the 1874 text against the first version. Charged: the speeches of the processions run to recitation, and the erudition sometimes sits on the line rather than in it.

Score: 8.7 / 10

11The Inner Law (Cosmos)

One law: everything that appears is Anthony’s, called out of his memory, his reading and his desire, and each apparition tempts by offering what the last withheld. Take the two most distant elements, the gluttonous banquet of the second part and the first cells of the seventh: they obey the same law, appetite rising from the stomach to the mind to the wish to be all things, and the book’s movement from the sensual to the cosmic is one movement. The tone holds from the Queen of Sheba’s coquetry to the Devil’s cold metaphysics. Charged: the comic grotesque of some of the monsters and the solemnity of the gods are not always held in one key, and the dawn arrives by stage direction with a force the law has not wholly earned.

Score: 8.5 / 10

12The Encompassed (Megethos)

Many orders, held in one night and one mind. The sacred above all, in every form the ancient world knew. Consciousness, in Anthony’s exhaustion and desire. The body, in fasting, appetite and the dream of dissolving into plants and water. History, in Alexandria, the persecutions, the councils and the empire’s cults. Knowledge and science, in Hilarion. The natural order and the cosmos, in the flight through space and the descent to the cell. They are held, not merely listed, by the ladder of temptation. What is missing is the human world below the doctrinal: the family, labour, the city as lived and the state as more than spectacle barely appear, and the orders that do appear pass as visions rather than being lived. The book is narrower in human range than its catalogue suggests.

Score: 8.1 / 10

Act IV · The Reckoning

8.4 / 10 · Final Average

Placement: Tier IV · Canonical

Strongest Dimensions

The Imperishable at 8.9, then The Swerve and The Made at 8.7. A text that survives whole after a century and a half, its two earlier versions surviving besides; the master of the realist novel spending a quarter century on a prose drama for no stage, the history of religions given as vision, at the cost of his closest readers’ advice and a cool reception; and stage directions in an impersonal present as exact as anything he wrote, closing on the face in the sun’s disc and the prayer.

Limiting Dimension

The Inevitable at 7.6: the ladder of temptation is compelled and could not be reordered, but the heresiarchs, the gods and the monsters come as processions from which a figure could go, or three be added, without loss, and the scale is permitted by Flaubert’s reading rather than compelled by Anthony’s need. Next above it, The Encompassed at 8.1: the sacred, the body, history, knowledge and the cosmos are held in one night, but the family, labour and the city as lived barely appear, and what appears passes as vision.

The Necessity Cap clears at 7.6 against a threshold of 7.5, by a tenth. The Coherence Floor clears with room: The Made at 8.7, The Inner Law at 8.5, The Living Form at 8.4, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is unmet: The Imperishable at 8.9 and The Swerve at 8.7 clear the bar of 8.5, but The Archetypal Deep at 8.4 falls a tenth short, The Unconcealment at 8.3 two tenths short and Pressure on Tradition at 8.2 three tenths short. The Universal Minimum is met (no axis falls below The Inevitable at 7.6, against 7.5), and The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 8.1. Four of the five summit conditions are met. The work is held below the summit by The Unconcealment, The Archetypal Deep and Pressure on Tradition, and by its aggregate, 8.4 against the 9.0 that Tier V requires.

Basis · a reading from knowledge of Gustave Flaubert’s La Tentation de saint Antoine, scored as the text of 1874, published by Charpentier in April 1874: a prose work set out as a drama, in seven numbered parts, one night and the dawn after. The two earlier versions, the first finished in 1849 and the second of 1856, from which extracts appeared in L’Artiste, survive and are context; they are not scored. No text was in hand; nothing was measured on a text, and no quotation was checked against a file. The design of the book, the order of its ladder and its principal scenes are known well; the heresies of the fourth part and the gods of the fifth are known in kind and in their main figures rather than speech by speech, and the axes that turn on them rest on the processional principle and its effect, not on particular speeches. Every axis is judged on Flaubert’s French. French is quoted only where its words are certain, with the desk’s own plain English beneath; no published translation is quoted. Translation · Kitty Mrosovsky’s (Penguin Classics, 1980), close and annotated, is the version best known to this reading and was used for sense; Lafcadio Hearn’s (1910) is the older English and more ornate. Neither is in hand, and nothing in either is charged to the work. The cadence of the French beyond the sentences known is neither credited nor charged. Facts that could not be verified are not given, among them the length of the book, the assignment of several scenes to their parts, the point at which Hilarion’s identity is declared, and the number and dates of Redon’s albums.